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Dil ki Manmaniyan, Khwahishon ki Udaariyaan (Episode 1)

Hi Guys! I am writing a fan fiction for the first time. As we all know that the current track of Udaariyaan has disappointed most of us viewers, I don’t know how the story would take a turn in the future, but I wish to reveal how the story unfolds in my imagination. Till now we have seen in the original series that the Virk family has planned a surprise for Fateh…. continued..

I hope you all will enjoy it…..

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The Virk family congratulates Fateh for his achievement.

Mahi: Veer ji, how did you like our surprise?

Fateh (nervously): It is nice.

Nimmo (taunts): Oh ho Mahi! Your Veer ji has no option but to like this surprise, after all it was his Voti’s plan.

Fateh looks at Tejo and she smilingly congratulates Fateh.

Khushbeer: I am very proud of you my son.

Gurpreet: Arre talk later, let my son have food. See Fateh what I have cooked for you.

As all of them turn towards the beautifully laid down Dining table, everyone is shocked to see Jasmin standing there with a basket. Fateh starts trembling out of fear, Amrik is perplexed to see her there, while Tejo is pleasantly surprised to witness her sister there.

Mahi angrily walks towards Jasmin, and is about to take her class for coming uninvited, when Gurpreet stops her.

Nimmo taunts Tejo and says: Someone was trying to show herself off as an ideal bahu, but see people aren’t even aware that whom their in-laws like or dislike.

Fateh fakes in front of all: Jasmin what are you doing here?

Jasmin ( moving towards Tejo): Tejo, I was going to Preeto’s house as I, Nimmi and Preeto are going for a picnic in the adjacent Pind. I was just passing by, when I heard some noise coming from the academy. Since it’s Sunday today, so I thought that the Academy must be closed, so are there any trespassers in the Academy, I just came to check… What are these decorations for?

Tejo: We all were congratulating Fateh for bringing the Academy in profits by his hardwork.

Jasmin: Sorry for coming here Tejo

Tejo: It’s ok Jasmin, you may go and enjoy your picnic now.

Jasmin glares at Fateh.

Mahi: Now that you know it all, do you need to be given a special card to leave this place?

Jasmin angrily looks at Mahi.

Amrik: Why don’t you join us for the party?

Jasmin: Why not? Let me also congratulate Fateh.

Gurpreet stops her.

Gurpreet: Even after spoiling the reputation of our family, you have the audacity to stand here and celebrate with us?

Khushbeer: Will you leave or …

Fateh: Bauji, let her stay, she is family after all, Tejo’s sister. It would be an insult to our in-laws if we make her leave.

Nimmo: But Fateh will her friends not feel insulted as she is ready to ditch their picnic plan for this party… Oh! I forgot Jasmin is an expert at ditching.

Jasmin: It’s ok Fateh..let me leave. Your aunt is correct.

Jasmin leaves the academy angrily and she does not forget to express her anger and jealousy to Fateh before leaving by giving him scary looks.

Fateh thanks god for saving him, while Tejo makes everyone sit and have lunch.

They all enjoy to the core, but it is only Fateh who is lost in Jasmin’s thought and is thinking that how should he lighten Jasmin’s mood.

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Next day, Fateh leaves early to meet Jasmin and Tejo prepares breakfast for the Virks.

Tejo serves Paneer Parantha to everyone and everyone praise her efforts for the previous day’s party. Dada ji blesses Tejo while she feels giddy. A concerned Gurpreet suggests her to take a day off, but she insists to go as she plans to meet Simran. Dadi ji asks her to call Fateh to drop her off. She obliges, but Fateh who has now cooled Jasmin’s anger and is busy spending time with the latter and cuts Tejo’s call. Tejo assumes that Fateh is busy with the new investor and insists to leave all by herself, but Amrik volunteers to drop her off. A sceptical Tejo gives in to everyone’s persuasion and decides to leave with Amrik.

While sitting in the car with Amrik, Tejo wonders that Fateh does not give her any time these days, but then consoles herself by saying that he is working hard for the Academy. Amrik interrupts her thoughts.

Amrik: So you like Accounting?

Tejo: No actually not. It’s just that Fateh refused to handle the accounts, so I had to handle, but you said that you love Accounting, then why don’t you handle them. I think you will enjoy it a lot.

Amrik: Yes Accounts is my favourite subject and enjoy doing it too but I feel that I won’t be able to handle such a big responsibility.

Tejo: Why not? You will definitely be able to. Just give it a try once, I am sure that you will be able to achieve great heights and will make everyone proud.

Amrik: Okay, I will try, but if anything goes wrong then…

Tejo: Nothing such will happen and even if it does, I know a bit of Accounts so, I will help you out. (Smiles)

Amrik: Fine, if you insist so much then I think I should go for it. Let me contact Buzo and he will bring the files from the Academy office.

Tejo: Oh I completely forgot to thank Buzo for helping us out yesterday for the party. He first left early and I did not even ask Fateh to thank him. Amrik, take me to his home and I will thank him right now.

Amrik turns the vehicle and they reach Buzo’s home, but it is locked…

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Any guesses why??

Share your comments and tell me how did you like the progress.

I have deliberately kept the plot slow to cover each and every important point and to create the effect of imagery in the eyes of the readers.

Thanks and stay tuned to read my next update…😊

Priyasi

Hi! I love story narration and imagining. Currently, I am writing a fan fiction on Udaariyaan with a parallel story.

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