Hello and welcome everyone I’m Raone……..presenting you all my second FF of jndsd series…….
this story I will try to be different from the original track…….. some of the charcter are same as earlier series…… except few of them……
Atharv sujata(Young, smart, flamboyant angry young man) – Vikram(male lead)
kajal Sharma(Surprise charcter)- Sana Amin Sheikh
Vividha Srivastav(young beautiful and Charming girl): Shivani
Sujata vyas(pyaari maa): Shilipa T
Yash vays: vaquar saikh(atharv father)
kailash Srivastav(Hanikaarak bapu)- Vineet Kumar(main villain)
Uma(opressed wife but loving and carring mother)-same as in show
Shreya Sujata (smart and ladli bhen)-Richa mukherjee( atharv’s younger sister)
rajiv srivastav (young and caring brother)-arjit taneja (vividha elder brother)
dadi(jolly and funny) Indumatiji….. same as in jndsd
So frnds tthese are few main charcter and rest are still to come….. I hope you all gona like this……….
So the frnds the story is like that………… PROMO………………..ss…..
Atharv now lives in Ajmer….. in and handle his father bussiness of dairy farming….was he was once a fomous singer but his past has turn the table…… he lives with his mother and younger sister, he was 6 when his father shood dead……. sujata fly way to delhi… but now they are back……..
vivdha who hs Atharv childhood frnd, he want to be Industralist like his father….. His father doesn’t like Atharv because he was poor milkman child……. his father is very dominating person who wants everything under his control….. Vividha brother who loves her sister most……. will fall in love with Atharv Sister…….
Vividha in story will fall in love with angry young…….. her love will change Atharv………
Kailsh will not let this happen and will try to…. seprate them…. but it will be intersting to see how they over come from their diffulty………
EPISODE ONE 1………………. DIL H TUMAHRA
Episode start’ its evening and a girl running toward house and shouting……….. Come fast, jaldi, maa bahiya, dadi come fast…….
everyone comes there………her breath is running fast everyone ask what happened……..Vivdha, indu mati, uma and rajiv all are seen…….
uma: What happen beta…..
vividha: maa woooo(breathing fast)……
rajiv: what happen.. choti tell me….
Viv:(still her breath her is fast) bhaiya….woooo…
indu: first give her some water…..and beta you seat
raj: ya,(he gives water) take it choti…..now tell what happened?….
viv:(After finishing water) bhaiya, Sujata Chachi and her family are back…..
indu: what? how do you know…..
viv: Dadi I was coming back from my frnd house and saw there house open……..
raj: ohh…. that is why they were cleaning there house…. okk… hmmm…
uma: chalo Accha hai….. Ek kam karna rajiv ki…… you drop today food to them and me and your Dadi will go tomarrow morning…..
raj: ok maa…..
At night: Uma packs food for Sujata…… and sends rajiv to there house…..(he goes)
In Athrav house… Shreya is strolling in front yard of house listening to song using hearphone and enjoying and stand under tree………its to dark…. rajiv reaches.. Atharv house..
he finds house locked from inside….. he shouts but no one response, he again shouts but no response back…
raj:(he thinks) I think god also wants me to gave them surprise…..and jump over the gate…..(shreya suddenly observes him)
shreya: hmmm thief, abhi bata ti hu(taliking to herself) andfound wooden stick near she picks and slowy moves forwad…..
raj:(happy and excited) aaj chachi or Atharv ko aacha surpriiiii…….couldn’t complete
shreya attack on his back with stick he falls down….she shouts choor.. …choor…… he falls down he says Shreya face and wind blows…..
a wide smile spread over his face and costantly stare at her he is beating with stick….
( Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai
Hoo Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai
Dil Ko Banade Jo Patang Saanse
Yeh Teri Woh Haawaien Hai )… (2)
Sujata and Atharv run out …. hearing Shreya shout…..
sujata: what happened beta……
shy: See maa I caught thief……
Atharv: angrily pics him holding his collar how dare you……
Suj: One Mintue, you are Kailsh bahishaeb son….
raj: yes cachi m wahi chota sa raj hu…… he takes sujata blessing….
suj:: beta he is Vividha brother……Kailsh Srivastavji ka bada beta…
Athrv: (hugs him) ya kaise, Itni raat ko wo bhi choro ki taraha….
raj: yr, I just come here to gave you all food maa sent it, even shout noboday listened or mujhe….. I wouldn’t known that there his one jhasi ki rani than I woudn,t have done this chachi….
shr: says sorry….( they share eyelock) and shreya shy…….
raj: its ok…. but please see next time(he smiles)…. Chachi I should go now.
suj: beta have food atleast with us….
raj: No… Chachi maa will will be waiting for me, I should leave now, he wish good night to everyone…. move looking back to shreya Smiling face….. and falls…
suj: are you ok……( he says i’m back )
shreya smilea and turn her face he shyness…..
he reaches home and have his food….later tells her story to Vividha……
they both are lost in each other taught……….
Precape: In morning Vividha and everyone reaches Atharv house…………vividha stumbles and about fall down Atharv he heroic style saves Vividha…….. they share eye lock………Winds blows………….
Please do tell me about story and support and inspire me through your comments because your comments will work as boaster for me….
and do tell me my If no don’t like it they do tell me that….. sorry I was just framing the story that why I did not included sence of Vitharv but I will try to show there chemisrrty as well
I hope You gona enjoy it…….
22 Comments
Wowowowoowow awesome ?????????
Super luv stories
U have gud writing skills continue
thanks sumanda for ur comments………. keep reading hope you are liking it……….
amazing superb keep writing
thanks aaisha thanks for ur support……
RAone…no words…awesome…fantastic….superb…??…etc…etc…????? l really like this ff a bit better than your previous ff….continue writing…include more vitharv scene…I am eagerly waiting for it…. Loved it….?..all character you included is awesome..especially I like atharvs sis..?..
All the best..update soon…may God bless you..
yaa….. next episode they will first time after than they have grown up so wait…… there lot to come….thanks for your suppoort…..
I am repeating again and again…u have good creativity in writing….u can do some more thing…can you try to write a novel or short story anything else…u have the potential yaar…try it..I had seen a bright future in you…
thanks for your compliment sweety ya i’m found of writng ya I have written some drama or play….. social drama now…….. I’m writing is itb self a story type but still thanks…
Its as superb as the previous one
Hats off to your creativity
Continue writing
All d best and I liked d name of ur ff
Sorry because now only I saw ur request for the name of ur new ff
hey Sandy thanks for words ya….. title doesn’t matter much the thing which matter here is your all love…….. thanks for supoport
Areee RAone ji…its amazing…yaar…..I respect you & ur creativity..nothing to say…its really blasting..????..make more romantic scenes of vitharv..???..keep writing….donom (DHT,STHH)..amazing hai..update soon as possible ..
please don’t embrass me call ji….. I’m sweet and innocent 18 year man….. so please don,t designate me as ji…… thanks for your support…….. happy that you liked it……
I think we are same age…???? u deserve some respect…isliye meine aisa bola…don’t feel bad….I will never call you again…??..have a nice day…my dear friend….ye kaisa hei..???boloooo
ya now this sound good now……… Accha hai……. heeeeeheeeee
I never read any FF but trying with this….
And its look promising
Good characters
Waiting for next…..
thanks for your support…….. I will be very if read my another FF fiction Sirf tum hi ho must tell me about it…………
Superb ff, include more Vitharv scenes. Waiting for the next ep. All the best
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thanks for ur support…… I will try to keep some Vitharv seen in next episode
Wow nice.. I liked it very much..
thanks for your support…….. buddy…..
Superb Raone ???.
glad that you liked thanks for your support……..