Back with the third and the last shot. Sorry for the late actually I returned late and became late latif. Sorry people. Please do read and share all your views. Link for the previous parts:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/destiny-shot-1/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/destiny-shot-2/
SHOT-3
Twenty four hours passed. She was lying still. Everyone is waiting outside with some hope in their heart. Pinky is in front of an idol in that hospital and praying. Shivay is the one sitting inside the cabin facing his Anika dying in front of him. The monitor is showing a straight line now on it with a beep sound. He had no courage to call any doctor. He went up to her and sat beside her. A doctor entered and is shocked to see the straight line. He could not say that she died neither he can go out and say everything is fine. There he was sitting holding his Anika’s hand neither crying nor praying any more. Doctors did a last try. Her body is becoming cold gradually. Soon the doctors arranged a syringe with some liquid in it. they injected it.
The lines again appeared on the monitor. The doctor rejoiced seeing it but still under tention as she is not getting up. Her deep slumber is not allowing her to get up and see her Shivay crying for her again. An hour more passed. The tear stains are visible on her face though it was of her Shivay’s. The doctors are moving here and there in the cabin. The lines emerged good and as the doctors about to say she slipped into coma her hands trembled. She held Shivay’s little finger tightly as she is visualizing any nightmare in her slumber. Her eyes opened and tears oozed out.
The main doctor out of nothing hugged the doctor near by. “Miracle” the doctors cried. “She woke up; Shivay your love brought her back.”
Shivay looked towards her and she towards him. “she is out of danger now, calm down Shivay she will be fine soon and yeah please stop crying now” a doctor exclaimed as they went out of the room. They soon informed all the family members and asked them not to enter as the couple should be left alone for sometime.
She was trying to speak. “Anik…Anikkaa..” he called out just to be sure its not his dream. He tightened her hold on his little finger. She was applying all her strength to hold him as if someone will snatch him away if she loosenes the hold. His one hand was giving support to her hold and the other involuntarily reached her head. He was brushing his hands through her well made hair which by then turned to be a mess. “You..are..fine?” she hardly spoke after loads of try. He couldn’t control more and soon kissed her on her forehead. “Yes I am what will happen to me when you are my savior?” he questioned her back. “You are not happy na that I am marrying….” Her words died in her throat as she looked a pained sight of Shivay. He was guilty, he was guilty of everything he forced on her.
They were saying little as their silence is saying much. “See I can’t see you like this” he said with a trembling voice. “What do you mean?” she asked innocently. “I want my old tadibaaz khidkitod Anika back soon and not this rotru one” he explained a bit. “Okk bagad billa you will get her back soon” she chuckled. The hours passed.
The doctor discharged her after long one week. It was really long for her. Only Shivay was allowed to stay with her and family members were allowed to visit her twice a day. To everyone’s surprise Pinky has really changed. Be it her guilt or her karma.
Shivika went to their room at night. Anika was not expecting that what she saw. She entered the room with a broad smile on her face. As soon they entered Shivay closed the door so that she does not run again like the last time. He came close and made Anika sit on the bed. He sat down near her legs folding his legs.
“Anika….. I don’t know how to propose a girl or how to express the feeling that is buried deep down in your heart from long. Heart, the same heart that I owe you from the day I met you. There were connection; there were eternal connection between us. Though I never expressed but you knew everytime what my heart felt for you. I never said those words you expected me to say so but I never denied them too when your eyes appealed for it. you are the bestest thing that happened to me after my birth. Anika you are beautiful… khidkitorly beautiful, since you came in my life, colors got filled in my life, when you come in front of me, my heartbeat gets fast. If I don’t see you, my breath stops, if I don’t talk to you, my day does not gets complete, you have spread your special raita in my heart, you taught me to love, you taught me that love and relationships does not include deal but it includes DIL, they are not deal, you made me ISHQBAAZ Anika……. You made me ISHQBAAZ. I love you Anika I love you.” He completed and looked towards her for a reply. She was numb so he jearked her a bit. “Awwwww” it was all what she could say. “What I said such a long speech for you and you just aww” Shivay asked her. “You know how much cute you look when you frown at me like this” She said pulling his cheeks. “ I don’t want to look cute just say my answer” he asked sternly “well in that case I need to think over your proposal” she replied showing her special tadi to him. “Anika please don’t test my patience now or else I will di…” he couldn’t complete as his lips got sealed with her. She soon left him. He was shocked that he got his reply in that way.
“What was that?” he asked being restless to stop his hands to touch her. “My reply” was her sweet reply. “I want to hear it with my ears” he said “but you felt it with your lips” she defended. “Please” he now requested and her tadi changed to emotion “I love You Shivay, I love you…I will” it was his time to show his love and again without letting her complete the sentence he grabbed her lips into his. The kiss was a normal one but they did not understand when it converted to a passionate one. They broke apart. “ You don’t know Anika how I spent my nights without you sleeping beside me” he said and his eyes again reflected the pain. “I cried for you craved you but you were not there, my nights always turned to nightmares. I desired you but couldn’t show it to anyone and when you came back the stupid drama of yours” she smiled as he completed. “ I wished to kill that Vikram” “Okk now leave it just tell me what is this decoration for?” she asked cutting him in between”. “I decorated the room for you, for your comeback” he said but the next moments his cheapdapan ruled him. “My dear wifey why not turn this to our first night?” he said with a smirk and sparkle in his eyes.
She remained silent but her red cheeks and her blush told everything to him. He soon got up and made her wear the mangalsutra and filled her hairline with pinch of sindoor. She was ready for him and him for her. They just went with the emotional flow and thus celebrated the night as their first night. They were together and at last destiny made them together again.
Here drawing an ending line over here to these SHOTS. I hope you all loved it. Please do drop all your comments. And now will be taking a huge break from writing so seriously will miss all of you very much. Thank You so much for accepting the stories if this useless writer. Oh god sorry for calling me a writer. BYE PEOPLE DO MISS ME TILL I COMEBACK. BYE -NILASH
12 Comments
beautiful shot really loved it. your wish fulfilled in this ff. you know what I meant.???. awww???? shivaay proposing & annika showing tadi then their romance superb. keep writing Nilu please you are a good writer. miss ur writting. love you ???
Awesome ???loved it to the core
Lovely Update ❤
Shivaay ‘s proposal & Anika’s khidkitod reply was amazing ?
Perfect Ending ?
Keep Writing!!!
What an ending Nilu di!!! Please come back with another ff soon…Will miss u loads
Loved reading it. ??
Beautiful shot
Its not so boaring and U r not useless writer ….me useless likhta hoon.
After all u r from PKJ so u ppls are awesome.
Last shot and my hope broke …..Aflatoon chappy.
No more word.
Najik na bhavishya ma kai lakho toh mane inform karjo.
AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC GREAT MIND BLOWING ROMANTIC SUPERB?????????
Dear Nilash
Last Shot And ShivIka Love Confession Is Amazing And Beautiful??Full Story Is Awwwesome,I Really Love It??????
Take Care And Stay Safe?
It is nice one my rocking girl… Come soon
Amazing update…
Awesome ending. Looking forward to next story from you…
Beautiful