“Gauri, I am not getting any ideas about my next painting. Can you help me. If you don’t mind we can go to the park.” Om asked hoping for the best over the phone. “Yaa sure Om, I will come.” Gauri replied and instantly put down the phone. She was feeling really happy and was blushing. There om was also overjoyed and hugged rudra in response. “Thank you yaar, if you were not there, I couldn’t even ask her about going with me….alone.” He said. “You are really master at these things.” At least there was something that om would be proud of Rudra. Rudra bowed down and said “Thank you, haan but don’t become Paraya Dhan after marrying her.” “Rudra you…” Om was feeling shy still was ready to hit his brother.
Saumya came into the room and looked towards Rudra. Now Rudra was again scared. He thought of all the possibilities and cried in his heart “I spent a lot of time making that card. If I have to make a new one again. Oh no ! How can Sumo always have a bad timing.” He made a puppy face towards her. “Om bhaiya congratulations. I am really happy that Gauri di will gonna be our bhabhi.” Saumya shifted his gaze towards Om. “Saumya woh…its nothing like that….rudra is a duffer…kuch bhi bolts hai !!” Om stuttered. “Its okay Bade Baal vale bhaiya. I understand.” Saumya hided her giggle and then looked back towards rudra. She raised her eyebrows in order to question him, why he looked tensed. Rudra happily nodded her head in negation indicating nothing. He smiled lightly, his sumo has now understood him.
“Sir, dadi is calling you.” The servant knocked the door. Shivaay moved his head up from the files and said a “Hmm.” While the servant went back.
“What happened Dadi ?” Shivaay questioned his dearest dadi, still laying in her lap. “Billu, I want to ask you something.” Dadi said caressing his gelled hair. “Ji daadi, boliye.” Shivaay was now eager. “Billu, I just wanted an assurance from you that are you serious with your relationship with Anika. I mean I know you are the best puttar and you will never do anything wrong, but still. I really like Anika and from the day I met her, I wanted her to be the bahu of you. And now when you have yourself declared that you love her, then promise me that you will always keep me happy. That day when she came our home she told me that she only has his brother Sahil as her family. She said she felt connected to me. And now I have considered her as my own daughter. So promise me.” Dadi spoke. Shivaay was in a dilemma. He does not wanted to give his dadi a fake promise but then he promised her that “Yess, dadi I will always keep her happy. No matter what, I will never let tears come in her eyes.” He promised to himself too. “I am proud of you Billu.” She kissed his forehead.
“Mummy hi, Shivaay has still not returned from the office. Its 9:30 now.” Pinky told feeling worried. “Pinky puttar he will return after sometime. He has some work. He told me to inform you. I forgot.” Dadi replied very well aware that he has gone to Anika’s house. “Oh, chalk its okay. At least he informed. I am now going to sleep.” Pinky said yawning.
Shivaay was going to knock on the door when Saahil greeted him outside. “Hey champ ! How are you.” Shivaay asked. “Me, I am toh fine.” Sahil smiled back.” What are you doing here. Its late. You should be asleep.” Shivaay asked concerned. “Yess, I was going to sleep. Today I am gonna sleep in my friend’s house. Its a night out. Anika di agreed to it with great difficulty still I am okay with it and haan, don’t tell Anika di, that I was playing here. I am just going. See you.” He waved at him. Shivaay shakes his head in disbelief and knocked on the door. After continuous tries, still Anika did not came so he went inside as the door was not locked. He searched her everywhere and then came to her room. He opened the door slightly and was shocked and enthralled. She was dancing on a Bollywood beat, swaying and twisting her waist. Laughing, jumping and murming the lyrics. And not to forget she was in her tee and shorts. This came as a surprise for him as he has never seen her in this avatar. He just stood there folding his hands watching her dance, body movements and her legs at time. Anika was busy dancing and when she was gonna do the wheel cart, she noticed him. She stood shocked, rooted to her spot, embarrassed. He was smiling and when suddenly she saw him, he threw his hands upwards in protest and said “What could I have when someone will look this beautiful. I can’t resist myself.” Anika blushed and then went to the washroom and changed her shorts into jeans, still looking pretty.
“So, you seem very happy today. What’s the matter and what’s the name of the song on which you were tapping your feet ?” He asked. “Oh my God !” Anika exclaimed shocked. “Why are you alive in this earth. You are sure na that you are a human being,, I mean who doesn’t know this song !! This is…” She was going to say when he said “Okay, I got it.” “Hmm, that’s better for you but how come you don’t listen to these Fadu songs. They are ek dum Dhasu. You know…” She was again interrupted by Shivaay. “Hello !! I listen to Hollywood songs. They are just fab. You will love to dance on them. They are so Soothing.” He said. “Okay so you are challenging me that I Indian songs are not good. You know you should be born in US only. Why are you here ? And you like them so much then I am challenging you. Can you dance on them, like me, a khidkitod performance !!” She was in a full tashan mood. “Don’t challenge Shivaay Singh Oberoi.” Shivaay warned her. “But now toh I have challenged.” She applied some humour. “Okay, then wait.” Shivaay said. He took out his phone and connected it to the speakers and played his favorite song.
The club isn’t the best place to find a lover
So the bar is where I go
Me and my friends at the table doing shots
Drinking fast and the we talk slow
And you come over and start up a conversation with just me
He came towards her and held her hands and started mimicking the lyrics as talking to her.
And trust me I’ll give it a chance now
Take my hand, stop, put Van the Man on the jukebox
And then we start to dance, and now I’m singing like
He swayed her around, held her from the back and leaned on her.
Girl you know I want your love
Your love has handmade for somebody like me
Come on now, follow my lead
I may be crazy, don’t mind me
He left her and did all the hip-hop movements and she just stood there gaping at him with amusement.
Say, boy, let’s not talk to much
Grab on my waist and put that body on me
Come on now, follow my lead
Come, come on now follow my lead
He grabbed her waist and pulled her high and placed her to the opposite direction of where she was standing.
I’m in love with the shape of you
We push and pull like a magnet do
And then the music stopped as his battery went dead. Anika clapped. You danced really well. I am impressed. “See I said no one can win from Shivaay Singh Oberoi.” Shivaay praised himself. “Stop showing that Tadi to me.” She said glaring. “So for what have you came here ?” She finally asked. “Why were you so happy ?” He replied by asking another question. “My dean has come true. I have got a promotion and is going to some other place for the next two weeks. I am really excited.” She spoke all glowing. Shivaay’s face dropped. “Oh !” He said faking a smile. “What happened ?” She questioned sensing him worried. “I came here to invite you to my sister’s Prinku’s wedding. But you’ll not be there. My family really wanted you to be there. But its okay. Your dream.is also important.” Shivaay said sadly. “Shivaay I am really sorry. “Anika felt sad for him. “Chalk let’s go to a walk ! It will be fun.” She spoke suddenly. “At this time ?” Shivaay asked. He was not shocked, now he was used to her shocking ideas. “Chaliye na…Shivaay” she spoke her name. She got the idea to change his mood.
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Heya cuties !! I am back again with the next chapter. I hope you are happy about how the chapters are proceedings. You can give your opinions too, I will surely consider it. Do comment everyone along with the silent readers. Thank you for reading❤
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Wow! Jerry fantastic dear… Loved it! Awesome dance n song description. In real life also I like Nakuul Mehta’s dance!! Waiting for next part dear….
Gayathri di, thank you so much. I am happy that you loved it. Me too, like and adore Nakuul Mehta very much. I will try to post the next part soon?
Awesome….
Sahil-Shivaay convo was sweet…
Shivika scene was really cute….
Will Anika develop feelings for Shivaay in d next 2 weeks?? I’m so eager to know…
Post d nxt ASAP…. 🙂
Shivika, thank you so much. I am glad that you found their conversation sweet. And also for the Shivika scenes, thanks.
You will get to know soon dear. I will try to update soon. Love yaa?
It was really cuteee jerry… u really leave ne speechless by own unique way of writing.. love uhh …
Waiting for nxt..
Thank you so much Ahaana di for commenting. I am glad that you are loving ‘me’. Love you too. Will try to post soon?
It is awesome dear…. Lovely update…
Thank you so much Nikita di. I am glad that you liked it?
Loved it… especially shivika….plz post soon….
Thank you Anu for commenting. I am glad that you liked Shivika? I will try to post the next soon.
Shivika dancing was just awesome yaar??????????……..
Dekho the song was
“I’m in love with the shape of you” right,now I will change the song
“I’m in love with the ff of yours”?????????. So in love with your style of writing yaar.
And I think even anika is going to goa to do her work(just a guess)………
And omkie shomkie is blushing Haaa???.
And let’s see what’s gonna happen in upcoming days of shivika life….. And if you wanna know if they are gonna meet in goa or not then stay tuned to the next episode of this dhamakedhar khidkithod and darwazathod ff by only and only jerry{Vedika}…..
Post the next asap?????
Sanskriti !!
Thank you so much yaar for your such a long comment. Haan, song is for me, that’s so sweet of you??? Keep guessing dear. Suspense banne do.
Yess, om can blush too unlike the ib vala om, sadu sa face rehta hai?
Ki haan, I will surely stay tuned with this ff.
Love you very much. Thanks once again for taking out time to read it. I am speechless.
I will try to post the next soon, and you too❤
*Ji haan? a typo !
Hey Vedu …. This is bad very bad it’s a very short update.. But k fine I’m falling in love with this ff again n again yaar ur really incredible how can u even write a small scene so well .. I tnk it’s Jerry’s magic ? Again love Dadi she is a cutie pie like u n Ani in shorts haan (awsm avatar) .. It was lively to read their dancing , I felt as if I was watching a performance so hats off to u .. N like is the best in tis part no one can take his charm n cuteness .. Fan dr post next Asap ..❤
Love yaa ??
Sahil* is the best..
Indeed he is. Thanks again?
Haridhra, dude it was big enough, no. Still I will try to post the next one soon and that too a big one. Awww, that means a lot, thank you so much.
Jerry’s magic??thanks again. Yess Dadi is adorable. And Anika in shorts, really hilarious to imagine.
I am glad that you liked the update. Once again, thanks and big vala thanks. Will try to post soon babe.
Love yaa❤
Awwwww soooo gooooood POST ASAP
Thank you so much Payal for commenting. Will try to post the next soon❤
Hii Jerry I know I am again late. So a biiiiiiiiiggg sorry for that.
What should I comment now??? Hey help me a bit with some new adjectives. Hmmm got one the episode was amazing. Nilash was it just amazing…?? No no it was awesomely fantabulously amazingly amazing.
You know I always imagine the scenes while reading them and when I imagined Anika dancing wearing shorts she appeared a next door girl to me. Amazingly you described the dance steps and I want to know how you do that.
Dear one question I noticed CHALK at many spots I think you were to write CHALO right??? I know it is auto correct problem.
Hey do post the next soon and I will try to comment soon on that part.
Hey Nilash di. It’s totally fine. You know what I always feel special by your extra ordinary comments. It means a a lot to me. Thank you to the infinitely for sparing out time to read and comment.
I am really happy that you lived my ff and likes the dance steps.
And yess I am really sorry about the typos. You are correct it was Chalo only.
Yess I will try to post soon. Thanks again. Love you very much❤
Hey Cutiepie!Sorry for the late reply was busy as usual!*Sulking face*
Now comintg to the uopdate you are really going dpretty good with the hapters it’s lovely,Om asked gauri to come to the park and I thnk he will ask her about coming to goa with him there and saumya toh is alwayss ready,And I also had a feeling that Annika had her shift In goa(Just a random Guess) and so she will be also with them,
I just love the scene where dadi is caressing shivaay’s hair giving me the feeling of old IB.
ans shivaay had promised that he will always keep annika happy and safe.
Now woohhhoo! Annika in shorts and tee and was dancin!Now this is something adorable as well as amzing.But Our shivaay is not less,This song is one of my fave song so I just loved i!
To be true I’m a bollywood sucker but I too lve hollywood songs,they are really soothing and at times classy.
About suggestions!
hmmm.. You can do a beach party you know for cocktail one!Night sky , endless sea and their with dim lights party is going it will be fun and romactic though , and if you want some humour than make annika talli! and behind all this will be rudra it will be amzing.And yes do all the rasam in open lawns it will be great to imagine it.Then their is haldi and mehendi,You can give some streamy hot scene between Shivika in this parts,But anyways I know you will have much more good suggestions then this. Do continue soon,
eangerly waiting for the destination wedding!
Love you always,
-Anya <3
Hey Anya. Its totally fine. But I am glad that you commented? Thank for such a big compliment. I am blushing.. Yes, om wants to talk to her alone and also there’ll be a date, I suppose. And yess for the Anika part, keep guessing.
I am glad that you loved the scene where Dadi is caressing Shivaay’ hair. To be honest I liked the older ib most? You are correct Anika was dancing in her casuals and shivaay saw her.
I also listen to Bollywood songs the most but sometimes my friend recommends to me, so I listen to them. Hi- five we are the same. And yess thanks a lot for your wonderful suggestions. I will try to consider it too.
Love you too❤
Hey jerry…
Finally i read all parts of ur ff..
I’d already read all ur OS nTS…
Now coming to this ff…
It is just ammmaazzing…
Fabulous…
Really loved it…
New concept,,new plot….n no negativity yet,…
Tia is also positivie…
Loved it
Hey Kanfi. Thank you so much for commenting here. And I am really happy that you liked all my writings.
For this ff, I am pretty sure you didn’t find any negativity and I hope I can entertain you further also❤
I fall in love with your ff everytime i read it….It’s just amazing. The best part was ‘shape of you’
I really felt the lyrics were what Shivaay actually wanted to say…BUT I am with Annika: How many ‘angrezi’ songs we might listen to, bollywood songs are still the best to dance on…ofcourse with a few exceptions..Keep giving such khidkitod updates….
Hey Tanz. Thank you so much for commenting. I am happy that you liked ‘shape of you’ dance. I am also with you and anika, the feel Bollywood songs have is just our type, na. And ha, there are always exception. Will try to entertain you further too❤
Hi Jerry!
This was sooooo good! I was imagining Shivaay’s performance. Imagine, if this turns true then? WOW! That will burn my TV like it did with yesterday’s episode when ShivIka’s chuda rasam was shown! And soooo SORRY for commenting late! I heartly apologize!
Bye!
Hey Zainab.
Thank you so much babe. Your comment always act as a booster for me to write more. Yes, indeed their Chuda rasam was awesome and super hot. Its totally fine dear, I am happy that you loved it. No need to apologize. Okay ?
Good night dearie, sweet dreams❤
Oh! Anika wont be with Shivaay what a twist..Hm, lets wait and watch the FF
Dancing idea..totally awesome
WEll, as soon as Shape of You started..My mind was totally singing that songgg..with the tune..
But ya I love Bolywood too..But English songs moree
Short and sweet update yet fantastic
Loved ittt!
Love ya!
Hey Neha di.
Yeah, you will have to wait for the fifteenth chappy. Thank you so much, am happy that you loved the Dancing idea.
Shape of you, its my current favorite song, thou I am a Bollywood sipper. Ohh, your taste is nice then. Thanks again.
Love you too di❤