Hey guys, this is Pavithra here. I am writing something on devakshi or any serial couple for the very first time. I want all your support. This is a FS ( few shots )… Hope you guys enjoy this….
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The story is same as krpkab till the divorce,leap,Suhana and Sonakshi is at Dev’s house for Suhana and later they confess love and reunite. But Ishwari-Dev’s mother doesn’t like Sonakshi but agrees to make Devakshi marry. But later Devakshi understands that its not them who are getting married. But its Dev with another girl… Dev have no way but to do what his mother says as he loves her a lot and don’t want to loose her… So there is no way for Devakshi to get marry… Thus, Sonakshi takes a drastic decision to sacrifice her love and leave from here with Suhana….
The day before the marriage…
At night….
Someone knocks at Dev’s room…. Dev opens and was surprised to see Sonakshi and Suhana…
Dev: Sonakshi, tum?
Sonakshi: Dev, I came to say what I have decided.
Dev: what?
Sonakshi: now its sure that we cannot get married. So I have decided……
Dev: what did you decide? ( without knowing what he is about to hear )
Sonakshi: you should forget me, Dev. You should forget everthing – our marriage, our love, divorce, Suhana and me. I know its very difficult.. But you should do this,Dev… You should start a new life…
Dev was spell bound! He had his nose and eyes red and he was in tears!
Dev: Stop, Sonakshi.. Stop your joke please!
Sonakshi: Do you think I am joking??
Dev: Yes, I think.. Maybe I want to think only like that..
Sonakshi: please do what I am saying…
Dev: its sure that we cannot get married. But why forgetting??
Sonakshi: For our future, for our Suha.
Dev looks at Suhana. And she goes to him and hugs him. He kisses her in her face. He cry.
Dev: Suha, I will miss you.
And looks at Sonakshi who was already in tears.
Sonakshi to Suhana: Suha, you go to Elena. OK..
And Suha goes.
Dev: what are you doing Sonakshi? Why are you doing this? How can I for…..
Sonakshi puts her finger on his lips…
Sonakshi: its for our goodness, our future. We should forget each other. I am going from here with Suha. But don’t think I am a bad mother who separated you from your daughter. I had to..
Dev: Sonakshi,Mujhe jodkar? Par kyun?
Sonakshi: Dev, I know its painful. We have to separate. I am going. And you should never try to find me. You should live happily with your new wife. OK ( smiling with tears)
She moves closer to him and they brings their nose together…
Dev: I am gonna miss you more than anyone….
Sonakshi smiles…… Tears rolling down…
Before turning, she went closer to him and kisses him in his cheeks and says
” I am going now. You shouldn’t try to find me. You should live happily with your new wife….OK… Forget me and everything….I know its not possible… Still you should do this… You are the great Dev Dixit na!” ( smiling now)
Dev: maybe I will not think of you and start a new life but don’t think that I will forget you…
Sonakshi could not stand there for more time as she would break down if she hears anything more from Dev…
Sonakshi turns without looking at him and wipes her tears away…
Dev: Sonakshi…..
Sonakshi stops…
Dev: Miss you…
When she heard this, a drop of tear rolled down from her right eye… She turned her head half way.
Sonakshi: Miss you too….
She runs away without even looking back!
Devakshi remembers their romance and all and cries…
(Background:- Rang rahe)
Dev shouts out her name very loudly….
SONAKSHIIIII……
And cries….
Sonakshi at her house…
Sonakshi was in her bed crying…..
Sonakshi: This is my second life…. I am gonna live without Dev now… I had once but that time in my heart it was hatred..but now it’s still love… Dev…… I don’t know if you will forget me but I am not going to do so….
She cries…….
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TO BE CONTINUED…..
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Hope you guys enjoyed this one… Ignore any grammatical or spelling mistake. Ignore the short forms if any.. Ignore if the Hindi words are wrong.. I don’t know Hindi much that’s why..
This FS probably have 5 Shots… Mmmm maybe more than that.. Not sure of.. But it won’t exceed 10….
Thanks for reading. Do let me know what you think of the story by dropping in a comment… Don’t forget to hit the like button too…
I will try to update as soon as possible…
By,
Pavithra?
37 Comments
Superb !!
Thanks bhai !!
You really wrote well nd it’s seems more interesting so waiting to know further about it ?
Thanks di? so sweet…?? love u princess
Awesome
Thanks Mansinaik….
Wow dear. You wrote really fantastic….. I loved it. Eagerly waiting for the next part…..
Awesome as always my lil sis….I really loved the way of writing…All the very best to u for ur future….waiting for next one….Lots of love to u sis ? ?
Thanks sooo much niyu di? really glad you loved it?? thanks di… I will try to update soon as possible.. Love you too… ?????
Happy New Year lil sis & love u ? ?
Thanks priya di… Glad you loved it… I will try to update as soon as possible… Thanks once again…
Outstanding amazing pavi. Luv u and keep writing.
Thanks a lot ashu… Glad you liked this one.. Luv u too…
pavi dear, this one’s really amazing……….got to read something on devakshi after soooooooo long………thnku so much sweety for this……….luv u a lot………..bye………tc
Thanks di?? thanks a lot di… Ya… Glad you like this… Luv u too???? and happy new year di
Hey its Superb episode with awesome love..waiting for next..ping me dear while uploading next ????
Thanks di… Thanks a lot…. I will definelty sent u the link…. I will try to update as soon as possible…
Awesome..i never saw this serial but it looks i have to see … awesome .???
Countinue soon
Thanks di… Thanks a lot… She should definelty see krpkab because its awesome and incredible… I love it sooooooo much? I will try to update as soon as possible..
It’s so awesome ? I have never watched the serial though ? I like your writing style ? Good luck.. waiting for next shot ?
Thanks a lot di..oh u should watch krpkab di.. Thanks…. I will update as soon as possible…
Amazinggggggg work little sis???Loved it completely❤❤❤❤Ur way of writing????Eagerly waiting for the next part???Love u??❤❤❤
Thanks di…. Thanks a lot I will try to update s soon as possible… Love u too??
its amazing
update soon
Thanks vanu… Thanks a lot… I will try to update as soon s possible…
I was not knowing the show or couple but am eager to know from the story of yours.
U should watch this hemi… Anyway thanks….
Superbs post next part as soon as possible by the way Happy New Year all Devakshian
Thanks.. I will try to updates as soon as possible.. Happy new year to u too…
it is a very interesting plot devu.. i am very curious for the next chapter ..this chappy was emotional:( hope they get together soon …
Thanks charu…thanks a lot.. This has a happy ending…
u r fab my real cutie…. happy new year too to all the actors of ur shots………
Thanks bhai…happy new years to u too…??
pavuz….. When I imagine this story in my mind….tears rolled in my eyes. It’s was amaizing…so so so good??
Thanks aadu dear… Thanks a lot…???? luv u
Amazing!
Loved it!
Almost in tears!
DevAkshi rock!
With love,
M Di
Thanks M di… Thanks a lot.. Luv u.. Thanks for commenting M di..