Hii guys this is my new writing work.
It’s based on a South Indian movie.I thought to write it’s shivika version.
I would like to change some things in the movie.
This will be a 3 shots or five not sure about that.
Hope u like it.This is just the intro.
I don’t beleive re-birth.
The drums being beaten n with a beautiful music of yal(it’s a tamil music instrument don’t know the english one).
A beautiful girl walking through the door of the majestic palace of the samjut kingdom (it’s a name written by me) wearing a simple dress decorated with silver.
On the other side the beautiful man.Wearing a servants cloth.He is the protector of the whole kingdom (I will reveal why he is wearing servants cloth later) is staring the princess.
The princess slowly walks through the door.
The man is eagerly waiting to see her face.
Annnnddddddd
Splashhhhhhh
Bhaiya wake upppppppp
It was his dream
Good morning rudyyyyy said the boy.
Rudy:bhai wake up.Dont u remember how important today is.Get ready fast.
Boy:ha but I saw a dream today.hear it first.
Rudy:bhai say fast we have to get ready.
I was the protector of the kingdom of samjut.And my name was Parthipan
( u can easily guess the movie with this name)
Rudy:bhai but your name is Shivaay right.
Yes the boy wall Shivaay
Shivaay:rudy its dream yaar listen to me first.
Ok ok rudy nodded like a good boy.
A beautiful princess was walking n I was about to see her face.
Wow bhai how was the girl looking exclamed rudy with curiousity.
What next u woke me up n I couldn’t see her face.
Rudy:bhai I think it’s the story of your previous birth.May be the princess in waiting for u.
I don’t beleive in re birth said Shivaay.
So that’s just an intro part.
The next one will be the another dream of Shivaay.
This will a historical story.
One with present n another with the previous birth.
U will get to know about anika n others in the next one.
Hope u like it.
All kind of comments accepted.
But Pls comment.
If u get 20 comment will post the next shot tomorrow.will be waiting for your comments.
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Nice start rufi
Bhai u told to wait n watch
When I saw the comment I taught what is bhai gonna do??
I gave challenge lets see who wins
In this one too I won see in reply too big one
U don’t need tuition na very good sprit.Dont ever accept the defeat.
All the best to win me ??????
Thanks for reading and commenting bhai
Glad u liked it
Omg my fav movie?? Maveeran
Yeah.R u a tamilian or Telugu??
Even u know the full story do read the other parts for sure.
It’s one of my all time favourite movie.
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Hi – 5 ✋ proudly saying I’m a tamilian ….. hw abt u
I am a proud tamilian.
Interesting start
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Awesome start rufi..please continue..interesting..
Yep next one tomorrow at most at the verge of completing the first shot.
Thanks for reading and writing dii
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Awesome…
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It is nice…
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OMM!! Magadheera/Maaveran movie!!! One of my fav movies….. Nice start dear. Are u tamilian?? Or Telugu??
Tamilian
Yeah.R u a tamilian or Telugu??
Even u know the full story do read the other parts for sure.
It’s one of my all time favourite movie.
Hi 5✋✋✋✋✋
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Glad u liked it
HiFi dear…. I m also Tamilian!! Sure…I will read other parts also.
Superb one bff
Its so interesting and full of suspence
I can’t wait more?
Pls continue it
U know even i have given one into yesterday in shivika so if u have time do read it
Love you ??
Yep tomorow u will get the next shot.
I will continue for sure
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Glad u liked it bff
Will read for sure
Love u too
NYC intro
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My god its magadheera movieeeee……..its a telugu movie……i love S.S RAJAMOULI movies……..till now i dint miss a single movie of his…..i know each and every dialouge…..
Hmm it’s gonna be difficuilt for me to reach up to your expectation.I will try my level best.Next one is submitted
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AWESOME EXCITED INTERSTING SUPERB??????
Dear ArjSisback
So Magdheera Hai Movie.Main Detaily Magdheera Nahi Dekha.But I Know That Movie Concept.Mera Ek Reqeust Hai Agar Rudy Ki Opposite Kisi Ko Add Kar Rahi Hai Tho Please Soumya Ko Add Karna Okay?
Take Care?
I don’t have any idea of opposite pair for Rudra.
If possible I will add soumya for sure
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Even though u know the concept do read the next shot
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