Dream scenes of Kriyam 2 part 4
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Scene 1
Sayyam was hugging Krishna….
Krishna : mujhe neend aa rahi hain…
Sayyam came back to reality…
Sayyam : kya…
Krishna : mujhe neend aa rahi hain…or yahaan dard ho rahi hain…(pointing towards the bruise on her head)
Sayyam…get relieved…
Sayyam : tum teek hain na…mera jaan nikal gaya tha..
Sayyam cupped her face…she looked at him…smiled fill with innocence… sayyam admiring her beauty…her big brown eyes..tired but… delighted with cuteness…face..small cut on her chin… everything about her is simply beautiful….. he is getting closer to her unknowingly…he is about to kiss her… phone rings… sayyam came back to reality.. it’s suhani..
Suhani : sayyam beta kahan ho tum donom…? Itna der kyun..??
Sayyam : (tensed) we are on the way …
Suhani : teek hain..jaldi aao…(cut call)
Sayyam drove off the car to BM..
They reached BM. Sayyam get out of the car. He went to help Krishna to get down. She is still under intoxication. So he took her one arm around his shoulder and give a support with other hand on her waist. Krishna still talking..to herself. Sayyam forgot to take the keys from car.
Sayyam : tum yahi ruko …mein abhi aaya..kahin jaana mat..
Krishna is looking at steps and started to walk unevenly… she stumble and falls on steps.. Sayyam rushes to hold..her.
Sayyam : (in angry tone) mein ne kahan tha na yahaan se hilna mat..
Krishna : (with a pout) I’m sorry…
She forward her hands to Sayyam.. Sayyam leaned towards her to hold her..but she pulled him by his tie.. he didn’t expect that so he fell over Krishna.. Sayyam surprised..and shocked too.. Krishna started to giggle.. Sayyam is also laughed.. Krishna pointing towards sky
Krishna : dekho thare…or chand bhi…kitna sundar hain na..
Sayyam smiled at her adorably..
Krishna : tumhe patha hai Sayyam..meri mumma kehthi thi ki yeh thare wo humare apne hai.. wo dekho..wo dono thare zyada chamaktha hai na..wo mere mumma or papa hai… wo donom hamesha mujhe wahan se dekthi rahthi hai…hamesha…
Sayyam felt guilt while listening to her words. Feel like something piercing his heart.. just because of his father she lost her mother..a single drop of tear escaped from his eye.
Sayyam : chalo bas..ghar chalo…
Krishna : nahi mujhe yahi sona hai..tharom ko dekh kar..
Sayyam get up.
Sayyam : bahut ho gaya..chalo ab..
Krishna : nahi nahi…
Sayyam : to tum nahi manogi..
Sayyam don’t waste time..he take her in his shoulder..Krishna try to get rid of him..but he held her strong.. Sayyam enter into BM. Lights were off..so he get relieved.. he thinks everyone must be sleeping.. he put down Krishna make sure nobody is there.
Then he take her to their room. But suddenly Sayyam heard sound of footsteps..he immediately hide Krishna on the side of pillar.
Suhani : Sayyam..tum Akela.. Krishna kahan hai..
Sayyam : haan wo..room mein hai..mein car park karke aa raha tha..
Krishna was losing her balance but Sayyam supported her by holding her to the pillar but before suhani he was like supporting himself.
Suhani : teek hai.. jao so jao.. gudnyt..beta..
Sayyam : ok gudnyt..
Krishna murmuring something..so he just held his hands on her mouth to make her shut..
Suhani turns
Suhani : tumne kuch kaha..?
Sayyam : (gulps) nahi…kuch nahi aap jaakar so jayiye..
Aarhh….
Suhani : kya huwa…?
Krishna bites Sayyaam’s finger.. Sayyam try to smile…
Sayyam : nothing mere per pisal gaya tha..bas aap so jayiye.. please..
Suhani : zyada lagi tho nahi..??
Sayyam : nahi..aap jayiye.. I’m ok..
Then suhani leaves but turns..
Suhani : Pakka…
Sayyam : (felt good seeing his mother’s concern) haan maa.. Pakka..
Suhani left.. Sayyam angrily looks at Krishna..she still murmuring.. he took her in his arms..headed to their room. He make her lie on bed.. she is sleeping like a child.. he looked at her lovingly.. I dunno why I’m attracted to her..she has some magic..that.. pulling me towards her..even though I’m not deserve her..love and concern.. how can anyone so good at heart..in earth..?
He was looking at her for a long time..lost in thoughts..
Finally he decided to get some sleep. So he stand up..went washroom change his clothes. Then he remembers Krishna’s bruise..so he took the first aid box..get some ointment. He come near Krishna..she is sleeping peacefully.. he looked at her and apply the ointment.. she is winces a slight due to the burning sensation of ointment.. Sayyam blows on her bruise..Krishna get back to sleep..
Sayyam watching her …while he is also slept near Krishna.
Precap : Krishna tensed
Sayyam telling Krishna “ tumse yeh ummeed nahi tha Krishna “
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9 Comments
Awesome
Awesome..
Superb episode….
Cool one…. kriyam moments ..loge it.. keep posting…
Owasm
Hello Fidot,
how r u ?
fidot 1st tell me one thing r u bhaiya or didi ?
I like ur ff very much..
or always eagrly wating 4 ur update…
so please….. Try to post as soon as possible..
ok!!
b happy..
stay blessed always..
take care..
sorry 4 so late cmt….
bbbyya….e
Hi… kudrat.. m fyn dear… How r u…??
Of course I’m di….
There is so much h innocence in ur words..even though I’m getting very less comments…for people like u I will write …asap next part ok… I know everyone is busy with exams may be coz of this… No offense… Keep commenting.. love you…
This is such a beautiful ff, and i really rrally loved this part it showed such an innocent sinde of their love and i absolutely loved it! im so sorry I cant always comment, i have a lot of revision at the moment but i promise i will comment when i can. Please dont be disheartened by lack of comments because i am definitely sure that everybody loves this ff ? xx
Hi.. thank you…so much.. I’m huge fan… of ur ff love an escape… Please update it if you can… Thank you once again…