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Don’t leave me!! #Riansh os part 3..The End..

1234AayuBy 227 Comments5 Mins Read

Well…I am very happy..Like seriously…

coz..2nd, part 35(highest) comments excluding mine and 280+ near to 300 comments..😅Thanks to @Aarushi,@parita,@Attractiveuser, and of course me..😂(#Gaayu+parita)
let’s start with the update..
Rihu was not understanding anything….
When vansh asks Rishab..
Vansh:-Meri Riddhima ko Kuch nahi hoga na!!(crying..)
Rishab:-calm down she will be alright..
they rushed toward the ward where Riddhima was breathing with difficulty
Vansh:- Rishab what is happening..
Rihu:-Mamu mumma ko kya hua…vo thik toh hojayegi..(she was crying..)
Vansh took Rihu in his arms..and kissed her forehead..
Vansh:-Rihu you know na your mumma is very strong nothing will happen to her..
you know she is very stubborn..she is playing with us..
Rishab went inside..and Vansh and Rihu were crying silently seeing Riddhima’s condition..
when Angre come..(I am really sorry I forgot about him..)
Angre:-What happened is bhabhi alright?
vansh:-NO Angre she is not alright..he pointed towards the ward..
angre:-Bhai what happened to her and who is she..
Vansh:-I will tell you later/… She is Rihu my Daughter..where were you?
Angre:-Bhai voh Ishani called ME..(sorry Ishani for blaming you.😂.)
Vansh:-Angre take Rihu with you..
Rihu:-no papa I am not going anywhere..
Vansh:-Rihu you are a good girl na..go with him..he is your chachu…
Rihu:-okay but promise me mumma ko kuch nahi hoga..
Vansh:-promise..
she went with Angre..
Vansh was shattered..he was crying..

The world looks small
From the sky
The troubles fade away
When you fly
You were born to try
Never say good bye
Just sing away….

Haan…..

Ooh…..

There’s another way
Don’t you run away
I’ll take your pain away

People never say
They don’t want you to play
The song you gave away

God will show the way
It’s not a cliche
For another sunny day

There’s another way
Don’t you run away
I’ll take your pain away

(Solo voice: There’r another way, don’t you run away, Let me take your pain away, Pain away)

People never say
They don’t want you to play
The song you gave away

The wounds fade away
When the sun goes down
Your words stay with me
All along
We were born to dance
we never woke from the trance
Lets sing along…

The way you smile
Is like chamomile
Its been a while
Since I saw your style
Birthdays are for ever

Never , never say good bye
Never , never say good bye
Never , never say good bye

Vansh:-Riddhima dare you leave me..I have to ask forgiveness and you have to forgive me..

(He was crying…)

When Rishab came out..

Rishab:-She is out of danger but we can’t say anything..(he was also crying..)

When the nurse say:-Doctor mam is in conscious…
Vansh,Rishab with Angre and Rihu entered..
Vansh:-Riddhima!!
Riddhima:-Vanh(with a weak voice..)Ri..h..u..
Vansh took Rihu in his arms..
and said..
Vansh:-Riddhima See your daughter needs you..you have to be alright..
Riddhima:-V..a..n….s..h….T..a…k…e..c..a..r…e.O…f…Ri….h…u.,,,,,.I…LO….V…E…Y..O..U.A…ND…R..I..H…U..
and this was her last words..she died..
Vansh couldn’t seek forgiveness from his sweetheart he was broken…and her 6.5-year daughter..what can you expect from her..she was continuously taking her mother’s name..
Destiny is fated….
Maybe..IN Vansh fate it was written this..only..
He could not able to fulfill his Daughter’s first wish..
After few hours..
Vansh was doing all the rituals..to say goodbye to his sweetheart..
his heart was paining…
Rihu was crying inconsolably..
Vansh:-
Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya, Hmm Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya,

(If you can’t be mine, that’s all right. If you couldn’t be mine, that’s okay.)
Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Raha,
(I am yours, yours. I have always been yours.)
Mere Chanda Main Tumhara Sitara Raha,
(Oh, my moon, I am your star.)

Rishta Raha Bas Rait Ka,
(Our relationship was like sand, and it kept slipping.)
Aye Samandar Main Tumhara Kinara Raha,
Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Tumhara Raha,
(Oh, ocean, I’m yours, I’m always yours.)
Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya,
(If you can’t be mine, it’s okay!)

Tu Hi Pehli Guzarish Hasrat Bhi Tu Akhiri,
(You are my first request and my last unfulfilled wish.)
Mahi Mere Maseeh Marzi Bata Kya Teri,
(Oh, my sweetheart, my God, tell me what your wish is.)

Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Raha,
(Yours, Yours, Yours, I have always been yours.)
Mere Chanda Main Tumhara Sitara Raha,
(Oh, my moon, I have always been your star.)

Main Jaarhon Ke Mahine Ki Tarah, Aur Tum Ho Pashmine Ki Tarah,
(I’m like a month of winter, and you’re like Pashmina (raw, unspun wool of domesticated goats).)
Main Deewaron Ki Tarah Hoon, Tum Jaise Ho Dareecha,
(I am like the walls while you are like a window.)
Main Bageecha Jo Tumne Seencha,
(I am the garden that you water.)

Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya, Hmm Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya,
(If you can’t be mine, that’s all right. If you can’t be mine, that’s all right.)
Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Raha,
(I am yours, yours. I have always been yours.)
Mere Chanda Main Tumhara Sitara Raha,
(Oh, my moon, I am your star.)

Rishta Raha Bas Rait Ka,
(Our relationship was like sand, and it kept slipping.)
Aye Samandar Main Tumhara Kinara Raha,
Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Tumhara Raha,
(Oh, ocean, I’m yours, I’m always yours.)
Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya
(If you couldn’t be mine, that’s okay.)

Vansh:-I will be always your..what happens if you leave me..I will always with you….

Love never dies
Love never falters
Once it has spoken
Love is yours
Love never fades
Love never alters
Hearts may get broken
Love endures
Hearts may get broken
Love endures

Life may be fleeting
Love lives on…

Vansh:-Not in this birth..but I will seek your forgiveness in the next birth…I will be waiting sweetheart…

THE END…..

That’s it many of you asked me not to kill Riddhima but  I have to do this..SORRY..I was also crying while writing this last part…

Do comments…

Thankyou

bye take care..

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227 Comments

  3. Parita on

    Aa gayi mein!! Iss post me bhi 300 hojaye?
    Let me read it and then comment

  5. AarushiSoni on

    I think u love to make me cry
    … But then also I love u and this os very much…. Amazing os ever… Mind blowing dear… Pls post more.. but next time a happy ending pls.. literally years r rolling down my eyes.. and that song made the situation realistic!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    • 1234Aayu on

      Aarushi dear..I love to do that(kidding)..Same here..Thank you so much..I will write an OS soon with happy ending…stay tuned..*years*😂😂..songs choice are always perfect from my side as I love to do that..😊

  7. Pranjal on

    Plzz @1234aayu i want you to write one os on that when vansh declared ahana as wife then after few weeks he got to know that riddhima was innocent and he was also knowing that riddhima is pregnant so he was trying to find her he was knowing that. Riddhima is in the mumbai only (there is no leap) and then vansh remember where did the pregnancy reports came from so he decided to check the hospital cctv and he founded riddhima then he got to know that from mrs raisinghania she change. The name riddhima and then he found her address and was pleading her for forgiveness but she was refusing it then (rest to you ) but plzz right a os on it i told it in a short way buti know you can add emotions to it plzz accept this request from my side

    • 1234Aayu on

      Thank you..for believing me..I will try my best..I will write this with totally a different way..hope you will like it..It will be posted soon..stay tuned..

  8. Attractiveuser on

    Outstanding and mind-blowing aayu😍😍🤩🤩🙂❤️❤️🥺🥺♥️♥️. Maar hi dia Riddhima ko par koi ni❤️❤️🙂😂. Loved it.love from attractive gauri 🙂♥️😂😂(aaj paise maangne ke mood mein nahi hun🙂😂)

  13. Parita on

    Sach me tune maar diya bichari ko! What an emotional one!
    The songs and the scene blended so well, it touched my heart!💕💕 Pls write more of these OS
    Btw, pls write more OS so we can reach to 500 comments one day😂😉

  16. Akshiiii on

    mra rona dkh ke mri mo puchi ki qa hua. kch prblm h qa. m bimaar hu qa. mtlb mom covid scenario me pauch gyi.
    loved it. u r an amazing writer. how u described vansh feelings.

    • 1234Aayu on

      Thank you so much…it means a lot..and sorry that I make you cry..and aunty😂..
      Thank you once again ☺️

  17. Aisha08 on

    Amazing superb sry i m late i was quite busy n couldn’t be the part of ur discussion

  18. Nameless on

    Why r u guys hell bent on killing riddhima?
    You are breaking my heart…
    You’ve broken my heart…
    You broke my heart…

    I hope the serial has a happy ending…

  19. Subu23 on

    Arre yaar phir bichari ridhima ko maar diya tumne kyu bhn kyu and that song from dil bechara movie one of my favourites yaar amazing loved it ❤btw paise abhi tak nhi mile mujhe😶

  20. Riansh1212 on

    I don’t know why but though I dont want anyone of riansh to die still every story related to themwhether they are together at the end or not, I find all the stories so beautiful!!! And these one shots are just perfect!! One shot is not just one story. Its more like a peg full of emotions and perfection in a single shot!!! This Os of yours are amazing dear!! I loved reading it❤️❤️❤️

    • AarushiSoni on

      That’s why I love one shots bcoz in one shot only story gets completed!!! Well, ur exams?? How r they going??

    • 1234Aayu on

      Thank you so much.. glad you like it..I was waiting for your comment..😊.I aslo like one short.. that’s why these days I am more interested in these..

    • Riansh1212 on

      Yeah Definitely!! My exams are going great Aarushi and they will end this week. And then I will update on Sunday😉😉😉