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Chapter 1
Hey guys! Love you all who commented and liked the promo. Hope I’ll not disappoint u all.
Thank you. ❤️
Okay. So first of all I would gave u a brief description about the story line. Ek Adhuri Kahani. As the name suggests that something tragic happened in someones life. Yes. Neil is the one whose life has some mystery which will get unfold. Some thing happened in past which made him this much aggressive and hateful or may be he thinks himself responsible for something.
In this story Neil and Avni will be in same university year studying in Canada. The story starts with eight years later. But what happened eight years back in both the lives u’ll get to know.
Sorry. It became a bit long description. Let’s start.
A beautiful morning is shown in Australia where a girl is seen getting out of a car and moving towards a graveyard. She buys a bouquet of flowers and goes towards some graves. She put some flowers on each grave and set in between two graves on which it was written ‘ Died: July 12, 2009’. A drop of tear fell on the grave. The girl is revealed to be Avni.
Avni: Maa. Papa. Aaj 8 saal ho gaye aap logoun ko aur sab ko guzre hoay. In 8 saaloun main ek din esa nahi guzra jab mene aap sabko yaad na kiya ho. Aaj he ke din mijhse sab kuch cheen liya gaya tha. Kesa manhoos din hai yeh? *wiping her tears* Koi baat nahi. Aaj meri life ek naya mor le rahi hai. Aaj main ek nayi zindagi ki shuruwaat ker rahi houn. Aap dono bus humesha mere saath rehna. (Mom. Dad. 8 years years have passed since u all left. In these 8 years not a single day has passed when I didn’t miss you all. Today, every thing was snatched from me. What an ill-fated day it is.*wiping her tears*. It’s okay. Today, my life is going to take a new turn. Today, I’ll be starting a new life. Be with me both of u).
She left the graveyard with a smile on her face. She felt a bit relieved. She reached her home.
A big mansion is shown. The guards open the gate as she reached. She gave the keys to the driver so that he can park the car. As she entered the house Neela wished her happy birthday. She made her cut the cake and all the servants clapped for her which made Avni happy.
Avni: Thanku Maa.
Neela *kissed on Avni’s forehead*: Mera bacha. Bus tou humesha khush rahe. (My child. Always stay happy)
Listening this Avni became a little sad which Neela noticed.
Avni: Maa. Wo tou shayad kabhi houn hi na main. Aaj mere janamdin per, jab mijhay sabse zyada khush hona chahiye, ussi din zindagi ne mijhse sab kuch cheen liya. (Maa. That may not happen ever. Today, on my birthday, when I should be most happy, life snatched everything from me)
Saying this she choked and Neela hugged her. After 2-3 mins they broke the hug.
Avni: Leave it maa. Aaj meri zindagi ek naya mor le rahi hai. (Leave it maa. Today, my life is going to take a new turn). She tightly hugged Neela. Aaj main Canada ja rahi houn. (Today, I am going Canada).
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Neela: Itne ache colleges hain yahan. Kiyuon ja rahi ho tum Canada bacha? (Such good colleges are here. Why are u going Canada then?)
Avni (while instructing servants to put her luggage in car): Shayad meri kismat main yahi likha ho. (May be this is written in my fate)
Neela’s POV
May be something good is written in her fate. I hope she stays happy wherever she lives in Canada.
Avni: Okay maa. Ab meri flight hai. Main chalti houn. (Okay maa. I have my flight now. I’ll take leave)
She came to Neela and hugged her.
Neela: Apna khayal rakhna bacha. Kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho tou foran call ker lena. (Take care of yourself bacha. If u need any thing call me immediately).
Avni: Okay maa. Take care. Bye.
Saying this she went to the car and waved back saying I’ll miss you maa. You were the only one who always stayed by my side after everyone left. I’ll call u after reaching Canada.
Neela: Love you bacha.
After this she left for the airport.
The scene shifts to a boy who is sitting beside a grave. He touched something written on the grave and then went from there. It was not revealed whose grave it was but the date of death was shown which was same date on which Avni’s family died which is 12 July,2009.
The guy is revealed to be Neil. While walking towards his car a beggar came to him and handed some flowers to him saying that please have these for someone whom you love the most. He after listening this bought those flowers and went back home.
A dark room is shown and Neil is standing in front of a picture hung on the wall and he said while looking at those flowers which he bought and talking to the painting:
Neil: Aaj ek kisi ne mijhay yeh phool diye aur kaha ke kisi ese keliye le jao jisse sabse zyada mohabbat ho. (While crushing those flowers). Lekin mijhay tou pyaar se sakht nafrat hai. 8 saal guzar gaye. Saba agey berh gaye. Magar main*hitting hard on the wall* aaj bhi wahi houn. (Today someone gave me these flowers saying take these for someone whom u love the most*while crushing those flowers*. But I hate love. 8 years have passed. Everyone moved on. But*hitting hard on the wall* I am still there.
Saying this he dashed out of room. But who is in the picture is not shown.
The scene shifts to Avni who is in the plane and was thinking something.
Flashback
(A younger Avni is shown excited and asking various questions to Neela, who is her mother’s cousin, asking about her birthday party when the phone rings. Neela picked up the phone and got shocked. She immediately turned on the television on which it was shown the news of plane crash in which Avni’s family was travelling except Aisha and Ashish as they stayed in Australia. Neela immediately called Ashish to tell him about the crash. Both of them went to order cake for birthday party were on
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there way back to home when they heard the news of crash and while being on call, shocked, they didn’t noticed the troller truck coming in front of them and the car hit badly to the troller and both of them died as well on the spot)
Avni’s POV
Usdin sab kuch khatam ho gya. Only Neela maa was left with me. She has raised me very well and never let me feel alone. After 8 years, now I decided to move on and complete my further studies. God please give me strength to face all my problems alone now.
With this the episode ends on Avni’s smiling face.
Precap: Avni’s first day in University and she meeting someone.
Hey guys! Hope u all like it. The first episode got a bit too long. Sorry for that. ❤️
27 Comments
Wow….its amazing…very very nice.
..I must say u very well know how to express anyone’s feeling/emotions. + ur writing skills are very nice.
But i have one request.do update daily..?
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Thanku soo much. ❤️ I’ll try to post everyday but it may get late sometime.
Wow…its superb….its amazing…very very nice.
..I must say u very well know how to express anyone’s feeling/emotions. + ur writing skills are very nice.
But i have one request.do update daily..?
-$h@n@¥@
Omg.. Beautifully written..
Fab story…
But..
My birthday too is on 12th of july
Coincidence..
Would be waiting for next..
Keep doing good work..
Stay blezzed
Haha. My birthday is also on 12th july. Thanku soo much. ❤️
Amazing story!!!
Thank you. ?
Amazing story can’t wait for next chappy
Thank you. ?
Awesome plz continue
Thankyou. ?
Lemme ask athing
Did juhi dued in the plane crash while coming to meet neil
Nope. ?
Too good dear keep writing
Thank you soo much. ?
really interesting and nice please update next episode soon…. we all were waiting….it was a coincidence that my birthday also comes on 12 of july
and i want 2 ask u something that neil and avni have any past connection??
i must be waiting 4 ur answer
and wish you good luck 4 ur next update
-Nikita
Thankyou soo much. It will be revealed soon what is the connection between them. By the way my date of birth is also 12 july. ?
hey mine too is 12 july
Continue update soon
Sorry. Got late today. I try to update as soon possible.
Nice one . please keep updating. Can’t wait for Niel’s mystery to be revealed.
Thank you. Yes. I try to update as soon as possible. ?
What you wrote is out of the world!
Legit Loved!
You nailed it, Mishaal
Thank you soo much. ❤️
Please update soon even i am writing ff on avneil
Hey! I have updated episode 2. ?
No talking about 4th one