Hi friends this is darshu and for the first time am posting here an OS on devakshi…yes it’s not a planned one…but as a gift for our hero Shah came up with this idea…
\*HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHAHEER SHEIKH *\
Hope you all would like it and please let me know about your views through your comments…
Today is Shah’s birthday hey na..so there will be negativity in this OS like GKB and ishwari ji and all…here the character ishwari will accept sona without getting insecurities…
Ok ok I will stop my blabbering…let’s move on..please support me guys and I need it…
Character sketch is not necessary I think because am using only our KRPKAB characters…
Ok I will give it for devakshi alone…ok done…
Devrath Dixit-the young and leading business tycoon of Delhi who lifts his family on his own because he lost his father in his early age and he takes care of his three sisters (ria,Nikki nd Neha) and he gave them all they wanted before they would ask him…this makes them too affectionate towards him…
Sonakshi Bose -who is beautiful young girl and she is currently in her final year MBA…
Dev who believes strongly that girls also should have equal recognition in the society with almost every field…to ensure this he himself tooks the initiative that his company’s recruit will be splitted equally for both the genders…
The reason behind this was Mrs.IshwariDixit..yes dev’s mom…dev sees everything like how his mom suffered in upbringing her son and daughter’s…he doesn’t want any girl to suffer like his mom…
So he also started an NGO in the name of his mother to provide work opportunities to people who doesn’t have any financial support may be due to divorce or widower-etc…
On the other side sonakshi is an fun loving girl who is passionate towards her studies and she wanted to achieve something different and also to become an successful entrepreneur which makes her way towards dev…
Present day
Dev is getting ready in a blue colour coat suit and he looks dapper in it…
He goes down and got blessings from Ishwari ji as usual and was about to leave…
“dev…have it..”ishwari feeds him his favourite halwa…
“maa…it’s getting late…am I kid…it’s enough…ok bye mom…”dev blown a sweet kiss on her cheeks and run in hurry…
“I gonna meet you today Ms.bunny…”said dev chuckling and leaves in his car…
“areyy Shona…get up…”Asha ji comes and pat her cheeks…
“maa…5 minutes na…”sona rolls over in her bed and again continued her sleeping by hugging her pillows…
“kya 5 minutes…it’s been one hour I kept waking you up…you are saying the same 5 minutes again…it’s 8:30 Shona…you’re having guest lecture today na…i won’t mind if you keep sleeping like this then your princi will start cursing you since you are the students representative…”Asha laughs…
“oh no princi’s bhajans…i don’t want to hear in the morning itself…”sona got up suddenly with a jerk and rushed towards washroom…
Sona got ready in her favourite pink colour top and white colour bottom…she looks so beautiful…
\*sonakshi will be seen in old avatar…i mean when she worked in dixit mansion na that getup…*\
Sona reached her college in her scooty and rushed towards the conference hall…
There her friends were already waiting for her…
Elena:sona..you are late..princi came and asked about you but somehow we managed…go go they are waiting for you…
Sona(shockingly):oh no…am done
Then she rushed inside the conference hall and asked for an excuse…princi glares her and they heard a sound”wo aagaye…Mr.DevDixit aagaye…”
Princi and other staff rushed outside…
“it was just a guest lecture na…they are rushing like it was their daughter’s marriage and went for welcoming their damad from baarath…whatever..i need to go orelse she will eat me alive(pointing towards princi)”sona shrugged…
They all stands and watched out for dev…sona gets irritated…
Sona:mam…it’s getting late…he will come by himself let me go inside…see my legs are paining na…(with a pout)
Geetha Mam(glaring):chup sona…you don’t know who is coming for today’s guest lecture..
“you don’t know who is coming..”sona imitates her…
Sona hears that Geetha mam is the one who arranged Mr.Dixit’s gl to our institution…
She then moves a little towards her friends and started teasing…
“guys…do you heard it..guest lecture was arranged by Geetha mam…oh no we can’t digest her yet..another walking radio is coming on the way…shit…”sona makes a pout…
Elena:haan sona…see yesterday she wasted the whole day with her stories like her hostel issues and you know what it’s good that you went on duty yesterday orelse I can’t imagine Geetha mam’s condition…
Sona(curious):what she did ele!!
Ele(immitating)@@
Geetha mam arrived…
She started her teachings…na not like what you think…
As usual her purans..about the hostel..discipline committee..her squad…bla bla…
And finally she received a call sona…we took a deep breath and thanked the one who called her…
But jerked at a fraction of second hearing her reply on phone”am interestingly taking OB class”
\*Organizational behaviour is shortly known as OB*\
“is she taking class…”we all blinked at each other…and shrugged…
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“Who knows only god and she alone knows”sona laughs in between…
Laughter sounds high..
“can’t you girls keep quiet for few minutes…sona come and stand with us..”princi warns them…
Sona then goes towards them and she jumps a little and leans forward to see whether Mr.Dixit have arrived or not…
“ma’am…i think he doesn’t know the meaning of punctuality I think…”sona gets irritated and turned away…
“being punctual alone will not help you Ms.Bose…”dev sounds cool and he reached the spot finally…
Ele opens her eyes wide and says to herself”how did he knows her name…”
“welcome Mr.Dixit…this is for you…”said princi pointing towards sonakshi…
“that’s so sweet…i like your swagath Mrs.Verma…”dev teases sona…
His giggling brings her out from trance…princi sighs to handover the flowers…
Sona nods and says”welcome sir…”
“thanks for the beautiful roses…”dev accepted their welcome…
“hello Mr.Dixit..it’s glad to have you here…”Geetha mam goes to him and forwards her hand..
“aah…tape recorder aagaye…how did these girls are tolerating her I don’t know…”dev murmurs and plasters a fake smile…
Sona heard it and she chuckles…
“Chalo let’s go inside…students are waiting for you…”princi shows the way and ask sona to accompany him…
“so you heard it right Ms.Bose…”dev whispers in her ears and she gave ‘What’ expression…
They reached the conference hall…before he gets in every arrangements were checked twice inorder to ensure perfection…
Devakshi entered the hall together and everyone gets up…
“there is no need for this…be seated…”said dev and he proceeds towards the dias…while Sona goes with her friends and sat on the front row…
Ele:he is handsome and dashing hey na…
Another girl:haan…see his eyes aww he is killing me…
Ele:see his smile..wow..
Sona(irritated):you both didn’t shut up then I will kill you both…
Ele:don’t get possessive sona…if you want to say something tell us….do you love him…
Sona(glaring):just shut up ele…am saying just because if your flirting words reached his ears means then what he will think about me…
Another girl:if it reached him means he won’t think about you instead he will think about us..hehe!!…
Sona gives a death glare…both sealed their mouth…
‘Welcome speech’….
Bla bla bla as usual…
\*I skipped this because I don’t want you guys to get bored *\
Finally they stopped their blabber and passed the mike to dev and the thing is that all the faculties and princi left the conference room…
Dev started…
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good morning friends…today we gonna have some theoretical and as well as some proposal section’s…
Proposal is not like you guys imagine it’s purely project proposal…
First let me Introduce myself…
Hii…am DevDixit proprietor of Ishwari Industries…you all may get confused what am doing here…
Am here as a part of my NGO which encourages women empowerment programme called ‘Bridge the gap’…
By which I will help those who possess strength and self-confidence in them determined to achieve something in life…
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“achieve!!…are we scientists…”a sound came…
Sona turns back and glares towards the direction where the sound came…pin drop silence persists…
“I don’t need an scientists I need an innovator who believes in themselves that they can do it…i think you may get now…”dev said smilingly…
Dev:each and everyone who are present here must forward an idea…i am expecting from all of you…i think you will fullfill my expectations at the end of this section…
Sona stare him without blinking her eyes…
“ok now coming to the point first section will be on theory and afternoon we will discuss about the best project proposal I came across…”dev holds a file in his hand…
Dev(enthusiastically):The topic we gonna discuss is on ‘Technology Forecasting and commercialization…and on ERP implementation’…
“commercialization…amazon…ratings scale…purchase…”sona and her friends screams at a same time seeing each other…
@@their Geetha mam’s class comes in front of them…
“today we are going to see about what is meant by commercialization??…”Geetha mam starts her blabber…
\*note:the character Geetha is 100% fictitious if it hurts anyone…i am apologizing you 10000 times….10000 times sorry…*\
Students starts yawning…
“commercialization is nothing but…for example take any online market leader…(your wish)…the products are considered to be good through ratings…if there is below rating we shouldn’t buy those goods…”Geetha mam completed her explanation …
Ele:sona what she is saying…online marketing…ratings…is she trying to explain commercialization or how to buy stuffs or what…i am feeling sleepy…
They laughs…
Geetha mam(anger):Elena and gang get lost from here right now…
Sona(cool):that’s what we want…
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Sona and her friends laughed at the same time…
Dev sighs sona…she nods in nothing…
He starts his concepts on erp and forecasting…
Sona interestingly involved into the topic and raises questions inorder to get cleared…
“there are many failures in implementing erp na dev…”sona eagerly raised the question and she didn’t recognize that she mentioned him as dev…
“actually Ms.bose every project has 50-50 phase…inorder to get succeed you need proper background research that’s it…you got it…”dev smiles seeing her…
Finally the theory section ends somehow enthusiastically…everyone gets attracted towards dev and his way of conveying the ides…but eyes are with sona alone…
Lunch break..princi and other faculties comes and takes dev with them for lunch…
Dev(excuses and sounds cool):Ms.Bose will you join with me for lunch…
Sona turns and blinks…
Princi:why not sona..come and join us..
Sona(stammers):ma’am…why me???
Dev:that’s ok..you carry on..
Sona:no…dev…i mean Mr.Dixit…
Dev:what!!
Sona:am coming…
Dev grinned…
They reached the dining hall…devakshi sits together…dev holds her right hand under the table and play with it…
Sona(nervously):dev leave my hand…if anyone sees then…
Dev(chuckles):let them see na sona…that’s what I want…look am holding my fiance’s hand and moreover you are my maamiji’s daughter…what’s the big deal…
\*oops I forgot to mention that devakshi are relatives…*\
Sona:but noone here knows about you and me…please dev!!
Dev:then I need a gift from you…
Sona:what!!
Dev:kisses…
Then he points towards his cheeks…
Sona:no way…
Dev:then no way of leaving your hand too…dev smiles…
Sona don’t know what to do…so she moves forward and says”I need that sabzi”and was about to take and dev also moves forward…unknowingly sona kissed dev’s cheeks and turns her gaze here and there inorder to verify whether anyone watched it…
Sona takes a deep breath of sigh…dev leaves her hand finally…
Sona:Mr.Obhodro…
Dev:thank you Ms.Bunny…
They finished their lunch and gets back to afternoon section and discussed about their project proposals…
Dev gives them the clear idea about where to make changes and all…
finally he have chosen the best 2 project proposals and it was sona’s and her friend ele’s…
And he says that his r&d team will help them in implementing those projects and he bids bye…
All the girls rushed around him and asks for his number and all…he left from there somehow…
Sona smiles and waves her hand without letting anyone seeing herself…
Dev opens his car window and waves his hand…
Sona reached her house and sees Asha preparing so many sweets eagerly… Sona(excited):maa…you’re Cho sweet…you have prepared all my favourite sweets for me…wow!!!great maa…you are the best… Sona hugged Asha…
Asha:areyy…leave me…i have so many works..and by the way these sweets are not for you…these sweets are for my damaad…my pyaari dev…
Sona gets irritated…and immitates”pyaari damaad…seeing him she forgot me..”
She moves backward and fall..two arms wrapped her…yaah it’s our dev…devakshi lost in each other’s eyes…
? Pehle dafa hai ki mujhme tu jhalka re…mere rang Mein kuch dang hai tere jaise bhi… Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi… Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi ??
Ishwari comes from behind and coughs… “buaji…”sona gets her blessings and immediately she runs inside…
she blushes seeing dev hiding behind the door…
dev watches her antics…and he chuckles… Ishwari…asha and Bijoy fixes devakshi’s marriage within a week…
Devakshi gets excited and sona jumps in her room dancing with her pillows…
? Tu mujhme mujhse zyaada hai? plays at the background…
“so Ms.Bose you gonna turn into Mrs.Dixit within a week…”dev texts her…
Sona’s mobile beeps…and replied”haan…no doubt Mr.Obhodro…”
Dev excused and went outside…ishwari also leaves…
Dev enters sona’s room through the window in her room and hugged her from behind… Ishwari went outside and searches dev but couldn’t find him…so she comes inside bose house…
“am so happy sona…finally my dream comes true…”dev jumps in excitement… “shshh…don’t shout…”sona closed his mouth with her palm…
They shared an intense eyelock…
Asha and Ishwari hears dev’s sound inside..so they reached sonakshi’s room and sees them together…
Devakshi comes out from trance when they hears the giggling sound…
Ishwari twisted dev’s ears and says”naughty..you are restricted to meet till marriage…please my boy obey my words orelse abhashagun will happen…” “aah…maa…it’s paining..”dev winces…
“where mere damaad ji…at ears or at your heart…”Asha teases him…
Sona blushes…
Ishwari:ok ok…let’s go…we have lots of works to do…
Dev bids bye to everyone and leaves but still his heart keeps thumping to see sona…
All the rituals were performed traditionally like aashirvaad ceremony…sangeeth…mehndi…haldi…and followed by their marriage…
Sona’s friends were in death angry with her…because of hiding dev from them…so in her marriage all her friends takes dev’s side…
While dev’s three beautiful sister’s takes sonakshi’s side and do her makeup and finally sona gets ready in her bridal attire…she looks gorgeous and was like an angel…
Asha’s eyes gets wet while ishwari does her nazar…
Bride and groom reached the marriage hall and both lost in each others eyes…
They exchanged garlands as usual dev didn’t show any drama but sona didn’t stop her antics but finally dev puts garlands on her neck…
Followed by oonjal ceremony…kanyadhan…ghatbandan..pheras and finally dev applied sindhoor on sona’s maang..and ties mangalsutr around her neck…
Happily married…
\*wait wait….where are you going???picture abhi baaki hai mera dosts…*\
Sona’s bidai was done and dev consoles her…they reached dixit mansion…sona’s grahapravesh is done followed by other rituals…
Few days later…
Sona wish to start an company on her own but she fears to express to ishwari and dev…
Dev feels something weird and he himself found out the truth and plans to surprise her on her birthday…
Dev and his family planned an surprise for her..they wake her up @12 am and wished her happy birthday…
Dev gifted her a parcel and she gets excited and opened it..but shocked to see some legal papers…dev sighs her to read…
Sona jumps in excitement but she said that she wants to start an firm on her own without lending anything from him…
Dev:I know you would say like this…what’s a big detail…you start this company and payback the amount when you get profits…it’s simple …and more it’s an success of your project proposal…
Devakshi hugged each other…
Ishwari gets saddened because she wish to give the responsibilities of dixit’s house to sona but the reverse is happened…
Sona sees ishwari and realised something…she then went to dev and says she don’t want this company because of it buaji is suffering…sona handovers the papers to dev and leaves…
Dev:I will talk to maa sona…
Sona:no dev…don’t dare to do so…i don’t want maa getting hurt…she will be doing for our good only…so leave it…
Sona turns and sees ishwari standing outside in tears…ishwari opens her hands wide…sona ran towards her and hugged tight…
Ishwari:sorry my dear…i thought you can’t handle both office and home…but i realized I was wrong…dev handover that company to sona…
Devakshi and Ishwari hugged together…
Next day…
Sonakshi gets ready for her new office…dev hugs her from behind…
“today my wife is looking so beautiful…don’t dress up like this then all of them eyes will be yours…”dev kissed her cheeks…
Sona(blushing):stop it dev…
Ishwari huffs…
She brings the thaal and did sona’s aarthi…sona gets her blessings and dev takes her to the new office and introduce her to all the members over there…
Everything goes well and sona’s company got profitable position in the market and returns the amount which dev invested…
One day sonakshi feels dizzy and falls on the floor inside her cabin…noone noticed her…
Dev came to her office to take her home because ishwari asked them to come because of ria’s proposal…
He opened her cabin and shocked…
“sonakshi…”dev gets shocked and lifts her in arms..he tooks her to hospital and informed ishwari ji…
“sonakshi”ishwari shocked and she dropped the stuffs in her hands…
Ishwari then reached the hospital and she panicks…
“maa..kuch nahi Hua maa…calm down…”dev consoles her…
Nurse came and asked them to come inside…
Dev and Ishwari rushes inside…
Dev:everything fine na doctor…where is sona…
Ishwari:mera sonakshi teeko na…
Dev:doctor please tell us..she is ok na…
Doctor:Mr.Dixit..everything is fine…congratulations you gonna become a father…your wife is perfectly alright…
Ishwari (excited):dev Mein daadi honewaali..tum paapa…
Dev:haan maa…where is sona??
Sonakshi came and dev twirls her by holding her waist…
Ishwari(nervous):dev leave her…
Ishwari hugged sonakshi and kissed her forehead…
Few months later..it’s sonakshi’s eight month…
Ishwari allowed sona to go to office with an condition that she will accompany her…
Ishwari feeds her juice for every one hour gap…and she feed her lunch sharply at 12:30pm…
Few years later…
“ishu am angry on you…”a girl makes a pout…
Ishwari:Mein kya bolongi suha…just 10 minutes maa and paapa will be here..my pyaari pothi hey na…
The girl is shown as suhaana…
“kya Hua hamara suha ko…we are here…”sona and dev hugged from behind…
Dev lifts suha in his arms and kissed her….
“chalo chalo…let’s go…”sona drags her…
Suha:no I won’t come with you…you two came late…
Sona:soha!!!
Sona starts tickling suha and dev gives her favourite chocolate..
Suha:love you mumma and paapa…
Ishwari (pout):suha!!me…
Suha:I love you ishu!!
Followed by a group hug…
The end •••
So guys do you liked it??I know I was little boring…but what to do…please adjust karo na…
Once again happy birthday Shaheer ?????
\*note:Respect your mom’s who struggles in upbringing you in this society…and make them proud*\
This is darshu signing off…take care friends bye bye!!!
And one important thing don’t forget to comment…?
Disclaimer:haven’t proof read ?
31 Comments
It was really awesome dear u should keep writing os and ff
Thnk u so much dear ? glad that you liked it..sure dear I will continue..thnks da for supporting ?
it is really wow how will it be if it is true
wow u really rocked it
it is obviously wow..
Thnks dear ? it’s great hearing from you…
Yes dear me too felt something like that..keep supporting dear??
thank u dd u know me?
Yes dear I used to read ur stories..am a big fan of urs..u don’t know me…bcz am a silent reader..??
I really loved the way you write…. It was just amazing…. would look forward to read more…. awesome☺☺☺☺
Aww tq so much shruti dear..i was jumping reading ur cmnt..and s will post more of my wrks on devakshi…keep supporting dear…
It was so beautiful..So elegant.. I hope serial me bhi aisa hi hota
Tq tq so much dear richa…aww…glad that you liked it..hehe!me too felt like that..keep supporting dear…
Wowwww I don’t have words to describe how much I loved it❤❤❤ do come up again with another is soon
Tq dear akshi? it’s so happy to hear from you..will b bck soon…keep supporting dear??
awesome. i do not have any word to describe how much i like it. plzzzz come back with another…
Thnks a lot dear rithu? aww…will b bck with another wrk…keep supporting dear..
Hey the os was amazing…loved it????
one more thing my mom too calls me with this name “darshu”..its my nick name..??
love u..keep smiling and posting!!!
Firstly thnks a lot dear darshu…
And same pinch for the nick nme…hehe!!it’s my nick nme too da..
Keep smiling and supporting…
Love u too dear??
Akkaa, this os was amazing….unique…different from others..
I luved a lot….splendid…marvellos…majestic
I m not having words in my dictionary 2 describe ur os…such a luvely os u wrote
I know ..u don’t know me..but I know u
U will be cmting on moni akkaa os…I too will cmt in it…by the way..I know u..
I do read ur swaragini ffs…it was amazing
But till know..I didn’t cmt…I m silent reader of urs..
Pls start any ff on devakshi.., ur writing was nice..
Waiting 4 ur come back..
Aww thnks da sweetie..enakkum Unna theriyum da moni os la cmnt pannirpa da…dats so sweet of u dear..thnx for reading my othr ff’s too dr?
Yes sure will strt an ff on devakshi too da..actually alrdy writing an ff jointly on raglak n devakshi da..will we get united forever da ff nme…
Keep supporting dr? take care da…
Akkaa, ennaku …will we get united forever theriadhu…ennaku tere liye dhuniya chod diya and humko tumse pyaar hai thaan padichiruken…
Naa andha ff , na check panren akka..
Thx, sonnadhuku…
Take care akkaa
Awesomeeeeee❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Tq so much dear manya? glad that you liked it..
Wow darshini it is too good boht acha hai kitni sweet story hai aapne boht ache likha hai koi itna sweet kise lik sakta hai when ishw is included but vo uske mamaji ji ki dauther thi matalb to vo Dev ki cousin ho GI kya cousins Ka marriage possible hai chalo I don’t want to disappoint u keep writing and these one was gr8
Thnks a lot dear ? and yes doubt may arise bcz it’s nt common n nrth side….bt in south side especially in Tamil Nadu if parents want to fix an alliance for a girl first they will approach their relative(i.e maamaji or buaji son)if they oppose the alliance means then oly they will proceed for othr alliance..i thnk u got it nw na dear..thnks for supporting da…
Attaa ponnu..mamma ponnu r8….this is relationship is more popular becoz of sarvanan meenaksi serial r8 ..akkaa..
Exactly da @Priya12 nowadyzz it’s trending…??
Yes Di ye muje ni pata tha because in our religion ye kbhi bhi matalb kbhi Nhi hota so ….,…. Hum log cousins KO hmesha didi ya Bhaiya hi bulate hai no alliance in btwn them thanks batane k liye
That’s so sweet of u dear…actually v r Brahmins so it’s nt possible here too…v would Cal our cousins same like u Said anna(bhaai) nd akka(di) bt in our culture it’s common here da…tc dear…gd ni8
Nice os dude cm bak with another one
Tq dear harshu? will b soon…tc dear and keep supporting dear…
Unique!! It was truly awesome!!
Thnq dear niki for liking it…keep supporting dear ?