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Tq soooo much for ur comments and sry for being late .
Episode 28
Kunj was abt to kiss twinkle but twinkle push kunj due to this kunj fells down with a thud and wince in pain and slowly open his eyes and he was shocked to see that he was in his room .(guys it was kunj’s dream )
K:ouchhh my back….And wen I came to flat last night we were at date venue….Kunj it was a dream don’t delay u shud confess as soon as possible nd u shud make ur dream true says to himself and gets ready to go for studio.
@evening
Kunj calls twinkle nd asks her to come to xyz venue nd tells her to wear dress which is kept in their cupboard..Twinkle gets ready nd goes to xyz venue ( guys it was same venue which was in kunj’s dream nd with same decorations …..So I am not gonna describe again )
Twinkle calls for kunj nd she was abt to call him again but before that she saw that kunj is kneeling in front of her with a rose
K: twinkle I don’t know why wen nd how I fell for u but I really love u twinkle I love ur innocence , angry , smile nd I love each nd every thing in u… I can’t leave without u nd I can’t even think my life without u …Lastly I LOVE U TWINKLE ….LOVE U SOOOO MUCH?????? SO TELL ME WILL U BE WITH ME FOREVER AS MY WIFE AS MY LIFE …..
Twinkle was standing numb without uttering a word with tears kunj saw this nd stands der nd puts his hand on twinkles shoulder but twinkle jerks him nd gave a tight slap to kunj making him shock
T: I didn’t expect this from u kunj …. I considered u as my frnd but u just broke my trust …. How could u think that I will love u ha..Yeah u would have thought that I am loving u because of my closeness but kunj come to reality … I was close to u because of our frndship but it doesn’t mean that I love u … Really kunj u proved that every guy is similar if a girl is close to him they feel that the girl is in love with him…
Here kunj was shocked nd tears were rushing down from his cheeks he was glued to that position nd his heart is pierced into pieces
Twinkle continues nd ha tomorrow is our first hearing in court I want my divorce says this nd leaves to flat leaving heart broken kunj behind ….
Here kunj falls down on his knees nd cries his heart out ..Nd thinks ..Y babaji u don’t want me to be happy. Firstly u sent Alisha in my life but she betrayed me .. now twinkle is not loving me …She considers me as her frnd but u snatched that frndship also today …. He cries vigorously..
@morning
Twinkle goes to kunj’s room nd she doesn’t find kunj der she was tensed. She was restless she was abt to call kunj but before she calls him he entered flat …. Twinkle looks at him nd was shocked to see him like that his eyes were swollen nd red due to continues crying …. She felt very bad for him she was abt to speak but kunj didn’t make any eye contact nd silently he goes from der leaving crying Twinkle behind ….Kunj was crying sitting in room here Twinkle also leaves to her room
Twinkle’s pov
I am sry kunj I have done all this for ur safety she cries kneeling …Yes kunj
Flash back
I was getting ready I was very happy because it was our 1st date nd I too know that u were going to confess ur feelings but I got call from uv
In call
T: hello
Uv: hi baby
T: uv (with shock +anger ) y u called nd stop calling me baby
Uv: y baby always u r my baby no one can change this laughs
T: no uv Iam not urs anymore I am kunj’s wife nd I am his not urs so don’t u dare to talk like that nd just stop ur nonsense nd cut the pH I have important work saying this she was abt to disconnect the call but stops listening uv voice
Uv: wait baby if u try to disconnect the call den u might not see ur kunj again laughs evilly
T: wat?????(shocking)…. No uv plzzzzzz don’t harm him plzzzzzz by now her eyes were wet
Uv: no baby don’t cry nd ha I know wat important work u have u both husband nd wife planned for a date ….I know u might be thinking that how I came to know this … Listen carefulkunj is in front of me nd my gun is pointing towards him ……U shud obey me or else u know wat i am gonna do laughs evilly …
T: no no uv … U can’t do like that …
Uv: y can’t I … U know I have tried already to kill kunj …..Laughs
T: wat?????
Uv: yes baby do u remember that day kunj was abt to hit by a truck … That was my plan but dammit because of that Maya I was to go as his rescue …That day I was standing behind the tree but Maya saw me so to pretend me as a gud person I saved kunj ….But now no one can stop me ……
T:uv plzzzzzz don’t do anything for him I will do wat u say plzzz uv….I am ready to obey u
K: so baby u shud spend one night with me …. Not only one night daily I want u daily ..So r u ready baby
T: no I can’t do this uv .. I love kunj ..He is my life I can’t betray him
U: ok u won’t get kunj now I will count 5 u shud agree for this or else bhoom
1 2 3…..4…..
T: ok I will plzzz don’t harm him I will come (she start crying )
Uv: ok baby now u shud reject his proposal nd u shud come to me forever …..Ok bye baby see u soon in my farm house laughs evilly nd cuts the call…..
Here Twinkle was crying vigorously she gets a call from kunj but she cuts the call nd again starts to cry… Again she gets a call …She gets ready nd reaches venue with heavy heart …
Flash back ends
Nd I reached to venue is was surprised to see the decorations but it was piercing me because I can’t accept kunj’s love I shud leave him for his safety but I can’t leave without him with heavy heart I called kunj before I call him again I saw kunj kneeling with a rose in his hand nd he proposed me I felt very happy to know that how much he loves me but I remembered uv’s words ….His words were revolving in my mind nd I couldn’t utter a word my heart was crying ….By looking at me kunj stood up nd he put his hand on my shoulder.. but he shud hate I shud make him to me so I jerked him nd I slapped him to ( uv was standing behind the tree noticing all this) …. Nd with stoned heart I rejected his proposal I am punishing my kunj my love for my past deed which was the biggest mistake of my life ….. I left kunj behind nd runs towards car crying nd reached home nd I entered my room nd started crying on my fate whole night ….. I am sry kunj I am soooo sry I love u soo much I can’t live without …. But u shud be happy nd u shud marry Maya I know only she can make u happy …
Kunj was sitting in his room he didn’t come out of his room since morning here Twinkle was getting ready to enter into the hell
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Ok guys I hope I have reached ur expectation
Ignore errors if any
I will post next episode tomorrow … Because I try to complete this ff very soon …..
Bye
Loads of love
22 Comments
awesome episode
feeling bad for twinkie & kunj
post next soon
Oh oh…. Yuvi is at it again… Poor Twinj!
Absolutely loved the episode di…
It was amazing! Please don’t end it di…. Please
Awesome episode… Luvd d twist?
Amazing episode di full shocked feeling sad for twinj really ????plz post soon
So shocking unexpected pls kal post karna
Fabulous dii…
Just loved it…
Post soon…
Love u
omiieee god nishu dii ♥
surprises n twists ♥
soooo emotional ♥
it was sooo sad like hope soon get ohkay twinkle shuld literally share it wid kunj yaar 🙁
or dida pata hai like srsly m crying it was amazing ♥
n dat uv how dare he evry night i wuld kill dat guy huhhh
loved it ♥
love u sooooo much dida ♥
it just took me like in shock ♥
amazing episode nishu superb
yrrr twinj bechare
post soon dear
luv u
Good epi
Poor kunj feeling bad for him
Post the next one soon
Wow yaar Di shocking felt bad for kunj ????????
I hate this uv coz of him twinkle were not together hope soon kunj got to know it uv who is making twinkle do this.
It was just awesome
N shocking twist
Feeling bad for twinj
Hope Kunj gets to know the truth soon
Post asap
Nice
Amazing episode
And shocking twist??
Plz post next part soon
Love u
Amazing darling post soon
?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤❤????????
Ayyo my Mimi.??
Look I’m here.???
Ur great writer samjhi.??
And I luv ur writing so much.❤❤❤❤
It was shocking episode.??
But I luv this so much.????
Woah awesome episode.?????
Hope kunj ko sach pata chale.??
Post soon ohkk.???
Load’s of luv uh Mimi.???????
?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤??❤?
what the hell .. ye UV phir se aa gyaa
Feeling sad for Twinkle & Kunj both
dono dukhi hain
Do write soon
Emotional episode
Feeling bad for twinj
Dis UV u want to kill him
Post soon love u
Nishu diiii ???
This Uv????
Ek baar miljaye phir toh kabhi iss duniya mein nazar nahi ayega ???
Wanna Kill him ???
Post Soon ?
Hope Twinkle doesn’t do as Uv said ???
LOVE U ???
u r saying true
agar ye kamina uv kahi mil jaye naa
so kamine sry 10000000000000 kam8ne mare honge ki uv payda hua
wtf….???????
agar ye mujhe mil jaye naa to iski haddi pasli tod ke rakh dungi…..twinkle ke saath raat toh kya ek pal nahi guzar payega….
kuttta kahika….
mar jake….kamina…bullshit uv????????
awsm amzng fab epi dii
it was tooo gud
just luvd it
luvd the twist my di
feeling bad for twinj
plz post asap my shona di
love u soooooo much my cutie di…???????
Awesome akka Amazing superb
I thought uv had changed buy he is such a devil huh
I hate him more
Poor twinj
What will happen now
I’m in suspense
Love you keep smiling