In Riddhima’s room
Riddhima’s Pov: I still regret the day when you convinced me and Sejal to let you go to USA.
Flashback:
Kabir: Why is my warrior still sleeping?
Ahana: Bhai, let me sleep for sometime.
Kabir: If my Ridhu doesn’t wake up in five minutes then I promise that I will not let you have black coffee for 1 week.
Ahana: Bhai!! Don’t think of taking my life away from me.
Kabir: Is your coffee more important to you than me?
Ahana: No,bhai. You are the most person in my life (saying this she hugs him)
Kabir: But my Ridhu has to stay away from for some months.
Ahana: Bhai, is it necessary to go from here. You are just 20. Don’t you think it’s too early to stay away from your darling sisters?
Kabir: Oh Ridhu! Won’t you able to stay away from me for just 12 months?
Ahana: These twelve months are going to be twelve years from me.
Kabir: I promise I will call you everyday thrice.
Ahana: Promise?
Kabir: Pakka promise. Now I have to pacify Seju. She is also upset with me.
Sejal comes there.
Sejal: Ridhu, why did you agree?
Ahana: I don’t know yaar. You ask bhai. Whenever bhai says something in sad tone, I agree to him.
Kabir: I know my Ridhu and Seju can never stay upset with me.
Sejal: I am still upset. Can’t you complete your education staying here?
Kabir: Seju, I need to go there. Moreover, Ayan is coming to stay here after six months.
Ahana and Sejal(together) : Really?
Kabir: So much excitement before the arrival of Ayan. I think after he will come, you two will forget me.
Ahana: Who told you?
Kabir: The reaction of you guys.
Sejal: Bhai, when is your flight?
Kabir: Tomorrow. I need a promise from both of you.
Sejal: What?
Kabir: You both won’t disturb grandpa and grandma.
Sejal: Bhai, we are your obedient sister. We won’t break your promise.
Ahana: Let me tell you that you are not going to sleep tonight as you will spend your whole night watching movie with us. After that we will gossip whole night.
Kabir: Okay meri jaan.
Flashback ends
Riddhima then sees the next picture. It was the picture of her 11th birthday. Kabir had specially baked cake for her that day. Her tears were not stopping seeing that picture.
Riddhima was still seeing the pictures. This picture was clicked by Sejal when Kabr was scolding her.
Flashback:
Kabir: How careless you are!
Ahana: Bhai, it’s nothing serious.
Kabir: From now onwards, you will not see cricket.
Ahana: Why?
Kabir: While watching cricket, you became too much excited and out of excitement you stapled your hand.
Ahana: Bhai, it’s a normal thing.
Kabir: It’s not a normal thing. You said that you want to join the underworld. How can you join the underworld being so careless?
Ahana: Bhai calm down.
Kabir: Ridhu, do you know how mu-
Sejal: Smile please (saying this she clicks a picture of Kabir scolding Riddhima)
Ahana: What is this Seju? I am getting scold and here you are taking my pictures.
Sejal: It’s going to be a good memory.
Flashback ends
Riddhima : Bhai, I don’t how you would have scold me for my madness (saying this she sees her hand and remembers how she has removed the blisters). I still can’t understand how could you befriend that Vansh Raisinghania. He betrayed you in the name of friendship. I am just waiting for the moment when I will do something similar with him. I know he has feelings for me. I just left him worried as he thinks that I am hurt. In this stupid game of love, if I am hurt then he is also hurt. Now I will win the Switzerland deal. It will cause definitely cause him some loss. When you will come to know that the person you loved turned out to be your biggest nightmare. Neither you will be able to shoot me nor you will be able to forget my betrayal. It will pang your heart so badly that you will prefer to have a quick death. But I will not let that happen as I have many things stored in for you. Be ready for it Vansh Raisinghania. Dhoke ka badla dhoke se (The revenge of betrayal by betrayal)
Soon Riddhima goes to sleep. But she goes to sleep without turning off the laptop.
After sometime, Sejal comes in Riddhima’s room. She was feeling restless. She wanted to apologise to Riddhima for hiding the truth from her. She decided that she will talk to Riddhima about this in the morning. Seeing the laptop open, she decided to shut it down. Sejal found out that Riddhima was seeing their old pictures.
Sejal’s Pov: Bhai, we still miss you.I wish that day we had stopped you. Ridhu is still living in your memory. I never wanted you, Ridhu and Ayan bhai to join this world. That person and Ayan bhai is equally responsible for your death. Ayan bhai knew that your best friend in USA was the son of uncle’s enemy. But still Ayan bhai didn’t inform Kabir bhai. If Kabir bhai knew about it, he could have broken his friendship with that person. He even could have reached the spot and save him. Because of enmity, I always lost my dear ones. Firstly it was mom and dad. Then it was Kabir bhai. Now I can’t afford to lose any other person. I personally don’t believe in taking revenge. I feel nature will make the criminal pay for his deeds when the right time comes but this time I feel that whenever I meet the person responsible for Kabir Bhai’s death, I will rip his head apart. I wish I never meet that person.
Sejal shuts down the laptop and goes away from Riddhima’s room.
The next morning
Riddhima was arranging breakfast. Suddenly Sejal came and hugged her from back.
Sejal: Ridhu, are you still angry with me?
Riddhima stays silent.
Sejal: Ridhu! Please don’t stay silent. You know it well that I can’t bear your silence. Please say something. Scold me as much as you want but please don’t stay silent.
Riddhima: I just want to stay one thing that from now onwards you will not stay in contact with Vansh.
Sejal: I have made it clear to him that I can’t stay in contact with him. But one thing I would like to say.
Riddhima: What?
Sejal: Don’t you think you should give him a second chance? He did all of this as he loved
Riddhima: Trust is the base of every relationship. He tried to start this relationship with lie. He even hid his real identity from me. After all of this, do you think he deserves another chance?
Sejal: Even you are hiding your real identity.
Riddhima: You know my compulsions well.
Sejal: He might have also some compulsions like you.
Riddhima:Whatever it is, we both aren’t made for each other. I don’t want to talk about it anymore.
Sejal: Ridhu, I need a favour from you.
Riddhima: What?
Author’s note : Guys this was the 17th chapter. I hope you liked it. I would like to inform you one thing that I am planning to take a short break from writing. So,the next episode will be uploaded on either Sunday or Monday. After that, I will start uploading the episodes regularly again. Sorry for the delay in advance.
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Awesome episode🥰🥰… Take ur time😇…
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰🥰
Wow amazing 😍😍❤️😍❤️. It’s ok dear.its really interesting very interesting. Thanks for updates 😊😍❤️. keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊😍❤️. Iam waiting for your next updates 😊😍❤️.
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
So nice updates 😊
Thanks for updates 😊.
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
It’s really super and awesome 💖😊
Waiting for next one 💖💕.
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Wow fabulous 😍❤️😍❤️😍
Thanks for updates 👍
Keep rocking🔥🔥🔥.
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Awesome chapter!!!!!💕
I have never thought that my Aluuu can be emotional as well…😝….as you have written such an emotional episode….
So kabir and vansh were best friends…. Interesting very interesting….
I m wondering what will happen when sejal will got to know that vihuuu or vanshuuu is the same person who was kabir bro’s best friend…🤔…she will be so devastated and angry….😟….but maybe when she will got to know then maybe truth comes out… hoping for the best….
How is this Chap 17….uper to 16 likha hova hai….🤔
Well… I’ll miss this FF so much….but ur mental health,privacy and personal things are more important for me than FF so you can take break for the time you wanted….mai apne dil ko samjha lun gi….😔
U just take care of yourself….and just enjoy in this break….☺️
Waise I m missing Vansh as well….aise lag rha hai kitne time se us ko tmhari FF mai nhi dekha….is liye….😔
Aluuu….you write soooo amazing….I mean TSA the VR duplicate se mjhe aise dialogue sunane ki adaat nhi hai na…means emotional dialogues…and aj kal itna emotional likh rhi ho tm…
I’ll be Waiting for your return!!!!
(Actually Yaar tmhri FF wo source hai jahan hum sahi se baat kr skte hai…warna ab to WU pe bhi baat nhi hoti hai hmari….is liye ab ye hai ke kafi din tak hmari baat jhi uo ske gi maybe….😶😶…
Secondly mjhe mobile pe itna realize nhi hota ke mera comment kafi bara hai….I mean jab review bhi krun to normal lagta hai…us din jab maine laptop se dekha to i realized ke ye to written update se kam nhi hia…😅😅)
Btw how are Preeti and nifa….kafi time se un ka comments nhi dekhe… hope they wil be fine..
And…❤️💕
Thanks a lot Aishu🥰🥰🥰🥰
I wanted to experiment with my writing skills 😅😅 I actually always adore siblings’ bond. I know I won’t able to give romantic Riansh moments instead of their nok-jhoks and confrontation 😜So, I showed the love of brother and sister.
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Iska ek kahani hai. I actually combined two chapters on TU as two one chapter was a little bit short😅😅😅
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I actually write this ff in my free time. That’s why I take three days to publish an ff. I write approximately 350 words in a day. On weekend I write more. I am taking this little break as I want to take some rest. Thanks a lot for understanding❤️❤️❤️But you won’t have to wait much as I will upload the episode by Monday.
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Even I was missing Vansh when I reread it😅😅 Toofan ke ane se pehle sannata hai yeh😉 Something big is coming. The whole game will turn. Emotional dialogue likhne maza nahi ata jo mujhe nok-jhok likhne mein ati hai😁
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Today Den and I was waiting for your comment but you were nowhere to be seen. Kitna dhoonda tumhe 2nd February ke update mein dekho. Tum gayab mode pe chali jati ho aj kal😔😔
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Nimu is fine by the grace of Allah and Preeti has gone to hostel.
Looks too emotional…😍😍🤭..
Waise it was amazing 😍😍… Uss din ki confusion aaj dur hoogae… Ahana hi naam mila tha yaar…😂😂😂..
Cricket se mujhe bhi kuch funny incident yaad aaya 😂😂😂…
Sejal ke intentions favour ko leke mujhe kuch theek nahi lage…
Chalo dekhte hain kya mangne wali hogi vo…
Aaj ke update mein vansh ka kuch ata pata nahi chala…😆😆… Shayad Gayab mode mei chalagaya hoga..
Ye Kabir ka over sweet attitude uss ko suit nahi kar raha hai…😅
Break leloo aur phir aane ke baad update kardena…
Keep going on aho ❣️
Thanks a lot Nimu🥰🥰🥰🥰
Kya karu Ahana nam mujhe itna pasand hai to 😂😂😂
Maine jaanbuz ke woh incident diya hai tum logo ki memory test karne ke liye 🤭🤭🤭
Sejal kya lane wali hai kahani mein naya twist🤔🤔🤔
Vansh pehle se gayab mode pe hai isliye TSA bhi gayab mode pe ja rahi hai 😅😂
Kabir ka over sweetness ke liye over thinking maat karo😅😅 Kabir accha bhai hai jo apni choti behen se bohut pyaar karta hai.
Wow dear!
It is just adorable.
You are always impressing me when I read your ff.
Lots of love to you and of course to your beautiful ff.
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰 I am glad that you are loving my ff 😇😇😇
Amazing episode
Thanks dear🥰🥰🥰
Awesome update dhi❤..loved it…
Dear riddhu you cant change your destiny…if vansh and you are meant to be together it will happen….because destiny has it
Amazing…will be waiting for the next one🌼🌸🌼🌸
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰
None change what is destined even Ridhu can’t. I loved your line 😄😄
I will try to update the next one as soon as possible 😇😇😇
Loved it
Thanks dear🥰🥰🥰
Nice episode
Thanks dear🥰🥰🥰
You wrote the emotional dialouges very well..
Kabir-Riddhima’s bond was clearly reflecting their brother-sister relation..Kaash show mein bhi yahi hota😂
“Dhoke ka badla dhoke se” now I think none can stop Riddhima
Now what is this that Sejal is gonna to ask Riddhima as a favour🤔
Amazing episode!
Thanks a lot Astha 🥰🥰🥰
Looks instead of being on suspence mode, I am on emotional mode😅😜
I wish in the show also they were brother and sister but in show don’t know how many times Kabir tried to harm Riddhima.
None can stop Riddhima but other than me one person has the ability to stop Riddhima 😉
Let’s see what is Sejal going to ask Riddhima.
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Wow if she hurt him and the next moment gets to know the truth it’s sure she could get a heart attack. I wish if she get to know the truth just before the revenge and revelation it would be very interesting and curious but no she should actually feel the guilt and a confrontation with herself may boost the suspense.
In next 3-4 episodes there will be some major revelations and turns. I am planning to reveal the truth to Riddhima soon. She will feel guilty after knowing the truth but something unexpected is going to happen.
Aluuu….. yeh cricket aur staple toh tumhari autobiography hain naa😂😂😂😂
Kay aaj bhi tumhari hath mein who blisters ki marks hain????
Update was awesome as usual. I really liked their bonds. Tum emotional dialogue bhi likh sakti hain kya……
It was superb i just liked it.
Is chapter ka first part autobiography of the author hai😂😂😂😂😅
Arreee😂😂😂😂😂 Main aise khatarnak kaam nahi karti 😅😅😅 Yeh to baas imagine karke likha hai
Thanks a lot 🥰🥰 Yeh dialogues emotional hai mujhe comments padhneke baad pata chala😂😂
Quite emotional 😭
Excited for the upcoming events
I am finding it from the comments that the episode was emotional while writing I didn’t realize 😅😅 Thanks dear🥰