First of all… am soo sorry. for late hope you like this part…??
Hhhhiiiii….. guys how are u all…? hope good.. n enjoy the previous part of DEIDEN.. SO now let’s see.. will sanlak able to find… swarag.. & also will SwaRag forgive sanlak.?? okk am not going to make it more suspese so let’s move to the story….
recap; Swaragini. n sanlak separate form.e-o…. n past… leap of 5.months..
#DILL_E_ISHQ_DILL_E_NAFRAT.
PART-18
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after breakfast… sanlak leave. to search for SR.. as they got a clue of them… so they rush.. n abhi n sonal wish them luck…
Abhi: bets of luck sanky…. n bring her back..
sonal: sir. bring ma’am as soon as possible.. am dying to face her so possessive look..(chuckle)
San: yup…
Lak: yes.. sonal.. I will try my best for convinced her…
they leave….. n seeped up their car.. as they can….
San: am so t tensed lucky.. I don’t knew.. what if they are not hear..??
Lak: yrr plllzz don’t broke my hope.. pllz sanky pppllllzz its being so long.. i … I. diet not show ragini.. n my Shona.. ( hopeful voice).
San: waahh. as if am dancing in joy.. right.. (frown her eyes)
after few hours they reach… @rampur.
@swarag house..
(as per previous part. rag was sad.. swara n Ap scold her.. n she was thinking past)
Sw: vabiii.. aaaahh again..??
rag: (fumbles) w..o…..e..r. Shona wo actually.. are U done let’s move.. n U knew..(pout) your junior. lucky wanna eat chat.. so after backing form market.. will u pllzz..??
Sw:(make a serious face. n then smile a bit) fine.. nauntanki.. come let’s move…
swarag took leave. Ap bless them..
Ap: samhal ke janna…
@market..
swaragini reach.. n they strat buying food.. fruits n some more important thinks..
Sw: vabii.. I need to buy your medicine so.. u collet grocery.. am just coming…
rag: (smile n nods) come soon.. U only have to pay.. I collecting..
Sw:(lol.. n pass some money to her) no need u completed your buying. I am just coming..n haa.. vabi.. don’t need to hold them.. stay like a good gril pllzz..
rag: fine.. u come..
As swara walking.. remembered as same this market once swara face her love’s truth.. she smile a bit.. n then again remembered for how.. swara slip form stairs n she loose her baby.. she become sad..n also think…
Sw monologue : if.. today U (baby) with me.. maybe we have fin most.. like your brother or sister playing with your mami form.inside.. anyway.. pllzz forgive your mamma.. coz she always love you… (she reach n buy rag’s. imp medicine…n walk to her)
sanlak were in sAME market… n they were siping tea’s after a whole tried trip n driving n also hell tried for searching…
Lak: sanskar I am just coming form there.. (point n corner n shows his lil finger..)
San:(nods n also walks another side) yup. am to check how much fuel we have….
Lak:hmm…
@market corner.
ragini was standing with the beg.. n looking for some fruits.. where laksh also walk the same place..n (as pic ) Lak walk form back of raginI.. n all sudden she felt restless.. n she looks hear n there.. but as she can face him.. he coree the place..
rag: why I feel your papa is hear..?? (touching her baby bump)
Lak: I can feel you are very close to me.. but where ragini…?? wht ever I said its in anger.. but U…..
@market petrol pump..
swara was crosingg the pump when she heard.. n call….
boy: di.. di.. didi… appki packet…(a boy was running form the madicel shop..)
Swara look n walk back.. when San too reach there..(as same pic) both of their backs mate.. but they cud. not.. aand as equal both feel restless… n monologue
san: where.. where..?? where are you..?? for only punishing me.. you left all need facilities what u need in this time.. u only wanna stay away form me.. punish me.. for not believing you.. then y u staking your life at risk..?? I knew I did wrong.. to you. But I realized late. that I love u.. n only you.. I had no old feelings for anyone.. I only need u. only. U. Shona.. why U leave me alone why….??
Sw: I knew.. U never come hear for search me.. Coz U never loved me.. If U ever loved me. U never disbelief me.. I hate you for that…. I hate you.. but chahe Jo bhe ho. mujhme ittni himmat nhi… ke mere aankho ke samne tum he appni zindegi me agge baddta Dekhu….
@market..
swara reach to ragini…(both was sad inside.. but… pretend to be normal)
rag: Shona let’s move.. I wanna eat chat…?? (puppy eyes)
Sw:(laugh) nautanki.. come Let’s move.. vabi. wwayse U knew.. My chotu will looks like my vai..
rag: how U knew..??
Sw:(wink n walk fast) coz U are missing him that much.. that ur pillow was pleading to my pilloow That your pillow got cold.. (n run)
rag:(wide eyes..n then smirk) aaaahhh.. Shona.. ohh MA…
Sw:(serious) kyaa hua. m??? (reach to her..n eag hold her ear) vabi. sorry.. Omg. ppllzz
swarag both laugh.. too… n while seeing them laughing.. some of two were also laughing… (r u guess..?? )
rag: now let’s move.. maa must be alone…
Sw:obvo vabi.. come let’s move.. Samhal ke…
as they leave…
someone fall in keens.. n cries… bitterly…
“ohhh.. god.. What I have done…?? such a big mistake… how can I don’t wannna understand that am hurting her this much.. that too.. (sobb) when she was already pregnant with my child… how.. aaaaaaahhh.. shame on me…. ” hitting the ground make his hand bleed.. n cry….
while stoping him “samhal k lucky… pplllzz calm down… sssssshhh…”
(yes.. I knew U all knew.. who’s they.. but still as SR was doing their own fun.. sanlak find them at last…)
Lak: how… sanky…?? how..?? I don’t have any courage to face her… what am going to say her Man…?? how..??
San:(weak too.. see his wife fake happiness while helping her SIL… ) ppllllzz calm down.. you to.. truely innocent.. but swara.. I to can’t face her.. till how much I want it… so better…
Lak:(looks at hI’m. in confusion) better.???
San:(shook head.. n make him stand) nothing.. get up man.. we need too bring them back.. as soon as possible n need proper care of them..
Lak:(hold his shoulder n walk) haa. come..??
San: no…. not today… tomorrow morning. lucky tomorrow is rag’s (hesitant to speak) wo.. Sw ki dairy se pata challa. ke.. k..
Lak: boll bhe..
San: rag’s ka birthday hai.. so she can be soft.. so pllzz.. for me.. plllzz..
Lak:(thinks n happy) haa.. U knew she always had a dream to celebrated her b’day in Disney princess.. so I will full fill her this dream… yes..
San: hmm. so better.. we need to preparation. stay calm. am sure. maa will also hear…
all:yup..
next part : Full on Raglak patch up.. n a letter form sanskar to swara….
n guys.. am thinking to write an. another story on my Swasan & my raglak so what say…
concept in short “angels brings good In davils” not as usual.. n all lil bit different so should I upload the prologue…?? if I get all of your comments then I will write…?? what say..??
20 Comments
Yes u=yes and please update this regularly.
Amazing
And do write……
Nice epi….plz unite swasan also na
Amazing…. Do update soon…
U really need to improve ur English
I really can’t understand some sentences
The storyline Is really poor
U need to develop yourself and your grammar
Don’t u know the spelling of devil
U have written facility
And what do you mean by Vai and vabi
And seeped up the car
I diet not show ragini ….And my swara
U must go for spoken English course
*u have written it davil
? thanks
Wow amazing. Bt sad 4 swara
It’s amazing dear…pls add some nok jhoks of raglak in next episode dear…bcs laksh used such harsh words to raginii…plss… Update d next part soonn
If you are asking me about my english.. then let me told you am not so much illiterate… That am a worthless to write any ff or story. n If you are saying few mistake tgats seriously its a grammarTical mistake hope you will understand thanks
Nyc
finally you update it..awesome part…
Thanks mica…. actually i did not get enough time to write.. so hope you will understan?
Awesome dear
awesome episode riti di the episode was wonderful and yes the new story seems interesting do post it also
Awesome
Awesome
Nice
Nice dear ?