Hai guys u r friend riya is back and yah sorry 4 my stupidty guys only u r comment make me realise that how much u all r important 4 me, luv u all from the core of my heart and yah sorry 4 make u wait this much, and yah i forget to tell u that this fanfic is the incarnation of SWARAGINI WHO WILL LOVE OR REVENGE lol so it’s better that u guys don’t bother about pairs so let’s enjoy it’s intro-
LOCATION- LONDON
A big mansion is shown ,” me and my maheshwari” is written on the main door , a guy was standing in the balcouny of his room with a picture on his hand ,he was talking to that picture-
GUY- do u know how much i am missing u now ,everywhere dear everywhere only and only u r present ,i know it has been 3 yrs of our separation but still u reside in my heart ,u r present in my soul,and in my memories………………………
Then suddenly his cellphone rang-
GUY- now what happen why r u calling me ?
CALLER- sir it’s emergency that’s why ……………………….
GUY- just shut up !!!!don’t u remember that this day is how much important in my life ?? i am on leave handle it …………………
CALLER- but sir……………………
With this he cut the call –
GUY(looking at the picture)- nothing is important than u ,u r my life, my love ,my everything but why u leave me like this ? why ???
Then screen stops on his face-
so let me introduce this guy,
NAME- SANSKAR MAHESWARI
AGE-28 YRS
NATURE- A VERY RUDE ,RUTHLESS BIG BUSSINESS MAN ,HIS PAST IS BITTER AND BECAUSE OF THAT NOW HE DOESN’T BELIEVE IN LOVE,CARE,RESPECT AND ALL THAT,HATES PEOPLE WHO ONLY THINK ABOUT OTHER , INNOCENT TYPE I MEAN
so guys this was the intro of our first male protagonist but wait dear there is someone also guss who ?? yup u ri8 his brother but where he is ??
LOCATION- KOLKATA,INDIA
Screen moves towards a royal white bunglow ,it is looking like a haveli ,typical marwari haveli like there is big big doors ,big window and all that ,here a lady is doing arti (worship of god) and a middle aged man is behind her and he is also praying infront of idol with closed eyes then after when all this done-
MAN- AP where is u r spoil brat son ?
Then lady turns ,she is looking very pretty in green marwari saree with heavy jewellary and all that –
AP- he is coming ji ! just relax
DP- relax ? huh ! when he is in the house no one can relax
AP(chukkles)- ohk ohk ! i understand now u go and have u r breakfast ,i am going upstair to call him , rammu kaka plz serve the breakfast !!!!!!!!!!!
Then she enter a room and this room is full of posters and that too were of hollwood heros the she raised her voice-
AP- laksh where r u ?
Then she notice someone sleeping on the bed covering the whole body with blanket then she goes near it-
AP- laksh get up beta ! it’ already late ,u r dad is waiting 4 u !! get up fast !!!!!!
But to her surprise there was no response-
AP- arrey why r u not saying anything ,i think this boy will not get up that easily i have to do something !!
Then she took a jar of water and split all the water over the bed but to her surprised again no response-
AP- what happen ? why he is not responding ohh i think he has became that much lazy that is not getting the feeling of wetness ,oh god this will never change !!!!!
She was about to uncover the blanket but then someone scream from behind she also scream in fair
AP- aaaahhhh !!!!
Then she turn and saw a guy is standing with a deep simile on his face-
AP- badmash u sacred me !!! who do this with her own mother ??
GUY- ma u r too cute so today i thought to trouble u !! how was it ??
AP- laksh !!!!!
GUY- what ma ???
Then the screen stops on guy’s cute face-
NAME- LAKSH MAHESWARI
AGE-26 YRS
WORK- NOTHING DUDE HE ONLY LOVES TO FLIRT WITH GIRLS
NATURE- MOSTLY ROMANTIC ALL THE TIME, HOBBY OF FLIRTING ,HE ALSO NOT BELIEVE IN LOVE SPECIALLY TRUE WALA LOVE ,HE THINKS LOVE ONLY HAPPENS IN FILM AND NOVELS AND IN REAL LIFE THERE IS NOTHING LIKE THAT ,HE LOVES HOT AND MODERN GALS ,HATE BHENJI TYPE OF GIRLS ,A COOL DUDE OF HIS GANG , HE LOVES HIS IMAGE AND CAN DO ANYTHING 4 THIS.
so guys these were the intro of boys but wait where is girls haan ? is this story is without girls ?? no no nothing like that so let’s do the intro of our first female protagonist-
A girl is standing in front of natraj idol ,we can see her back only ,she is wearing typical blue long anarkali with open hair ,then suddenly song start playing in BG-
MANWA LAGE …..O MANWA LAGE
LAAGE RE SANWARE(then she turn her beautiful eyes r shown )
LAAGE RE SANWARE
LE TERA HUA JIYA ,JIYA KA,JIYA KA YE GAAN RE(then her pink lips r shown and then her beautiful simile)
MANWA LAAGE …O MANWA LAAGE
LAAGE RE SANWARE (Then her whole face is shown ,she is looking like an angel )
LAAGE RE SANWARE
LE KHELA MAIN JIYA KA,JIYA KA ,JIYA KA
HAI DAAV RE……………………(she was spinning around at a point with raising her hand )
MUSAFIR HOON MEIN DOOR KA
DEEWANA HOON MEIN DHOOP KA
MUJHE NA BHAAYE RE BHAYE
RE BHAYE RE CHAAN RE(she was doing a step and was indicating chaan from her hand )
MANWA LAAGE …..O MANWA LAAGE
LAAGE RE SANWARE (now she was doing a classical move )
LAAGE RE SANWARE
LE TERA HUA JIYA KA,JIYA KA ,JIYA KA YE GAAN RE(now again she was spinning fastly )
Then she stops ,her hand were raised and was breathing heavily————
screen stops at her face-
NAME-RAGINI GADODIA
AGE- 24 YRS
NATURE- LOVABLE ,KIND HEARTED,LOVES HER FAMILY A LOT SPEICALLY HER SMALL SISTER,NEVER THINKS ABOUT HERSELF,READY TO SACRIFICE HER HAPPINESS 4 OTHER
then a girl enter where ragini was dancing ,slowly slowly she came forward and closed ragini’s eyes from behind-
GIRL- guess who am i ??
RAGINI(recognised but wants to tease her)- who r u ?? haan
GIRL- what ? u don’t know me ?
RAGINI- nope who r u ??
GIRL- ohk go now i will not talk to u
With this she turn herself in fake anger then ragini hug her from behind-
RAGINI- awww meri chutki naraz ho gayi ??
GIRL- di plz……….
Then ragini turn her toward herself ,screen stops on her angry face-
NAME- SWARA GADODIA
AGE- 23 YRS
NATURE-BOLD AND DARING WITH MODERN LOOKS ,LOVES HER BIG SIS A LOT ,SHE CAN’T LET ANYONE TO SCOLD HER SISTER EVEN THEIR PARENTS ALSO HOWEVER IT HAPPENS LESS AS ALWAYS SHE IS THEIR 4 THEIR SCOLDING BECAUSE OF HER NAUGHTY NATURE THEN-
RAGINI- aww what happen i was joking na
SWARA- no u hurt me today
RAGINI(next to cry)- plz forgive u r di…………
SWARA-di i was also joking di u r too cute to handle and yah this not possible that this swara will ever angry on her di ………………….
RAGINI- yah becuse we r soul sister we r ……………..
both say in unison- sawragini……………….
Then they both giggle and hug each other tightly
so guys how was it don’t forget to comment and yah keep similing and stay healthy bye see u ///////////////////////////
60 Comments
hope couples are swasan …
hope so…….
Superb
thanx swati
Nyc strtng??????
thanx dear
Nice intro Riya
thanx noora
ragini intro is cool
thanx lovely
nice
thanx dear
Nice starting hope its ragsan and swalak waiting for the couples
thanx a lot dear
Very nice start… Hope you give equal importance to both the pairs… Thanks for the update… Please continue
thanx siso
Ragsan pls tis time.ur pyar tum Na kya kiya on raglak is awesome. So this time pls make ragsan
thanx preethi hope so dear…………………
Superb!!!!!
thanx meenu
Nice intro.Plz continue.
thanx abdul
Superb intro
thanx dhara
Nice!!can u reveal the pairs plz. I hope it’s ragsan
first ofn all thanks and it will soon reveal in few episode hope u understand
Already u posted it..u said this iss a love triangle bw ragsanlak
aish but that was promo and it is a intro part dear
nice hope its raglak
thanx krystal wait dear…………….
Nice
thanx ammy
Intro is nice dear..bt i am little confused..as u said in promo that it’s mainly on ragsanlak nd swara will enter after many episodes..sorry if i hurt you..i am just confused..otherwise it’s awsm
first of all thanx rakhi and yah u r ri8 dear but i add swara now because she will play a major role to add spice in the story !!!!
Awsm epi…update ur other ffs too…
hanx kriya they r on the way dear
Great
thanx divya
Chutki? She should call her shona choti something else na 🙁 … Well I love the introduction and i see you described them just like when the show was first aired and your cover pic also is about it.. Thats lovely .. Yaad aa gayi swalak ki but i wont bother you about the jodi.. Hahaha I am tired of it already lol.. Havea nice day
in this ff ragini will called shona chutki lol and thanx a lot sis 4 lovely response
Hey… its good but why u stop ur swaragini who will win love or revenge ff… but plzz make it ragsan…
thanx priya i will consider u demand
Awesome…can’t wait
thanx halima
awsm intro
interesting
thanx kalai
it was awesome really nice continue dear
thanxa lot anamica
Riya I dono hw u managing these many ff…loved intro part itz diff frm others…since itz ur ff I don’t need to wry abt t pairs…I knw u ill choose which I lve
thanx a lot priya 4 u r lovely comment luv u a lot sis
Awsm ragsan plzzzzzz
thanx megha let’s what happen !!!!!!!!!!!
swasan n raglak…..plz
thanx apurva 4 commenting let’s see happen !!!!
Romba nallariku
Oh u restarted it. I was eagerly awaiting for this. But why did you quit original one, it was also going well.
thanx amna there were some reasons sis
Hey Riya! Another one?Wow! Am looking fwd towards it?
thanx ramya