Hello everyone! This is mars back with sequel of swasan os. Thank you soooo much for your wonderful response.
Hope so u will like it.
DISTRACTION(swasan os)Sequel
AFTER 8 YEARS:
Delhi:
Multinational company:
In a cabin a man is standing who is manager of the company informing something to a young girl infront of him.
Manager:So miss swara gododia u r transferred to the Bangalore branch of our company. I hope u don’t have any problem.
Swara:no sir.
Manager (giving): take it,this is your transfer letter.
Swara(took the letter):thank you sir.
Swara left the cabin and met her colleagues bcoz she won’t be coming here again due to transfer.
Then she went to her flat where she is living alone and packed her luggage and took the flight to Bangalore.
Swara gododia, working as software engineer in multinational company in Delhi from last two years. She lives in Delhi alone in the flat provided by company whereas shekar and shomi lives in Kolkata .Her life is very simple and have only one motive to work sincerely. Love had completely vanished from her life after the exit of sanskar.she is back to that serious swara who is workaholic.The guilt still persists in her after long 8 years also for betraying sanskar.She really want to meet him so that she can apologize for her mistake.Now she is moving to Bangalore.let’s see what happen in her life.
Bangalore:
Evening:
Two young handsome man are sitting in balcony of a flat enjoying the surrounding.
Laksh:sanskar I had listened that a new software engineer is coming in our company and that flat(pointed to flat in front) is provided to her by company.
Sanskar:yea I had also listened then what can we do.
Laksh:I was saying bcoz if she will be beautiful then we can clearly see her from here.
Sanskar:u again started dreaming about girls have some shame u have girlfriend.
Laksh:no no I m well settled with my sweetheart. I was talking about u.
Sanskar:stop it laksh.how many times I told u that i had no interest in all this.
Laksh(joining his hands): ok sorry it was my mistake to suggest you.u live alone and no need to look at that new girl even if she will be beautiful(winks).
Sanskar signed.
Laksh: ok bye I m going.
Sanskar:bye
Laksh went to his flat which is beside Sanskar’s flat.
Sanskar maheshwari,software engineer working in multinational company in Bangalore from last two and half years.he lives alone in Bangalore whereas ram and sujata lives in kolkata.He is very handsome but still never look at any girl bcoz he can never think of giving his swara’s place to anyone. Why swara left him all of sudden was still a mystery for him.
He don’t want to know anything nor interrogate Swara just want to see her once how she is looking now.
His heart always want to meet her and engulf her in his embrace but his mind warns him not to think all this as it will only hurt him.
Next morning(Sunday)
Swara entered in her new flat.she looked around and saw it was well flourished house with all basic amenities.she kept her luggage and after fresh up she slept.
After waking up she arranged her material in house.
Evening:
Sanskar came to his balcony with a cup of coffee and he saw a girl standing in front flat showing her back.
For a second he thought she is swara
Sanskar (whisper): swara
But then he brushed his thoughts thinking she can’t be here.Swara went inside and Sanskar missed the chance to see her face.
Sanskar remembered her moments with swara.His eyes got filled with tears.soon he recovered himself and went inside .
Morning(Monday):
Multinational company:
Swara entered inside the office.It was very tall building.she was bit nervous to meet new people.she was lost in thought and didn’t notice when she collided with someone.Her file fell down and she bend to pick it up and said
Swara: I m really sorry
Sanskar: its ok even I was in hurry.
Listening to each other voice they looked at each other.Their eyes met reminiscencing their past ,that night of confession, break up in park,last meeting at farewell.Their trance was broken by some voice
Laksh: sanskar what r u doing here. Sir had called u in his cabin.
Sanskar:yes I m coming.
Saying this sanskar left without looking at swara.
Swara’s eyes got filled with tears with just one thought that
Swara(mumble): he forgot me.
Later she went to the cabin where she was called.
Manager’s Cabin:
Sanskar knocked and entered inside where a man in late 30’s was sitting.
Manager: come Sanskar actually I called u to inform that a new software engineer is coming from our Delhi branch and I want u to guide her and make her know about her all work.
I don’t think u would have any problem.
Sanskar: no problem sir I will help her.
Manager: ok fine I will call her.
Manager rings the bell and then there was knock on the door.
Manager: come in.
Swara entered inside the cabin and saw sanskar already standing there but she didn’t reacted.
Manager: meet her sanskar, she is swara gododia.
Listening the name sanskar looked at her.
Manager: u have to guide her.she is very talented so I hope she will adjust here quickly.Swara he is Sanskar maheshwari who is one of the most trustworthy employee of our company.He will only make u aware about your work
Swara nodded.
Manager: any problem u can contact with me.now any queries?
Swasan: no sir.
Manager: ok
Swasan left the cabin.
Swara’s desk is beside Sanskar.Both came near their tables.
Sanskar: so swara right?
Swara looked at him as if he really don’t know her name but still she nodded.
Sanskar: come I will explain you your work.
Swara sits on chair beside him.
She was thinking that he really forgot her. She just can’t accept that Sanskar moved on.she just want to hug him tightly and ask him sorry but here he is behaving as stranger.she was feeling suffocated.
Sanskar explained her about all her work.
Whole day Sanskar behaved with swara as if he meets her first time.she was feeling restless.
Night:
Swara’s flat:
Swara was lying on bed not able to sleep bcoz of sanskar’s weird behavior. She was happy to see him after 8 years.
But his behavior is hurting her.she thought to talk to him tomorrow.
Thinking this she slept.
Sanskar’s flat:
Sanskar is lying on his bed smiling like an idiot.Anyone can say by seeing his face that he is very happy but why?
Sanskar (monologue): today I m Veryyyyyy happy bcoz I saw my love after long 8 years.she is more beautiful than before but one thing has not changed in her that is her innocence.I know she must be feeling bad bcoz of my behavior but I did it intentionally to know whether she remember me or not.I can clearly guess from her face that she wants me to talk like old Sanskar.let’s see what she will do to make me remember herself. It will be fun.stupid girl how can she think I will forget her which is next to impossible.
His thoughts were broken by a phone call which was of his mother. He received the call
Sanskar:hello mom
Sujata:hi !how r u ?
Sanskar:today I m super fine.
Sujata:really u seem to be very happy.
Sanskar(smiles): yes
Sujata:even i have a good news for u.
Sanskar:what?
Sujata: I had found very good girl for u.she is also engineer like u.she is my old friends daughter.
Sanskar(annoyed): mom u again started I don’t ……
Sujata (cuts him): I m not listening anything. I m sending her photo now see her and tell me.
She cuts the call.
Sanskar(irritated):I don’t understand why mom is too interested in making me marry.today only I met swara and now mom urgggg
Then only his phone beep.He first thought to ignore ,then thinks that I will reject her with her looks.
He opened the msg and when he saw the pic his eyes widen and he jumped on bed bcoz pic was of his swara.
He was on cloud nine.he immediately called sujata(impatient) and told her that he is ready for marriage. He came to know that swara still don’t know about all this.So he planned to tease her.
Later he slept dreaming about swara.
Kolkata:
Sujata after getting approval from Sanskar called shomi
Sujata: shomi sanskar agreed for marrige.
Shomi: that’s great I will talk to shona also.
Sujata: yes yes talk with her fast.I just can’t control my happiness.
Shomi: ok bye
Sujata: bye.
Shomi told shekar that Sanskar agreed but they were bit worried for Swara
Shomi: she will agree for this marriage na?
Shekar: even I don’t know. She hardly talk with us but we should at least try.
Shomi; hmm.just bcoz of our behavior our daughter is far away from us.I m really missing her.
Shekar: even I m regretting shomi, if she talks also with us then that also just regarding work and send us money.She had fulfilled our all wishes in turn we can’t just give her our affection.
Shomi: ok now stop thinking all this.we will talk later.
Shekar: hmm.
Bangalore:
Afternoon
Multinational company:
Break time:
Sanskar was about to go to canteen when swara called him.
Swara: sanskar wait.
Sanskar:(casually): yes swara.
Swara: if u don’t mind can we have lunch together(hesitately asked)
Only Sanskar knew how much happy he was but still behaved formally
Sanskar: yes sure.
Both went to canteen and ordered their food.
Swara was not understanding how to start the conversation. Sanskar was enjoying her restlessness afterall she made him wait for 8 years (Etna tho banta hai).He was silently having his lunch but was looking at her with the corner of his eye.
Swara finally gained courage and said
Swara:sanskar don’t u remember me?
Sanskar(looked at her): hmm I think I had seen u somewhere (act like thinking) yea u were my classmate right.
Now swara was not able to control her tears so not to break in front of him she said
Swara: excuse me I m done.
She got up and ran out.
Sanskar saw her plate.she had not even started eating.He cursed himself
Sanskar (mumble): its enough.I can’t see her like this.
Even he went without having lunch.
Swara went to washroom and cried her heart out.
Sanskar was searching for her but she was no where then only he saw her coming from washroom.
He was astonished to see her.It seems she had cried alot.Her nose ,eyes and cheeks were red.sanskar really felt bad for her.He wants to console her but then realized that they were in office.
Swara silently went to her desk and started working.
She didn’t utter a word till evening.Now it was time for Sanskar to be restless.
After office they left to their flat.
Night:
Swara’s flat:
Swara was preparing herself for something.
Swara(monologue): I will ask him sorry for breaking our relation and will remove my guilt.If he don’t want to remember me its ok even I will forget him.(her eyes again got filled with tears)
She went to Sanskar’s flat to apologize.
Sanskar’s flat
Sanskar was pacing here and there thinking whether to go and check swara that she is fine or not.
Then only door bell rang.He thought
that may be laksh will be there.
He opened the door and got shocked to see Swara
Swara: sanskar I need to talk to u.
Sanskar(still shocked): hmm come inside.
Swara entered and sanskar closed the door. Swara sits on sofa and sanskar came and sitted in front of her.
Swara(looked at him): wo I want to say sorry.
Sanskar:why?
Now swara was hell irritated with his ignorance. So she said
Swara(sternly): seriously sanskar u don’t remember anything.
Sanskar:about what?
Swara(angrily): don’t act smart.I know u remember me, our relation.
Sanskar: which relation which was just a mistake for u.(said loudly): yes I remember everything even single second spend with u but I m trying hard to forget all that.
Swara(whisper):why?
Sanskar: Bcoz it hurts me.dam it.It was very easy for u to say that u don’t want to be in relation with me but did u know how I felt.
Swara was crying now for hurting him.Even Sanskar’s emotions which he had suppressed from long back came out in the form of anger .
Swara: I m sorry.
Sanskar (sternly): ok fine I forgive u.Now go.
He turn and had shown his back to her.
Swara knew he had still not forgiven her.she can’t control her emotions anymore.she back hugged him tightly.
Swara(crying): I m really sorry Sanskar. Even it was not easy for me.
Tears brimmed in Sanskar’s eyes.
He thought its enough now as he already made her cry alot.
He broke the hug and looked at her.
Sanskar: swara I had moved on.I m getting marry soon. (Teased her)
Swara felt like the whole sky fell upon her.Her face turned pale. She was not able to digest what Sanskar said.
She has no right on him now.
She was not able to stand there anymore but tried to act normal.
Swara: congratulations(looking down)
Sanskar (smiles seeing her acting):thank you.
Swara:I should leave.
She was about to leave when Sanskar held her wrist. She looked at him confused.
Sanskar: don’t u want to see my future wife’s photo?
It was already hurting swara but now he wants to show her his soon to be wife. Like seriously.
Sanskar very well know what is going in her mind. He stood in front of her with a teasing smile which obviously swara didn’t noticed.Sanskar opened the pic in phone and forward towards Swara.
Swara unwillingly looked at the pic and got shocked to see her photo
She confusedly looked at Sanskar.
Sanskar(smiles):actually she is the girl my mom recommended me to get married with(looking at pic) and I thought she is beautiful so I accepted.
Now Swara understood that he is teasing her.she started crying.Sanskar got shock and engulfed her in his embrace
Sanskar: Swara I m sorry I was just teasing u.
Swara hugged him tightly and cried for long time vanishing her pain and guilt.Sanskar was consoling her.
Sanskar: Swara enough how much u will cry.I m feeling I bathed again.
Swara (looked at him): idiot stupid how can u tease me like this u know how I was feeling.
Sanskar (cups her face): sorry sorry.
He leaned and kissed her forehead.
She hugged him again and whispered
Swara (whisper): I love u.
Sanskar (tightened the hug): love u more.
They broke the hug and Sanskar gently placed his lips on her and they kissed each other passionately pouring all their love.They broke the kiss when out of breath.Sanskar joined his forehead with her and both were breathing heavily then swara remembered about marriage
Swara: Sanskar u r getting married to me but I don’t know.
Sanskar: your mother will inform u soon.
Swara: really?
Sanskar (kissed her cheek):yes.
Swara(teasing): but what if I rejected.
Sanskar (looked at her): u will reject me?
He moved closer to her and she moved back due to which swara fell on sofa.sanskar came on her top and said
Sanskar:now tell me
Swara nodded yes.
Sanskar bite her neck.
Swara: ahh sanskar I was kidding
Sanskar: so now u become naughty.
Swara: yes u also teased me and even I teased u tit for tat.
Sanskar : asha g
He starts tickling her and both laughed.
Then they sit together and talked about their life but still Sanskar didn’t ask why Swara break up with him.
Morning:
Swara made breakfast for herself and sanskar and went to his flat taking it.
Sanskar’s flat:.
Swara saw that door was already opened she entered inside and saw sanskar talking with someone.He moved closer and listened their conversation
Laksh: trust me sanskar that girl who came in that front flat is really very beautiful just try once.
Sanskar had not told him about swara.
Sanskar: but I think she has big attitude.
Swara shocked as she knew they r talking about her.
Laksh: then what she is beautiful na what else u want.
Sanskar signed.
Swara: so Sanskar u r discussing all these things I thought u were sincere.
Sanskar and laksh looked at her and got shocked.
Sanskar(gulps her saliva): no Swara it was not me only laksh was saying.He had Girlfriend but still talking rubbish.
Laksh: no no I love my kavya(laksh’s girlfriend) darling.i was offering him.
Swara(raised her eyebrow): offering??
Sanskar:no no swara he didn’t mean that.
Laksh: u know Swara how many girls drool over him.
Swara: really??
Sanskar (held laksk’s hand and moved to door): I had got her after long time now don’t spoil.
Laksh: what(confuses)
Sanskar: I will tell u later now bye.
Sanskar closed the door and moved to Swara who was setting breakfast
Sanskar (back hugging her): good morning dear
Swara: morning.u know ma’s call came to know about my approval for our marriage.
Sanskar: what u said?
Swara: Ofcouse yes
Sanskar (kissed her cheek):love u.
Then both had their breakfast.
Swasan told their parents that they love each other but didn’t told about their school time relationship.They accepted them happily.
Shomi and shekar asked swara to forgive them for their previous behavior.
Swara forgive them as they are her parents but once relations are destroyed can’t be mended completely just can be improved to some extend..
Shekar and shomi were satisfied seeing swara happy.
After 6 months:
Swasan got married with all rituals in Kolkata.They were Happy with new beginning in their life.
First night:
Swasan room
Swara was waiting for Sanskar in their room.she was little nervous but more happy.she was sitting on bed with night suit.
Sanskar entered inside and saw her and went to bed and sits near her.
Sanskar: u changed your wedding dress I wanted to see u properly in that.
Swara: sorry it was heavy.
Sanskar: its ok u wear some other day.
Swara: what?
Sanskar (smiles): I m joking.
Sanskar leaned towards her and said
Sanskar: so
Swara: so…
Sanskar kissed her neck.
Swara: sanskar
Sanskar: hmm
Swara: u don’t want to know why I broke our relation in school.
Sanskar(looked at her): u want to tell?
Swara nodded yes.
Sanskar: speak
Swara: actually my marks were decreased so I thought I got distracted then she told him everything.
Sanskar started laughing
Sanskar (laughs): seriously Swara this was the reason. I thought may be something big would have happened. U r too innocent
Swara(pout): u r making fun of me.
Sanskar just can’t control so kissed her pout.
Sanskar: sorry.
Swara(smiles): okay.
Sanskar came on her top and she layed on bed.Sanskar buried his face in her neck and started kissing there.
Swara was about to say something when Sanskar said
Sanskar: now I don’t want any distraction here.
Swara blushed.
Soon both got lost in each other.
After 6 years:
Swasan are living in Bangalore and used to visit Kolkata during vacation. They are not alone but have their symbol of love their 5 years old son Sankash Sanskar Maheshwari.
Night:
Swasan are sitting on bed with sankash in Sanskar’s lap.
Sanskar looked at swara teasingly who was busy on laptop.
Sanskar: sankash.
Sankash:yes papa
Sanskar: baby never love a girl who is topper.
Swara looked at him but he ignored.
Sankash: why?
Sanskar:bcoz if her marks will decrease then she will leave u.
Sankash: really
Sanskar: yes.
Swara get to know he is teasing her.she took pillow and hit sanskar.
Sanskar: (innocently): now what I did.?
Swara: don’t try to be innocent bcoz u r not.
Sanskar (kisses her cheek): I know darling.
Sankash: papa I m also there.
Sanskar: oops sorry.
Then they spend time with each other .
If someone’s love is true then definitely one day they will become one.
The End.
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Hope so will get the same response as pervious part
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87 Comments
Zabardast
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Amazing update… love it alot…
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A perfect ending with cute swasan moments..loved it alot
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hahaha sanky is so naughty dear
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Awesome dear…sry i was busy due to classes that I am unable to cmmnt dear…I am reading whenever I get time between classes…Read recent update of betterhalf also…loved both ff and os dear…post next part of ff soon
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Mars seriously girl you want my review hehehe joking I loved it
I loved it so. so much that I can’t explain I wish in real life it also happen but it only depends upon destiny
I’m not having pessimistic view but I can feel it seeing many cases in front of my eyes
it is all written in books and novels not in real life
sorry if I hurt someone but can’t suppress my words am sorry again
but all over the concept and story line and emotions are all good
keep it up girl
come soon with other block busters hehehee
Thank you dear and I completely agree with you that in real life all this doesn’t and its common fact that school love is termed as attraction which easily vanish with time but what to do I even can’t tolerate swasan separation so wrote it.I will try to come soon.
Thanks.
I’m not talking about swasan they should unite I know
but I’m talking casually
Okay dear