LET’S START WITH THE SHORT STORY FRIENDS……..
Note: The character’s/personalities may vary from actual ending/plot in the storyline/show as I would like Dr.Thakur to be alive.
It’s morning time and we see a grand building with large walls ,a big gate and a beautiful garden the area adjoining it is also as clean as the yard of the house. This place, was so beautiful and grand that you can point out from far away ,and this place was also a centre tourist attraction of Kolkata. People enjoyed the scenic view that it gave and it’s garden was just marvelous, people were allowed to go inside and see the grand palace once a week when the owner went out, with his family. As we enter the gate we see the gardener watering the plants and the sweeper cleaning the yard as we move forward we see the grand door of the house ,with large metal handles,which are simple but beautiful,inside and as clean as you can see your face in any polished or reflecting surface like the floor also it’s kept simple and tells us/gives us the impression about the people living in the house they are simple, and kind…………………any guesses where are we well we are at the Goenka estate which is now owned by Dev Goenka and his small family consisting of his mother and wife.After the arrest of his uncle and his family he and his wife Durga took care of the whole business and prevented the downfall of the Goenka estate .We see an old woman sitting in a small temple constructed inside the house and offering the morning prayers she is wearing a simple light colored saree not so fashionable and it suited her the best and she looked very beautiful in that with that she just wore a ring in her index,finger and a pearl necklace her look is very simple………… She is Suchitra Goenka the owner ofthis house……… with her stood four figures with their hand’s folded in prayer and their lips,moving in an co-rdinated manner and they are singing ,the morning aarti. As we see the figures clearly We see a young beautiful girl with a smile on her face and wearing a sweet yellow colored pajama suit she is, Payal Nitya’s sister and with her stood a middle aged man in white kurta pajama and a big tika on his forehead he is Aakash ,who now a partner in Goenka estate being Sakshi’s son and being the most trusted one of the family he manages all the affair’s related to the business. And moving to the left we see Durga standing with folded hands and wearing a long ,length suit as usual and with Dev staring at her as she is looking very beautiful.
*******TO BE CONTINUED
LOL THAT’S ALL FOR THIS CHAPTER HOPE YOU LIKED IT AND PLSS TELL ME IF TOU DISLIKE SOMRTHING IN MY STORY PLOT AND GIVE YOUR REVEIWS . and i hope all fine with the introductions in the last update.AND SORRY FOR ANY MISTAKES.
THANK U-
Credit to: Richa
35 Comments
Wow! I luv ua way f narratng.. T really makes me imagine al d charctrs n d similar way hw i usd to watch n tv.. Tx..
I wud luv to hv mre n mre suspenses n d cumng chaps.. Pls consider dis as ma req..
This is superb
Good work Richa … Im a big fan of the EHT series ….. Thanks for starting the fan fiction series of EHT .,,
nice story richu dr..this my fav serial after ipkknd
thankz @shivi @pathu and dr nxt chapter will take sometyme as i already hav an f-fic about Nauc going on and i was posting random since a week sooo i will first continue dat as loong i havn’t posted any chapter der and srry 4 dat and plss u can suggest me ideas regarding this EHT story……. and u can tell if u dislike anythng in d stryyy
Nys dr.its my fav shw.ys me 2 wish dr.tagor alve nd rishi marry payal
my fav thnx alot
I like it very much
Richu di,
u r awesome
nd whr is devu di??? She must b hr
@SWATI AND PRAGSS , HG, BD DIEHARD FAN,CUTIEPIE AND DIA THANX A LOT UR CMMNTS GIMME COURAGE TO WRITE MOREE
@@@@@ HG SWEETY THANKU FOR SUGESSION
CAN SM1 TELL ME SHAURAYA’S FRND’S NAME WHO SUPPORTED HIM PLSS I FORGOT
karan basu and rishi dr
Even tarun was his frend !!
Hey richa suerb yaar !! U alwas suprise me bcos first beintehaa n now EHT I jus love u yaar !! I jus love EHT b4 ipkknd !!
Hey pragna I also jus loved ipkknd !!!
ru using kangana in the story?
thank u Mandy for ur words nd info
@Aishwaria i will try to include all charecters ……
karan ,tarun nd rishi r hs frnds dr
tooo goooooooooooooooooooooood
it superb. its my favourite serial.thanx for starting fan fiction
pls ryt ur story in paras n give preca[
Yaa.. I too wanted dr thakur to be alive..nd richu nd al ma dea frndz hyy to u al…
Im huge fan of EHT nd i m very happy to read this friction…nice dear
@richu pls dea mk shourya to be a chngd man at last..
Nd also reveal hw he ws abl to cal durga which ws shwn as suspense durng d end f shw..
I wd luv to hv new new thrilss.,
Hey pathanga after a long tym huh !!
Hw r u ???
Xactly yaar I think it shud be like dis !!
Hey do u think dat EHT season 2 will b back ???
I’m also a fan of EHT…..thanks richa for the fiction…..I liked it plse continue
No pathu vatsal can’t B changed as the climax showed an evil attitude of him … So he can’t B changed … Hehehe @pathanga
its superb richu keep writng
where is the next episode
nina i will post next epi most probably tomo as i just posted two updates toady 1 intro part and this one lol
thank u guysss @nina,nithasha,ahana.Devga,lulu nd sara
ur wrds gimme encouragement to write more
@ arjun ok w ill write in paras nd srry i typed the pe but didnt post it here it is
NEXT UPDATE: We hear the door bell ringing and a servant comes in and informs the Goenka’s about the visiter,and we see Dr Thakur standing at the door……..
@ pathu hyy nd @ pathu nd devu thenx 4 sugessions i will tery to use ur both sugessions dr 🙂
lol thanx 4 cmmnting nd keep reading frndss
@mandy.. Hii mandy..m fyn dea.. Hw a u?
@devga.. Frst f al hii devu.. Though climax shwd his evil attitude bt at last tats t d end f season i wnt him to be CHANGED man becoz every1 mst gt a second chance in deir lyf nd ts appicabl to shaurya also..
If he wont dn he hs no right to liv n dis punyabhumi nd im gonna kill hm nd tats fr sure hihihihi..
@richu eithr u mak hm a chngd man r else make hm die t d end..
Sumthng lyk dis.:diggng grave fr sume1 else nd hmself falling into t..
superb richa…..thnk u for ur fiction
niiiiiiiiiiiiice…. really loved it.. the words and the way of narrating is very interesting… enjoyed reading it…. goood workk.. keep on writing..
Who is Payal and who is the Durga standing next to Dev?? Can anyone pls explain me
plz,richa.make a new lead entry for our cute payal.and where is kangana????she should stay with them.
and,praiseworthy effort by u!!!???
thank u sree ,leeyan& Ireena
@Tttt i have poisted a chapterb4 this one with the introduction of all the chaatecters plss see that for detailed answer………..anyways Durga is Dev’s wife &payal is her sister
@Ireena thanx 4 sugession……….