Hi my dear lovelies how r u all kya shock laga sab ko ????? I told u that I will be posting after 13 June na but iam lil free now I thought to give u a small surprise so guys …….e surprise kaise laga ap sab ko ……
And iam so upset with the no of comments really it’s hurting me a lot ?????? am I that much bad on writing if so just tell me I will end this ff soon and I will not drag it plzzzzzzzzzzz do tell me ur opinion abt my ff whether I have to end or to continue seeee iam not black mailing u guys nd someone would think that because of comments iam black mailing nd getting comments back and all I will not pay any heed to such type of stuff y because it’s not abt comment it’s abt person’s feeling because we will spend time to entertain u guys by writing ff and making twinj alive ……..so plzzzzzzz do comment not only for my ff but also for others piece writing
And iam so sry if I had hurt someone’s feelings I didn’t mean to hurt anyone over here nd I also know others were busy in their exams ,school nd clg stuffs and all so I won’t mind these .
And u don’t think that I will end writing nd leave tu I will not do like that never ever because this tu has given me soooooo many frnds ,sweeeeeeeeetie cutieeeeeee pyaaaaariiiiiii sisters so for them I will continue writing ……..
And also thanks for those u have commented on previous episode……
Bahutttttttttt bak bak Kari na so enough of bak bak
Let’s go with episode with a broad smile on our lips???????
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If any one missed any of my Episode or anyone are willing to start to read my ff here are the links for my previous episodes
RECAP: TWINKLE TO FIND PHOTO IN KUNJ’S CUPBOARD AND KUNJ’S ANGRY
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EPISODE– 7
Twinkle sits der itself and she is crying vigorously and slept there itself whole night
Next morning
Kunj opens the door and saw twinkle lying in the hall and he found some dried tear marks on her face and felt bad .kunj then goes der nd sits beside twinkle nd keeps her head on his lap and try to weak her up by tapping her cheeks but he found that her body temperature is raised nd her body is hot burning like fire he was tenses she was unconscious nd he was numb by looking at her condition that too because of him .A lone tear escaped from his eyes he don’t y so he picked her in his arms and takes her to the room in a bridal style .
He enters the room.and places her on the bed smoothly nd he calls the doc
Doc comes nd checks her nd says
Doc: she is fine no need to worry I think she cried a lot and didn’t gets proper sleep that’s y she is in this position so take care of her and don’t give her more stress so I will leave now nd u give these medicines without fail OK
K: tq Doc I will take care of her
Doc goes from der leaving twinj alone
Kunj goes and sits beside twinkle nd takes her hand in his and he rubs her forehead with another hand and says ” iam so sry twinkle because of me u r in this condition I don’t have any words to describe my guilt plzzzzzzz get well soon ” by crying
It’s afternoon twinkle was in unconscious state still ( guys Doc gave her injection ????? bad Doc ….so she is in that state still) Kunj was sitting beside her nd he was looking at her with a guilt in his eyes that was guilt of hurting her ..just den Vinni comes der running
V: Bhai ….Bhai wer r u ( no response ) Bhai r u der …bhabhi wer r u ( no response) ha wat happened iam screaming this much nd no one r responding wer both of them went let’s check nd she goes nd checks all the room in home and comes to Kunj’s room nd she was shocked by the door sound kunj looks up and find Vinni at the door step nd says
K: Vinni u here????
V: Bhai wat happened to bhabhi ????
K: ntng serious Vinni just she has fever
V: but Bhai wen did it happen u would have called us right y didn’t u called us haaaa
K: it’s ntng serious Vinni just she has fever
V: but Bhai wen did it happen u would have called us right y didn’t u called us haaaa
K: it’s ntng my dear it’s just a fever ntng to worry OK tear escapes from his eyes nd Vinni observed that and say
V: bhai r u crying !!!!!!!
K: no no iam not crying ( pretended)
V: no Bhai I can see that but Bhai be strong ntng will happen to bhabhi don’t worry OK Bhai I will be back bahi let her sleep
Saying she left the room
K: twinkle plzzzzzzz get up my guilt is increasing now by looking at ur condition iam unable to bear this pain plzzzzzzz wake up and a tear drops on her hand nd she is opening her eyes slowly ( bahhhhhhuttt filmy ho gayi na ) and says kunj .kunj felt happy to see her awke and he hugs her tightly as if der is no tomorrow nd twinkle also hugs him back and kunj says
K: thank God u woke up u know I was so tensed by looking at u really iam very happy
T : kunj ( by rubbing his back to console him ) kuch nai hua muje mei bilkul teek Hun soo fikar mat karo aur samhal apne ap ko
K: really twinkle I am sooo sry for hurting u I did a big mistake really I mean it ( still hugging )
T: kunj I know u didn’t mean to hurt me I can understand
Kunj came into senses nd left her and says sry
T: that’s OK ..kunj…… Can I ask u one thing??????
K: ha ask me!!!!!
T :vo………. Wh..o i.s th.at girl u.. was huggi…ng in that ph….oto ( in stambling voice)she asks this question nd closed her eyes because of fear
Kunj looks at her closed eyes and held her by her shoulder
T: twinkle bachhi now u r gone …now he won’t leave u wat was the need to ask him that …. ( guys she thought that he will agin scold her )
But for her surprise ……..
Kyu batao suspense…??????
Read that in next episode..
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Surprise first time iam posting it on my own
Tq ammu for helping in this registration process
so guys iam winding up with this episode and I don’t wen I will post ….
And I know it was quite boring sry for wasting ur precious time nd I don’t knoe wat iam writing I just wrote wat is cooking in my mind
And keep thinking…….
who is that girl?????
Y twinkle was surprised??????
Wat will be the Kunj’s reaction for Twinkle’s question??????
May be on my bday as a treat for u guys ..
And If i had hurt anyone of u sooo plzzzzzzz forgive
Nd do tell me how many of r willing to read this ff nd say frankly if u say we don’t like also I will accept y because it is Democratic country every one has there own decisions I will not force u….
And do tell me in comment because arrival of next episode depends on ur vote sooooo
Plzzzzzzz silent readers break ur silence and comment plzzzzzzzzzzz
Nd do comment wether positive or negative if u want to give some suggestions regarding any changes u can so plzzzzzzz comment
Nd guys ignore grammatical errors no proof reading
Take care
Bye
Love u all ?????
41 Comments
nice epi
Tq soooo much my dear
Love you
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Hey diduuuu…
Finally u got registered ….
I m so happy…
Kisne bola we dont like it….
I just loved it…
Thank u for this surprise…
This epi was awesome amazing fabulous fantastic sweet cute nd wat not…
So aab jaldi se post krna….
Ok dii nd dont worry abt comments….just write it for those who comment nd for urself….
Love u diiiii…..????????????????????????
Urs….
Bujiiii
Bujji u loved my surprise na tq soooo much but this is ntng in front of ur surprise really bujji iam very happy to have u in my life
Be happy always my dear bujji
Love you to the corecore????
Nishuuu Akka
Awesome episode amazing
Kunj cares for twinkle alot
That he even cried for her how cute so so cute and everything is so lovely I think it’s there first hug
Awesome one u ended it in suspense not fair but it’s really lovely
N don’t say u r bad in writing u wrote so nicely m I love it alot
Amazing one
I think I’m first one to comment
Love you keep smiling
Awww ammu this is all because of u nd love u my dear ??????????? tq soooooo much
Nice episode post soon episode jaldi karna next episode plz ❤️❤️❤️
Tq sooooo much dear
Love you
Wow yaar Nishu amazing firstly to congratulations finally u are registered too ??????and secondly episode was quite emotional loved it too much kunj care for twinkle tier hug and everything waiting for the suspense …
So.post soon plzzz. ????
Tq sooooo much Sameera
Love u
Hi dear, I really liked your ff and have been waiting for an update for a long time. But honestly I got bored of waiting. Please update consistently because you have a great storyline which people want to read and follow. Nevertheless, keep up the good work!
Tq sooo much my dear
But sry for making u wait but from 20 of this month I will be regular nd post it regularly
Nd love you dear
Hey!di
The episode was marvellous
Loved it to the core
Post soon
Keep smiling ☺☺☺☺
Love u
Tq sooooooooo much my dear
Love you
Cute yet emotional episode
And dare you finish the ff. 1st ur posting it after a long time and saying to finish it
Well di I loved ur surprise
But u left it in suspense ?
Now plz post next episode soon Haan
Do continue
Tq soooo much chinnu my dear
No I will not end it for u guys OK happy now ???
Love u ????
Hey nishu diii…
The epi was a blast….tgat’s a great news u got registered….
N first n foremost don’t even think of sayong it boring or am a bad writer…it amazing…not boring….
Loved it…ufff kunj really nailed it….
So cute….n the suspense…who must be that..I just hope it will be his sis or somewhat like that no ex gf…..let’s see n frankly speaking I don’t like this ff …wait sentence complete karne do…but I love it…frankly…post asap..birthday treat hmmmmm…
Omg tq soooo much dear I am hell happy that u love my ff
Love you dear
Love it and kunj cry for her and also worry for her waiting for next part.
Tq dear
Love you
Great epi. …
Post soon…
Tq sooooooooo much dear
It was really good
Don’t be upset about comments
You left it on suspense
Post Soon
Tq sooooo much my dear simmy
Love you ???
Hi nishuu,episode was marvellous ????? I like it???
U r amazing???
Luv u???
Post soon
Tq soo much dear
hey di tysm fr registering
Amazing episode
Post soon..
Tq adu baby
Love you???????
Heyy dii…
The epi was amazing…
I loved it…
Fabulously written..
Post soon..
Love ya?
Tq sooooo much dear
Hey Nishu di!
I am So happy U Finally registered??
I loved Ur Suprise di??
Ufff di??The Episode was Amazing??Just loved the way U potrayed Emotions??
I love U di????
Post Soon
Tq sooooo much Lilly
Love u ????
Nishuuuuu I’m so happy that finally you are registered ??????? loved your surprise
Nd episode was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb nd emotional too. Kunjs feeling was just heart touching. But suspense mein kyun chhoda? Par koi nahi bcz I loved it. Post next asap
Love you lots ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Tq Di and love you tooo di
Fantastic
Tq soooo much poornima
mishu dii……♥
aapne boring kaiiissiiiee ka aapko pta hai how mch I was missing ur ff…….
srsly very cute episode….
bechara twinj…..♥
n yeh suspense oh god pls dii post soon……♥ srsly cant w8…..♥
lods n lods of love…….♥♥♥♥♥
Tq baby for ur comment
Ya definitely I will post but it will take time y because iam busy in my exams so but I promise after 20 th I will be regular in posting OK
Love you dear ????
All d very best dii…
nishu dii** sorry ♥
Nishuuuudiii sorry mein late hogyiii Lekin jab aapne group par bola that meine padha yaa Nhi mujhe laga meine padhliyaa but meine Nhi padha tha shukar h meine ek Baar link open karke dekhli warna itna amazing epi mein miss karadetii..
Diiii it was just awesome