Hii guys back with another part of my os… thanx for commenting on first part.. so without wasting time here we go….
It was beautiful sunny morning… kanchi was sleeping and snoring little..
Kabir enters the room and looked at his little sleeping disaster lovingly…
He finally wake her up and they started their usual morning work I. e imicking sanchi
‘Both started together “hey ganapati bappa, meri family ko khush rakho. . blah blah blah and a special request please kanchi school me ko hungama na kare” and they stared laughing….
Sanchi saw their antics and smiles to herself but pretends to be angry..
“Kabir, kanchi what’s going on? ” sanchi faked anger..
Kabir look at kanchi signalling her not to say anything and to his surprise she didn’t uttered single word..
“Thank god” he sighed..
” and ur punishment is to drop kanchi school and pick her after school ends” sanchi underlined.. kabir nodded..
“Now u will know bacchu, what disaster ur daughter is!!! ” thought sanchi…
Scene shift to breakfast table,
Trio were having breakfast..
Kabir was staring at sanchi who was looking breathtaking in her attire. Sanchi too responded.
kanchi was eating very slowly and acted like seriously thanking something
Kabir noticed it and ask her
” why my baccha is so much silent today? ”
” I m thinking about something” kanchi responded .
” really? ” kabir asked raising his eyebrows..
” huh, I serious about my career now” kanchi replied seriously..
Sanchi mouth turned into perfect ‘O’ shape listening to her and she ask kanchi
“What?? Career?? At this age?? “(note. Kanchi is only 5 years old)
“But why beat??? “Asked kabir…
“Becoz agar ap log aishe hi ek dusre ko stare karte rahoge hospital me to hum log jaldi bankrupt ho jayenge .thats why i m thinking about my career” she pointed out
Kabir coughed at her statement…
“I want to be actor “says kanchi in serious tone
“Why ?why actor? U should be a doctor like me and ur papa” sanchi just started teasing her.
” no kanchi ,if u want to be actor,then do as ur heart says..dont listen to ur mumma ” kabir said to kanchi…
“Bas dont create any problem for me” he completed his sentence rembering about yesterdays “Rajma chaval’ drama…
Kanchi show him tounge and say
“Aapko pareshan karna mera birth right hai aur main wo paa kar rahungi.. and ek hi to papa he mere..and if still have problem with it then ,,
She look at sanchi and say
“Then mumma,change my papa”
Kabir coughed hard at her statement and sanchi burst out into laughter.. kabir gave her angry glare…
Place: kanchi’s school
Time: dangerous for kabir
Scene : kabir talking to kanchi’s principle
Kanchi whisphering to kabir ” papa tell her how good actor i m . And force her to let me participate in school play ”
Kabir was just silent becoz he knew kanchi is going to create some biggest for him blunder now..
Princi: so mr kapoor i have listened that u are very dedicated doctor.. u r very serious about ur duties and u r very responsible Blah blah .. she continued with het praising..
Kanchi couldnt take it anymore and she said to hetself
“princi chudail kahiki, mere papa ko line mar rahi hai. Buddhi ghodi aur laal lagam ”
Kabir listened her and widen his eyes ..but luckily princi didnt heard it ..
“Bach gaya” he sighed in some relief unknowing the fact that his disaster daughter was all set to create new blunders.
Princi turns to kanchi
“So miss kanchi kapoor,do u know acting?”
“Yes mam,acting to mujhme koot koot ke bhari hai. Meri to blood me hi acting he.mere paoa bhi bohot acche actor hai” she said with proud..
Kabir looked at her ansmd sensed that sonething is going to happen now.. “kabir beta ,bhagane k liye taiyaar ho ja” he thought to himself..
Princi: really? Ur papa is actor too??
Kanchi: yes .i will show u
Kabir sat their helplessly unable to stop his disaster
Kanchi stood up and hold her stomoch with both her hands ,bent down little and start acting
“Aaah,aaaah ,aaaaaah,aaaaaaaah,aaaaaaaah,sanchi ,sanchi pet me bohot dard ho raha hai..its hurting very much..aaj hospital me nai jaunga..ouch ouch ”
Kabir quickly grabbed her by her waist and run out of princi cabin….
Scene changes
Kabir come to pick up kanchi..
He saw her sitting on the bench lowering her gaze toward the ground.
He walked upto her and saw her sad face and .he sit next to her and asked her why she was sad ..
“That motu akshay fought with me” kanchi said in very low tone and pouting at same time ..
“Then why u didnt fight back?” He asked her while placing her on his lap”
“U said na voilence is not good thing” she asked him confusingly.
“Are baby, fighting back is not violence..if someone slap u without any reason ,then slap him twice” he said cheerfully.
“U mean double badla(revenge)” she asked exitingly..
“By the way what he did?” He asked curiously
“He said my hairs are too long and he pulled my hairs and my 1 hair broke “she said sadly…
“WHAT?ur r sad just because of 1 hair?” He asked in disbelief..
“Papa dont use much of ur tounge .. u r not a girl na,hence u dont know value of one hair ,EK Kaale Baal Ki Kimat Tum kya Jaano kabir Baboo” she said dramatically
She ran inside school where motu akshay was playing with frnds ..
DHADAM DHUDUM DHADAM
Kabir saw akshay coming out of school gate holding his two teeth in his hand and
Kanchi came running to him with winning smile..
” kanchu,what u did ?” He asked worrying about her “dushman”
” i just followed whatvu said papa. Double badla..he thought my hairs are are long so he broke my 1 hair,and i thought his teeths are too long so i broke his two teeths .DOUBLE BADLA ” SHE replied …
“U know what ? My sanchi is right.. aaj se main bhi uske saath pray kia karunga subah me” he said ..
“Hey ganapati bappa,ye kaisa papa dia he mujhe aapne..joru ka gulaam” kanchi says looking at the sky..
“And be ready to meet buddhi chudail tommorow ” she commanded to him…
Kabir stood up from bench and turn to get deadly glares from principal…
“Bhaago” he said loudly and both father daughter run with usain bolt’s speed…
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So ,here it was!!! Advance sorry if it was boring……. luv u ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
17 Comments
Omg that was too good!!! I was laughing the entire time. The principal scenes were awesome but honestly I feel like Kanchi should’ve been older!! But overall this was beyond amazing
OMG it was too funny.Amazing mindblowing. I can’t control my laughter. Kanchi is really a disaster. Come back with another one OS.
Yaashi… i am commenting on ur lost for the first tym… (just to meantion)
And i became ur fan dear…u r awsm yaar..
It was hillarious OS i ever read.. i was laughing like crazy.. i feel lucky that i have read ur article. And same time having pity on Kabir & Sanchi that..they have such a naughty disaster as their daughter ??? … hope in future track of serial..they get married and have such a cute daughter.
OMG this was sooooo cute that I am craving for part 3.
“princi chudail kahiki, mere papa ko line mar rahi hai. Buddhi ghodi aur laal lagam ”
“Aaah,aaaah ,aaaaaah,aaaaaaaah,aaaaaaaah,sanchi ,sanchi pet me bohot dard ho raha hai..its hurting very much..aaj hospital me nai jaunga..ouch ouch ”
These are my favourite scenes. Loved them.
Plz come up with part 3
I was laughing from the beginning nd laughing too while writing this comment. ???????????????????????
This was amazing superb awesome mindblowing Gr8 jhakaas mast blah blah blah blah. I’m speechless dear.
It was like “kaanchi rocked nd kabir shocked ”
Now I want 3rd part also. Pls pls pls continue.
wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and funny I was laughing and luv u loads
Hey yashi yaar kamaal kar diya tumne m to kahti hun ki puri kitaab likh dalo baap beti k uper superb m itna kabhi kisi os pe nahi hassi hun jitna tumhare os pe seriously kanchi real me hi disaster h agar aisa seriel me dikhayenge to aag laga de outstanding nd mujhe to double badla wali baat sabse achchi lagi ek kale baal ki kimat tum kya jano kabir babu and she broke two teeth of her dushman and princi kanchi kabir convo all r fab or kya kahun aag laga di tumne dear …bas karo mera has has kar bura haal h ot likh kar bhi ab apni bakwas band krti hun post nxt part of it asap sweetie
Yr is story ko koi rashmi mam to pahucha do….plzzzz an muje yhi story chiye ki kabir-sanchi ki shadi ho jaye air unki daughter aisi ho…..omg…ROFL……..hahahahahahha……ur u r mind blowing …..mtlb sach me dil Khush or ditta!!!
Fantastic episode
I couldn’t srop laughing…. Amazing episode
omg Yaashi……..u left me speechless………koi ek line ho to batau………..poori ki poori episode is full of hilarious lines………………main toh has haske lott pott ho rahi thi……………I just want to get inside ur plot & pull the cheeks of kanchi……….now u can get how much I liked ur plot……..luv u a lot yaar……..
Omg speechless I am really speechless how can u write such beautifully ! I Ann in love wd ur writings pls provide third part of this os pls ?
it was just awesome , funny(in good way), mind blowing, super duper i was laugh from starting to till when i was write comment .
how can you write such good and comedy lines ,can you please continue this os and update next part of your os if you can please.
??? oh my god Yaashi ??? this was the most funniest os/epi or anything I ever read ??? I just love this kid yaar!!! And her dialogues!!! This is fantabulous dear please give us another part ??? love you so much ???
omg omg omg…..
Great yaar I just loved it BT I have one question did u got a scene from their movie…
Sorry for commenting late… But this was beyond amazing dear… Loved it.. Kanchii is sho naughty but hell cute???? … Keep going yaar… It’s really fabulous