DIL KE RISHTEY(Intro & Episode-1)
Hello friends…….do u remember me????? OK…let me start this in my purana andaaz, hope u can guess from that about who I’m…..Friendship is all about understanding…It is all about forgiving…It is all about fighting & then finding it so hard to stay angry…It is all about loving unconditionally…& above all, Friendship is the purest form of Love………..kuch yaad aaya???…Nahi???…ok, so let me reveal it…I’m ur thodi si paagal…thodi si naughty..Priyanka(Riya)….haha….so now u remember….what yes….I just left for about 3 weeks & u guys forgot who I’m…not fair……haha….just kidding yaar…..So friends today I’m here with another ff of mine titled, “Dil Ke Rishtey”…which is totally off track from the actual SDCH plot….So guys, I really need to know whether u all want me to continue writing this or end this here itself & think of a different plot….of course, after reading the intro(or u can say Episode-1)….do comment….
Character intro:
Lead roles
Sanchi: played by Swarda Thigale….A teacher by profession ….but will eventually turn into a nanny…but how….u’ll have to wait for that….bestie of Isha & Pragya….
Kabir Singh:played by Vikram Sakhalkar…..A con man…..but good at heart…
Veer Singh:played by Varun Kapoor….Kabir’s younger bro….loves his bro a lot….
Ruhi Singhania(6 yrs):played by Ruhana Khanna…Daughter of Vikram Singhania
Vishal Singhania(8 yrs):played by Swar Hingonia…Younger son of Vikram Singhania
Raj Singhania(12 yrs):played by Vedant Sawant…Elder son of Vikram Singhania
Robin:played by Aru K.Verma….butler at Singhania Mansion(but treated as a family member)…& also the children’s care taker…
& most important & interesting member of my plot….A Labrador(male) named Juno….hope u like him….
Supporting roles
Vikram Singhania:played by Vishal Vashistha…One of India’s leading industrialists
Kritika Singhania:played by Aditi Sharma….Wife of Vikram Singhania
Pragya:played by Neha Bagga….teacher by profession…bestie of Sanchi & Isha
Isha:played by Sharan Kaur….teacher by profession…bestie of Sanchi & Pragya
Dharam Singh:played by Rasik Dave….Father of Kabir & Veer…
Other characters will be added as & when it’s required……
So, without wasting any more time let’s get started……
Place:Rishikesh
An idol of Lord Ganesha is shown….A lady is doing Aarti….2 ladies r standing beside her & a group of children r behind them & everyone is singing the Ganesh aarti song…Jai Ganesh Jai Ganesh Deva….
The lady turns to give aarti to children…..yes…it’s our Sanchi….& no points for guessing, the other 2 ladies r her bff, Isha & Pragya…..
Guys, about the school & the childrens, I won’t reveal it now….u all will have to wait for my 2nd episode……it’s a surprise for u all……now, forget about it….
Some other location, but in Rishikesh……2 men r seen running very fast on a road…as if someone was chasing them…of course security guards were running after them……after some time, both of them stopped…gave a high five to each other & started laughing loudly….& turned……its Kabir & Veer……
Kabir:Chote…we did it…
Veer:No fear when my Kabir bhai’s here….bole toh….my bhai’s the bestest…..
Kabir:Stop buttering chote….where is the bag???(Veer showed him the bag which was filled with notes)…ok…so now…Kabir got interrupted by a call….ok…so, who’s coming???…Which school????….ok, we’ll reach (muted) school ….call disconnected…
Kabir(to Veer):Chote, new mission…So, let’s get to work…but before that, we have to take this bag to its deserving place…Kabir stopped a taxi & both went in it……after handing over the bag to someone, Kabir & Veer left for(muted) school….guess what, its Sanchi’s school…
Kabir & Veer had came there in disguise of teachers….
During initial days…Kabir & Sanchi always kept fighting like cats & dogs….but eventually with passage of time they became friends….then very good friends… they used to spend as much time as possible with each other….Kabir has started developing feelings for Sanchi…& Sanchi too likes Kabir but no one is ready to confess their feelings….
On the other side, Veer…..he fell for both Isha & Pragya…haha…. the moment he saw both of them for the first time….something like love at first sight happened….now, he was really confused for whom to choose among Isha & Pragya…..leaving behind all these thoughts, he decided to take IshGya to a club for some relaxation from their boring routine of teaching…..there the trio(VeerIshGya) danced on the song Chalti hai kya 9 se 12(from Judwaa2)…..spent some time & returned back….
Next day
SanIshPra were very busy with their works coz of the school’s Annual day preparations, which was in 3-4 days(final preparations)….they were busy in guiding the children about the events….how to do….what to do….when & where to do…rehearsals….& all those stuffs…. But where r Kabir & Veer???let’s find out…..
Kabir was sitting alone on a bench in the lawn of the school premises & was lost in some thoughts….He felt someone’s hand on his shoulder…he turned to find….its Veer….He sat with Kabir…
Veer: Bhai….why r u sad???
Kabir: No…not at all…why will I be sad???
Veer: Bhai…I know u better than urself……tell me what’s the matter??? Did u have any argument with Sanchi????
Kabir: No chote…..its not that……actually I…(he was interrupted in the middle by Veer)
Veer: Aap papa ko yaad kar rahe the…Right??
Kabir: Hmm….& also the mission which bought us here…in this school……Vikram Singhania is coming on 18th over here…& I’m 100% sure, he’s gonna show off his greatness by donating some money as a charity for this school…(Note.Kabir has a hatred feeling for all the rich people…..why…u’ll know it in the future)..
Veer: Hmm….so, we’ll be leaving this place after that…..leaving behind all the good memories…our little friends, the childrens…Isha, Pragya &…
Kabir:Sanchi…(he said lovingly)…..(Veer giving a confused look to Kabir)….Yes chote…even I didn’t realize how & when but I fell for her….Yes chote…I love Sanchi….(Veer was very glad to hear this & he instantly hugged Kabir)…
Veer: I’m very happy for u bhai…..now Sanchi will be my Sanchi Bhabhi…..wow…..
Kabir: But Veer…..I can’t do this….I want to reveal my identity & mission to her…If she understands, then only I’ll confess my feelings….if not, she would never know how much I love her….
Veer: No Bhai…aapko meri kasam…plz don’t reveal ur identity in front of Bhabhi….else u’ll lose her forever….
Kabir: Why did u do this chote??? U very well know, halaat chaahe bad se badtar hojaye, I won’t break ur promise…..ok….I won’t say a word in this regard to Sanchi…..But as of now, let’s go & do the preparations…..& our mission too(Veer nods)….Lets go….both leave to help SanIshPra for the arrangements…..preparations…..etc.etc…..lets leave them with their work…….
Next day
Place:Delhi
A lady enters the room…..Raj, Vishal, Ruhi…Juno(his shed is in that room)….get up….its already 6:15a.m…..get up fast….
Juno immediately gets up….stood up on his hind legs….the lady patted his head & said good boy..;)
Lady: See…Juno has woke up….u all also get up…
Ruhi: pehle aap Vishal bhaiyya ko uthao….
Vishal:no mama…first aap Raj bhaiyya ko uthao…
Raj:mama, just 5 more minutes plz……..
A man enters the room….bacho get up…I’ve a surprise for u…the children instantly get up….
Children(together):What papa??? U got a gift for us???Where is our gift???
The man is revealed to be Vikram Singhania & the lady…his wife..Kritika….
Kritika: What!!!!! From the last 10-15min I’m trying to wake them up….they didn’t get up…but on hearing the name of gifts, u got up without even wasting a second…
Vishal: offo mama….u won’t understand….leave it…..
Kritika: Now that u all have got up….go…freshen up urself… come down quickly…breakfast is already ready…….
Raj: Come Juno….Raj, Vishal & Juno left for getting freshened up…..
Ruhi: but mamma….my gift???
Kritika:keep patience beta….u’ll get it….don’t worry…now will u get urself ready or…need some help???
Ruhi: No help needed mamma….Ruhi is a big girl now….she can do her own work(Kritika smiles)….she leaves…..
Children & Juno come downstairs for their breakfast & r very excited to see their favourite breakfast…Kritika served Juno in his bowl…
Raj: Thank u mama for this….I love u…..u r the best….
Vishal & Ruhi(together):Our mamma is the bestest mamma in the whole world…..(Kritika was smiling)…
Kritika:I love u too & my children r the best children in this world….& they share a hug…group hug…
Kritika: Ok Ok….u shouldn’t be late…..Robin bring their school bags…..(Robin…yes Bhabhi ma)…he brings the bag…
Kritika makes them wear their school bags….the children kiss Vikram & Kritika’s cheeks, hug Juno & then leave for school….saying bye….
Vikram(to Kritika): tomorrow we have to leave for Rishikesh to attend a school function so u be ready….ok wifey….(Note.Vikram being a renowned industrialist is called as a guest in various functions..events)
Kritika: Yes patidev…till what time we’ll return???
Vikram: It might become late….depends upon the ending time of the programme….
Kritika: ok….I’ll tell Robin to take care of children until we return…..ok….
Vikram: Hmm…..he gives a peck on Kritika’s cheeks & leaves for his work……
Time skip
Kritika: Robin……come here……Tumne khana kha liya???
Robin:Yes Bhabhi ma….& Bhabhi ma, do u want to say something else???
Kritika: Actually we’ve to leave for Rishikesh tomorrow for attending some school function…..so u’ll have to take care of the children till we return….
Robin: ok Bhabhi ma….. U have a safe journey….& u don’t worry about kids…I’m here with them all the time….
Kritika: Tum ho issi liye toh tassalli rehta hai….tumhare siva, I can’t trust on anyone regarding my children….
Robin: Bhabhi ma plz don’t say this…..aapne & Bhaiyya ne mujhpe bohut ehsaan kie hain…I was an orphan….u & Vikram Bhaiyya gave me shelter…..nahi toh main abhi bhi dar dar ke thokre khaa raha hota……whatever I do will be less in front of what u did for me….
Kritika:Ab rulaoge kya mujhe….stop these talks & finish up ur works……btw, have u revised what I taught u yesterday????coz I’m going to take ur test when I return back from Rishikesh….
Robin:Haan Bhabhi ma….I’ve read it……& he leaves with Juno for walk….& returns with Juno after an hour for completing his remaining works….
Time skip….Next day…
During breakfast on dining table…..
Kritika:Bacho….today me & ur papa r going to attend a school function at Rishikesh….& aate aate shayad late bhi hojae…..so….thoda kam masti with Juno & don’t trouble Robin bhaiyya a lot….ok……
Children: Ok mamma…..& as always, the children give a peck on Kritika & Vikram’s cheeks,hug Juno & start leaving for school…..but this time, Ruhi comes back running & gives a tight hug to Kritika(Kritika smiles…sits down on her knees & hugs her back)…Raj & Vishal also come & hug Kritika…saying…Mamma we’ll miss u…..plz try to come back fast…Kritika becomes emotional & she hugs her children for some more time….she gives a peck on their cheeks & they leave for their school…..
So guys….this is all for the first episode……& yes….plz plz plz don’t miss the second episode(after 4 days) coz I’ve a surprise for all of u……..Hope u liked it guys…& sorry in advance if this couldn’t meet ur expectations…plz give ur suggestions whether I’ll continue this or not….
With lots of love,
Priyanka
44 Comments
Loved it dear and concept was fabulous
thnku Reni dear for commenting…..I’m really glad that u liked this…….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee………
Totally diff plot…plss continue it
thnk u sooooooo much dear for liking it……..luv u loads……….
guys……thnx for lending me ur time & commenting on this, but I’m really sorry in advance….I’ll reply to ur comments tomorrow(Sunday), today, not possible coz my exams r tomorrow & I’ll surely comment after my exam completes…….luv u all…….& a big waali jaadu ki jhappi for everyone……….
Priyu di….of course it’s a big yesss to you…..i am so glad to came up with a story……i was waiting for you….and from the first episode itself…i can say the story will be hit and a very unique concept….it was outstanding……..love you loads and post ASAP…..❤❤❤
thanku thanku thanku soooooooooo much Tanu for liking this…….I was really confused whether u all will like it or not but I’m glad….u liked this……….nxt episode zaroor padhna & luv u a lot my sweetuuuuuuuu……….
Finally u r back Ri!!!
Different plot sounds interesting. Waise bhi een saare ff ki writers ke SDCH ki original plot per itne achchhe ffs dekh kar toh mujhe SDCH show dekhte huye bhi frustration hoti hai.
Aur phir kaha se badhegi trp? Jab humein itne achchhe ffs padne ko mil rahein hain.
Kaveer as con men??????
Show mein harishchandra aur yaha pe!!!
I felt the story quite fast paced.Are yiu just planning few shots?
No problem about replying late.The only thing that matters is ur exam.So I won’t say post next epi asap. I will just say:All the best for ur exam Ri! Top karlena!!!
haha…..Bibechna….tumhari iss comment ne mere face pe ek badi waali…..bohut badi waali smile le aayi…..thnx for liking this……..nxt episode zaroor padhna….a big teddy hug for u & luv u a lot sweety…….
OMG prinku di….I wait for this friends from a long this me…..finally u are back & I am very glad……concept is awesome as always….do update soon…..a big hug & lots of love to u.
Niyu yaar…..tune toh dil khush kardi apni iss comment se……..u just made my day……….acha laga jaan ka ki u liked this plot…..& haan agla episode padhna mat bhoolna………..a big waala jaadu ki jhappi & luv u dherrrrrrrrr saara………..
Hey priYanka dear..good to see u back with fab ff dear.. really missed ur articles.. coming to this ff… i am already fell in love with it.. i feel this story some similar to Raju Chacha track..sorry just a guess..but ur imaginations were damn cool yaar…
Lots of love to my dear bestie ??☺
Mitu yaar……sahi pakde ho…..main 3-4 episodes main reveal karnewaali thi iss baat ko, tumne pehle guess kardia….actually main thoda movie inspired plot isiliye leti hoon ki agar mere writings mein koi kasar, koi kami rehjae(jo ki 200% rehne waali hai)….mere frnds movie ko dekhkar, apna mann behlasake……& haan iss plot ka agla episode padhna mat bhoolna……luv u a lot shona………
Hahah dear.. behen main pakka kami chhod deti hu..par tumhari story main koi kami nahi ho sakhti.. Raju Chacha ki story hogi woh samajh ne ke liye bhi to achhi writing honi zaruri thi..or tumne likhna hi itna achha tha ke mujhe guess karme main time nahi laga.. to hats off to u for tgat..lots of love to u too dear
Mitu yaar, ab rulaogi kya pagli…..tune toh mujhe speechless kardi……thanku main bol nahi sakti & thnx ke siva aur kuch keh pana mere liye bhi possible nahi…….u r an amazing writer & getting compliments from u means a lot dear, sachii…….luv u a lot………..
How can i forget u dii??Of course i remember u.????
And,this one is fabulous.Keep writing dii.
haha……..I’m really really glad ki tumhe man yaad hoon…….& acha laga ye jankar ki u liked this plot……..nxt episode zaroor padhna……..luv u dherrrrrrrr saaraaaa sweetie………
Yes u should really continue it…. Its really different from the sdch track…. Update soon
thnk God…..I was really scared ki kaisi hogi….tum sab ko pasand ayega bhi ya nahi…..I’m glad u liked this……nxt episode zaroor padhna….luv u loads……..
Hey sorry sorry sorry sorry!!!!! Riu…I m a late commenter but I didnt expected ur article as ur exams r tomorrow as u said me!! Till now I have not read it I will read and comment now!!!
jaldi se padho & batao…continue karoon ya nahi…
hey Ri tune toh kammaal hi kar diya……………………..ek dam kammmal…….dhamaal …………….bemisaaal….sab se badi baaaat real story se related nahi hai………..hahahah…….maza aayega updates padne main…..aur yeh kiya baat hui tujhe kya puchhne ki zarrorat hai kiya ke conitnue karun ya nahi…..my jaan off-course conitnue yaaarrr…luv uuu dheerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr saaaraaa…ek dam in your style….
& Anee, tera ye comment toh ek dum superrrrrrrr se uparrrrrrr ka tha………dil khush kardiya tune………koshish karoongi ki koi galti se mistake na hojaye….hope ki tum sab ke ummeedon par khadi utroon……….luv u dherrrrrrr saara my sweetuuuuuuuuuu………& nxt episode zaroor padhna…..request nahi, order de rahi hoon……..haha…
Y not…
thnx…:)
superb ff………..please continue this ff………………..post soon……………
haha…..thnx Dhruti dear(DD) for commenting……I’m glad u liked it………nxt episode zaroor padhna……..luv u sweetieeeeee………
Riya……….! ??? missed you sooo sooo much!!! What a story yaar? I already live it ??? please continue when your exams are over ???
shukriya Ruwani dear……..ur comments bought a broad smile on my face……….luv u a lot sweetieeeeee & nxt episode zaroor padhna……..
My dear MRP!!!….hahaha!! I think u understood what I said! The story is very faboulas and mindblowing and many more…thank god u came back with a beautiful concept and a very unique story….kya kare humari riya toh jag se pyari aur sabse nyari!!! I m waiting for next part dear. .par exam ke baad hi post karna koi jaldi nahi hai!….love u loads dear….
haan CVR ji…..main samajh gayi ;P……& yaar kya line likha hai tune…..kasam se….dil toh garden garden ho gaya…….luv u shona……..
Hey priya I guessed u after ur friendship wali line …..of course air kaun ho skta h itte pyari lines k sath fendship PW……love uh and glad u r back …..now coming to episode a brand new priya style story….wowwwwwww……..I just loved it…storyline is so good and so excited to read further…….. Luv uh!!!! And vese tumne to veer ki dono behno k name h riya and priya but priya is mine fvt but u as riya an priya is my fvt!!!
haha………I’m on cloud9 after reading ur comments………finally……kisine toh mujhe yaad rakha hai……thnx sweety & ek baat bataaon…….mere saare ghar waale & rishtedaar mujhe mita bulate hain………actually riya naam mere frnds ne mujhe dia hai…..hamare class mein 2 Priyanka hai….so mera naam riya & priya hai meri frnd ka naam………anyways, bohut bak bak ho gaya…….thnx for liking it….& nxt episode padhna mat bhoolna………luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee……………
Intrsting epsd..
thnk u sweety for commenting……& I’m glad u liked this……
Hey prinku after reading ur frndship line my chotu sa bheja runned very fast.. Nd nikala ek mahaan conclusion none other than u… Hehe..So finally u came back with new ff.. Bole to bidoo ek dum jakkas mamu tu to ekdum cha rahela h.. dhakad.. Fadoo .. Ab to sirf itna kahungi ki lage raho my cuti frnd but after ur exam warna mummy ki achchi class milegi.. Janti ho naa..hehehe.. Lovv u so much .. Tc all the best for exams again.. Gud day/ night pta nahi kab dekhogi per m to yahi kahungi tumhe her din chann or her raat mile sukoon…. Bas sdch ko dekhna chod do toh hi ye possible ho skta h..hehehe.. Bye enough of my bakbak quotta for today.
Hey prinku main tumhe ek baat batana chahti thi u know what tum jankar surprised hogi ki priyanka naam se hamesha mera ek deep connection raha h.. My real sister meri badi di ka naam bhi priyanka h but nick name hum unhe babli bulate h pyaar se.. 2nd my school frnd bhi priyanka rah chuki..3rd my college frnd wo bhi priyanka.. Nd now u.. H naa kamaal ki baat itna connection h mera is naam se.. Lovv u nd finally bye pakka
haha……..tumhe toh bohut confusion ho raha hoga baat karte waqt…..matlab dimaag mein chemical locha types…..kis waqt, kis Priyanka ki baat karo…iss wajah se;)……..& yaar, same pinch….. I also just love to do bak bak all the time……luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee…….
& haan….next episode padhna mat bhoolna…..
haha……finally koi toh hai jisne iss nacheez ko yaad rakha……..shukriya….shukriya….shukriya….. kya kahoon ab, tune toh meri bolti band kardi…….a bada waala jaadu ki jhappi & luv u dherrrrr saara……..
Amazing
thnx for liking it sweety…..luv u loads…….
Superb… Amazing… Sanchi as a teacher and nanny omg… Such a unique concept… Will be interesting to read further.. Plz continue
thnk u sooooooooo much Jessi dear for liking this………nxt episode zaroor padhna……..luv u a lot…….