Hi guys how r u all tq for ur comments nd iam soo sry to say that after ending this ff iam quitting tu forever nd ever i know u ppl will not even remember me nd i too know that iam not a gud writer like u ppl so that’s y iam getting low comments nd i can’t take this partiality any more so iam really sry BUJJI,AMMU,KIYA i have failed to keep my promise that I made to u ppl .I know that only u ppl wants my ff to be posted nd so sry guys …..Nd the sad thing is that no one knows me as a writer in tu nd some ppl won’t read my ff also but they will comment on others ff so it’s hurting me alot nd it’s not ur fault y because if I write well automatically u will like my ff it’s all my fault so there is no point in blaming u ppl iam sooo sry guys …Sry regular readers nd commentors i can’t continue my newly started ff i know u ppl is not liking my ff so I need to do this …
If u can plzzzz remember me guys
Ok enough of my bak bak let’s start with episode
Episode 20
Twinkle is waiting for kunj just den she heard bell sound nd runs to open to see kunj she felt very happy nd drags him inside
K: are wat happened twinkle
T: just go nd freshen up nd come back fast
K:ok but y
T: i said na just go
Kunj goes to his room nd returns after 10 mins nd calls twinkle nd twinkle says to sit on dinning table kunj does as her instruction twinkle comes nd places a tray on dinning table
K: wat is this twinkle
T: kunj u know i have prepared this for u ..
K: wat u prepared this
T: yeah kunj sply ur fav dishes alu parata u just taste it nd say
Kunj takes a bite nd says wow it’s really superb twinkle it’s so delicious
T: really tq kunj
K: nd one more thing take this
Kunj gives her a cover
T: wat is this kunj
K: just open it u will come to know
T: kunj y u r doing so much for me inspite of wat i did to u y kunj
K: because I lo…( Stops ) because I like u in fact ur my best friend
T(with fake smile): tq kunj
Kunj gets a call from his frnd nd he excuses
Twinkle pov
Wen kunj said that I lo.. i thought he will confess his feelings i was waiting for that desperately but he said I like u i felt very bad yeah I don’t know wen i fell for him his caring ,loving nature made me to fall for him but definitely one or the other day I will confess my feelings for him but I too have fear of loosing him if he doesn’t have same felling for me no i can’t loose his friendship i will wait for him until he confess i will not i was engrossed in my thoughts just den kunj comes der after completing speaking in phone
End of pov
K: twinkle my frnds are inviting us for a party so if u don’t mind can u join me to the party
T: ok kunj i will wen is the party
K: tomorrow at 7 pm
T: ok i will come
@night
Twinkle hears someone’s voice nd she goes out to find Vinni speaking in phone secretely twinkle call her Vinni turns with fear she cuts the call
T: Vinni with whom u r speaking that to in this late night
V: bhabi vo i..Am talking to my frnd (in trembling voice)
T : frnd???? Ok now u go nd sleep saying this twinkle left .Vinni sighs relief nd went inside
Next day
Kunj was going to office just den he saw manohar nd usha getting down the car kunj was hell shocked nd ran to his flat. Here twinkle was sitting in living room was reading paper .
K( tensed): twinkle ma papa r coming wat to do now u nd me in seperate rooms if they come to know abt this how to explain them just then ushar enters flat
M: kunj beta how r u
K: papa ap iam fine u papa ma ap kaise ho
T: thank god mummiji ap a gayi
U: kya hua beta
T: ma u know wat kunj has done yesterday I asked him to take outside for dinner but he didn’t come if he sits in front of mike he don’t remember anything so I gave him punishment iam doing strike from yesterday iam not in our room iam in seperate .
Kunj was looking at her with shock nd with mouth wide opened
U: beta he is like that only i will teach him a lesson now we came i will handle him now u shift to ur room
T:ok ma kunj come nd help me to get all my things to our room
K: sighs relief nd follows twinkle
Both twinj were arranging their things in room
@night
Twinj calls ushar for dinner
M: i don’t want all this first i want to taste the jam made by my daughter (i hope u ppl remember )
K: papa it is not homemade jam it was kissan jam i was just taunting her nd she don’t know cooking while saying kunj looks at twinkle who was smiling silently with her head bowed .
All were laughing nd having their dinner
U: kunj u shud adjust beta if twinkle has her mother she would have thaught everything to twinkle being her husband u shud support her
Twinkle looks at usha with teary eyed usha observed this
U: beta kya hua y r u crying
T:ntng ma from my childhood i didn’t get my mother’s love but iam so lucky to have u ma by saying this she hugs usha
U: beta plzz don’t cry u r my daughter nd no one can give love nd happiness for kunj except u so we r lucky to have u
By this statement both twinj looks at each other with guilt
T/k: sry ma papa we r cheating u how to say that we r going to take divorce after 3 months
Screen freezes
PRRCAP: TWINJS ROMANCE
SO GUYS SRY IF I HAD HURT U WITH MY WORDS WHICH I HAVE SAID PREVIOUSLY BUT IT IS TRUE
PLZZZ IGNORE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS IF ANY
I WONT ASK U PPL TO COMMENT
ND BEAR WITH ME FOR FEW MORE EPIDODES
BYE
KEEP SMILING
LOVE U ALL ???????
25 Comments
Nice
Do continue
OMG Di
i really enjoyed it
please post this and your other FF soon
Loads of Love
Awesome
Amazing plz don’t quit tu
U write very well
Plz
I’m really upset that you have decided to quit writing and tu forever. It breaks my heart to know that you think so badly of yourself. You’ve got a great family in tu and who support your work. I always read your ff and it’s one of the few I follow on tu. You have a great story plot and you write in good English and well too. Here are my sincere wishes that you continue to write. Best wishes to you from a silent reader. I will no longer be a silent reader.
Hey Nishuu,
Awesome episode….
Yr i m very eager for next episode..
plz plz plz plz post soon….
Love u
Urs
Lama
Amazing.
Di plz dont do this…
Aap aisa na karo…
Munhe bhi cmmnt nahi milta but hum log post krte hai ns..plz…
Cmmnt milegaa aapko…
Awesome epi….
Loved it…
Too good…
Love u…???
Plz don’t leave…???
Nice episode. ….
Hey nishu di plz don’t do this
Who tell u u r not gud writer
Plz don’t say this
I loved ur ff
Waiting for ur 2 ff post di
Agar aap mujhy aapni sis mante ho na toh
Aap end nhi karoge ( its my damki)
Plz
By the way brilliant episode di
Eagerly waiting for twinj romance finally
Aap ko toh me dekhti hu instagram pe
????
Aaye meri di ko bad writer bolne wale
Hm??????
Post soon di
Loads of love u di
nice episode
Awesome episode
Don’t quit Tu plz
Continue soon.
Yrr kon bolta h tu aachi writer nahi h mujhse puch kitni bechani se tere ff ka wait krti hu aesa mat kr yrr???
Episode was superb
Waiting for next episode
Ager tu ab bhi nahi maani aur phir ye baat ki tu leave krne ki to sach me pit dungi vo bhi haq se ek fr family member aur sister ke haq se OK samjhi
Post soon both ff
Luv u dear
Very nice episode ??
N plz don’t do this ….plz continue
We love ur writing ?
Plz don’t quit tu plz?
Superb episode n plz continue… ☺️
Nice and waiting for twinj romance and don’t end this ff and hope I won’t leave tu
Hey di
What happened to you
Don’t quite TU
Who said that we won’t love your writing
We all love your writings
And if you will quit TU then I am not gonna end my ffs
So,please don’t do this
And ya it hurts when we see that some people are commenting in others ffs and not newly writers
They read out our writings but don’t comment
What will happen if they will commente only a word
Like an earthquake will happen if they comment
Seriously these peoples are impossible
They don’t know that if we won’t comment the people will get hurt
A word of appreciation is enough
So,YOU ARE NOT GOING TO LEAVE TELLYUPDATE AND IT’S NOT MY REQUEST IT’S MY DHAMKI
SO YOU ARE NOT LEAVING TU
you will have to write for your regular readers
Anyways
The episode was marvellous❤……Speechless❤………Fabulous❤
Post soon your both the ffs
Love u
Keep smiling
Take care
And I hope my words wI’ll work
Yr kaun khta h tum ek achi writer ni ho !or maine jb se comment krna shuru kiya h tb se mai regularly sbki stories pr comment kr rhi hu !
Yr u r write amazing so plz don’t quit ok!
episode was superb
post ur other post soon
I m waiting
Nishu di ???
What the hell??
Aap Aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho??
How dare U say that U r a bad writer??
U have no right to Say something against my Nishu di samjhe??
My Nishu di is BEST ??
Episode was Super Dupper Amazing??
I just loved it??
Post Soon ??
And do continue Ur New FF too Warna I will stop writing too??
Love My Nishu di so Much????
Post Soon??
Love U ❤❤
achha dii main kaun hun ???
maine ap ko dii mana & u r doing this thing
how can u hurt ur chotu sis ???
I’m very hurt
cmmnt ki baat hain then fir mujhe to sabse pehle TU quit karna chahiye
jayiyee dii
chali jayiyee
akhir main lagti kaun hun aap ki ?????
sirf behen bolne se to behen nahi ban sakti naa ???.
agar hoti to ap aisa kabhi nahi karti
jaiyee dii
haan but if u go I’ll too quit TU
then I have come for only 3 months
a half an year too will not complete in my journey
and for that u will be responsible
haan agar ap chali gayi to zindagi me kabhi ap se baat nahi karungi ???
& I’ll quit insta too
now it completely depends upon u
miliye mujhe ap insta me phir dikhati hun aapko
& I’m miffed with u
don’t talk with me
KATTI! KATTI ! KATTI! !!!
DON’T EVER TALK TO ME
I’m very hurt ???
& angry as hell ?????
baat naa karna mujhse
love u but temporarily hate u
never ever talk to me ??????
What Yaar Di u can’t do this ….
Plzzzz don’t do this ….
Epi was amazinggggg loveddddddd it sooooooooooooooo much finally twinkle has fallen for him …
Post soon and dare u end it ?????????
Oye..nishu dear plz dont do dis I love ur writing a lot
u write very well dear
plz dont leave tu
bcoz of tu i got good frnd like u
n d episode was just awesome
love you
nice epi
Akkaaaaaaaaaaa. You want me to go mad.
Sabke sab sirf bad news De rahe hai
Maine kya bigada kisi ka
Ohh god what type of sister you gave me she is so innocent and sensitive
What should I do with you.
Are my dear lovely akka
Everyone loves your writings
But some have grown horns to comment . That’s it forget about them
Dare you
Dare you you end it
I’ll be mad at you.
You can’t do this.
You can’t breaky heart
Well about episode it was awesome Amazing and so lovely.
I won’t I love you until you say that you won’t quit.
I’m warning you
Awsm…
Don’t quit TU …..
Plzzzzzzz….
Byeeee…
Post soon….
nishu dii mera toh naam liya tak dahi dida aap apne baby ko itne jaldi bhul gaye….
aapko toh pata haina i lft tu n i rarely cmnt or dida if mein yahan cmnt karungi toh mera sara time yahan jayega read krne mein bhi bhott time lag jata hai…..♥
dida aap aisiee kaisee humko akele chod skte ho diii u knw naa aapse sab kitna pyaar krte hain still…….♥
didu aap aisaa kuch nahi kr rhe ho plsssss
mere liye na sahi toh jo 3 logon ke naam aapne liye unke liye promise karo mujhko bhi plssss…..♥
ab itna ro li hun or nahi 🙁
bas aap plsss dii dont quit plsss….♥ mene sochaa merii dii haar maane walo mein se nahi hain
love u alottt dida ♥
aaj ka episode bhott mast tha twinkle ka separate room wla bahana ek dum jhakaas…. 🙂
love u 🙂