Author’s Note: Thanks a lot for showering so much love on my ff. I didn’t expect such response for my first ff. Chapter -5 and Chapter -6 will be full of Riansh’s nok-jhok. I will continue with thriller again from Chapter-7.
In Raisinghania mansion
Vansh: Do one thing. Tell him that I want to go on a break.
Angre: I don’t think sir would allow you to take a break when the enemy has got a strong player.
Vansh: He would. I know my dad well.
Angre: Ok, boss. I will inform him.
Vansh: Now let me sleep.
Angre: Ok, boss.
The next day
In the University
Sejal was standing alone while Riddhima was in the canteen. Seeing Sejal alone Vansh approached her.
Vansh/Vihaan: Hey Sejal!
Sejal(with a smile): Hi Vihaan!
Vansh/Vihaan: Why are you standing alone? Where is your angry bird?
Sejal: What?Angry bird?
Vansh/Vihaan: Oops! Sorry! I mean your best friend Riddhima.
Sejal(with a serious tone): Shall I tell her that you called her ‘Angry Bird’?
Vansh/Vihaan: You know what God created some people with many talents like me. One of my talents is that I can read faces.
Sejal: So, what is my face telling you?
Vansh/Vihaan: That you are enjoying my humour and you want to laugh but you are scared if she sees it then she won’t spare you. Am I right or am I right?
Sejal (bursting into laughter) : You are unbelievable!!
Vansh/Vihaan: I can see that you can laugh. But couldn’t you teach your best friend? Always anger on the face. Looks like an ice slab won’t take a minute to melt if it’s kept on her head.
They both were laughing but suddenly they stopped laughing seeing Riddhima coming.
Vansh/Vihaan: Hi Riddhima!
Riddhima(faking a smile): Hi! By the way, why were you guys laughing?
Sejal: Nothing special. We were just taking about angry bird.
Riddhima : I am not a Kindergarten student who will believe anything you say. So just tell me what you were saying without creating a scene.
Sejal: Voh… Actually…..
Vansh/Vihaan: Riddhima, did you have your breakfast or you skipped it?
Riddhima: It’s none of your concern actually. But for you kind information I never miss my breakfast.
Vansh/Vihaan:I actually heard that many girls are doing diet now a days so that they lose weight.
Riddhima : They do but it doesn’t mean I will do too. I love myself the way I am.
Vansh/Vihaan(murmurs) : That’s why you are so special.
Riddhima : You know Vihaan, you have got a talent in diverting topics. But you forgot that it’s not so easy to fool me. So just tell me why both were laughing and stopped seeing me coming.
Vansh/Vihaan:We were just talking about Angry bird. I was telling some jokes about angry bird but we stopped laughing seeing you cuz we thought you would scold us like a strict teacher.
Riddhima : Wow! That’s great. Let me also hear the jokes.
Vansh/Vihaan:I forgot the joke which I was telling then. Let me remember it.
Riddhima: You should take almonds with milk. It may come in help.
Vansh/Vihaan: Haha! Should I laugh or should take it as insult? Wait a minute. Why are you being so eager to know about my conversation with Sejal? Don’t tell me that you are jealous seeing us together.
Riddhima: Me? And jealous?! Whatever!
Vansh/Vihaan: Do you always have to say ‘Whatever’!
Riddhima: And do you always have to say ‘Am I right or am I right?’?
Vansh/Vihaan: Interesting very interesting.
Riddhima: Oh! I forgot to include this.
Vansh/Vihaan: So, I have two signature dialogue.
Riddhima :So what? Your two is equal to my one.
Sejal: Ufff! My ears started bleeding. You both are fighting like children. Even children are better than you guys. They reconcile after sometime.
Riddhima : I just asked a simple question whose simple answer couldn’t be given by him.
Vansh/Vihaan: I gave a simple answer, right Seju? But the problem is Miss Whatever has a habit of turning simple things into complex one.
Riddhima : Seju?
Vansh/Vihaan: She is my friend. I will call her whatever I want. Sejal doesn’t have any problem with this, right Seju? If you were not so rude, I would have called Ridhu.
Riddhima : Don’t even dare.
Vansh/Vihaan: Very soon you yourself will ask me to call you Ridhu.
Riddhima: I won’t.
Vansh/Vihaan: You said you would never be friends with me but still we became friends, right?
Riddhima: It was unintentional and accidental.
Vansh/Vihaan : It was destined.
Riddhima: Who the hell believes in destiny!
Vansh/Vihaan: I do.
Riddhima: Only those who can’t do anything by themselves depend on destiny.
Vansh/Vihaan: Very soon you will be forced to believe in destiny.
Riddhima : I don’t think so.
Vansh/Vihaan: But I do
Riddhima : Your thinki-
Sejal: Hey bhagwan! Mujhe uthalo. Is duniya koi mera apna nahi hai. Agar koi apna hota to jan lene ke liye peeche nahi pada hota.
Riddhima: What is this melodrama now?
Sejal: If I am doing melodrama now then what were you guys doing so long? Don’t tell me that two lovers were quarreling.
Riddhima : What the hell! I will see you at night. Now I can’t stay even for a moment(saying this she lefts from there).
Vansh/ Vihaan( in mind): I love you Sejal, my lovely sister. I wanna hug you now.
Sejal: Wanna hug me now?
Vansh/Vihaan: How did you find out?
Sejal: Just the way you found out mine. Am I right or am I right?
Vansh/Vihaan: You are absolutely right.
Sejal: I also know your real name is not Vihaan.
Vansh/Vihaan: You are right this time also. My name is-
Sejal: Don’t make the mistake of telling me. I talk while sleeping. She may realize the truth.
Vansh/Vihaan : Ok I won’t tell. But at least tell me how did you find out my name is not ‘Vihaan’?
Sejal: I may look sweet but I am not fool that I won’t find out the truth. I saw you talking last day on phone that you can’t talk about the deal now as someone might hear you and your identity might be revealed.
Vansh/Vihaan: Now I have to be more careful. Thank god! It was just you not that Angry bird.
Sejal: One more thing I know you like her. Don’t worry no one will ever know it as I have locked this secret in my heart.
Vansh/ Vihaan : Thanks my cute little sister. But now your duties increases. You need to tell me her likes and dislikes now.
Sejal: I won’t (gives a wink). You need to prove yourself that you are the best for my Ridhu. Ridhu is my one and only family. I know you are the only one who can bring smile on her face. She may seem strong from outside but is broken from inside.
Vansh/Vihaan: Don’t worry I will soon bring a change in her.
Suddenly a notification comes in Sejal’s phone.
Sejal(looking at the phone): Oh my god! Your angry bird is gonna kill me. She is sending me threats. See the message.
‘Bandhan jo tha atoot hamara
Usko thukrake tune kiya hai daga
Ab bas do minute mein aja
Varna bhul jaungi Sejal nam ka koi tha’
(Forgetting our unique relation, you gave me betrayal. Come in 2 minutes. Otherwise I will forget there was someone named Sejal.)
Vansh/Vihaan: Oh! So Miss Whatever is in a mood to poetry.
Sejal: I gotta go now. If I don’t go now then you will find me in tomorrow’s newspaper.
Vansh/Vihaan : Go now! Angry bird can’t manage without you.
Sejal lefts from there and Vansh texts Angre that he shouldn’t call him while he is in the university as one person found about his fake identity. It’s there good luck that she won’t reveal the identity.
Precap: Riansh’s nok-jhok and Aryan decides to take revenge from ‘AR’
60 Comments
Wow. It’s amazing. You should update your FF more frequently. I’m just head to heel fallen in love with your FF 🤗🤗💖
Thanks a lot dear🥰🥰 I will try to update the next one as soon as possible
Aho waah…. It’s amazing yaar….😍😍😍!!
All the while…. I was enjoying….and the way it was scripted was amazing aho….❤️….
Aur precap…. Riansh nok jhok…. Wow.!!!!
It’s damn awesome aho….❤️❤️❤️….
Abb toh words bhi nahi bache hai…. It’s was fabulous 😍..,
Waiting for the next one…😁😁😁
Thanks Nimu for so much praising🥰🥰 Now my heart is dying to tell Shinchan’s famous dialogue – ‘Ab main itna bhi khas nahi’😅😅 I will try to update the next one as soon as possible.
Who’s dialogue is this Ab mai itna bhi khas nhi???…Aluu i jave either heard it or read it….🤔.
@AA that dialogue is of a cartoon named Shinchan.
Loving it😍….
Thanks dear🥰🥰🥰🥰
Amazing,superb,fabulous, lovely, cute and all the best words for this one….❤️
I really really enjoyed and loved it Aluuu….☺️💕
I was waiting for it throughout the day….u can’t even imagine how many times I have visited the site to find it…then i opened ur last FF several times…..😔
Can’t tell you how much I m in love with this….♥️
Actually it is having the elements which I wanted….like humour,nok jhok, suspense,thrill(I’ll not point romance, actually I wanna tell you that romance itna hazam nhi hota mere se…meri dictionary mai romance ka mtlb bs emotional hug,dance,nok jhok, emotional support hai bs…sorry to tell but mjh se wo kiss bhi mushkil se tolerate hoti hai(i usually skip it parhte we bhi)not hand and cheek kiss other one…🙄)…
Ur dialogues are so well and amazingly written…💖
Ab English itni achi nhi hai…warna tmhri tarref mai maine Asman Zameen ko mia dena tha…(ye thora ziada hogya…😉)….
So My “Angry Bird” pays little part in ur FF… well that makes me really happy and somehow…Im honoured…😌
Ur poetry and humour was awesome….💗
MashAllah….meri Aluu ki thoughts ko kisi ki nazar na lgey….😁❤️
Waise aj bhot miss kia tm ko maine…..tm se and apni Pagli se meri ziada baat nhi hoi aj is liye…dono ko….😔
Love you both my besties….
, Waiting for the other one anxiously….plz post it Little early….♥️💜💚💙🧡💛
Thanks a lot Aishu 🥰🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️❤️ I am actually new to posting articles on TU. My article gets modified before being posted. That’s why it takes a little bit extra time.
Romance is out of my league. Humour is in my comfort zone. I am considering the nok-jhoks of Riansh as their romance😅😅 Mujhe bhi tumhari tarah hazam nahi hoti romance hazam nahi hoti 😅😅
I wrote the entire chapter in my journey. Jo man meye aya likh diya.Tumhari tareef se jyada tumhara sath jyada prefer karungi (Shayad kuch jyada hi bol diya 😅) Jhoot mat bolo mujhe pata hai tumhari English bohut acchi hai. I will try to be regular from tomorrow. I missed you too!!
O Aluuu…itni meethi baton se yhan ksi ko diabetes ho jani hain….udr WU mai Den ki meethi baton se idr tmhri se….😂😂…
And coming towards English…mjhe kahin na kahin ye nhi achi lgti🙄…colg mai Maximum ko is ki grammar ki problem hoti hai….yhan phir thori likh leti hu… but….😶….
The trio (vansh riddhima and sejal) rocked today’s episode 🎇🎇
Waiting for the next episode
Thanks dear🥰🥰🥰
Riansh’s nok-jhok was damn funny and of course Sejal’s choti si melodrama!!
Loved the episode entirely!💖💖
Thanks and keep updating!
Thanks dear 😇😇😇
Awsm ff nd their nok jhok specially her name angrybird😅😅😂nd her poetry for sejal.amazing story
Thanks a lot dear 🥰🥰🥰
Why are u making sejal a traitor? Well, I like ur characters and ur ff is good. Keep rocking dear.
Thanks dear😇😇 Don’t worry she won’t be a traitor. She just wants to see Riddhima happy
Oh my god! She’s helping!! 🥰
I thought she’ll be kidnapped 😂
So amazing and cute episode
Keep rocking and update us soon😉
Thanks dear for your continuous support 🥰🥰🥰
Thum mere naam kyu dhee ridhu ko
Angry bird tho Mera bee naam
Coming to episode…..
It’s really amazing and funny, continue with the flow
Jo dimag mein aya woh de diya 😅😅Thanks dear🥰🥰
Yaar that Riddhima’s dhamki to sejal was amazing..
Bandhan jo tha atoot hamara
Usko thukrake tune kiya hai daga
Ab bas do minute mein aja
Varna bhul jaungi Sejal nam ka koi tha’
You are an amazing dialogue writer..
As well as story!!
This Riddhima is created by TSA 😎😎Her dialogue should have uniqueness. Thanks dear🥰🥰🥰
Wahh Ahona kya likha hai….
It’s just ultimate…..
Oh so the threat message was for Sejal by Riddhima 😏😂😂 It’s fab….
Humour and nok-jhok is on peak.👌🏻
Waiting for the next episode….
Thanks dear🥰🥰 That was a sneak peak given by me. I have aslo given the sneak peak of the next episode. I will update the next one as soon as possible
Wow amazing 😍❣️❣️😍❤️😍. I really enjoyed your updates 😊😍❤️😍. thanks for updates 😊😍❤️. keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊😍❤️. Iam waiting for your next updates 😊😍❤️.
Thanks a lot dear🥰🥰🥰 I will try to update the next one as soon as possible
When will you upload….i really want to read..
Dear, the next two chapters are uploaded and I will upload the eighth chapter tonight.
So nice updates 😊
Thanks for updates 😊.
Thanks a lot dear 😇😇😇
Precape is so exciting
Thanks dear🥰🥰
Nicely written….
Dekhte hain aage aage hota hai kya….
Riansh’s Nok-Jhok 10/10
Loved Sejal and Vansh’s bonding…..
Thanks dear 🥰🥰 I am happy that I scored 10 out of 10
Fabulous…..fantastic episode….
Each and everything is very well written especially the humor….
TSA ka toh koyi jawaab hi nahi 😉
Abb apni tarref matt karne lag jana 😏😂😂
Frankly speaking I’m looking forward for the next chapter!!
Thanks dear 🥰🥰 I know that I know you but still I can’t guess your previous TU name😅 TSA is self-obsessed. Will try to update the next one tomorrow
Off course you know me 🤫
And I’m not even asking you to guess me…..so don’t get into the thing of guessing me out 😂😂🤣
I just commented again to just……you know 🥰😏
I won’t try to guess you as I need my brain for writing the next part🤣🤣🤣🤣You will reveal your identity soon but as for now I feel your name starts with ‘P’, ‘S’ or ‘N’. Don’t worry I won’t try to guess you😅😅
Aluuu…. it’s Shikha…@g….mere detective mind ki awaz ne btaya hai…😎
Mere Detective dimag ne mujhe do insan ko indicate kiya. One is G and the other one is the one who has vowed to never make fun of my name.
U mean Preeti….🤭….but its G just look at the use of emoji in both of her comment…u will get it…. secondly she has commented twice na…so it’s she…
Tmhri Ayesha..guess krne mai lgta hai koo prize win kre gi….😂😂
My inner instinct is saying that your guess is right.
Yeh Shikha ya Minty hogi
Hangout mein meine aisi karne ko boli
Tonni FF nahi padti
Nifu aise nahi likhti
Preeti’s aur Ayshu aise caps lock perfect nahi hoon
So only one left in the TU to torture you is @G.
Caps lock mean….Den…🤔
@AA
Tu aur preeti never mind about capital letters, while me and @G does. (while commenting)
Ohhhh…..I see….pagli…how is ur health now???
Health theek hogayi, lekin mera qismath kharaab hain ki mujhe ab Home quarantine mein jaana padha
Ohooo…pagli koi nhi….kuch dino ki baat hai na…..tab tak hum hain…. telly update se hi kam chalao….
I know family ko miss kro gi…but hain to wo sath hi na….so chill…and pressurize maat ho….in dinon hum se kam chala lo….jab kho gi idhr ye pagli mil jaye gi….
And it’s a matter of fee days…so be strong….(and meri pagli hai bht strong….)and sath koi new theories develop kar lo….
Lastly,,apna bhot sara khyal rakho
Wow amazing story I’m really enjoying keep rocking
Thanks dear🥰🥰🥰
@Den There is a correction. It’s not torture. It’s for having fun. Do you remember you were supposed to write an ff after immj2 ends for our chatting? Lagta hai woh kam maine hi kar diya. But this ff is gonna end within 10-12 episodes
What….atleast 50 to kr deti aluu..🙄
Mujhe at least 20 karna tha lekin mere classes start ho gaye. Aur main free time mein likhti thi jo ab bohut kam ho gaya. I will try to continue as long as possible
@TSA
I had also sdressed torture in funny only…..
Jaise Preeti boli thi “Mera life ka aim hain Miss whatever or Nimo ko torture karna”
😂😂
Aur mera life kam aim hai torture ka jawab dena😂😂😂
Can you tell me when will you upload the next episode….pls hurry up
Chapter – 6 and 7 is available now and I will upload Chapter 8 on Sunday.