By the time Vicky has joined the company as sales manager. Radharani is very happy that her son got all what she has planned. Ishwari was happy that under the shade of her son’s huge shoulders, rest of the people are flourishing well. Neha is still home and by now nobody is so much bothered to send her back. She is happy to be back to luxuries and everyone else is happy to find her happy.
Here, Dev is waiting for nine days to get over. Tomorrow is the last day, Sona is in her home for Durga Puja.
Dev returns from office and is heading towards his room as usual to get glimpse of his loving wife
Ishwari: dev, aa gya tu….
Those fast steps stop at one stair as he hears his mother calling from behind
Dev: haan maa….
Ishwari : sabne khana kha lia hai…tu aaja…hum fir saath khayenge…hmm
Dev: maa sona?….usne bhi kha lia…?
Ishwari’s smile fades as she hears it….Her son is so much into work and her orders that he forget his wife have gone to her parent’s house….
Ishwari : sonakshi apne ghar gyi hai….bhul gya beta!
Dev: acha haan!!
He starts moving back towards his room
Ishwari turns to the dining table to set everything for the awaited dinner with her son.
Sonakshi’s House
Bijoy: oho… Asha….what smell!!!
Sourabh: sach mein maa…tumhare haath mein jadoo hai…
Sonakshi is lost in her phone and after everyone’s judgement…family look towards sona for her saying….but she is engrossed in her phone…sona looks so tensed that they all get serious….
Elena: shona! Ki haulo…??
Sona: dekhna elena…yeh mr. Dixit phone nhi utha rhe hain…
They all pat their heads with their hand in sync…
Sonakshi: what…
Sourabh: shona!! Kamse kam kuch der ke liye hi bechare ko chodd de….
Elena: aur nhi toh kya….pichha chuda rhe hain tujhse….tere mere Mr. Dixit
Sonakshi: how dare he….
sonakshi leaves the dinner table and starts calling him again and again…
Ishwari and Dev are having dinner…Ishwari is very happy that even after getting married her son is just the same…after a long time she was having quality time with her son….
Ishwari: teri pasand ki bhindi ki sabji bnayi hai….lena beta…
Dev: kitna khilayegi maa….ek din mein mota ho jaunga….fir woh teri nutritionist bahu…saal bhar ki dieting ek baar mein krayegi….
Ishwari: koi zarurat nahi hai….ek dum thik hai tu…
Dev: arrey maa….mein toh majak kar rha tha….
Nikki:Bhai….
Dev: kya hua nikki…
Nikki: apka phone kahan hai…
Dev: phone?.. …room mein hoga shayad….kyun…
Nikki: aap phone nhi utha rhe the….toh bhabhi itna worried ho gyi ki unhone mujhe phone kia…
Dev face get lighten up as he hears that his beloved was worried for him…this is the first after marriage that they are away from each other….and such small things were feeling so loving that can’t be expressed….
As he Got to know that sona tried calling him several times he went running towards his room to get his phone and hear that mishti voice
Ishwari: dev!!!! Beta khana……..
Dev while running over the stairs…
Dev: mera ho gya maa….
Ishwari took those action as the bitter sip…she tightens her clinch…but can’t make any changes….she lost her son….who is running to catch the missed calls of his wife…
Sonakshi is trying to sleep in her room…which is feeling strange for her now…
Elena: sona…kya kar rhi hai…stop rolling over the bed….soja!!!…aur sone de…
Sonakshi: mein kya karun yeh mattress bahut hard hai…
Elena: yeh mattress hard nhi hai madam….aapko soft soft arms mein sone ki adat ho gyi hai…
Sonakshi shies away all those “aise-waise” khayal
Sonakshi: shutt up!
Sonakshi’s phone rings…
She jumps to pick it up and then stops to control her excitement….they still behave like teenagers….there is one who left his dinner and angry mother to have some love talks…and there is one who have turned into tomato to see her hubby calling…
And then she finally picks it..
Dev: hello….
Sonakshi: hmmm…
Dev: hmm…..so gyi thi kya?
Sonakshi: hmm……
Dev:Ohk… toh shayad kissi aur bhabhi ne Nikki ko call karke mere bare mein phucha hoga….
And there she lost her calm….
Sonakshi: what!!!!! Kaun bhabhi….
Dev giggles a little …
Dev: Ms. Khargosh jab apko acting aati nhi hai toh karti kyun hai….
Sonakshi: acha thik hai….. mein nhi so rhi thi…
Dev: kyun….mere bina neend nhi aa rhi…. mein aa jaun….
Sonakshi: acha mein kahungi toh aap aa jayenge…
Dev: bilkul…..
And their chit chat goes on till morning….
Ishwari have called sona back to home in the morning to attend the Navami puja…She guided her in all the instruction and our poor sona tried to cope up with all those rituals….
When the pooja was over….she thought to go and surprise….her hubby who was still in bed….
She by escaping all the haunting eyes made her way to their room….and there her prince was sleeping….hugging the pillow tightly….
She went near to him….moved her fingers into his hairs….and then smiled looking at the innocent face…..
She thought of taking out his clothes…so that when he gets up….everything will be ready around him…..
As she tries to get up…the man pulls her back into the bed….and holds her tightly by her waist….
Sonakshi: aap jaag rhe the….
Dev: mein toh soya hi nhi tha….
Sonakshi: fir…..acting..
Dev nods no cutely….
Dev: tumhare sapne dekh rha tha…..
Sonakshi: nautanki….
She pushes him….to get out of his grip…but fails miserably…and then she gave in….their eyelock continues….
Ishwari: ahem!!
Sonakshi and Dev both get up from the bed….
Sonakshi: maa!….mein bus niche aa hi rhi thi….
Dev: mein fresh hoke aata hun…
Ishwari enters the room…with those cold steps that had motive of fire in them…..
Ishwari: tumhe apne ghar bhi jana hoga na….
Sonakshi: haan maa woh….sindoor khela….ke liye….
Ishwari: mein driver ko kah deti hun….
Sonakshi: maa….dev office jayenge…mein unke saath chali jaungi….
Ishwari: nahi sonakshi….aaj ke din….dev mujhe mandir leke jata hai….tum driver ke saath chali jao….
Sonakshi nods in yes…sensing Ishwari’s anger….
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Tina: sir, we have called the property dealer for meeting in the evening…
Dev: tina, this land is very important for me make sure that we get this land at any cost….
Tina: yes sir!! Only we will get this land…
Dev: i am going right now but i will be back till evening…
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Mrs. Banerjee: Asha!!…shona after marriage…ki bhalo lagchi….
Elena: only after marriage….
Mrs. Mukherjee: ahaan! This is love….elena you will understand after marriage…..
Sonakshi smiles reminscing the love dev have added in her life….
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Tina: Sir will be here in few mins….
Property dealer: you are telling us this from last 1 hr….where is Mr. Dixit…???
Tina: sir must be busy in something…. otherwise he never comes late…
Property Dealer: we will wait for 10 mins more….if Mr. Dixit comes then it is good….but if not we have other buyers…
Tina calls Dev….
Dev was coming back from temple with Ishwari and was trapped in traffic…he was stressed that because of that he might miss this land deal…and seeing her son disturbed Ishwari also gets disturbed and suggests dev to let vicky handle this deal in his absence…dev was reluctant for this….as he very well know by now that vicky will not make up thing but might ruin the already built things…..but he had no other option….so he commanded tina to let vicky do the meeting and get that land….
Vicky enters the cabin…
Vicky in full swag settles down in dev’s chair seeing it as a golden chance to take over dev’s position….tina was avoiding all this as she was more interested in making the deal happen…
Vicky asks tina to leave the cabin as he knew well she will be a threat to his noble job…..
Vicky: yes, mr…..jo bhi apka naam ho…kaunsa land hai yeh….
Property Dealer: dwarka ke pass ke muncipality land…
Vicky: muncipality land…..kitne ka hai
Property dealer: 2.5 crore….
Vicky: 2.5 crore ki jhopad patti….hume nhi chahiye….not interested!!!!
Proprrty dealer: soch lijiye…
Vicky: soch liya…..
Property dealer comes out in anger…
Property dealer: jab land khareed na hi nhi tha toh itni der wait kyun kraya….
Tina: sir….please….i don’t know what happened….but sir please wait….dev sir is in traffic….he is coming…
Property dealer: tell your dev sir to get better staff….
Property dealer leaves the office…tina tries hard to convince them and stop but….nothing happened…..
Hello !!! Missing you guys sooo badly…..
Now tell me how this was…..and what you think can be in second part…..
58 Comments
a superb comeback……..?????❤????????❤…….and in second part…….there will be a lot of awesomeness as usual?❤?????????❤?……
one request……devakshi-break ke baad ki last episode……iss say pehle tum phir chu mantar ho ??????…….Thanks in advance???????
Bkb…..oh yah it is still left to reach the final destination….i will post it on diwali
baaap re on diwali……tum hume maar hi daalogi…
Sahi pakde hain
Anshika diiii!!!! We missed you a lot toooo…. yipee you are back… i know it will be an os but no probs …. was just missing bkb and ku yesterday???…..and see….. !! Today you wrote something… lovely…. cmmon do i need to tell anything….??? i loved it to the power of infinity….✌ awesome…. . Im sure im gonna enjoy a lot…??♪
I am everywhere…see you wished….nd i came bACK wid this….
Btw Thanks ??
Nice. Eagerly waiting for the next one. Plz post it earlier.
Thank you
Rlllllllly very nice!!!!!
Ty ?
I missed you too??????❤????
And you have come back with amazing stuff!! Very very excited to read the further parts! Thsi one was amazing as usual! Post soon!
Love you❤❤
Thank you sooo much….
During these days when I was away….i missed your ff….i read it today…doing amazing yaar…. I wish everyone read it & you get tonnnes of comments
Thank you so much???
Awesome!!! Plz continue soon!! I hate Vicky!! I just feel like killing him!! Plz make Dev regret his decision and tell Vicky to Just Get out!!!! ????and of course devakshi moments without any of the witches ( Ishwari and Radharani)
Lots of love???BYE
Thank you soo much ???
Wow it seems like it’s actually the story line of the show.. So nice and just don’t want it to end.. Wanna keep reading on like a book.. U should rather be a author than doctor anshika.. Awesome post next soon
Hey!!! You haven’t seen me as doctor….i will b a good doctor too yaar….as far it is about book….i hope i will write one….one day…
Yaa sure.. I am sure you are a better doctor too.. When are you coming with break ke baad plz post soon
Diwali
It’s d perfect story for every character..well, how many parts will it hv??
2 parts…. hopefully
And and and when are you coming back with break ke baad.. I am eagerly waiting for it post soon
On diwali….
So long.. Sad ????hope Diwali comes soon..
Truely commendable part nd i’m happy to see u back again swtheart.. So hows ur collage life going on?????
Thank you for d warm comeback
College….2nd day hi mujhe high fever ho gya 104…..and then dusshera festival…so i am home…right now i am quite nervous to go college…. ??
OMG… 104° ?… Take care dear….
Hey u r my strong anshika. Don’t be nervous i trust my swtheart she is strong enough to handle any situation. So don’t be nervous believe urself nd if u can’t then believe in me. U will rock in ur collage life nd soon become every one favourite.
With loads of love Erina
Take care di??
o terii 104,,, how r u now?????
Now i am Ohk with temp….but knee joints still pain….weakness….etc. etc….but i am more afraid for clg thing…..thank you for the best wishes…i hope i wony disappoint you guys
Get well soon Anshu…. Be careful… Dont eat street foods…. Agar doctor hi bimar padgayi to baki logon ka kya hoga!! 😛 … Dont be nervous… U can never disapoint us… :*
Bhot bada lecture ho gaya na?? Chalo byee padhai karni hai warna teacher ka lecture suna padega 😛 😛 😛 😀 …
aww… ur back..
soo happy
hows ur life going on r u enjoying and wht about studies are they tough..and how r u ?????
its just perfect fab … but vicky lets see whats gonna happen
will be waiting for next one
plz post as soon as possible
loads of luv
Studies….they are nt yet startrd in dat manner….warmup is gng on…
Nxt part might take a week ?
Mindblowing Anshu… ???? Superb… Ishwari ka kuch nahi ho sakta vo na show me sudhri na kahi aur ??…. Second part kya hoga vo to nahi pata par kuch aacha hi hoga… luv u ??
Thank you sooo much…☺☺
Awesome episode dear
Ty
It was awesome. Loved it ???
Thanks
After so many days i read ur ff ……i can’t believe………. U r so amazing dear……i m ur die heart fan…..love u from bottom to my heart………..missing u badly dear…….tumhare siwa or kisi ka ff acha he nhi legta…….aadat si ho gyi hai tumhari …i m waiting that day when u become india’s most valuable doctor
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Thank you soooooo much…I am highly obliged….?????
Finally! You Made A Come Back !Update Soon! Loved It!
Thanks….i will
It was awwwwwesome episode Anshika. Loved it so much.
Thank you ☺
Waaaaaow di!
Loved it to the core???? Had been missing you a hell lot!??????
Please do try to find out time and post the next update at the soonest???☺️☺️
I bet you’ll do amazing as a doctor but I also know that you’ll do great as a part-time author as well??? Do give it a try and we’ll all be there to support you???????
Loads and loads of love!???????
Thank you soooo much…i will definately give it a try….
My Anshi is back?
Superbbb start❤️???????????
How’s ur clg life??enjoying??
Where is BKB??
Post soon?
Love love?
Seniors are giving swagg…anshika is pissed off and nervous like hell…if you want to call it enjoyment….you surely can….
Bkb on diwali yaar!!
Btw thanks for appreciating ??
OMG……….eeeeeeeee……
Anshikaaaaaa……….yaar kaha thi tum ankhiya taras gyi tumhe dekhne k liye…upss thoda filmy ho gya na.. but seriouslly missed a lottttttt….soo sooo happy to see u….
N u r giving us this time a OS just like a stressbuster after a disgusting wala episide…. but in ur os same mental lady yaar…but but ignore maar priya…dekh naa kitne cute moments layi h anshu tere liye … muahhh for tht… 🙂
— 1st line jo mere sadu se face pe smile le aayi — soft soft arms mein sone ki adat ho gyi hai…Awwww choo sweet…
Ossam Amazing yaar you rocked it allways….
I dont know in 2nd part what u will be write but i want ki Dev through out vicky from his office…n also blast out in face of ishwari…..
dev to vicky — teri himmat kaise hui aisa karne ki, tu aisa kaise kar sakta hai… dekh liye maa teri wajh se maine vicky ko office me sales manager ki post di thi,, dekh liya ek aasan sa kaam nhi kar paya… O terii maine to yahi pe dilogues likhne suru kar diye…
Hehe priya??… Mast dilogue hai yaar….. Superb… Kaash aisa show main bhi ho jaye ?….
Mera khudd OS padhne ka mann kr rha tha toh socha likh dalte hain….aur mein kahin nhi gyi yahin hun….tumhare aas pass hi hun….yeh bhi filmy ho gya…??
Aur dialogue bahut badhiya hai….dialogue writer ke liye apply karde….☺☺☺
Apply kiya to dhakee maar kr nikal denge mujhe??
Great one updates soon!!
Ty ?
Read the OS(part one) with great interest.. And my excitement multiplied 10 times after scrolling down to the author’s name.. Was really missing you.. And you made a grand entry yet again.. Just love your writing.. And now shifting the emphasis from you to your ff.. You have grade at writing skills.. This one has really made a 2bhk in my heart…
Thank you soooo much dear!! ???