A man is shown placing all his things in his new house in a flat. He looked frustrated. His thoughts were how many times he should change his house….How do I even end up changing my house for every 6 months for some reason?
He unpacked some of his things and was too lazy to arrange them. He just placed them random places and he lied on the sofa due to tiredness. Just then he heard his doorbell rang.
He was again irritated and was scolding the person who disturbed him in his mind. With that he opened the door to look at a child on his door step. His frustration flew away looking at the cute and bubbly girl. The girl looked at him with surprise. She was keep on trying to peek into the house. He bent down and asked “What are u trying to look at cutie?” The girl “Cutie? Did she told my name to u?” He with surprise asked “Who is that she?” The girl “My di who is living here….she calls me cutie too!” He asked “Acha…sorry cutie…I just moved into the house and I don’t know about the person who lived here before….” Cutie looked disappointed and started to cry….He thought Oh no! How am I going to handle her now!
He hugged her and said “You want chocolate?” Cutie was keep on crying not able to bear the fact her di was not here anymore. Cutie in between her cries said “She….went?…..really went?” Abhi couldn’t bear seeing her crying like this and lied to her. He “No….she just went for a while….she will be back to see her cutie!” Cutie smiled and hugged him back. Cutie “Are u telling the truth?” He said “Yes cutie! You will see her very soon! Until then can we be friends?” She looked at him and winked. He asked “What does this wink means?” Girl “Friends! We always do like this!” He “Oh I see….u mean with your di?” Cutie “Yes! How to call u?” He carried her and showed his name on the entrance. Cutie and mispronounced the name by saying “Abi shake pram marrie….” Abhi hearing that laughed and said “No cutie…it’s Abhishek Prem Mehra!” Cutie gave a pout and looked at Abhi.
Cutie “It’s very long….” Abhi “Then call me Abhi!” Cutie “No…di always say we cannot call our elders by their name….” Abhi “Ok….then call me bhai!” Cutie “No…I already have a bhai and one is enough…I am scared of him! He always pinch my cheek…” She was touching her cheek while saying that….Abhi asked “Then how cutie?” Cutie after thinking for a while said “Ok I will call u friend!” Abhi “That’s also good! I am new here and I have a new friend now!” Cutie “Don’t worry friend I will tell u more but tell me when di is back…” Abhi patting her cheek lightly said “Sure cutie!” Cutie “Ok now leave me down! I need to eat friend!” Abhi left her down and saw her running up the stairs. Abhi thought, Not bad…here I have a new friend but who is her di? Why she never even inform her and left this house? There could be some reason….
At another place……
A girl is shown telling her friend “Anything u do it should be dil se (From the heart)….only then it would change your destiny and the distances that u need to travel in your life’s journey….” By saying that she passed a book to her friend and was walking out of the place. She was hit by a person on her head and she was about to fell holding her head in pain. Just in time, Abhi grabbed her by holding her waist to prevent her from falling. Abhi looked at her with a worried face.
To be continued if it’s interesting…….
I am very sorry for the souls intertwined out of….. I feel it’s the most boring and irritating scribbling of mine. For now it’s under production for a short while as I am busy in some preparations for Sankranti and also my grandmother’s 80th birthday celebrations! So I won’t be back for at least 4 days and this one is just an idea that popped out of my mind……
Bye everyone! Happy Pongal! Happy Sankranti! Have fun and hope all wellness and happiness enter all your lives!
21 Comments
Tat was awesome akka loved it continue fr sure and gng to miss u a lot but still convey my wishes to ur grandma akka and happy pongal and happy sankranti too love u akka???????
Nice one di… and interesting tooo…loved the intro…keep going…love u and ur creations
Superrrr….. Pls continue……. Ple wish grandma in my side….. ADVANCE WISH YOU MANY MORE HAPPY RETURN’S OF THE DAY GRANDMA….??? And be HAPPY always……. Pls tell her this is my wishes to her….. And happy pongal and sankranti my dr Maya….. Come soon dr… Waiting for u…..
Your Cutie is loving this ???! Such A Cute Start and cutie miss u !?
It is ofcourse interestingg MTMP ! Go on !
And yeah Woooaaaahhhh Happy B’Day to My Sweetie’s Grandma ! May her life be filled with so many colours and happiness lifelong !
Innya Pongal nal valthukal Maya ka ??! Happy Sankranti ?! God Bless !?
Love uuuu ! ?
oh helooooo who told u its boring u know what my main motive of joining this site is not bcos I jux want to but I ve a reason and sometimes u guys even through ur writing makes me forget my hard time so plzzzz never ever say anything as boring about ur hard work bcos sometimes u never know the little things u do can change someones entire destiny so plzzzz am eargally waiting for both ur updates in ur free times lovvvvvvve u
Pls continue it seems interesting
Hai Maya nice start…pls continue
Intresting dii…
Happy pongal….
Such a cute start????? it’s very interesting! So continue it!
Interestinggggggggggg yaar…………Gonna miss uuuuuuu………….Happy Pongal to you too………..& Happy Birthday To Your Grandma too…………Convey My Wishes Dear…………Enjoy………….& Don’t Ever say that ,That ff Is Boring……..Bcoz I Reallyyyyyyyy love that one…………???
superb didi…
happy Sankranti.
Happy b’day grandma! Happy sankaranthi CS! And you gotta continue this one!
Superbbb akka…don’t ever say that ff was boring..actually we are enjoying it. ..wish u HAPPY PONGAL akka…and wish grandma from my side also..a very happy birthday grandma..love you akka and take care??????
Super start friend….
that was really awesome maya
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO GRANDMA AND HAPPY PONGAL FRIEND…..
Its ok dii….take care and do all your family works and enjoy pongal with your family…nice intro…waiting for the next…. Happy pongal dii….
superb starting sis waiting for the next episode your ff is
awesome and interesting sis I am waiting for that too
Wishes to your grandma and happy pongal di
Nyc starting di…. Nd my wishes to ua grandma… Nd pizza continue it….
Nyc starting di…. Nd my wishes to ua grandma… Nd plz continue it….