Hello frndz i am vaishnavi aka nagma this is my ff ek anokhi daastaan(a unique story) i would like to add more characters and pairs. Lets start.
Aparajita(apu): a vishkanya who turns into blue when tulsi leaves are not on her hand.
Malay: a fun loving boy who came to india after 10 yrs.
Kalpana:mother of apu and tapur. She made apu a vishkanya only to take revenge from malay’s family.
Tapur: sis of apu. She hates apu coz kalpana gives more importance to apu. She has a crush on malay.
Nanditha: mom of malay. She hate kalpana.
Harshvardhan: paralyzed dad of malay.
Ranveer: best frnd of malay.
Ishani : cousin of apu and tapur.
Kumkum: comedy piece
Rasik: kumkum’s husband and flirts with kalpana.
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A women is seen holding a blazer. She has tears in her eyes. She says i will take revenge at any cost. She keeps the blazer in the cupboard safely. She goes towards the calender and says tomorrow…. Tomorrow i am going to start my mission. I will complete my revenge in 1 month. Then i will have peace. Tapur comes and says maa i am feeling hungry. Yes the women is kalpana. Kalpana says i prepared food long ago. Go and have it. I have to feed apu. Tapur yells and says why not after all she is ur daughter and looks with a disgusted look. Kalpana says shut up and go from here. Tapur goes angrily.
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This is intro and ep 1. It is a story completely based upon my imagination and fiction. My real name is vaishnavi. Nagma is my lucky name.
21 Comments
Vaishnavi nice name amazing intro you added my favourite couples too ishveer
Pls continue I’m eagerly waiting for next episode
Thanks sharaya……
Nagma superb yaar
Thanks ranaji…..
wow dr …..nice start keep gng on ……I want more apulay scene in further episodes dr its a request 🙂 …. gud work vishu
Thanks akka……
Wow super. Keep it going vaishnavi dear!!
Thanks nicki….
Nice start waiting for the next epi….
Thanks priya……
Nice dear… Keep on writing … Good luck….
Hi nagma your fan fiction is amazing sharaya told about me that your fan fiction is good I like the intro
Nice episode nagma
superb Nagma… l loved it… pls continue…
Awesome nagma keep it up ,
dr nagma don’t be upset.ur doing great job .i like ur story and waiting for next epi.i just read it that’s why late for comments. i saw that ur are not comment becouse u have’t got comment.don’t be sad dr u will get more comments.we love ur story and we always with u.?????keep smiling.
Nagma ur name is vaishnavi ,it’s beautiful name.it’s too late see u later.g.n.s.d.
Nice start..keep continue frnd
Nice intro n title.
..keep it up
heyy it’s a very nice story
plzzzz continue it sooo
can u plzzzzzz tell me what is their meaning of “VISHKANYA”
Good morning firends and have nice day.???