YOU ARE MY DESTINY
Stella
********** Prologue + Episode 1 **********
Hi frnds… As u all know that Tujhh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai is going to end… So, here I AM… with a new concept… Well, I’m not sure whether u will like this story or not but then also I thought of giving it a try… so, if u find this concept not upto the mark then do tell me, I’ll stop it then and there… But plzz do give your opinion about this one… 🙂 🙂
Like my previous ffs this one is also a SwaSan love-story… but on an entirely different concept… This might be a ff or a ss depending on the ideas that pop up in this little brain of mine… and ur response on this episode will decide whether I’ll continue it or not… So, do leave ur feedbacks n responses in the comment box below… as they really mean a lot…
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So frnds… Welcome to the SwaSan’s world of Love… where two people who never dreamt of meeting each other… who never even knew that the other existed… with the game of DESTINY lands into each other’s lives… But is everything as simple as it looks… well… well… well… I doubt that… Seems that the FATE has a lot more in store for them…
YOU ARE MY DESTINY…
My third fiction on SwaSan… The love story of a boy who unknowingly… unwantedly falls in love with a girl with whom he should never have… a girl who was not meant to be his… a girl who doesn’t even know who exactly HE is…!! The story is about his pain… the pain of knowing that the person he loves the most… the first girl he has ever loved in his entire life can never become his…!!
The love story of a girl who falls for a boy who enters her life as her savior… who shows her the way to life… who shows her what true love really is… The person who cares the most for her… BUT… a person whose true identity is completely unknown to her…!!
Is it that he is deceiving her by hiding his real self…?? Or is there any reason for that…?? Read the story further to find out what the fate has really planned out for these two…!!
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SCENE 1…
A huge mansion… with interiors n exteriors not less than a that of a palace… one can be left spell-bounded with its enchanting view…!! The sign-board outside says… MAHESHWARI MANSION…!!
But seems like something is missing in there…!! The life of the mansion is missing… the liveliness… the bubbliness… the charm of the mansion is missing…!! The entire place seems like covered with dark clouds of gloominess n sadness…
Moving inside… we can see a person in his late fifties talking to someone on the phone while a lady in her early fifties is standing there with a cup of tea near him…
Man: Hello… yes Dr. Mehra… Durga Prasad Maheshwari speaking… (pause) Yes… she is fine now… No… no panic attacks today… till now… (pause) Yes… we will make sure of that… But doctor the frequency of her attacks has increased even more in these last two months… She is losing herself day-by-day…!! (takes a deep breath) Okay… fine… We won’t try to remind her of whatever happened… But seems like she has been getting flashes of that incident… Hmmm… hmmm… okay…
He is about to speak something else when he hears the sound of something breaking… he turns to his side n finds his wife shocked n looking in the direction of stairs… and the tea cup lying on the floor… Completely shattered into pieces…
Dp: What happened Annapurna…?? (he looks in the direction she is looking n gets shocked too) …(composing himself) Dr. Mehra… I’ll call u back as n when needed… Thank u so much…!!
He hangs up the phone n sees again in the same direction… A beautiful girl wearing a red saree descends down the flight of stairs… an epitome of elegance and beauty… her wrists are adorned with bangles of red n white color whose sound seems like tearing the silence of the palace… Her hairline filled with sindoor (vermillion)…But her face looks pale… and her body too weak and fragile… Ap and Dp get teary eyed seeing her condition… The girl comes to Ap…
Girl: Maa… Plzz help me naa… see my Mangalsutra is stuck in my hair and I’m unable to untangle it…!! If I’ll apply much force, then I’m fearful that it might break…
Ap: Swara beta… Why are you again wearing this…??
Swara: What Maa…??
Ap: (holds her Mangalsutra) This… you don’t need this anymore beta…!!
Swara: (gives a weak smile) But Maa… I’m a married woman… and in our religion a married lady is bound to wear the Mangalsutra and sindoor… Hai naa papa… (looks at Dp)…
Dp gets up from his chair… gives a painful sigh and leaves to his room without saying anything…
Swara: (confused) Maa… what happened to papa…??
Ap: Nothing beta… you go to your room… I’m sending your breakfast…
Swara nods her head with a smile and leaves to her room… Whereas Ap goes to her room after Dp…
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SCENE 2…
Ap: Why are u behaving like this…?? Aap jante hain naa uski halat thik nahin hai…!!
Dp: Then what else I can do Annapurna… I can’t take this anymore…!!
Ap: But we have to do it… For Swara… She is not our DAUGHTER-IN-LAW… she is our daughter…
Dp: But the way she is behaving… (shouts) It’s becoming unbearable for me…
Ap: But we can’t force her to remember everything… That incident has giving her a huge shock… She remembers nothing about what happened that day…
Dp: But one day or the other she will remember it and will realize what the reality of her life is… (gets angry n frustrated on his helplessness) The sooner she realizes the better it will be… The way she was getting scared for her Mangalsutra… It’s going to be even more difficult for her in the future…
Ap: But…
Dp: (angry) But what got damn it…!! Am I happy to see her like this…!! I’m just saying that she should realize it soon that she is not a married woman anymore… Her husband is DEAD…Our son is dead… SANKY IS DEAD… and he died right in front of her eyes…!!
No sooner he said this they hear the sound of a flower vase breaking… Immediately their gaze shifts towards the door of the room… and there she is… Swara… all trembling and shaking… fear clearly visible on her face… sweat dripping off her face… Her body becoming stiff with each passing moment… and within seconds she falls on the ground… UNCONSCIOUS…!!
Episode ends…!!
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So guys… I’m all set with my shield and protective measures… So, u all can throw as many eggs n tomatoes as u wish… Most welcome… But do leave ur feedbacks n comments down below… Awaiting ur response…!! 🙂 🙂
18 Comments
interesting……..
What sanky is dead??!!! It’s soo interesting..!! Superb..!!
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This is gonna be fun!
Interesting concept plzz continue I luvd ur previous both ffs especially mileya mileya
Awesome
But plz make sanskar alive
nice
Omg!!wht sanskar is dead ??..plz make sanskar alive!!!!!!
It interesting continue soon
Ooh.. So u are back with a banggg.. Yeah do continue i loved ur concept.. But what was that.. Sanky dead and all.. Nooo.. U cant do that.. First episode itself such a tragic one.. But still i believe u.. U are a die hard swasan fan like us nd u will be giving a wonderful love story of swasan for sure… Now waiting for ur next update dear…
Oh God….wat Sanky dead?
Nooooo….plz continue fast & post the last episode of TMRDH….I’m waiting for Sanky’s reaction there!!!
its awesome.. please dont show he is died…
It’s awesome dear… Loved it… Plz continue plz….
Hey….stella…. Its beautiful… Plz continue…
Awesome yaar I think his soul will come to swara that y the prologue says she can’t never be his update soon can’t wait
interesting….is sanky really dead?
Really very nice. ..totally loved it n I have read both ur previous fictions….loved them too
very interesting
Really interesting.. 🙂