I am really sorry my first part wasn’t that good according to me…soo I thought of posting the next part today itself….please do tell me where I should improve or what you don’t like in this….
if you haven’t read the first part do read it….(I am asking you so coz I have uploaded two parts today)
Part 1
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Patiala takes the doctor to other side..….
Patiala: don’t you remember the boat accident…
Doctor: hmm..yes anika lost her parents in that accident..
Patiala: not only that ..i I lost my son….
Doctor: whaatt…why did you keep this secret for these many years..
Patiala: after ishu was born devki was very weak..she wasn’t able to do any works…shiv was always helping her…shiv never allowed her to take tension..she was really sad when I told her that we had to send him to the next city….but before he reached there…
Doctor: but…his death ceremonies..
Patiala: his body was taken for cremation with the others….so she had to witness it…I had hidden my tears inside…I never wanted to see her broken apart….(he hugged him and cried…)
Doctor: soo…who is he…why did he tell the name shiv..
Patiala: I don’t understand…but fate has brought him here today…I am seeing devki smiling like this after a long time…
They move inside…
Shivaay is taken to patiala’s house…
Devki and ishu take’s proper care of him…two weeks had passed easily…
Shiv is able to walk …his injuries had been healed..
Shivvay: mom…where is my medicines…ishu told me that she had kept it on the table…
Anika comes inside..
Anika: would it be enough if I help…
Shiv:ohh that’s great so…. miss..designer is free today…
Ishu comes…
Ishu: dii…good morning..
Anika: hii ishu….
Ishu looking at shivaay
Ishu: bhai..i told you to shave your beard right…
Shiv: haa okk ok…
Shivaay goes and shaves…
(guys don’t you remember the look nakul Mehta had in Pyaar Ka Dard Hai Meetha Meetha Pyaara Pyaara ..the same look and even his behaviour would be the same…because he isn’t shivaay right now…you will have to wait for some more time until he gets his memory back..until then enjoy this )
Shivaay comes out…
Anika is shocked seeing the handsome man infront of her….
Ishu sees this…
Ishu: dii shiv bhaiyya and you were childhood besties right…soo did you miss him a lott…
Anika is still looking at shiv….
Anika: haa…(she suddenly comes back to sense..) I mean ..sometimes…
Shiv: hey I used to think about you often…
Ishu: huh soo mee…
Shiv: actually there were lot of monkeys around my campus…so whenever I see them I reminisce anika…and whenever I see the beautiful flowers in the garden near by… I reminisce my little ishu..
Ishana: how sweet bhaiyya…(she is smiling at anika)
Anika gets angry and goes out…
Devki calls ishu and ishu goes to her…
Shiv runs behind anika…
He stops her near the gate…
Shiv: so anika…you did not ask permission to get inside my house..but you should ask my permission to get outside atleast..
Anika: what nonsense…
Shiv: ohh sorry…I did not know that this lady does not know manners….
Anika: I know manners..but its ishu’s house and I cosider them as my family…
Shiv: oh I see..so you consider maa as your maa…
Anika: haa..
Shiv:papa as your papa..
Anika:haa
Shiv:ishu as your sister..
Anika: haa..
Shiv: and me as your husband…
Anika: haa..
Shiv:haa(shivaay smiles at her)
Anika suddenly she realises what she just said…
Anika: nooo..that’s not what I mean..you…you ..you are my friend…
Shiv:friend…
Anika: I mean friend’s brother..
Shivaay smiles at anika and leaves inside…
Anika rushes home…
Anika at home….
Anika to herself (what is shiv to me..just a childhood friend …or something more than that..)
Anika to herself:why am I thinking so much I have lots of work to do…)
Anika is busy doing some designs for some dress…
She see’s sahil coming inside….
Anika: sahil why are you roaming around..you have exams right..
Sahil: dii I have finished studying..
Anika: you had soo many doubts yesterday…and now..
Sahil: haa didi..but I got it cleared from shiv bhaiyyaa..he is soo good at calculations..
Anika smirks: huh…shiv ..shiv..shiv..everybody wants shiv…nobody needs me now…
Sahil:dii I am leaving..
Anika: I have made your favourite dish..its kept on the table…
Sahil: dii ..shiv bhaiyya made dishes for us…actually its really tasty….
Anika gets angry hearing this…
Anika looks through the window towards ishu’s house…
She see’s everyone gathering around shiv…she gets jealous…
Shivaay notices anika looking through the window…
Anika looks again and does not see shiv..
She turns back and see shiv standing infront..
Shiv:so someone is feeling jealous seeing others getting more attention…
Anika: mee…nothing like that..
Shiv: I wasn’t telling about you …it was “someone”…
Anika stamps her feet on the floor and goes to the kitchen..
Anika takes some food in her plate..
Shivaay takes it and tastes it..
Shiv: hmm salt is less…some flavours missing…
Anika:I am not a master chef cooking for a contest….
Shiv: haven’t you heard “one cannot think well, love well, and sleep well if one has not dined well” so why don’t you give a proper food to your body…
Anika is surprised to see his caring nature…
Anika looks at him lovingly…
Shivaay breaks the moment..
Shiv: so dear lady use your skills in designing in cooking too..
He leaves out…
Anika is immersed in her own thoughts…
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Its morning…
Shivaay comes to kitchen after bath..
Shiv: maa I was thinking about making something special today..
Devki: no need betta…anika has made something..
Shiv: anika..
Ishu comes to him …keeps her one hand on his shoulders..
Ishu: bhaiyaa ..it was soo tasty..never had a breakfast like this..the smell…hmm…awesome..delicious..
Shivaay is surprised…he goes to the table..
He open the lid ..the smell was too awesome that he kept on enjoying it..
Ishana gave him a spoon..he tasted it..
Shiv: its indeed delicious…
he looks towards the door …
devki: anika said that she had extra work so she went…don’t know what is special today that she made it..
shivaay remembers his words at anika last evening..
shiv to himself: soo she isn’t that lazy..just that something is bothering her..hmm
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Precap:oberois tensed…
How was it guys ..hope you enjoyed this side of shivaay…..
Please do comment guys…
40 Comments
dear i loved ur story bcz it is very different from others and i think somany twist coming on the way…..coming to today’s epi it was superb shivika scene was soooooo good i hope u will continue this plz plz u r my cuteprincess heinaa plz take it as a humble request
thanks a lot dii…I will continue..
Wow nice
thanks ishqkum..
Chuperb….
thank you….
Wow!! Snow white… you bought my Adi back. Love you so much. You know what I really missed him so much his naughtiness and his killer smile. That’s a very good move you have changed that arrogant sso in to loving adi.
Coming to my views::
Shivika’s convo is amazing. Anika getting jealous of Shivaay haha it’s too good. Ishu and Anika’s bond is gonna make every one go gaga. And where asked Shivaay asked Anika does she take all his family as her family and himself as her husband that’s really funny it made me blush???
As a whole the episode is awesome… love it to the core??
ohh your comment was cute and lovely like you…thanks dear..thanks a lot for loving my ff..
Agreed to naina dear each and every point sorry for short comment actually I am out of station
that’s fine dii..
Its totally new very different and a fresh track but dear after Shivay gets memory back don’t make him lose memory of Anika plzzzzz but track is really awesome post next one asap dear
thanks dear…
i can’t reveal my story …but there will always be a twist….wait and watch..
Loved ur story
thanks sso…
nice one cuteprincess,
thanks dear…
Ooo dear cutieprincss……its an awsome episode….mainly sivikaaa really here i miss our aadi in pyaar ka dard hai..i read sivika part many times……plzzzzzz continueee it…… Im waiting for next episodeeeeeeeeee
nivin pauly fan…are you a Malayalee…
thanks dear…I will post next part soon…
Ysssss……and and where are u fromm?????i mean district???
I am from ernakulam district..i have cousins and friend near nivin’s house…
Hey dear….luvd it to d core…a very new concept …i really really liked it so so sooo much…shivika nokjhok is awesummmm…..u did a great job my dear
thanks a ton dear…
Hey dear vry nyc… it was just osum expecting more in coming episodes
okk dear…I will try to reach your expectations..
I loved it its so diffrent and sorry i can not comment on your first part
heyy..that’s fine..
happy that you liked it…
Nice to see a different person in shivaay but want to see some SSO ani ka fighting.. Post soon…
you will see that after a few episodes…there are many twists awaiting..
hii…
neeyyo…eppo kayari..
nallathanu….
pattum koodi cherkkan nokku..
vellapozhuma nee ee vazhikku varunnathu..appozhengilum kuttam parayathirunnukoodai….
kuzhappam illla..epravishyam khamichhu…
thanks dear..
udheshichathu ‘kshamichu ‘ ennanu..
eni aduthathu enna post cheyyunne…
nee thanneyano…
aduthathu nale akananu sadhyatha kooduthal….
posted next part…
Wowwww
Really nice n fresh concept dear
Loved it
Update next part soon
thanks dear…
Awesome epi yaar cuteprincess…loved it…Shiv is so caring n sweet…but donna what disaster will happen if he becomes Shivaay again…I loved this storyline and you really portrayed everyone’s character well…so nice….
thanks yazhu…
yupp wait watch….