Hi guys so sorry for making you all wait. Episode 10 was posted by Priyu. So thanks to my bff. See the link if missed.
http://www.tellyupdates.com/meri-zindhagi-avneil-naamkaran-fan-fiction-episode-16/
I am so sorry to say but i have to end this FF due to some reasons. Now i will just post OS or SS.
Please enjoy the episode and PM me if you want to continue the story.
Neil follows the goons. A goon confronts him. He moves forward holding a knife . Neil catches his hand and jerks him away. He beats all the goons. A man comes in a car and comes out. He is a famous businessperson Rajiv Kapoor.
Neil: You….. why did you send this goons? What is your problem with Sukoon house?
Rajiv: For property… ( looking Neil’s badge ) Inspector Neil Khanna.
Neil : Now you are finished …. (hits him)
They have a fight. Both are badly hurt.
Rajiv brings out a gun from his pocket. He shoots at Neil . Police reach there.
BDOOM……….
All are shocked.
PRIYA IS SHOT!!
!
Neil is shocked. He sheds tears…..
.
Neil : PRIYA…..
He rushes to hospital in police van.
Neil : No Priya, we will reach hospital in any time.
Priya: Neil……. (Faints)
IN HOSPITAL
ALL INCLUDING NEIL, NEELA MAA, PRIYA AND CHILDREN ARE IN HOSPITAL ROOM. PRIYA GAINS CONSCIOUSNESS. NEELA MAA GOES AND HOLDS HER HAND..
Priya: Maa, please tell all of them to go out….. except Neil …………
ALL GO OUT
Priya: Neil i want to tell you something in presence of maa. I’m ………
Neil: (Touching her lips) Shhhh….. sleep for now.
Priya: (holding his hands) I’M AVNI………
Neil is shocked….
Neil : Av.. avni….
He holds her hand and hugs her. Where were you why did you leave us?
She tells all that happened before.
Neil: But all that is sorted… Deekshya killed Ketan and she was arrested , after further investigation, we came to know that she killed Asha aunt, Nanno and Daya ji. She is dead now after she was sentenced to death. We all thought…. you were… Thank god……….
————After 9 years———–
A party setup
Avni comes with Neil and their child
Avni: Guys, I know Deeyaana has written a short FF on us but we have a happy ending with our daughter Asha. Thanks for all ur support. Love you guys….
Neil: And please give your last feedback to your Avneil Adiza……….
The end
Thank you guys for your love… I’ll soon write a SS on Bepannah for my Priyu…..