Fan Fiction

Dhoor hokar bhi hum pas hai Part-5 (Omkara breaks seeing his daughter’s condition).

Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Thanks for ur comments Friends.Keep commenting if
u like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF.

“Did any one miss me guys”?Reply me.

Thanks for ur comments,support&Love,
Ashwinee(Thank u dear.U understand.It’s
ok.No sorry,No thanks between us.)
Shraddha – DBO(Thank u shraffs.),
Anshi,Sagithya,Aashi,Bani,Niriha,Lauren,
Cherry,Shreya,Madhuani,Ashwa,Alekhika, Mrunal & Neha.
(Thank u Friends,Sisters & Brothers.Thank
u all for ur support&love.Thank u so much

for loving gaurika kid picture too.)
Cheeks(Hi brother.Thank u dear.Welcome
to my FF.)Gayu(Thank u dear.Sorry dear for hurting u.U r my sister.I consider u as
my sister.Bhai ko maaf kardho behaana.I
am happy u like gaurika picture.),
Nikki(Thank u dear.I am happy u like irika
& sahil expressions.)
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All parts r here…….

The story starts :
Oberoi mansion :
Omkara’s daughter entry to oberoi mansion :
Omkara : This is my mansion irika.Did u like it.
Irika : I love u & ur mansion om.
Omkara : Thank u irika.

Dadi : Om puttar!Yae pyaari bacchi kaun hai?
Omkara : Dadi,she is my student & friend Gaurika.U can call her irika.
Irika touches dadi’s feet & took her blessing’s.
Dadi : Irika puttar.Ur place is in my heart dear.Come hug me.
Both dadi & potthi hug each other.Dadi’s & irika’s eyes become wet.
Irika : Can i call u dadi?
Dadi : Of course puttar.I am ur dadi.

Irika hug dadi.Dadi kisses her on fore head.Irika kisses dadi on her cheeks & says sweet dadi.
Dadi says sweet potthi.
Irika excuses dadi & went to see whole mansion.
Dadi send irika with servant.Because all

went to temple & busy in their respective
works.
Dadi says om,she looks like ur carbon copy.If u have daughter,irika is best example for it puttar.
Omkara is happy listening dadi’s words &
says irika is so cute,sweet & she respects
elders.Who ever gave birth to that kid they
r luckiest parents in the world.
I watch her today but i am feeling like,i had connection with her from years.

Suddenly,a scream heard by dadi & om from omkara’s room,

Omkara says this is irika’s scream,dadi says come on puttar,we will go & see her
Omkara rushes to his room with full speed.
Flash back :
Servant brings juice for omkara.Omkara is angry at that time because of work
burden & he throws juice glass.Seeing his anger,servant ran away & forgot to clean floor.
After that omkara left to gallery.
After seeing irika & her cuteness all her tensions washed off.
Flash back ends.
Gaurika screams papa.Because one of glass piece strucked in her small feet & blood is bleeding.
Omkara’s eyes become wet seeing his daughter’s condition.
Omkara rushed towards her.She screams

it’s paining papa in pain.
Omkara : Beta wait a minute.I will remove
it without pain.
Gaurika : No papa.Please no papa it will pain.
While omkara removing glass piece,in fear she hugged him tightly.He removes
glass piece without pain.
Omkara : Beta i removed it.Please open ur eyes,i removed it.
Irika slowly open her eyes.She even didn’t

feel pain,when he removes it.
Omkara brings first-aid box.He cleans her
blood with cotton & he apply cool ointment without pain.He bandages her wound.
Omkara wipes her tears.
Irika hugs him & says thank u papa.
Omkara feels good.
Irika : oops sorry for calling u papa.
Omkara : If u like u can call me papa my princess.
Irika hugs him & says papa.

Seeing all this dadi hugs om & irika.
Omkara scolds servant for his carelessness.Omkara removes him from job.
But irika requested omkara not to remove him from job.He says ok & warns servant
not to repeat this again.
Servant replies ok & thank irika for saving his job & left that place.
Omkara : Already 4 hrs passed.Irika beta
can i drop u.
Irika : Oh my god meri chirrayya maa pareshan hoga meri liyae.
Omkara shocked to peaks listening word
“Chirrayya”.
Omkara : What did u say “chirraya”?
Irika : Haan papa.Actually this is my mom’s funny language.
Omkara recalls gauri.
Malohtra mansion :

After lot of playing games kids r back.
(Ansh,Anshi&Om).
Sahil surprise all kids.
Kids r happy to see him.
All kids ran to him saying sahil mama &
hugged him.
Ansh,Anshi&om says we won’t talk to u
sahil mama.
Sahil cools all kids.

Sahil give Ansh,Anshi & om a gold pendant with letters,
For Ansh & Anshi – SA letter pendant with gold chain.
For Om – OG.
All kids r happy.They like their gift.
Sahil says i forgot where is my gaurika?
Kids reply she went to learn painting.

Sahil says ok.Let us wait for her arrival.
All kids reply ok sahil mama.

Precap : Omkara drops Gaurika in his car to malohtra mansion.

I hope u all liked it.
Next Shivika & Gaurika meets soon………………….
Give ur valuable comments.Did u all like it.
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Sakash.

A Lovely Son of my Maa,Dad,Grand maa & paa. A lovely friend & bhaiyya.

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