Don’t stay away it kills me 1
A/N:
Hi friends…this time it’s an joint venture…hehe…this will be an continuation ff of SR and it will takes an U turn from swara’s memory loss…
Idea was my sister’s folly(ilaks) and I am writing this as she asked me to do so because of her exams…thank you so much sissy…i am so hpy that u choose me to do this…all the very best for your exams dear…
First of all please don’t curse (not all and I know our peoples will support us) and let me clear something this is fully based on RagLak..CV’s haven’t shown importance to both the couples and moreover they didn’t portrayed RagLak love properly…
So I assure you that atlast RagLak and Swasan alone will get united and no pair changing…here we are just showing laksh’s possessiveness towards Ragini…
I am sorry for this my dear RagLak sweethearts(fans)…i know you guys will support us…you will na??
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Let’s strt the plot..
“It’s holi today…but you weren’t with me…see all are enjoying this bright day by throwing colours…but you weren’t with us…it’s been 4 months you left us…but still we believe that you are alive somewhere…come back to us Shona…” Said she who is standing in vein controlling her emotions…
Two hands wipes her tears which is gushing out from her eyes…she know it was him…she turned towards him and hugged him tight and starts crying…
He takes her to the lone place…”please Ragu…don’t be like this…i can’t see you broken…it’s been 4 months I saw your smile…this is our first holi(after sorting problems)together…i don’t want you to be in tears…i know it will hurts you more…but we can’t do anything we searched her everywhere but couldn’t find her…you and sanskar are saying that she is alive…yes I agree I don’t want to hurt your feelings…you are saying na then it would be right…she will return back to us anyday…may be today…if she see you and sanskar in this stage then she will kill me alive…you wanna lose your pyaari hubby uh…”laksh said and pulled her cheeks which made her feel relieved…
“thank you laksh…if you weren’t with me then I don’t know how I would have survived in these 4 months…”Ragini wiped her tears and hugged him tight…
Laksh tooks a deep breath and sigh of relief of making her love feel relaxed…
The question mark for their love is on the way…yes swara aagaye…
Sahil dropped her in baadi and bids her goodbye…
(note:with this sahil character ends)
Swara goes inside baadi and found noone over there…she then hears band sound and rushed outside…
“today holi…that too our first holi together I am coming back to you my love…”swara grinned and reached the area where all maheshwari family and Gadodia’s are together…
Suddenly a heavy blow of air flown on a guy’s face and he jerks with the sudden unknown feelings in his heart…
“Swara…”he shouts..and his face is shown as sansky…
“where this girl have gone…Ragini…Ragini..”laksh waits for Ragini by repeating her name continuously like mantras…
“laksh…wait am coming…”Ragini said by holding so many stuffs which ap maa asks her to keep in baadi…
“areyy mera bacha…holding so much things…wait am coming…”laksh rushed towards her but Adarsh drags him towards centre…
Ragini sighs him to enjoy and says that she will handle it…
“Ragini Bhabhi…idhar aao na…”uttara makes a pout…
“haan haan…wait…first I will keep these things inside and then will join you…”Ragini smiles and runs inside…
Suddenly someone thrown colours on swara…”aah…i thought my love will apply first…”swara gets irritated and wiped her face with the water nearby…
Ragini comes outside from baadi and her insight says something…she looks towards the side where swara is wiping her face..but she could see only her back position..
Suddenly uttara comes there and drags Ragini…
Ragini turns back and see that girl but she was not there…
Laksh was waiting for her…Ragini then sees laksh and was about to go near him…suddenly she sees someone and her eyes turned teary…
“swara…”Ragini rubs her eyes and sees once again to get confirm that it’s her Shona..
Ragini runs towards her but she gets freezed at a certain distance…seeing swara hugging laksh…
“happy holi my dear love…”swara hugged laksh from behind…
“happy holi sweetheart…”said laksh who thought that was Ragini…
Sanskar arrived there and he gets shocked seeing swara hugging lucky…
Laksh who turns aside shocked seeing Ragini infront of him…
“Ragini…”laksh confused and removed the hands that is wrapped around him…
“swara…”laksh’s brain stopped working…because of swara’s words…
“haan…mein laksh…tumhare patni…mein aagaye…”swara applied colours on laksh’s face…
Laksh stands in shock…while sanskar and Ragini’s eyes were filled with tears…
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We have planned to show laksh’s other shade of love towards Ragini…so just came up with this…
At the end RagLak will get united for sure…so don’t worry dear friends…
So tell us your views guys…we wanna know about your thoughts…suggestions are welcomed…whether we may continue or not??
Sorry if I hurt anyone feelings…
Take care all…keep smiling ?
~Darshu
67 Comments
superb continue dear
Thnk u so much my dear friend…?
awesome i am very eager to know further how raglak fight for their love
Tq da dharu? u don’t mind na shall I Cal u dharu…
of course u can dear darshu
That’s so sweet of you sissy?
Wow???
Awesome
Tq lovely ? glad that you liked it…
Woow? plz update nxt part
Tq sayana dear ? glad that you liked it…
I want smthng like this happens in sr. So early waiting for read further
Tq ragya dear ? that’s so sweet..keep supporting da…
very interesting concept, waiting for the next
Tq so much akshu? keep supporting…
Will post soon dear…
Awesome sisy..!!!! Raglak ku innimay dhn shock irukum pola..pavam ragz nd sanky ena pana nu theriyama irukanga…!!!! Raglak love future episode la paka supr ah irukum pola…!!! U nd folly done a great job..!!! Waiting for next chappy dear..!!! Take care da
Tq da sissy? am so happy that u liked it..
Future la paapom laksh Ragini maariye avala alavukku athigama love panrananu…
Keep smiling ?
Tc too da
Awesome
Tq Sindhu dear ? glad that you liked it…
Awesome
Tq sharanya dear ? glad that you liked it..
Amazing in CVS ragini is love too laksh and laksh love ragini but not like ragini ? keep going
Tq so much dear ?
Keep supporting dear…
S RagLak love each other madly …
Tc dear ?
superb idea darshu di
waiting for the next part
Aww tq so much dear IQRA ?
Credit goes to folly..
Will post soon dear ?
amazing…..n we’ll support u fully plz cntinue……really really amazing plot….
Aww tq so much dear…
Am so hpy with your cmnts…will post soon dear..?
Awesome dear. I always wanted this plot which shows Laksh’s love and possesiveness towards Rsgini. Lovely update
Tq daa gayu…
Glad that you liked it…
Keep supporting dr?
Same pinch…
Will post soon da
Loved it same concept was used in wattpad about ragsan…loved it with raglak…it’s different with raglak..try to show a bit negative Swara…just suggesting
Thnks a lot shri?..am glad that you liked it…
Oh ? dear…it’s on ragsan uh…u r writing it uh dear??
Ok wil keep in mind with your suggestions da…
Take care dear ?
No I don’t write it.its someone called moulidatta….
Oh ok shri…shall I call you shri if u don’t mind…
People close to my heart call me shri…and u people r in my heart u can ofcourse call me shri….I will call u akka
Brilliant concept continue dear
Thnks a lot da…glad to hear that you liked it…
amazing update!! Eager to see Laksh possessiveness
Tq gayu dear ? yaah sure u will see laksh’s different shades…
Ohooooooo di you made it I loved it to the core keep going
Thnks to u da sissy without u this can’t be hpnd..??
Semma concept sis…Waiting for next part….pls post it soon…
Thnks bro for supporting…will post soon..am glad that you liked it…
Amazing….
Plzzz Continue dear….
Loved to see Laksh possessiveness….
Hey teito thnks yaar for liking it..keep supporting…
Will post soon…
superb
Tq Saranya ? glad that you liked it…
Interesting plot and plz continue
Tq dear sissy ? glad that you liked it..keep supporting..
AWESOME
Tq Arjuna ? glad to hear from you…keep supporting
awesome pls show only raglak.
Tq mk? and I assure you that it’s only on RagLak will shw swara as lil negative
Akka akka akka..epdi akka ungala mattum epdi iruka mudiyudhu…Sathiyama Enaku terila..I’m crying..really…???…Samma arivu akka Ungaluku…chance ey Illa…gethu kalapuriga…ena oru arivu..ena oru skills…samma..at a time 3ffs maintain panriga..awesome..I’m really blessed to have a sister like u..love uuuu love uuuu love uuuuu akka…samma story…enakagavey neega continue pannanum akka*with puppy face*…Aprm unga arivu la irudhu konja Enaku kuduga akka..Bcoz naa romba Lusu ahhh iruka adha*blinking my eyes innocently*post soon akka…waiting waiting waiting…thalapathi style la I’m waiting akka..by the way neega chennai ah??love uuu a lot akka..bye take care…
Aww mere sissy? I am smiling a lot seeing ur cmnt…hehe…namma ariva athu epdi enakku vanthuchu…hehe…
Chellame ur stories are damn awesome I liked it mre than mine…
Inga neraya per irukaanga da who r writing 7 ff’s dear…like Astra..sally…they r amazing writers and am only doing 4 ff’s…
Tq so much commenting sweet heart…
Na Chennai ilada Tamil naatin nerkalanjiyam Thanjavur da?…u r frm Chennai uh??
Love you too sissy ??
Wow wow wow
I always wanted this track in SR but cvs is bad
You made my wish come.true in the form of ff
Thank u soomuch
Aww am so hpy that I fullfilled ur dream…will u buy me choci for that…hehe jst kidding dear…
Will continue soon dear…thnks for supporting…take care da
Amazing and feel so bad for ragsan and is rags pregnant at this part zx
Aww too gd to hear frm you dear…
Actually haven’t planned abt pregnancy trck bt will take ur views as suggestions…
Tq dear for supporting…keep smiling ?…
Superb concept..
Bit feeling bad dat hv too see RagLak apart ( if its like de way m thinking but hope its really not.. )
Laksh possesivesness towards Ragini is sumtng i always wanted. wishing for many raglak moments …
Thnkww for penning such awesum concept..
Thnks a lot dear frnd…whnevr our love stays away then only we will realise our feelings for them we will die for them and the love also gets increased…thnks for supporting..
Keep commenting dr
Superb chapter Akka. Tamil Natin nerkalajiyam and telly updatesin porkalajiyame ??
Tq sweety…aww am blushing…keep supporting sisy?
Loved it . Keep it up. Plz don’t stop and plz upload next episode soon . Thank you .
Tq Shreya dear for liking the plot…will post soon..glad that you liked it..
Next reason for raglak fight??…but I loved it…can’t imagine sanky’s condition….for ragini…she atleast knows laksh loves her…but sanky? upload soon..
Yes true…keep supporting and will post soon…
Thnks for liking it dear friend ?