DIL KE RISHTEY(Episode – 2….DIWALI Special episode)
A Good Life is when you Smile often, dream big, laugh a lot & realize how Blessed you are for what you have…..
Guys, a very warm welcome to all of u………Actually I didn’t have any idea regarding u’ll like my new plot or not, in fact I was really nervous, thnx a lot………Thank u soooooo much for liking it…….A big waala thnx to Reni(Riru), Dhruvi, Tania, Bibechna, Niyati, Mitu, Sanyu, Amnaa, Vrushti, Anee, Dhruti, Ruwani, Abhilasha, Tumpamoni, Niyaa, Alia, Jessica, Sakash bhai for liking my previous episode…
Link for previous episode… Episode 1
Sanchi:A warm welcome to everyone present here…..Ladies & gentlemen, today,i.e.18th Oct,2017, is the Annual Day of our school….”The Elite School of Kanchians”…..& co-incidentally, this time its on the day before Diwali, the festival of lights….So, I want to give a big thanks to everyone present here….& hamare iss function ko chaar chaand lagane, we have amongst us one of India’s leading industrialists, who’s the chief guest of the evening……Mr.Vikram Singhania …& his wife Mrs.Kritika Singhania, who have come all the way from Delhi to attend our school function…Sir..Ma’am..we’re really grateful to u for taking out some time from ur busy schedule & coming here on our request……(audience clap..)…….Mr. Singhania, I would request u to kindly come to the stage & say some words….Sir plz….
Mr.Singhania:Thank u so much……Now, ladies & gentlemen, I’m really grateful to this school’s authorities for inviting me….isi bahane I could reminisce & live my childhood once more….& I’ve a request, plz don’t treat me like any guest….I’ve come here to enjoy & live the moment….that’s all…..Thank you……
Isha: Thank u so much Mr.Singhania……(guys, there’s some more speeches regarding the school…but I won’t include it coz it’ll become too long….)…
Pragya:So ladies & gentlemen, without wasting any more time, let us start the programme….Our first performance is…a dance performance to be presented to u by Rushi, Palak, Ashnita, Smiley & Yaashi….
They performed a semi-classical tandav dance on the song Bolo Har Har Har(from the movie Shivaay)….
Veer:That was a splendid performance by the group….so, our next act….thats a surprise act for u & even our children….coz, they will be given a topic on the spot & they will say something on that…which means, they have to pick a chit from the bowl & whatever topic comes out, they have to speak on that…everyone will be given a time duration of 30 sec…so lets start…our participants r Priyanshi, Trisha, Sakash, Sana, Sanjana, Ruhanika, Jo, Amnaa, Divya, Prema & last but not the least, Alia…..So participants…plz come to the stage & take out ur chits from the bowl…(Participants take out their chits & started speaking on their respective topics chosen by them)
Priyanshi….my topic is Relationship…
Never leave a true relationship for a few faults…nobody is perfect…nobody is correct…& in the end… affection is alwz greater than perfection…..Thank u…. (audience clap)
Trisha….my topic is Time…
Time is free, but its priceless…u can’t own it, but u can use it….u can’t keep it, but u can spend it…once u have lost it, u can never get it back………….Thank u….(audience clap)
Sakash…..my topic is Mom…
A mother’s love for her child is like nothing else in this world..It knows no law, no pity, it dares all things & crushes down remorselessly all that stands in its path..I luv u mom….Thank u…. (audience clap)
Sana….my topic is Friendship…
No distance of place or lapse of time can lessen the friendship of those who r thoroughly persuaded of each other’s worth…..Thank u…. (audience clap)
Sanjana….my topic is Trust…
Trust is the glue of life…its the most essential ingredient in effective communication…it is the foundation that holds all relations…….Thank u…. (audience clap)
Ruhanika….my topic is Happiness….
Happiness is a choice, not a result…nothing will make u happy until u choose to be happy…no person will make u happy unless u decide to be happy…ur happiness will not come to u..it can come only from u…….Thank u…….. (audience clap)
Jo….my topic is Life….
Life is short…..time is fast……no replay……no rewind……so enjoy every moment that comes ur way….Thank u….. (audience clap)
Amnaa…my topic is Positive attitude…
A positive attitude may not solve all ur problems, but it will annoy enough people to make it worth the effort…Be the attitude u want to be around…Thank u…. (audience clap)
Divya…my topic is Peace…
When u find peace within urself, u become the kind of person who can live at peace with others….Thank u….. (audience clap)
Prema…..my topic is my Father….
It was my father who taught me to value myself…he told me that I was uncommonly beautiful & I’m the most precious thing of his life…I luv u dad….Thank u… (audience clap)
Alia….so my topic is Life & Death….
As u breathe right now, another person takes their last…So stop complaining & learn to live ur life with what u got…Thank u…….. (audience clap)
The auditorium was echoing with the applauds of the audience…..
Isha:Hello everyone….that was an amazing performance by our children….so, our next act is…a song & it will presented to u by Anuradha, Annie & Priyanka(Riya….haha)…(Anuradha playing the piano…..Riya & Annie playing the guitar….)
Priyanka…
Ho……Pehle kabhi na tune mujhe gham diya
Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya
Guzaare the jo lamhe pyaar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke
Toh phir tune badli kyun adaa
Ye kyun kiyaa…..
Anuradha…
Kabhi jo badal barse
Main dekhun tujhe ankhen bharke
Tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki duaa..
Tere pahloon mein reh loon
Main khudko paagal keh loon
Tu gham de khushiyaan sehloon saathiyaa….
Priyanka…aaa….saathiyaan……saathiya…
Annie..
Hmm,koi nahi.. tere siva mera yahaan
Manzilein hain meri to sab yahaan
Mita de sabhi aaja faasle
Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le
Zara sa mujhme tu jhaank le
Main hoon kyaa……
Priyanka…
Kabhi jo badal barse
Main dekhu tujhe ankhen bharke
Tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki duaa..
Tere pehloon mein reh loon
Main khudko paagal kehloon
Tu gham de khushiyaan sehloon saathiyaa….
Annie…saathiyaaa….
Anuradha…Saathiyaa….aaaa……
The auditorium echoed with the applauds of the audience…..
Pragya: That was an amazing performance by our artists….so now ladies & gentlemen, put ur hands together for our next act of dance to be performed by our group..Bibechna, Jessica, Ruwani, Prachi, Inara,Tania & Sanyukta…..(audience clap…)
The group does a splendid act of bollywhack dance form on the song Pinga(from the movie Bajirao Mastani)….
Sanchi:Amazing performance by our lovely girls….so now, put ur hands together for another amazing performance by our Mitali & our Contortionist Priyanka(Riya)….
Both performed an Aerial silk contemporary dance on the song Kabira from the movie Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani…
The auditorium was loudly echoing with the sound of applauds given by the audience…
Kabir:That was a super rocking performance by the duo….. So after this brilliant performance, now, put ur hands together for the most awaited, most interesting part of today’s evening…the Ramleela act…but ek naye andaaz….anokhe kirdaaron ke saath…
Timeskip…
A girl comes on stage(busy on a call on her phone)…..uff everytime u do the same thing….come fast….Ramleela shuru ho chukka hai…..audience laugh…..
Girl(looking at the audience):oops……Hello(waving her hands)…..I’m Sita…Ram’s wife & female lead of Ramleela skit….Really sorry…..actually, like everytime, the actors r again late…rehearsals r also not properly done…(patting her forehead)….what to do????
Just then someone enters saying Jai Shree Ram…Jai Shree Ram(off course…no points for guessing…he’s none other than Hanuman jee…)(bg song.Jai Hanuman Gyan Gun Sagar)…he acts like touching Sita’s feet…
Hanuman:Sita maiyya….Pailagoo….(he whispers in Sita’s ears)…Sorry I got late…
Sita:Arey not late…in fact u reached before time …..there’s a lot of time in ur entry ….& moreover Ravan hasn’t kidnapped me yet…(audience laugh)….
Now Ravan enters with his minister…
Ravan(laughing loudly)(he stretches his both hands like SRK & looking towards Sita):mh..mh..Ravan ka intezaar toh gyarah mulkon ki police kar rahi hai….but Ravan aaya hai… sirf tere paas..(audience laugh)(Ravan starts dancing on Chennai Express song….)
Hanuman:But u have only one head, where r ur rest 9 heads….
Ravan:In this world of growing inflation, it’s becoming difficult to maintain one head & u r talking about 10 heads!!!….(everyone laugh)
Sita(in an angry tone to Ravan):Hey u Ravan….u r the villain of this Ramleela, not hero….now without wasting any more time, kidnap me & start the Ramleela…
Ravan:I will kidnap u…but on one condition…
Sita:Condition!!!what condition???
Ravan:My condition is, in this Ramleela, Ravan won’t die…(Sita questions why)….Arey my last time dues r not cleared….last time Sanchi ma’am promised me of giving 10 Dairy milk silks…..lekin 10 toh chhodo, I haven’t received one yet….(everyone laugh)….
Hanuman:Sita maiyya…u give me ur orders…..I’ll make papad of this Ravan…Ravan will be over & Ramleela will also end..
Sita(to Hanuman):Shut up…now go & search where r Ram & Laxman….go….
Hanuman:Jai Shree Ram….Jai Shree Ram(& he leaves)
Ravan(to Sita):Now tell me…will I get my Dairy milk silk???…
Sita:Arey yes yes yes…. not only 10…I’ll give u an additional Dairy milk from my side, if u perform well…but first of all start the scene of kidnapping me….(she moves towards a hut like structure)…now u start the scene…(Ravan in disguise of a priest now enters the hut)….
Sita:Nobody is there in the house Munivar…u go ahead to someone else’s house….
Ravan(as priest):U shouldn’t return a priest from ur door empty-handed..(Suddenly Hanuman passes by saying Jai Shree Ram Jai Shree Ram ..shocking Ravan)…
Ravan:ohh zor ka jhatka from Laxman rekha..(everyone laugh)….Now Sita come out fast…(Sita nods negatively….)…ok if before my countdown of 3, u don’t come out then…then….then…..I’ll return back….3….(Sita..saying no)…2…..(Sita…no)….no no…wait…Sita herself comes out towards Ravan…Ravan & Sita left for Lanka waving hands & saying bye to audience….
Timeskip….
Ram enters the scene holding bow & arrow…along with Laxman…
Ram:Who am I & why am I holding this bow & arrow……(yes guys, in my Ramleela act, Ram is a character having the problem of short term memory loss)…
Laxman:ur name is Ram
Ram:but who r u???
Laxman:Ram bhaiyya, I’m ur younger brother Laxman….
Ram:u r my younger bro…..so chotu…tell me…where r we & why we’re here???& if I’m holding this bow & arrow, who & where’s the prey????
Laxman: U came after the deer(swarn mrig) for hunting it..(Ram…yes..now I remember)they hunt the deer..but unfortunately it turns out to be devil Mahrich in disguise of a deer..he said that Ravan tricked them & he took Sita along with him…
Ram(scratching his head):Now who’s this Sita & Ravan…r they siblings????
Laxman(disgusted look):No bhaiyya….no….Sita maiyya is ur wife & Ravan has kidnapped her…now without delaying, lets return to our hut so that we get some clue whether this Mahrich is telling truth or he has done a prank… they return to their hut…
Laxman(tensed & calls out loudly for Sita):Sita maiyya…where r u….Sita maiyya…. they don’t find Sita at home…
Just then Hanuman enters in Dabang style of Salman Khan….(bg song Hud hud dabang….)
Hamuman: Jai Shree Ram ….whats up Ram jee???
Ram(to Laxman):chotu…who is he???
Laxman:Arey he’s ur best friend Hanuman…..
Hanuman:What Ramji…neither u accept my frnd request on facebook nor u reply to my messages…
Ram:Actually its due to network issues…net is too slow naa…..thats why..(everyone laugh)
Hanuman(to Laxman):Lucky bhaiyya, Ravan has taken Sita maiyya to Sri Lanka….
Ram:Ravan has taken Sita to Sri Lanka…..(Laxman nods)…but tell me…who is this Sita & Ravan…
Hanuman:Arey Ramji…Sita maiyya is ur wife & Ravan has kidnapped her…
Ram:then what r we waiting for…lets go & save Sita…
Laxman(frustrated & at top of his voice): I was also saying the same…
Ram:why r u shouting??& who r u???
Hanuman:Ramji….he’s ur younger bro Laxman….now give me ur finger ring…I’ll give it to Sita maiyya…
Ram:why will I give u…I myself will go & give her this ring(everyone laugh)
Laxman:Arey bhaiyya, Hanuman has the power of flying…he’ll cross the sea & give ur ring to Sita maiyya….& u don’t worry about the ring…u can get it back from Sita maiyya when she’ll return….
Ram:Thats a good idea….I like it(he said like Saxena ji of Bhabhiji ghar par hain show)….In that case, take this…(he hands over his ring to Hanuman)
Timeskip….
Ram arrives at Lanka with Laxman, Hanuman, Sugreev & his vast vanar sena….
Ram(holding his bow & arrow):Ravan…come out….be a man….come & fight with me…
Laxman:Yes bhaiyya…I’m also with u…
Ram:btw, who r u?????????
Laxman(frustrated):I’m Laxman,ur younger bro….& & & before u forget anything else, let me remind u once again…u are Ram..my Ram Bhaiyya….we have came here to rescue ur wife Sita maiyya from the devil Ravan who kidnapped her….I’m Laxman…, he’s Hanuman(pointing to Hanuman)…he’s Sugreev(pointing towards Sugreev)…& here is our vast Vanar sena, behind u….got it….
Ram:ya ya I know everything…..what do u think…I’m not a bhulakkad likeu all..I’ve a very sharp memory…(everyone laugh)
Ravan enters…& Ram & Ravan fight starts….suddenly Ravan starts running while Ram was chasing him followed by everyone to get hold of Ravan(bg song…Dauda dauda bhaaga bhaaga sa from Chachi 420)…..after running for some time all get tired…Ram has kept his hand on Ravan’s shoulder….
Ram:Can anyone tell me why we’re running???& why I’m here???
Ravan:bcoz u came here for me…
Ram:but why???& who r u???
Ravan:I’m Ravan…& u came here to kill me…….
Ram:But why will I kill u???
Ravan:bcoz I kidnapped Sita….&&& before u question who’s Sita, let me tell u..Sita’s ur wife…
Ram:but why u kidnapped Sita???
Ravan:kyunki mereko abhimaan hai…
Ram:but tumhe abhimaan kyun hai??
Ravan:bcoz of the power given to me by Shankar jee…
Ram:Now who’s this Shankar???
Sugreev:Shree Ram…its Mahadev…Shankar bhagwaan….now Ram jee don’t waste time kill this Ravan….
Ram:Now who’s Ravan????
Ravan(frustrated):Laxman…where is ur arrow???plz give me…(Laxman was confused but still, he hands over an arrow to Ravan)…& Ravan takes the arrow & stabs himself with it(suicide types)….after some time, Sita arrives…& hugs Ram….Ram pushes her….
Ram:who r u maate???do I know u???
Sita(in an angry tone):Maate!!!!!…who maate????I’m ur wife swami…Sita…. u came here to save me from this Ravan….u killed him & saved me…..
Ram:Oh sorry…galti se mistake hogaya…Ravan ka kaam tamaam…that means..Ramleela is over…
Sita:Not yet swami….this Ramleela is going to complete only when we return Ayodhya & celebrate Diwali…
Ram:why Ayodhya…why will we go there????
Laxman(frustrated):Sita maiyya…now u handle ur husband…we’re leaving….Hanumanji,Sugreevji.. lets go….& all left leaving Sita & Ram…
Sita:Swami, our house, our family, everyone is at Ayodhya ….so we have to return to our home & celebrate Diwali with our family….now u understood????
Ram:Yes….lets leave…….& everyone return back to Ayodhya & celebrate Diwali with the entire family….
The auditorium was echoed with the applauding sound of the audience …..
Kabir & Veer enter the stage along with the cast of Ramleela….& thank the audience……so, we want to introduce u the cast of the play…Ramleela….Ram, the Ghajini…played by Niyati….Laxman, Ram ji ke chotu…played by Vrushti……Bajrangbali Hanuman….played by Anee….Mate Sita….played by Abhilasha….Pyara sa,sweet sa Ravan….played by Niyaa…..Vanar raj Sugreev….played by Dhruti…..Mahrich, disguised as the swarn mrig….played by Neha…..all participants left….
Sanchi, Isha, Pragya, Kabir & Veer on stage……thanking everyone & applauding for the audience …..
Sanchi:So, Ladies & Gentlemen…we’re really grateful to everyone…Thank u a lot for ur presence & ur support …..& Mr.& Mrs. Singhania….this is a token of our appreciation for u….& they hand over a shawl & a momento to them…
Mr.Singhania:Thank u a lot for this lovely evening…I would be really glad if u accept this….(forwarding a cheque towards Sanchi, while Sanchi’s not ready to take the cheque) …plz don’t consider this as a charity..consider this as my gift for development of this school…
Sanchi:Sir u r thinking so much for our school…I would be really fortunate if by any means we could do something or help u in any means….
Mr.Singhania:Of course, we would, if needed…….finally Sanchi accepts the cheque….Mr & Mrs.Singhania left….(Kabir & Veer r looking towards each other & r giving a thumbs up expression to each other….) SanIshPra,KaVeer(together)….A VERY HAPPY DIWALI TO ALL OF YOU…….(& audience disperse)….the 5 have a group hug while all the childrens come on the stage & start dancing on the song Let’s Naacho(Kapoor & Sons movie)(wrap up song….)…
So, this was my gift to my Kanchi family & friends on the eve of Diwali(sorry…kaan pakadke, if I left to add anyone from our kanchi family member in this episode)……Hope u all would have enjoyed this…..Sorry haan…thoda zyada lamba hogaya….&&& guys…sorry in advance…I won’t be able to post my nxt chapter for abt a week or so coz of some personal reasons(ok ok…actual reason is, my bro & bhabhi r coming, so a lot of guests would be coming…in short house would be filled with guests….sorry for this…I hope u’ll surely understand & bear with this) & forgive ur silly chatterbox frnd cum sis of urs….
Last, but not the least, I want to say…A day before Diwali, giving the insight of Festivities, with the boom of Crackers & sparkling of Diyas, welcome the real celebrations of big day with open arms…Have a Miraculous Diwali…..
HAPPY DIWALI TO ALL MY FRIENDS, BROS & SIS….
With lots & lots of Love,
Priyanka
66 Comments
Amazing… Loved it…. Do updaye when u r free
I’m really glad to know that u liked it….& thnx dear for understanding………luv u a lot sweetieeeeee………
& I gave ur name in speech….kuch aur nahi aa raha tha dimaag mein….isiliye….hope u r fine with it….
i dont mind at all….infact i enjoyed it
thnk u so much sweetieeee…..luv u…..gud nt……..tc………
oops….I didn’t know…itna jaldi post hojayega…actually I wanted this to be posted on 18th….but koi nahi…..I hope u all enjoy this…..fingers crossed….
Wow,,enjoy it soooooooo much.. Update soon..
awww……..thnk u so so much for liking this……..luv u loads dear………
Wow fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode lovely update soon can’t wait yaar please please
thanku a lot Divya dear……..I’m really glad u liked this episode……..I’ll surely try to post nxt one asap……luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee……….
Padh k mazaa aa gya…..ky idea h diwali gift ka!!!…wah wah! Wah wah!!…lots of luv n kisses 2 u???
awww Dhruvi dear….ur comments just made my day…..sorry, I mean night……haha……..I’m really glad that u liked this episode………luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee……..gud nt…..tc….
Amazing Superbbbbb fantastic mind blowing.
Happy Diwali to everyone
thanku sooooooooo much Alia dear for liking this…….A very Happy Diwali to u in advance…..luv u a lot sweetieeeeee………gud nt…..tc…….
Hey prinku u know what meri jitni dhakaan thi pure din ki wo sab durr hogayi tumhara ye epi padh kar in begining jab maine school of kanchians padha mere face per ek smile thi bcoz of u .. Thanks hamein school ke tym me le jane k liye nd wo bhi sab kanchians ko ek sath.. I just loved it kya shandaar gift diya h tumne iss diwali ka sabse best gift.. Sabke act kafi khubsurat the especially jo chit games line thi.. M to fida ho gayi.. Nd raamleela act…hahaha.. Itni hilarious nd comedy thi ki m to ab tak apni hasi rok nahi payi.. Agar ye sach me koi act karta to usse best comedy award milta.. Seriously nd tumne sahi role diya mujhe to.. main jab ram ke dialogue padh rahi thi to soch rahi thi ki agar aisa hi raha to raavan khud hi mar jayega.. I m proud of me m khud hi mar gayii.. Us gajini raam k hathon se marne se achcha uska intzar karti to saal bit jate….hehehe.. Lovee u post nxt one when u free.. And last not least happy diwali my dearie frnd cum sis…
kya duaayein m tujhko dun ye alfaaz or ahsas kahin kam naa pad jayein..
mile tuhko itni khushiyan ki daman bhi tera kam pad jaye..
Chale jab tak ye sanse meri tu rahe sang mere yuhi..
Main rahoo yaa na rahun tu mujhme kahin baki rehna.. Bas kahna chahun yahi..(sorry i know clingy line h wo kya h iss nachiz ne khud likhi h or ab bhai main sayar to nahi magar ay dost tujhe dekh kar jaruri nahi ki sayari bhi aa jaye..hehe.. Kidding bas ek faltu kosis ki)
and yaar ek baat h diwali se pehle hum kitna bhi pareshaan ho jayein lekin jab diwali k din hum diye jalate h rangoli banakar.. Pooja karte h.. Sweets batetein h… Terrace pe jakar ganton bhar bahar ka nazara dekhte h to sari dhakaan gayab ho jati h itna khubsurut nazara hota h ki bas ye pal yahi dehar jaye..(actually aisa faltu k kam m karti hun mujhe shor saraba pollution karna pasand nahi h naa mere bhai behno ko per mere cousins karte h.. M sirf akele terrace per badh kar der tak bahar ka nazare dekhti hun.. I hate crackers nd all)
bye my chatterbox nahi to tumhe pta h main bhi bak bak ki dukaan hun band nahi hone wali.. Bye pakka.wala gud ni8
Sorry sorry actually pata hi nahi chala ki kitna likhti chali gayi ab dekha tumne ramleela ka act likha or maine to puri mahabharat hi chap daali.. Sorry again kaan pakad ke i know friendship rule per kabhi kabhi aisi harkat karne per to thappad bhi padna chahiye.. Bye
oye…..ab tu mujhse zaroor thappad khane waali hai…….teri iss comment ne toh seedhe mere dil ko choo gayi……& mujhe bohut zyada khushi mili ye jaankar ki tujhe ye pasand aaya…..ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi…& luv u a lot shona……
haha……tu agar aisi, itni achhi comments deti rahi, main sach mein rone lagjaoongi…….& waise darr bhi lagta hai……ki agar mein tum sab ke ummeedon par khadi na utar paayi toh……luv u shona & A VERY HAPPY DIWALI TO U & UR FAMILY(in advance)………
Niyaa yaar…….this one’s for u….
Everyone should have a friend like u….You r so much fun to be with, & u r such a good person…u crack me up with laughter & touch my heart with ur kindness….U have a wonderful ability to know when to offer advice & when to sit in quiet support….Time after time I’ve realized how fortunate I’m that my life includes u…With a frnd like u, I know what friendship is… & for the bond we share, I swear, Our fun flow will never cease…….
pata nahi kya likha….achha na laga toh feel frank to tell….kyunki I know….this was a bit ajeeb……but bin bole raha nahi gaya…..so bol daala……luv u dherrrrrrrr saaraaa……gud nt….sweet drms dear……..
Hey gudddd gudddd gud mrng nd yaar tum ye frndship lines kahan se dundh kar lati ho i mean jab bhi m tumhari ye lines padhti hun main bas kho jati hun so touchy yaar.. Nd seriously r the ist person in my life said all this to me.. Sach me mere ankhon me ansun aa gaye.. Khushi ke… U know m bahut senti hun(kya karun gene problem apni mamma per gayi hun..hehe) per utni jaldi hasne bhi lag jati hun.. So don’t worry.. Bye a brekbone hugg for u per darr mat sach me haddiyaan nahi todugi..hahaha
??? Riya……!!!!!! I don’t know what should I say ???. This is the best of the best!! This Ramleela version of yours is just fab dear. I enjoyed it so much ???. I don’t know much about Diwali festival but happy Diwali to you!! Love you loads ???
Ruwani dear………first of all, thanku sooooooooooooo much for commenting………I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments…………ur comments bought a broad smile on my face…….have a good day…….luv u a lot Shona………..
Yaar someone give me a diary milk silk also ravan has got 11 . Well epi was fab
I don’t have words to explain it but if my fav pragya wud be there she wud say jagab
haha……..thanku so so much Reni dear……I’m really glad u liked this episode…..luv u sweety……..have a good day…….
And yes one more thing to all r fab but as read all of them at a glance i get time to comment only on few sorry .
Opps riya ka rule phir se tor dia i mean freindship ka.
haha…achha hai….tumhe yaad hai….warna phirse mujhe wo line dohrani padti…..haha….:):)
Riyu u rocked it dear. Kaha se layi ye fadoo zhakaas idea. This was the best raamlee I ever heard. Yaar riyu tune apna naam bilkul sahi choose kiya h” riyarocks ” bcoz everytime u rock with ur writings. ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????. Dear tujhe jitne comments doo kam honge. This was the bestest act nd article on the occasion of diwali. As being a writer u gave us a Gr8 gift. We can’t meet but u gave the most precious gift. U brought a smile on our face dear.
Okk bohot hua mera bakbak. ….are bhai or bhi articles padhni h ?????kyuki bolna start karungi to break lga na muskil ho jayega. ???
Happy diwali dear. Enjoy nd return back soon.
Take care nd lots of love to u. Or haan ek badi si jadoo ki jhappi. Are bhai diwali h
awww…..sachi!!!!!I’m so so sooooooooooo happy ki I was able to bring a smile on ur face……..& maaf kardena(dekh, sorry nahi bol rahi hoon ;P)…..thoda time lagjaega meri nxt episode likhne mein,(& reason pehle hi batadiya tha iss episode ke end mein)…….thnx for understanding……..a bada waala teddy hug & luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaaaaa………….
Priyanka…forst of all Happy Diwalo to u too..and the second thing is that..it was amazingly hilarious dear..Ghajini avatar of Ram..was too funny..and the most funny thing is that..i was scrolling down the screen every time to see my part in ykur story..but i think u forgot me..and that too a funny thing for me ?? mera to popat hi ho gaya..hehe
No issue..but loved it dear..lots of love and a big teddy hug to u ?
oye hello…….kya tu mujhe ghajini samajhti hai!!!!!….ramleela ka upar waala part scroll kar………kabira dance…….haan………ab dekh usme kiska naam hai………achhe se check kar……naam phir bhi na mile toh chashma lagale……….tu bhi naa……..tu soch bhi kaise sakti hai main tujhe bhooljaungi????????
Hahaha my fault..lagta hai naam dhundhne ke chakkar main zyada hi scroll kar diya ..maine woh lines hi nahi padhi jisme hum dono the ?? ..vaise thanks Kabir se tareef karvane ke liye ..hehe Kabira… ab to aa ???? Sorrieeeee Sweetuuuu ???
Vaise aerial dance dur ki baat.. main uchai ka soch bhi nahi sakhti..height ka fear hai..par tumne mujhse woh bhi karva liye ??? thanks 4 that also.
And yaad hai ..FRIENDSHIP MAIN NO SORRY NO THANKS.. but dear..aaj to partnership hai..dance partner jo thehre ?
sahi bola tha tumne msg mein….thappad khane waala kaam karogi toh kya tumhe thappad ki jagah chocolate doon???? & darna kyun, main thi na tere saath dance mein….its not very difficult…..practice se sab hojata hai & rahi baat acrophobia ki, then fikar not bejhijhak aage badh…kyunki DARR KE AAGE JEET HAI….koshish karne par apni saari darr par kaboo paa sakti hai……even I’m not perfect, but main koshish karna nahi chodti….thoda zyada lecture hogaya naa????…..actually mera ye pravachan teri punishment ke liye thi, coz tune mujhe sorry ya thnx kehne ki gustaakhi ki thi ;P…..ab hisaab baraabar…haha……luv u shona……..
???? maaf karo yaar.. ab itna nahi sunn paungi ??? chill ab main bhi nautanki karna sikh gayi ..haha sangat ka asar
haha….gud nt….luv u shona:):)
I am so so so sorry for late comment.My phone isn’t working and when I was just going to post the comment it crashed.I am commenting from my mom’s phone right now.My mom may be here anytime so I need to do it fast.???
It was suppppperb,fantastic,fabulous, most of all hilarious.Haye haye kya ramleela tha main toh fida hogayi.Oh how I wish I could see that act with my own eyes.Thanks for inviting me there too.I really enjohed dancing.This epi gets 200% of my applause.
I am sorry that I could not comment in ur OS u know why.But I tell u it was sooooo funny.Really the story of a typical wife.My stomach was aching due to laughter.
PS.Happy Tihar in our language but Happy Diwali in urs.
haha….bibu dear(ab hamari frndship itni gehri hogayi hai, so jo mere mann ne kaha tujhe wo naam de di, wo bhi bina tujhe pooche ;P…)….dekh…..tune late comment kiya…& maine late reply kiya…..so hua na hisaab, baraabar ;)……haha………& ye kya…..dosti ka usool bhool gayi…….no thanku no sorry……….not fair………dekh mujhe….maine late reply ka ek bhi baar tujhse sorry kaha???? nehi na……arey dosti main sab chalta hai…. & dosti main doston ka gaali bhi bahut pyara lagta hai……bohut bak bak karli but main baat toh bhool hi gayi……I’m very very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy happy ki tujhe ye pasand aaya……dil khush kardi tune apne iss comment se………a badi waali jaadu ki jhappi……….luv u a lot shona……& a VERY HAPPY DIWALI(in advance)…..haha…….
RIIIIIIIIIIIi…Hanumaaan hmmm…..not bad…..I like it…hahaaha……u know mera
dialogue Hanuman: What Ramji…neither u accept my frnd request on facebook nor u reply to my messages…
hahaaha…so hilarious……………kiya likha hai tum ne diwali ka isss se achha gift kiya hoskata hai…..toh iss ka matlab is ff main hum sab shamil honge hamesha…….kiun ke yaar hum kaanchians ke schooll main padte hain naa…..aur saanchi mata becomes our teacher……..tab toh hum acchee bacche ban hi jayenge…hahaa……tuhje pata hai…..maine naa sab naam pade khud ka naam kahin hani dekha……….par mujhe laga RI ne kahin toh iss paagl ladki ko daala hoga……………par yeh kiya tuney jessy introduce karwaya….by god yaarrr uper jake dubaara Ramleela padi khud ka character reinjoy karne ke lye…haahaha…..ab tu soch rahi hogi ke mene khuddd kkoo paagle kiun kahaa…aur jaan’ti ho mere dialogues hain na woh mene apne bhaiyun ko bhi padaye………bade bhai ne poochaaa kis ne likha hain toh chhote bhai ne answer kiya iss ki dost…aur donon boht hasse yaaar kiya likha hai…………and Ri mene tere liye surprise socha hai na……pata nhi woh iss ke saamne tik payega yaa phikaa pad jayega….khair…jo bhi ho……Luvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu sssssssssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……….Really luckey that I have friend like u…………RS ma’am ziada kuchh de na de…..iss show ke bahane boht acche acche friends toh mil gaye humen Am I right?????
ab bas bhi kar………rulaegi kya mujhe??? & tere liye toh bahut pehle se hi iss role ka maine soch rakha tha…..jab characters baantne ki baari aayi & sabko imagine kiya toh Hanuman ke role mein tujhe hi imagine kiya;P…..sachii……….& yaar tere ghar mein kisiko problem nahi hai tu TU ke updates padhti hai??????? amazing yaar……..wow……..& ye kya baat hui??? tu kuch likhe & wo majaal hai meri jo mujhe pasand na aaye……KABHI NAHI…………meri Anee jo bhi likhti hai…..wo sabse unique hoti hai……….bohut bak bak ho gaya……asli baat toh reh hi gaya………shukriya shukriya shukriya……mere iss episode ko like karne ke liye……….& haan….sahi bola tune….SDCH waalon ke badaulat hame itna achha kanchi family mil paaya……….luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaaaa……….
And Happyyyyyyy Diwali…………….Jan’ti hun Kal se hai…….But happy diwali my jaaannnn.. …..May these fireworks burn away all our troubles, problems and sorrows…………and may this light up our life with happiness………………. joy and peace this wonderful festival of Diwali would bring………………………………..Happy Deepawali to you and to all your family!!!!!!
hehe haha………iss chakkar mein main bhi bhool gayi…….HAPPY DIWALI my sweetuuuuuuuuuu……………. ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi………luv u a lot shona…….
nahi re paagle tujhe kaise rulaungi…………..haan hoti hain na problemmss kiss se kaha……nahi hoti…..daant bhi toh padti hai…bt at the very same time mere bhai boht supportive hain yaaarrr…………behnu main se unn ki fav behn jo hun….aur main tujhe mujhe hanuman banane ka idea kahan se aaya hoga…..bataun kia PM main???
main jan’ti hun*
achha ji….main bhi jaan ne ko bohut utsuk hoon…….bataiye, reason kya hai???
Wow yaar amazing…mindblowing….splendid.
Loved it to the core of my heart..
.u r just fabulous.., great writing yaar.,I have became a big fan of urs!! Got addicted to it…eagerly waiting for next part..love u loads.,
awww…….koi plz sambhalo mujhe….kahin khushi ke maare paagal na hojaun……..ur comments bought a broad smile on my face………thnx for commenting…….& fan….wo bhi meri…….omg…..itne zyada tareef ke laayak shayad main nahi bani…..but thnx for this complement…….this really means a lot………..luv u sweetyyyyyyyyy…………
Kya yaar marvaoogi kya?!! Has has me birw half kar diya!! Agar mai hospital mai mili naa toh mom dad ko tumhara hi naam bataoongi ki tumne laughter attack de diya mujhe!! Best diwali gift for me ever I had!! Love u loads m…,.
thnku soooooooo much kanchi dear……..& yaar tu mujhe marwaegi kya????uncle aunty ko agar pata chal gaya…toh mera toh o my mata hona tai hai……haha…..just kidding……….luv u a lot………
Hahaha!!! Has has me bura half hai air autocorrect maharaja ki krup she dekho kya as gaya hai!!!..????
Hahahahaha!!!!!! Hass hass me bura hal hai aur do bar mistakes ho gaye aab mai chup bethti hoon !!!
tumhe chup rehne ki koi zaroorat nahi………jo dil mein aaye….be jhijhak bol daal………gaali bhi………& yaar……..WISH U A VERY HAPPY DIWALI(in advance)……….a big teddy hug for u & luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee…….
priyanka kaha se ho aap ? muje nahi lagta ki tum earth se ho………..itne achche idea kaha se aate he tuje?koi medicine he to muje bhi bolo de do yaar……..but bahot maja aaya or or teri ramayana padke muje jo hasi aayi he ki baat mat puchho……actually mene ye raat ko padh liya tha or me itna jor jor se hasi ki muje raat ko daat padi mummy ki ke 1:30 baje koi hasta itnaa!!!!!muje laga ki tu muje include karna bhul gayi kya? but mene dekha ki tune muje ramayana me include kiya he so ……………..and i have not a single word for you………what should i say to you ? i just love your ff………..but itna hasi hu ki pet me bhi dard ho raha tha,aakho me se pani bhi aagaya and me bed pe gir bhi gayi!!!!
but it’s ok …………a big big wala hug for you and lots of kisses for you………love you prinku a lot………….but ye real sdch ne mera dil tod diya aaj insta pe pata chal ki sanveer is final he so no hope for kanchi and ye sanchi mata ne to proposal bhi accept kar liya muje to ye samaj me nahi aata ki veer ko sanchi se break up karna hi nahi he to itna melodrama kyu phir???????bichare kabir ki bend to bajegi because neeta and her hubby bhi ab uske piche padne vale he………………
HAPPY CHHOTI DIWALI………..HAPPY DIWALI AND A PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR IN ADVANCE…………….
oho…….mere wajah se tujhe daant padi……….uske liye SORRY………………….nahi bolne waali ;P haha……just kidding……….ok baba maaf bhi kardo…….lo kaan bhi pakad li………& apni pet ke dard ko zara sambhaalo, nahi toh uncle aunty se mujhe daant pad jayegi ;)…..haha…………ur comments bought a badiiiiiiii waali smile on my face……….& haan….u r right……..pata nahi kyun ye SDCH waale bekaar mein isse itna stretch kar rahe hain……..agar sanveer ko pair up karna hi hai, toh jaldi kare & ye bekaar ka drama band kare…..hum kanchians apne ff/os ke saath hi khush hain……….anyways, kyun unke baare mein sochkar mood kharab karna……….A VERY VERY HAPPY DIWALI TO U & UR FAMILY,in advance……..luv u dherrrrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaaaaaa………..
Di, sorry for such a late comment….u again rocked di…..Ramleela version is awesome…..this is best diwaki gift di….do update soon…lots of love & a very big hug to u….Happy Diwali to u di.
choti….koi apne dii se kabhi maafi maangta hai bhala???? tu bas apna achhe se khayaal rakh…..mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye tujhse………..& mujhe bohut bohut bohut achha laga ki tujhe ye episode pasand aaya……….a very big jaadu ki jhappi for u……….luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaaa & A VERY HAPPY DIWALI TO U & UR FAMILY(in advance)
First of all happy Diwali…although there are some hours left….i just loved this masterpiece….i seriously have no other words to describe it…you have great imagination…..wow what an epi…i am left speechless…and thanks for including me in the dance performance on the song pinga….since I love dance so much…without dance no life….Riya di….all I would say this was the best of best….just OUTSTANDING…….love you loads….posy whenever you are free…..lots of huggs and kisses to you???❤❤❤
aww……thanku sooooooooooo much sweety for commenting……..ur comments bought a broad smile on my face……..getting such beautiful comments from a fab writer like u………really means a lot for me…….. & abt dance, initially I included ur name in skit…..but after knowing ur liking towards dance, I changed ur part from skit character into a dance number….I’m really glad, u liked it………luv u a lot sweetieeeeee……..gud nt…..tc……..
Hi Dr as ur wish I read ur ff it was just amazing surely it was a diwaly special episode and u made our kanchi family participation in this really awesome I got really amazed when I saw my name in that …and more than that my topic about ” father ” ….
I got little teared because this the only relation I never get to enjoy and not in future also because my father died when I was 3 yrs old…..BT ur topic absolutely suites to my mother she only brought me and my sister……
With her I never felt feel like I don’t have father and his carrying because she gave us all the feelings come together….
Thank u for giving me the view of father carrying love u Dr keep going…..
oh……I’m so sorry dear, I didn’t know this……really very very sorry for my deeds…….but sweety I’m really glad to see how u took this so optimistically for ur mom…..& dear, this may be ironical, but true….only person in this world who has the capability of filling the emptiness of any person in anyone’s life is mother…..& I’m sooooo happy to get a slight hint of the cute bond u share with ur mom……..(sorry again….if I hurt u by my words)…….& dear, thnx a lot for reading my episode & commenting on it……..luv u a lot sweetieeeeee & a VERY HAPPY DIWALI TO U DEAR……..keep smiling……..tc……
No Dr its not hurting not at all don’t think so keep going… Happy diwaly…
luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaaaa………..a badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u……..
Sorry yar for the late comment ….ab mei Karti bhi kya….mei ne Teri ff already padi thi par comment hi Nehi karpayi….arre kese likhti ….yuhi to Nehi likh Sakti ti…..Teri ff jithna mind-blowing hai na ki kya likhu yeh soch ke hi din kat gayi…..this ff is just awesome, mind-blowing,historic,kidki thod thi ….you just wrote it fabulously…..ab mei Ram-Leela ki bath kehni hai to vo to stage hilane wale performance thi…..meri bestie aur wo bhi bulakkad Avatar mei haha? you know what Priya( I just hope I can call you that….)mei ne to niyati Ko uss Avatar mei imagine bhi Kiya….ha bale hi mei ne niyu Ko kabhi dekha Nehi hai…to kya hua ki dekha Nehi..uski tasveere to meri Dil mein basi hai….par ha Ramji to bohath hi funny Nikla…..unhe to sab yad karvane padte hai ….mei soch Rahi hu ki agar unhe kuch yad hi Nehi rehta to phir to vo bool hi jayenge na ki Ravan ne kyu ki athmahithya?…wo Sab tho chod Sabse jhakkas to Ravan hai…kya Baath thi ….mei to apni apko control hi Nehi kar payi jab meine ramvan ki pakdam pakdayi wali scene padi tho…..arre wo bhi kya nazare thi jab Ravan ne ram ko unka anekha udhesh samja Raha tha…ki wo kaun hai ?kyu Sri Lanka aaya hai….aur kiskeliye ?aur kise sabak sikane keliye……abhe yar ye to ESA hua na ki master ji Ko danda dho aur khudi hi pitjaye…..kaun ese Apne hi per pe kuladi marthi hai?….last scene to sach mei superb the yar agar tarans ke style mei bolu to sashtandh dandawqat pranam….chummeshwari?…..aur is writing keliye Remo ki style mei ‘ 100 level up performance….100++ wali ff….aur ha kese boolu ki tumne mujhe bhi Shamil Kiya hai iss mei….yar from school I used to deliver speeches you just reminded me that……I just felt nostalgic for a moment….now as I stepped into my college life I just miss those days I had spend in my school….a hearty thanks for that sweetie…arre yar riyarocks se zyada rocks Priyanka pe jachti hai….priyankarocks rocks and rocks……tu jo likha bas Dil Ko kardi kush…..janti hu yeah Todi si long hai par meri speech ki jithni Nehi……mei mazak kar Rahi hu mei hi janti hu ki kya bure haal hojati thi meri….mei to ese the jaise koi ghadi Ruk Ruk ke chalti ho….par Teri speech to yar it’s just awesome ? ….and ha mujhe ap logo ki festival ke bare mei zyada kuch pata Nehi hai ….to uski bare mei keh bhi Nehi Sakti…..aur koi mujhe bathathe tho achi hoti…..Kher chodo wo Sab Priya Tum Na ese likhti raho taki Hume ithni achi ffa Naseeb ho….haq se keh Rahi hai likhna zaroor
Sana dear……..tune mujhe rula hi diya apne itne sweet comments………itni amazing comments, that too from a writer like u………..really, this means a lot to me……thanku thanku thanku soooooooooo much for liking this……& tu mujhe kuch bhi bula sakti hai………luv u sweetieeeeeeeee……….
Arre Teri Ramji ki tarah mei bhi bulakkad Nikkli…..ye kehna ki bool hi gayi ki Hanuman Ji to Kamal nikle aur friend request wali dailogue just was superb…..aur sita maiyya ne to mujhe hasa hi diya….Ravan – sita convo was hilarious…..bechare Lakshman ji unki hal to behal hi hogaya ram ji Ko yad dilathe …..jis tarah kumbkarn apna khana kaateh Nehi taktah vese hi mei Bolte tak hi Nehi Rahi hu …..jis tarah unka bhook khatam Nehi hota vese hi meri bolti band Nehi hota…..kya karu mei majboor hu….Teri ff to hai hi itni Kamal ki chup betne Ko Dil hi Nehi Karti….bas Dil kehti hai ki bolti jao….bus kehti jao
I know I’m bad in hindi but I’m just trying to make it better so pls don’t mind incase if there is any mistakes
sweety, I’m really glad to know ki how precisely u got through each line of the skit………& ye sab, ek bahut achhe writer ki nishaani hai……..& undoubtedly, u r a great writer……….I’m already on cloud9 after reading ur comments……….& yaar….ur hindi is superb……flawless…….u don’t at all need to think abt that……….& what else to say…..tune toh meri bolti band kardi, apne baaton se…..I had a broad smile on my face while reading ur comments….hamesha………ab aur bak bak karke tumhaare dimaag ki o my mata nahi karoongi……..gud nt dear……..a big waala jaadu ki jhappi for u……..luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaa……..
actually, while writing the plot, I got really confused ki kaunsa part kise doon….after reading ur TU updates, I felt ki tumhe shaayad ek speaker ke role suit kar sakta hai….isiliye I gave u this part….nxt was the topic….instantly mere dimaag mein, tere naam ke saath, frndship ka topic aagaya…..I’m glad that u liked it…..