Author’s Note: I am extremely sorry for the delay. This chapter is mainly about the real relation of Riddhima, Kabir, Sejal and Ayan with the Sharmas. This chapter is a little bit boring. I will try to give exciting events from the next chapter.
In Riddhima’s Residence
It was night. Sejal just came home and Ayan opened the door.
Sejal: Where is Riddhima?
Ayan: She is in her room. She said that she wanted to spend sometime alone.
Sejal: Ok
Ayan: You shouldn’t have lied to her.
Sejal: I did what I felt right at that time.(saying this she goes from there)
In the patient room
Vansh: Angre, when will I be discharged?
Angre: Boss within two days.
Vansh: I will lead the deal of Switzerland.
Angre: Boss, it’s not appropriate for you to go there in this condition.
Vansh: I will go there and don’t worry about my condition. Tell me about dad’s whereabouts.
Angre: Sir is in such area where there is no network. It’s kind of advantage for the time being. But later when he comes to know about all of this, you have to answer a lot of questions.
Vansh: Don’t worry I will handle it. Give me my phone.
Angre: Here it is.
Vansh: You can go now. One more thing from tomorrow I won’t go for the event management course.
Angre: Okay boss.(saying this he goes away from there)
Vansh: Sweetheart, don’t worry you will forgive me soon. Now let me pass my time by sending messages to AR.
Vansh sends a message : Hi dear enemy! Are you there?
In Riddhima’s residence
Riddhima was trying hard to sleep but she was not able to sleep. Suddenly she gets a message in her private number. It’s message from Vansh Raisinghania.
Riddhima’s Pov : Vansh is being too eager to meet me. Don’t worry Vansh. You are going to meet me soon.
The message conversation
Vansh : Hi dear enemy! Are you there?
Riddhima: Are you serious?
Vansh: Is there anything wrong?
Riddhima: Mr.Coward Raisinghania is chatting inspite of getting shocked today🤨
Vansh: What to do? I was getting bored. But then I thought that I can spend some with my dear enemy. You might be feeling happy, right? Today you are either happy or sad. You are happy because I got shot and sad as I was saved.
Riddhima: You are right Mr.Vansh Raisinghania. Today I am both happy and sad at the same time. I am sad as I couldn’t shoot. I missed the most awaited moment. I am as you got saved. God doesn’t want anyone else to kill you. Your death is written by my hand. None change it even God can’t.
Vansh: Looks like you are an atheist. By the way, don’t worry I won’t die without having a confrontation with you.
Riddhima: I don’t believe in God as he is the one who snatched my precious think. Forget all of this, I have heard that your ladylove has broken all her ties with you. I guess she did right by leaving you.
Vansh: You don’t need to wory so much. I know she will come back to me.
Riddhima: Looks like you are over confident everywhere.
Vansh: What to do? Winning every time made me overconfident.
Riddhima: Don’t worry. Losing this time will help you to come back to your sense.
Vansh: Let’s see what happens DE.
Riddhima: DE?
Vansh: Dear enemy
Riddhima: So, Mr.Vansh Raisinghania is using short forms here.
Vansh: Life is short. I guess one shouldn’t waste one’s time by using long terms.
Riddhima: Don’t know about others but your life is definitely short.
Vansh: This is tthe reason I love to chat with you.
Riddhima: It’s my old habit to give enemies pleasure before destroying them.
Vansh: I must say I am very lucky then.
Riddhima: Lucky or unlucky?
Vansh: Only time will give the right answer.
Riddhima: Mr.Raisinghania, I think you should take rest now. I want you to see fine in Switzerland so that I won’t have the guilt of killing an ill person.
Vansh: Au revoir! Hoping to meet you soon.
Riddhima: Adiós!
Riddhima’s Pov : You don’t Vansh Raisinghania how much you are going to suffer. You just wait and watch what I have stored in for you. Kismat pe kiya hai jisne bharosa, kismat ne use hi diya hai dhoka.
In Raisinghania Mansion
Vansh’s Pov: Misconceptions are always dangerous. You don’t know whom are you trying to play with. The gam might be created by you but you will be the one who will lose in the end. Your overconfidence will result in your defeat.
In Riddhima’s Room
Riddhima was trying hard to sleep but she wasn’t able to sleep. She then opened her laptop and started seeing the old pictures. Seeing the pictures, she remembered the old moments.The first picture was her last picture with her parents. Her brother Kabir was standing in between her father and mother and she was in her mother’s lap.
Ranvor was more like his brother than his right-hand. Ranvir was the one who always gave Raj the right suggestions. If there was anyone in the world whom Raj would support was Ranvir Raichand. Ranvir Raichand’s wife was also a part of the underworld. They both had passed away in a car accident leaving Kabir and Ahana with them . Raj had always tried to fulfil every need of them. He had always considered Ahana and Kabir as his own children. Apart from Ahana and Kabir, there was another two persons who Raj loved. They were Ayan and Sejal. Sejal and Ayan are the children of Raj Sharma’s only sister Nitya Goenka. Nitya along with her husband Kunal was murdered by some rivals in the pious occasion of Diwali. Sejal and Ayan were saved as they were in Raj’s house at that time. After Nitya’s death, Raj took the responsibility of his sister’s children. He loved them as much he loved his son Aryan. After some years, Raj decided to send Ahana, Sejal and Kabir away from him for their betterment. Another reason for sending them away was that Sejal became aware of the reality. She came to know that her parents lost their lives because of the enmity of Raj with Dev Mallick . Mallick was later brutally murdered by Ayan. Raj didn’t murder Dev then as he wanted Ayan to kill the murderers of his parents. But Raj took his revenge by destroying the business of Dev. Raj had held Dev captive for several years. He kept Dev alive only because of Ayan.
Sejal, Kabir and Ahana started to live in Raj’s farmhouse with Raj’s parents in Australia. Kabir was like the parent of both of them. He used to take care of them like a mother. He never let them feel alone. Ayan used to stay with Raj and Aryan. Sometimes he used to come to Australia to live with them.
Riddhima’s Pov: Bhai, I still remember Papa used to say that you wanted to keep my name Riddhima. You said that you loved the name ‘Riddhima’ more than ‘Ahana’. Papa kept my name Ahana as he felt I was like first rays of sun in his life but you insisted that my name should be ‘Riddhima’ which means full of love. Now you are not here with my and I changed my name. I wish I had changed it when you were alive. That time only you and Sejal used to call me Riddhima. If I had changed it then I could have at least seen a smile on your face.
Precap: The bond of siblings and the reason why Sejal thinks Ayan is also responsible for Kabir’s death.
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I like their enemity
Thanks sakhi🥰🥰
Amazing dear!!!
Excited for the upcoming events
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Wow!
Amazing dear.
It is really super.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
Thanks a lot dear🥰🥰🥰 I will try to update the next one as soon as possible 😇😇
Aluuuuuuuu……I m here….💕
Missed youuuuu soooo sooo muccchhh…!!!💞
Thank you so much for mentioning me in ur last chapter….it really really means alot…i mean i feel that i m little bit special for someone….😊
Ab mera koi aik do paper to the nahi jo aik din mai khtam ho jate 🙄 AJ end hove hai….aur normal hi hove….roz kuch reh jata tha….ab result ye sendup ka shi ajye…and yr plz plz pray that in board exam i complete ny paper and I’ll achieve more than 1020 marks it’s my dream yr..😔
Every Chapter of urs is fabulous and mind-blowing….👌
The dare which u gave to sejal for not commenting for 1 week….it was just….🤣🤣🤣….i feel as u have given it to Pagli….bcz I haven’t seen her in comment section…I m Extreme level wali hurt bcz of her😐…but let it go…(even i tried my level best i m not able to let it go)
That Angry Bird revealation…
Ridhima hurting herself was so thrilling… putting knofe on her blisters was OMG.🤪😟..horrible…ur FF just gives me goosebumps…
Bada pachtaoge song was also….just kia bolun
While reading ur last chapter where where Ayan was addressing ridhima as ahana… firstly i thought it’s just a typing mistake… then it came in my mind k no it’s AR…which will be most probably Ahana Richand…my guess was right…😏
Ur shayri….kia bolun just JHAKAS….👏
U were calling this chpter boring….I think u r having some mental problem😒…go and get urself checked…bcz itna acha likhne k bad is ko boring kehna aik pagal insan hi kre ga….🙄
Tell me ke from where u have purchases this brain…bta do take main bhi apna mind udr se le aun… Kuch mai bhi soch lia krun yr….itne awesome khyal mere mind mai nhi ate….😂
AR and VR conversation…it was brilliantly written….sachi mai puri tm copy aur duplicate ho….😅
But I missed one thing in today’s episode so much that is sejuu and vihuuu ohhh sorry vansh’s bond,convo, cuteness…..😔
Ye ridhima k act ki wjah se ab wo dono apna continue nhi kr skte for some time…but if ridhima has not acted in this way vansh would have suspected her…so it was justified….
Ahana means First ray of hope as ur author name…😁
And ur OS….us ka to koi jawab nhi….what a master piece it was.♥️.. I mean that psyco and obsessed ridhima….i was imagining her expressions and it was just mind-blowing👏…it actually gave me goosebumps throughout reading it…..aftee reading i found it so short…(likhi tm ne lafi lenghty thi but story itni perfect thi ke mjhe parhte hove bhot short lgi)…. waiting for the same OS full of awesomeness..😌
Aluuu…i m actually blessed to found such a nice and good friend here online…who cares for me….the one to whom i matter…not tht much but atleast i have little importance in ur life it’s more than enough….wrna i think people just feel timely attraction for new friends then just forgot….thanks alot for that.. ❣️💗
Waiting anxiously for what will you write next….
And most importantly…. Congratulations🎉🎉🎉🎂🎂 to you for completing 15 chapters with such a success….no one can match ur thrilling level…. everyone are unique in their ways… but ur FF is just extra unique…. many mores to come…. I’ll pray that u may achieve success in whatever u do…Ameen…aur Allah SWT tm ko himmat den aise hi mast chapter likhne ki…Ameen….
💛🧡❤️♥️🖤💜💙💚
(Actually mai krti comments but pehle week k paper ne depress kr dia tha is week phir better hove is liye nhi kia tha… sooo soo sorry for that)
Finally you are back!!!!
Was missing you..🤗
Thanks alot Astha….i missed u too…♥️❤️
At last tumhare darshan hua hai 11 days ke bad. I lost the hope of seeing you again. I missed you so much that I can’t even write in words❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Tum tak message pauhchane ka koi dusra tarika nahi mil raha tha. Comment section mein id change karke bhi maine comment kiya tha tumhare liye. You don’t even know how much special you are for me😊😊😊 I was planning to write another message for you in Chapter- 17. I am not going to re edit it. That message is a little funny. I didn’t even read the WU after the trp. If you are coming there today, I will also come. The trp of last week made me so depressed. I took three cups of black coffee one after another to reduce my agony.
I hope you will get the highest mark. InShaAllah! My Aishu is the best in every case.You don’t need to ask me to pray. You all are always in my prayers.
To be honest, I didn’t give such dare to anyone nor anybody gave that to me. I never choose dare as I always want to play safe😜
Angry bird ko reveal kar diya varna aisa hota ki ff khatam hogaya phir bhi Riddhima ko pata nahi chala ki Angry bird kaun hai😅😂 Riddhima badle ke aag mein koi bhi haad par kar sakti hai.Maine Jaanbuz ke woh clue diya😁😁😁 I was listening to bada pachtaoge before writing the update. I got the idea from there😜
Tumhe gayab mode pe dekh ke mera brain ne mujhe dhoka de diya. Agli baarse gayab mode pe jane se pehle inform kar diya karo varna dhoondte dhoondte seedha Pakistan ajaungi.Hey Allah! Kya din agaye ek pre medical student ko mera dimag chahiye😅😅
Readers ko maine apna asli nam bhi reveal kar diya 😅😅
OS ka idea mujhe actually Tonni apu ke comment se aya. She always wanted to see Riddhima in a grey shade. I got the idea from there. I wrote the OS for 19 days. Next OS ane mein bohut deri hogi.
You have much importance in my life. Many few people in my life are so much important and you are one of them. Whatever I do, I do it seriously. This friendship has high value for me. I hope we can meet one day in real life.
Thank you so much🥰🥰🥰🥰 I am overwhelmed by everyone’s support. My ff is not so good like you are telling 😅😅😅 I forgot to tell you one thing. BD won the ODI series. Agli baar se gayab mode pe jane se pehle inform karna
Tm Ehsas e kamtari ka shikar ho(English ka meaning nhi pta😅)…means khud ko kam smjhna…itna acha to likhti ho….chalo next time hiii ke msg comment mai kr dia krun gi…sb khen gey ye pagal a gai hai koi idr..😅..
Lastly i m honoured to have special place in ur life…❤️
Tumhara sirf ‘Hi’ hi mujhe sukoon dene ke liye bohut hai. I wish I could show how many times I asked everyone personally about you. I am honoured to have such amazing friends like you guys 🥰🥰
Tehnaaz it was such a nice one..
Their chatting is always my favourite..DE was😂😂
Ahona means firstraysofsun so,you chose this name..
(mistake corrected here😅)
Thanks a lot Astha 🥰🥰🥰
My sister and I talk like this😜😅😅
You are right FirstRaysOfSun is my name’s real meaning. That’s why I chose it as my username.
I would like if Kabir is still alive and is in coma and would soon recover because it gives a peace to mind. I think people care for others but they don’t show and this will lead to emotional break up if the person who you cares dies and you would be keen in doing all the things that they wanted from you but after the departure of someone they can’t really enjoy the things you are doing when they wouldn’t be existing and the person till death or departure thought of fullfilling dreams of them but sometimes it is not possible but if you have experienced it then you would seriously care the little things but it would make them spoil and it should be in level not rise or fall. The emotions were very nostalgic and nice update. Efforts is big and results are small but they give you happiness. Take care
Kabir is in coma and Vansh has kept Kabir hidden for so many years because of his safety. Kabir will come out of coma soon after some more revelations and confrontations. Every person is not able to show everything what tgey actually feel. Some are bad at expressing emotions at the right time. Sometimes we regret that we didn’t do the thing which our dear ones once wanted when they were alive. It hurts us then as we couldn’t fulfil their wish then. After their departure, whenever we do that thing it always makes us remember that person. It also makes us regret that we couldn’t do it when he/she was alive. Their one smile seeing that would give us so much that we can’t get it easily. Thanks a lot dear 🥰 I really loved your point of view regarding this. Your thoughts are just awesome. You also take care.
Wow the episode wasn’t boring but was quite interesting to know the whole story. Waiting for the next one
Thanks a lot dear🥰 I found the chapter little boring when I reread it. I will try to update the next one as soon as possible 😇😇😇
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Nice episode🥰😍… It wasn’t boring.. Loved it as always🤩…. Waiting for your next one😊..
Thanks a lot dear🥰🥰🥰 Instead of readers, the author found her chapter boring😅😅😅 I will try to update the next one as soon as possible 😇😇😇
Amazing ep
Loved it
Waiting for next
Thanks a lot dear🥰🥰🥰
Hey TSA, I didn’t find this episode boring at all, but in fact according to me it was the best episode. I really liked how you explained about the bonding between the 4 of them. Riddhima’s love for Kabir is so beautiful. Especially how Kabir wanted to name her Riddhima, so she changed her name to it in the loving memory of her brother.
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PS : Why did you reveal in the comments section that Kabir is alive and is with Vansh? Arre, thoda toh suspense rakte aur humko apna dimag chalane dete yaar.
Looks like my brain has gone on vacation after seeing this week’s trp😂😂 Instead of the readers, the writer found her story boring.The next episode will have some flashbacks of Kabir, Riddhima and Sejal.
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Everyone is using their brains a lot for Immj2 😅😅 I don’t want to give extra pressure to their brain. Moreover,in Chapter-11Vansh had a nightmare through which it was revealed that Kabir is in come. Here is the glimpse of that chance –
Vansh(sweating) : I know I didn’t shoot him. Kabir, you need to come out of coma now. I can’t handle it anymore.
Omg, it now seems that even my mind has gone on a vacation mode as I forgot about how you mentioned Kabir to be alive in your previous chapter. My bad!
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PS: This question is unrelated to the article but just felt like asking, does Ahana and Ahona mean the same? I think they do, but correct me if I’m wrong. Also for me Ahona sounds prettier than Ahana.
Every Immj2 fans’ brains have gone on vacation because of over thinking 😅😅😅😅 No other fandom makes so many theories like us.
Yeah! Both Ahana and Ahona means First rays of the sun. I wasn’t getting any idea for my username. The meaning of my name then became my username😁😜Thanks🥰
Awesome episode
Thanks dear🥰
Aluu…soi nhi abhi tak
I was going to sleep😅😅
Good Night!!!!
Have sweet and cute dreams!!!
(I’ll talk to you tomorrow only here)
Belated good night! Good morning!
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Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰🥰
So nice updates 😊
Thanks for updates 😊.
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Waiting for next one 💖💕.
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Keep rocking🔥🔥🔥.
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Good Evening Aluuu!!!!
I have read ur comment that Pagli was asking for me….
Yr kia btaun mai ne us ko kitna miss kia…. I can’t even tell u…
Actually tm se to last time baat hoi thi…us se to don’t know kb baat hoi thi….
She didn’t even tell me where she is…
I have so much to say about her but can’t say all here…
But can’t control myself as well
U know I was missing her so much and bcz of that i got angry k aik comment nhi us ka and gusse mai mujhe rona ata hia…so aik do time to i was on the verge of crying…
Don’t know about her…but i missed her immensely
Good evening Aishu!
Your pagli didn’t forget you. Her exams are starting from February and she is also writing a ff. She is busy because of that.She missed you a lot wgen you were on Gayab mode.
Once you have told that you want to open insta this year. I want you to register your TU account before that so that we can stay in contact personally.
You had asked me if any of our friend was writing a fan fiction. Den and Muntaj have started writing. Here are the links:
https://www.tellyupdates.com/a-burnt-rose-immj2-chapter-2-unfolding/
https://www.tellyupdates.com/love-in-splitsvillla-celebrity-season-episode-1/
Us ko bolna chahye tha na….now I’ll not disturb her or make her tense…
I have read Muntaj’s FF…. it’s really amazing from onwards I’ll even comment… finally my wish to see her got fulfill…she is cute…and she doesn’t look like 18 years old….bilkul 15 ,16 years ki lagti hai….
Den ki parhni hai mjhe… I’ll read it then btaun gi…but i m sure us ne bht bht bht acha likha hoga…
U know mai ne tmhri TSA wali activity pic dekhi idr jo background mai likha hai na TSA wo bht ziada acha hai…❤️
Aik aur baat pichni thi…Den ki jo activity hai…the pic she has put there why i feel the hands are of her…i mean us ne khud wo pic click ki hai…. mjhe aisa lgta hai…
Aur….tm bhi aik din apni profile pic lga do…😅…mjje dekhni thi…😝
Seanna ne lgai hoi hai na…
@AA
Yeh bandi sunti hi nahi hai, abhi tak apni pic nahi bheji isne abb tum hi samjhao!!!
Kya kare iss ladki ka VR ki replica 😜
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Good to see you after sooo long!!
Ek baat batao itne bade comments likhe hai tumhne pata hi nahi chal raha kaha se suru karu aur kaha khatam 😂
Kia bolun maine to khud except Muntaj ke kisi ko nhi dekha hova…😅😅
Ab kia pata TSA surprise visit I mean koi surprise pic de de is ka pata nhi hai…
Comment ab itne din baad likha tha is liye bara ho gya…😝
U can read it in parts….😂
My wish to see Tonni apu, den,G, Nimu, Astga and Preeti got fulfilled. Now my wish is to see you once in my life. I saw everyone but none saw me😜
Thanks🥰🥰🥰 I designed background pic last year. Den ki background pic internet se liya hua hai.That’s not her own hand most probably. Mujhe dekhne ki tamanna itni jald hi puri nahi hogi😜😅 because I dislike taking pictures.
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@G Kya karu main VR ki replica hoon😅😅😅 VR itni asani se samne nahi ata. Main bhi nahi aongi😜Last day I found that her one comment has 600+ words. 1200 words ke to mere ff hi hai😅😅 If she writes two comments of that then it will be equal to my one chapter.
I can tell u one thing….tmhri wish kbhi puri nhi hogi….😂😂….ye baat 100 Percent surety k sath bol rhi hun
Sach mein tera kuch nahi ho sakta Ahona…..VR ki replica 😒😒
Wait a minute hamne Nimmi ko kab dekha she hasn’t sent any pic other than her childhood one!
3 logo ko dekhna baccha hai….One of them is you 🧐
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Sahi kaha mine one is always around 1,800 words….
Lagta hai @AA ne bhot excitement mein itne words ka likh diya 😅
Abb toh voh hi bata sakti hai…..
50 comments karke hi chodhenge 😁
@G ap kon si FF likh rhi ho….mai ne to parhi hi nhi…🤪…tell me…
ALUUU tmhre pas itna time hota hai ke tm mere comments k words count krti rhti ho…😂😂….bhot ziada nhi time hota
Maine khud nahi count kiya. It was counted automatically when I pasted your comment in the draft of wattpad.
Congoooooo Aho
For 50 comments 🎊🎊😂
Thanks 🥰🥰🥰🥰
Ayshuuuuuuuuuu 😍😍😍😍
Pagliiiiii…..❤️💗,….hope so ke tm thek hogi…..
Give me proper details of your schedule and exams or ur gayab mode so that mai tm ko tang na krun