DIL KE RISHTEY(Episode – 3)
Love is not only made for lovers, it is also for friends who love each other better than lovers…A True friend is very hard to find, difficult to leave..& impossible to forget…..with these words, I want to give a heart filled thanks to Amnaa, Tumpamoni, Divya, Dhruvi, Alia, Niyaa, Ruwani, Reni, Priyanshi, Mitali, Bibechna, Anee, Kanchi(oops Vrushti), Dhruti, Niyati, Tania, Prema, Sana, Abhilasha, Anu, Sarah for liking my previous episode & commenting on it & a thnx to the silent readers even who liked it……..thnx for all the love & support u showered on me………I just hope that I could keep getting ur support in my entire journey….in all my forthcoming updates…..luv u all dherrrrrrrrr saara…..Enough of my bak-bak, without wasting any more of ur valuable time, let’s get started……
Recap: Mr.Singhania at Sanchi’s school…..A sweet act by the members of my kanchi family on the eve of Diwali….
Present time…..Rishikesh….
It ‘s the same day…evening time…..Kabir was sitting in the lawn & was thinking something…suddenly Veer came & patted on his shoulders & this made Kabir come out of his thoughts….
Veer: Bhai, what happened & what are u thinking???
Kabir: Chote…I think that I should confess about my feelings to Sanchi…..(Veer immediately hugged Kabir in excitement & breaking the hug)
Veer: Bhai, u r right….even I was thinking the same that when will u propose bhabhi…..(he again hugs Kabir)….I’m very happy bhai…..now Sanchi will be my bhabhi….
Kabir: But what if she says no???
Veer: Offo bhai….not only Rishikesh…but there is not a single girl in this whole world who can say no to my bhai…(Kabir gives a “kuch bhi” waala look to Veer) & about Sanchi, u don’t need to worry…. I have a feeling that she also likes u but is not confessing……Arey it’s every girl’s problem…they feel that it should be the boy who should propose first…as if their image will be down if they will confess ….But anyways, if u have made up your mind, I won’t stop u from confessing…..
Kabir: But chote, I want to reveal my real identity to her, my mission, my past….everything…. but tumhare kasam ki wajah se, I stop myself from confessing….I want that our relation should be based on Truth…..Trust & Honesty are the foundation principles that binds all relationship, without which no relationship can ever exist…& I don’t want that….so…
Veer: ok ok bhai….I understood…..chalo, maine aapko apne kasam se azaad kiya…(Kabir smiles)….but yeah, I’ve two conditions…
Kabir: & what is that???
Veer(keeping his arms around Kabir’s shoulder): My first condition is…..Even though the date & time of ur proposal will be of ur choice, but the place & everything will be of my choice…. I would make all the arrangements…
Kabir: Agreed…..what’s the second one???
Veer: You would reveal ur identity at the end, only after Sanchi bhabhi says yes to ur proposal…
Kabir: Agreed…..aur kuch???
Veer(pretends like thinking): Hmm…..no….only this much for now……
Kabir: Ok chote miyaan….& they both laugh….
Now scene shifts to Mr. & Mrs.Singhania…..Since due to some technical faults, their flight has been cancelled, but as Kritika(KS) was adamant to reach Delhi for her children at any cost…So, Vikram(VS) & KS were returning to Delhi through a car…..(& yeah….only VS & KS….no driver….)…..Suddenly their car broke down in the middle….VS came out to check the faults….in the mean time, while looking here & there, KS’s eyes fell on a little puppy which was injured…she came out of the car & picked up the puppy….it’s legs were bleeding….she tied her hand kerchief to the legs of the puppy & was moving towards the car when suddenly a car came & hit Kritika…..Vikram was hell shocked at this…..”Kritika!!!!!!!!!”…..shouted VS & immediately rushed towards her…..Kritika was in a pool of blood….VS placed Kritika’s head on his lap…The person who hit KS, immediately stopped his car & came back towards KS….
Vikram(looking at the man): Are u blind? Don’t u know how to drive? How….KS stopped him by saying,” he was… not to be… blamed….It was… all her fault….”…..she said this with a lot of difficulty…
Man: I’m very sorry sir….Actually my child is ill & I was taking her to the doctor….I was in a hurry…so…I’m sorry….very very sorry….KS interrupted him in the middle….
KS: No bhaiyya….u don’t… need to apologize….It was… all my fault, I should have…. been careful….U plz go… fast….ur child…needs u….
Man(folding his hands in gratitude): Thanku so much madam jee….I don’t have words to describe what u have done for me….All I can say is….Bhagwaan aapki har ichchha ko poori kare…aapka aur apke bachhon par kabhi koi musibat na aaye….hamesha khush rahein…saying this he leaves from there…..
Vikram: Kritika…..(he was crying badly)
(bg music….Kal Ho Na Ho sad waala music)
Kritika: Shhh…..let me….let me say…. u ‘ll never cry….always…. remain happy…u’ll take….care of urself &…..our children….Raj….never remembers to….take his…lunch box….make sure…he takes it….he doesn’t open up…his problems….so easily….u need to…behave like a….frnd with him…for this…Vishal(he’s minor asthma case in my ff) needs his…pump occasionally….so make….sure he has it….all the time…. give one puff… from the inhaler, always with….a spacer….ask him to….take four breaths from….spacer….give three more puffs, with…four breaths….between each.& make….sure…to keep an….additional one…pump… in his….drawer….in his…study table….Ruhi sleeps…only when she….listens to a….lullaby or….bed time….stories….her bed time….story book….is kept in the…drawer of ….the desk at…the side of the…bed…& make sure….her bella(her teddy) is….with her….without bella…she never sleeps….(Vikram is still crying…& saying,”stop it…nothing will happen to u”…Kritika says….”let me complete”)….Juno is….fed twice….once….morning & then…in the evening….Robin….should follow…his study chart &….abt u….u don’t take…much stress in ur…work…take….ur bp medicines in….time…..& she starts breathing heavily….
Vikram: No Kritika….plz don’t say this, I’ve already informed, doctors would be here any moment….u plz stop saying like this….
Kritika: I just have….one unfulfilled….wish….apne bachchon ko bade….hote hue nahi…dekh payi….but I know….our…kids will be fine…when u r….with them…..
Vikram: Plz…..I won’t let u die, u hv to stay for me, u hv to stay for our kids, u can’t leave us alone….
Kritika: Every person who….has taken birth….has to die….one day….but I’m happy…I’m dying as…a suhagan….I’ve no….regrets from my….life….I’ve got….every happiness….loving husband……cute children….what else can….a woman…want in her…life…promise me….u’ll always….stay happy….& never cry….take care of all…promise…me….(& she forwards her hand)
Vikram(still crying…keeps his hand on her hand, with other hand below her hand): Promise….
Kritika smiles & her hand slips from his…..”Kritika….Kritika”…..Vikram calls her shaking her….Doctors arrive at the place & check her…”I’m sorry….She’s no more”……..Vikram broke out into tears holding Kritika’s deceased body in his arms…..(bg.Kal Ho Na Ho music still playing…)
Next day morning
Scene shifts to Delhi….where the three children r eagerly waiting for the arrival of their parents…in their new dress….off course, it was Diwali….
Ruhi: Offo bhaiyya…when’ll mamma papa arrive?….I want to show them my new dress…& she flaunts her dress in style….
Vishal: Yes bhaiyya…even I can’t wait any more…
Raj(Making Ruhi sit on his lap & Vishal by his side): Don’t worry…they’ll come soon…now I’ve to go & help Robin bhaiyya with the decorations….who’s going to come with me?
“ME”….both Ruhi & Vishal said by raising their hand…..They left for decorations & all…& Juno also followed them….
Suddenly the calling bell rang
Ruhi, Vishal: Mamma & Papa came!!!…& the three children ran towards the door…Robin opened the door…& on looking at the view, stood there like a statue….dumb struck…Vikram was standing outside with two people behind him(hospital ward boys)…held Kritika(dead body) in a litter(stretcher)…The children were confused looking at Robin, so they themselves came to the door to see outside…..yes….they faced the worst situation(or gift) on this Diwali…..they lost their mother….The ward boys placed Kritika’s body & left…..everyone was in a big shock…. Vikram….children…. all stood there like a statue….just like the time has stopped in that moment……The children left from that place crying….Vikram went after them….hugged them….consoled them….even if he was crying from inside, he was consoling them….finally the children came down….hugged the corpse of their mother…broke down into tears…..After some time, the last rituals were performed….Vikram hugged his sobbing children….Robin & Juno were also present there…& finally they returned to their home…
Time skip(2 weeks later….)
Place: Rishikesh
SanIshPra were busy in some work… suddenly Prasha noticed Sanchi is lost somewhere…
Pragya(shook Sanchi…making her come out of her sapnon ki duniya…hehe…): Abeo….What r u thinking so deeply?
Isha(with a smirk): Or rather we can say…SOMEONE?…& she winks
Sanchi(blushing): No…Nothing like that….I’m not thinking abt Kabir….(she bite her tongue realizing what she just said)…
Pragya: Oh ho….Kabir……But Sanchi, when did we mention his name?
Isha(keeping her arm around Sanchi’s shoulder): Tell us…what’s all this?…We r besties right…no secret between us…..
Sanchi: Ok Ok……Guys, I think….I think I’m in Love….I’m in Love with Kabir…..
Isha: Really?…..Sanchi nods her head in approval…..the trio smile & have a hug….
Pragya: Does he know?…..”No”….said Sanchi
Pragra: Then what r u waiting for? Go & confess ur luv for him…
Isha: But Pragya…it should be Kabir who should propose first, not Sanchi….
Pragya: Ok Isha devi jee……(Pragya thinking something & then)Sanchi, u do ur work….me & Isha r having some work, we’ll just come in some time(Isha looked confused)….
Sanchi: What? Anything important? Need help?
Pragya: No No….just like that…..u do ur work….& she leaves the place dragging Isha along with her….
Outside
Isha: What work? I don’t remember anything…
Pragya(pats on Isha’s head): Baklol kahinki….how could I say this in front of Sanchi?
Isha: Say what!!!
Pragya: Arey buddhu!!….we need to get Sanchi & Kabir confess their love for each other…
Isha: Arey yes!! Veer had said that Kabir loves our Sanchi too….so…(she smiles & looks at Pragya)
Pragya: We have to bring them together….but we need to discuss this with Veer first…
Isha: Yes….& both of them went to Veer & informed abt Sanchi’s feelings for Kabir
Veer(giving an I knew it waala smile): I knew it….I knew that from before that Sanchi loves my Kabir Bhai….
Isha: So now….
Veer: So now….”MISSION KANCHI LOVE CONFESSION”….shuru…..he forwards his hands….Prasha place their hand on his…..& the trio give a big smile….
So guys….I end my episode here…I know, my ff episode has been very late….but what to do….I was not getting idea what to write, how to bring the story ahead, for which I was writing OS to be in touch with all of u……..Hope u would have liked it……..& sorry in advance, if I couldn’t meet ur expectations in this episode…….I don’t know what mess I wrote in this episode, but hope u won’t start scolding me….& yaaron, plz don’t forget to comment…coz ur comments can let me know abt whether I’m able to write properly or need improvements in my writing….fingers crossed….thnx for bearing all my stupid chattering….
With lots of LOVE,
Priyanka
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superb ff prinku………………yuppie mission kanchi start soon………….how can i praise you because i don’t have any words of your writing skill…………………….update next one soon…………….love you……………..a lots of kisses and hugs for you…………………tc………………..bye……………….gn……………….
Dhruti yaar……….thank u sooooooooooo much for commenting………I’m really glad ki u liked this episode….mujhe toh darr lag raha tha, ki kanchi scenes naa hone ke kaaran, kahin tujhe ye pasand na aaye…..but ab I’m very very khush….haha….happy…..luv u a lot & a big waala teddy hug for u…….gud nt……tc………..
It is amazing and superb yaar…….I am eagerly waiting for next part……. please yaar update soon……….I can’t wait for this yaar
haha……first of all Anu……..thnx for being never ever late & being a regular reader cum commentor……in fact meri khushnaseebi hai ki yahaan mujhe kuch mila ho ya na ho…..itne amazing frnds mile hain, jo har pal, har haal mein mera saath dete hain……..thnku for being such an amazing frnd…….a big teddy hug for u……luv u a lot…..& haan, I’ll try to post asap…….gud nt..tc…..
Wow Riya ??? awesome!!! VS & KS dialogues were so emotional ??? but more important thing is mission kanchi gonna happen now ???
haha…haan yaar…..& Ruwani…..thnx sweety for liking Vikram & Kritika’s part…..actually somewhat their part is the reason, for my twist in the story line…..but yaar…abhi reveal nehi karne waali;P…..haha…..uske liye…..aage ke updates padhna padega tumhe…..haha……waise I’m really elated to get such cute appreciation from an amazing writer like u…….a big waala teddy hug for u………gud nt……..sweeeeeeet drms……..luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara………
Superb mindblowing part of agra and other parts of kritika and vikram and the family scene r so emotional nd touchy… Jaise tumne explain kiya actually i m crying.. I m in class 9 when my uncle died and i showed my lill cousins condition and my family and recently mere mamaji and mere dono bhai r small too… Kya kahun yaar per sachchii tumne mujhe rula diya m kab itni ff k ander challi gayi pata nahi chalaa especially jab kritika apni last moment per bhi apni family k bare me bta rahi dhi mujhe rona aa gaya… Hatts of to u aisa laga tumne apna dil khol ke rakh diya bye lovvv u dherr sara my shona sweety.. Bye tc nd post nxt one asap..gud ni8 tc
nahi yaar…..main apne Niyaa ko rote hue nahi dekh sakti……..sorry dear tujhe rulane ke liye……..but yaar, kya karti……jo dil mein aaya, bas likhti chali gayi………jaisa maine tujhe pehle bataya tha….do din….ek din, theme sochti hoon….doosre din likhna shuru kardeti hoon, jo dimaag mein pehli baar mein aaye….wo…I don’t at all give a second thought……isiliye toh kabhi kabhi darr lagta hai ki agar kuch bakwaas aa jaye mere dimaag mein & wo tum sab ko pasand na aaye toh??……tabhi toh…..end mein sorry bol deti hoon…..wo bhi yahaan, kaan pakadke…..& dear, tumhare uncle & mamaji ke baare mein sochkar, unke family ke baare mein, mujhe bohut sad feel ho raha hai……..ab yehi kehna chahti hoon, ki tujhe ye pasand aaya, uske liye……bohut bada waala thanks……..luv u dherrrrrrr saara & a badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u……gud nt……..tc……..& haan, sorry again….rulane ke liye……
Hey not at all problem mere anshuon m bhi merit khushi chippi h u r an amaz writer jab bhi likhti ho kamaal likhti last epi m tumne has a has a kar maar daala or aaj rula rula kar ???per maja aa gaya ab bhi tumhara ff ya os padhti hun dil khush ho jata h lovvvv u so much shona post nxt asap mujhe kaveer ka motive kya janna h jaldi se nxt post karo??
hehe……..matlab mein har ek situation mein at the end tujhe rulaakar hi chodti hoon!!…haha…..but haan…..ek baat hai……dono…..ff & os likh rahi hoon…….jo pehle likh doongi, usse post kardoongi……& raha sawaal kaveer ka, jo ki itni bhi badi ya phir exciting baat nehi…..uss baat ko jaan ne ke liye, 2-3 episodes lag jayenge……..shayad……not so sure…tab tak ke liye……..haste raho…….hasate raho………& khulke life ka mazaa uthaate raho……..:)
Riyu kya kahu mai. ….tune to kuch kehne layak hi nhi choda. Ita acha. …..mindblowing episode siso. But mai thoda confuse hoon. Ye vikram kritika kon h.
Yaar ye emotional episode pad ke mujhe rona aa gya. Tu hamesa rock kr deti ho dear. Luv u so so so much. I totally agree with ur statement in . Some friends r hard to find. .difficult to leave and impossible to forget. I’m really very disappointed with sdch now but I will always be grateful to sdch for giving me such lovely frnds on telly updates as well as instagram from different corners of world. Luv u loads. Take care and post soon.
oh ho……..meri Priyanshi toh Ghajini ban gayi;P;P…..but yaar, isme teri koi galti nehi hai…..meri hi galti ka nateeja hai ye…..itne late post karoongi toh aisa toh hona hi hai…..but koi nehi…..no tension jab teri Riya is here……tu iss link mein jaakar dekh le……shayad ab tujhe kuch yaad aa jaye….. http://www.tellyupdates.com/dil-ke-rishtey-intro-episode-1/…….. & kaan pakadke sorry……tujhe rulane ke liye….but life ka usool hai yaar…….ek pal hasna….ek pal mein rona…..phir hasna…phir rona…..& the cycle continues…..bohut ho gaya pravachan…..& haan…..SDCH & RS……..bhaad mein jaao………we don’t give a damn to u, but thnx, mere life mein tum logon ki wajah se itne amazing, khidkitod dost mile hain……dekh….itna bhashan de diya but tujhe thnx bolna toh bhool hi gayi……..so……thnx……….thnx for liking this episode……..I’m glad that u liked this…….luv u dherrrrrrrr saara……..bye…….tc………..& haan, I’ll try….jald se jald post karne ki…….
Hahaha padh liya. Or haan jldi se next wala post kar. Afterall mission kaanchi jo aane wala h. Luv u loads. Take care. ??
hehe………os & ff…..side by side likh rahi hoon……..jo jaldi khatam hojayega…….wo tum sab ke saamne hoga……….haha………luv u meri jaan………:)
whenever I read ur posts a hope dewells in my heart read nxt its so fab amazing awesome fantastic delightful creative and seriously i m facing shortage of words bt eait i got one more gajab . Bye di tc luv u . pls post asap.
awww……..Reni dear…….tere comments har baar mere chehre pe ek badi waali smile le aati hai……..itne cute comments likhti hai tu, ki kya kahoon……..btw, dear…….I’m really glad ki tujhe ye pasand aaya……..a big teddy hug for u & luv u a lot sweety pie………& I’ll surely try to post the nxt one asap……..bye……tc……
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thnku Swetha for commenting……..I’m really glad, u liked the episode………luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee……bye…….tc………
Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode lovely update soon can’t wait
thnku sooooooooooo much Divya dear for being a regular reader & commentor……..I’m on cloud 9 after reading ur comments……..luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee & haan……I’ll surely try to post my nxt update asap……..bye………tc……….
My choco pie..just loved the epi…it was tremoudously excellent…too good dear…I seriously have no words to describe your writing skills…at first you always encouraged writers with your amazimg words ….then you started writing….I always wanted you to write…..and you were my favorite reader but now also my favorite writer…just too good …love you loads ❤??
awww Tanu……..ab rulaegi kya pagli?…….itne amazing comments padhke, mujhe aisa lag raha hai, as if main hawaaon mein udd rahi hoon………tere jaise fab writer se appreciation milna……Its just like a dream come true……..sweety….writers like u, Abhilasha,Trisha….u all r my inspiration…….main tum sab ke saamne kuch bhi nehi……..but yaar, I’m really really really glad that u liked this episode…….thanku sooooooo much dear………..a big waala jaadu ki jhappi for u my sweetie pie……..luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara………
Feeling very bad 4 kritika.. Bt story was toooo gd nd amazing.. Update soon..
thnx for commenting dear & liking it…….I’ll try to post asap…..luv u sweetieeee……..
Feeling bad 4 kritika.. Bt,,story was tooooo gd nd amazing..
thnx dear…….I’m really glad that u liked this episode….& dear, thnx for being a regular reader…….a big teddy hug for u……luv u a lot……..bye……tc……..
Sorry for commenting late was really busy…… And the story was amazing… Lovd it
oye Amnaa….sorry kyun bol rahi hai?…u commented, that’s more important & dear, I’m really glad that u liked this episode…..thnx for being a regular reader & commentor right from the beginning of my journey till date…….luv u a lot sweetieeeeee……….bye………tc………