hello guys welcome back to twinj land
i am really sorry that this time i can’t put emojis sorry guys
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RECAP-we saw twinj confrontation..kunj donating blood..and twinkle saying kunj to get away
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NEXT MORNING
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twinkle is now at hospital just inspector arrives…..
ins-we r really sorry mrs.twinkle now we fond that Mishra is the real culprit so now you are free we are sorry for anyproblem that u faced
t-no problem but i didn’t won the competition…ha..its ok leave next time i will surely win
ins-yes mrs.sarna
twinkle in high pitch-NO I AM NOT MRS. SARNA ..I AM TWINKLE TANEJA
ins-but mam mr.kunj..
t-that man is no one to me you can leave
ins-sure..
and they leave tears roll from her eyes( naino ki mat maniyo ji plays)
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twinkle gets discharge while she is going home in her car traffic is there so she stops car later when she starts the car kunj come in front…twinkle gets out in full anger(she is wearing the black dress which uv gave her in TEI when kunj needed blood & kunj is wearing his black suit which he wore in twinj’s date after marriage when manohar gets in comma)and starts to talk ..she talked too much but kunj just stared her (muskurane ki wajah plays) she snaped her fingers in front of him and then he get to senses
T-what?
kunj forwards her hand ..twinkle turns otherside..
K-20 minutes in evening
T-NO
K-for YOUR kunj
twinkle gets teary eyed
T-u can’t do anything in 20 mins
K-just 20 minutes
twinkle nods
K-8 pm
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at night
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TWINKLE REACHES kunj is standing then he bows down an forwards his hand..twinkle hold …kunj blows whistle and a horse carriage with white horse came..he makes her sit on it…the carriage starts..(pyar hua iqrar hua plays{plzz read while listeninig})..they reaches a hotel..
.kunj oders something it comes on just the moment..they eat ..
then they get up and dance on road…while dancing they reach an icecream shop…
kunj takes out many icecreams twinkle picks one ..they eat while moving..then they reach at a park there children had made twinkle’s pic from various pics and join it
(like in Rab ne bana di jori)then they go out then twinkle saw that on the whole way red carpet is there..they walk and at side children throw flower petals on them..then a boy comes and gives her a teddy..she takes..then a girl comes and gives heart baloona..she take..then a girl comes and give bouquet..she takes..like this they move..
then kunj calls carriage..it comes..they sit and move..they reaches on a hill ..they get down ..walk for a while &
takes a cable car they sit and it start…
in the cable car when twinkle look down she saw that whole towns lights are on ..just then kunj calls someone and the lights get on ehich forms an I LOVE YOU just then paper lanters flew up and till then they reach on ground.
..then he makes twinkle sit on carriage which drops her to her home.
K POV-tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho ..bahut pyar,lekin kahogi nahi..tadapogi mere bina par jataogi nahi..merepas aana chahti ho ,seene se lagake rona chahti ho,dil me rehna chahti ho ..lekin rahogi nahi..lekin mai tumhari tarah nahi hu..mai reh hi nahi sakta ye kahe bina ki mujhe tumse ishq hai(you also love me very much,but you won’t say that..you’ll wriggle without me but you won’t show that ..you want to come to me..you want to hug me and cry,you want to stay in my heart but you will not stay..but i am not like you ..i cant live without saying that i love you..
T POV-kunj ..mai tumhare bina din raat tadapti hoo..tumhare paas ana chahti hoo..tumhe seene se lagakar rona bhi chahti hu par nahi kAR sakti mai..nahi jata sakti ..tumhe bar bar kho chuki hu mai ..tumhari jab bhi mujhe aadat ho jaati hai tab tum mujhse door chale jate ho…mujhe chod do kunj warna mujhe tumse ishq ho jayega PHIR SE…(KUNJ WITHOUT YOU I WRIGGLE EVERY DAY AND NIGHT…I WANT TO COME TO YOU..WANT TO HUG YOU AND CRY..BUT I CANT DO..I CANT SAY THAT..I HAVE LOSED YOU MANY TIMES…WHENEVER I GOT your HABIT..I LOSED YOU…LEAVE ME KUNJ OR ELSE I WILL FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU…ONCE AGAIN}and she cries
episode ends on their faces
precape-kunj and twinkle masti in twinkle’s office
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I AM OVER THE MOON,JUMPING FOR JOY AND ON CLOUD NINE BECAUSE I GOT 33 COMENTS(1 is mine so 33)
a very big thank to everyone who reads and comments on my ff-i really appericiate it,and i am looking forward to write thenext episode soon…
a whole heartedy thanks to
ZARMEEN-thanks for commenting and i have wrote his no if you had seen but i am telling again it is 9026101799 (sorry guys i am not on FB)and i am really really sorry i can’t give u my no. as i don’t have phone(i am only 12..and u know in india its not possible ) i am using my mom’s phone and she will not alow me
KRYSTAL-thnx 4 answering no i am not on FB and i am trying my best
RASHI-thnx di i will try to keep tashan as much as i can ..next episode would be tashan wala..I GOT his no. from TU in one of the ffs
KEERTHANA-thnx di for comment i will try
FATARAJO-thnx and sorry that this time i don’t use emojis
SAM-thanks di
MANNAT-yes di twinkle’s anger will last few more episodes
RIA-thnx di and surely kunj is a hero wo apni dilwali ko mana hi lega
JAYA-thnx dii i had written his no.
SWEETIE-hii i am fine dii just becoz of your comments..oh so u r not from france well its ok
JASMIN-ok sorry di i misunderstood but today i read it and also commented
MAHI-thnx di for comment
SAYEEDA-anything for my sis
AMY-oh u r from malaysia thnx 4 commenting
JANVI-thnx 4 commenting plzz comment this time also
FIONA-oh so u r living near me ha btw thnx for comment
SHATAKSHI-thnx di and u answered in my style LOL..
LAMA-thnx di
PANCHI-finally someone from rajasthan but u also live in odisha uff its ok thnx
MITALI-thnx dii
SRIJA-so u r bengali ..interesting ..actually i like bengal and i am also learning bengali so ধন্যবাদ (dhanyabad)বোন(bona) {sorry if i am wrong }
ROMAISAH-THANK YOU
RACHNA-HELLO Dii you are near my age..lol
so i got many friends even from outside india but all are elder to me but its ok friendship..love..and enemity does not care of age..
sorry for short episode as this one was about their date
bye
27 Comments
Loved it bhabika…u nailed it…lovd u loads…muahh!!
bhavika fantastic epi dear and mob no is not compulsory by the way post the next epi sooon….
oihoi sista… m really proud of u bhavika…. i love ur ff nd u
Wow bhavika back to back three superb episodes… Loved it yaar…u made my evening…luv u??
OMG…..I wonder at the age of just 12 how u can write so well ! u r really blessed with such a good talent ; it’s incredible.
I lived the date part and each line of both POV’s ….waiting for d next…
Nice epi?
It was amazing.
Hey bhavika I want to tell uh that I love uh n nt only me my sissies n bros too luv uh they say that uh should write a novel yaar
Nice episode?
i am leaving near u
it was superbbbbbbbbbb epi
I am commenting for the first tym for ur ff…. but I used to read ur ff daily…. between r u sure that its sid’s no: ?
Btw thanks! Plz do reply hw u got sid’s no: ! Nd ur ff is superb !!♡♡
Awesome episode……I wish koi mere liye bhi aise hi date plan kare lol…..but seriously Out standing episode
Awesome…. Waiting for the next….
Wooooooowwww ……. awesome one ……loved it …… wtng fr d nxt epi …..
U r too sweet. I love u. N your ff is just awesome amazing fabulous
Hi Bhavika! I loved today’s episode yet again! Loving your ff more and more each day! Please add me on FB if you are on it too. My full name is Jayadarshini. Email: [email protected]. Cheers 🙂
amazing..
Nice epi….?????? u r such a fabulous writer….post next one asap
Loved it so much yaar do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz
epi was ossum
but every where u coment u write to read your ff
this irritates all but they can’t say because they don’t want to hurt u and i also don’t want but
it show stupidnee and childness
please think over it
sorry ! if u are hearted
agree with truth aware
and one more thing u give comments yourself too i saw it many times
are u having brains or not
plese stop these childish acts
sorry to hurt u
but sach kadva hota hai
hope u are not very disappointed 🙂 🙂
Awsm.. Waiting for next ..
Date is just wowww
again an awesome & amazing update ??
well u wrote correct in bengali
keep it up u r truly an amazing writer sis????
Awesome I am just 14
Hey bhavika I need to know dat 9026101799 is kunj’s no. Or not.pls reply any other ff
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Awesome one bhavika really I m sorry 4 being late but I say u r a great writer….thanks for this fab ff…update soon