Here about my story…
Its a small os if u guys like it then i will continue writing…
Ek mae aur ek tu dono mile is tarah…. its swasan ….
We can see a big family is sitting nd talking about bad activities. There small boysitting on swing nd listining carefully..an old man is saying doing worng which does not harm anyone for someone is right…
We can see a man running behind a small boy…. after running he enter a police station…
Y he is in police station…
Papa ka bhakat hai yeh…
Nd abut our girl can only see in story ….
Sorry if u dont like the concept… but then also i will post?????
My family say “aval darje ki dheet hai yaar”
So u hav to bear the story….
Now story start….
Ding
Ding
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Story start with an old women calling a man on phone telling him that delivery time is near come fast… as it is raining heavily.. its like today world will come to an end…
Scene changes where a women gave birth to a boy who was crying alot.. listening his crying sound the nature became clam.. but not that boy.we can imagine like whole hospital was hav closed their ears.. he was crying so loudly…
After some a man come the women ho was claming the boy told that man
Old women- le thara chora ketna ro raha hai. Tu hi chup kara … mare se nahi ho raha….
Man- Ma do… mae dekhu mere ladle ko..
(Now u hav come to that he is son of that women man name is Ram prashad Maheswari and women name is Parvati Maheswari.)
As the boy come in contact with his father touch he stop crying…
Whole hospital was taking sigh of relif …
Parvati – chore naam ke rakh a ga… mare pote ka..
Ram- Ma is a dekh kar ek he naam maan me aa raha hai…
Jo is ka ho ga Sanskar…
Sanskar Maheswari..
Scene changes
Where we can se a big mansion whole mansion is in hustle bustle
It is like there is some festival but no it is the nameing cerenomy of the prince of maheswaris..
Today officially his name will be Sanskar Maheswari..
We see priest is sitting and in front of them there is thaal with yellow chawal… and other side man and women is sitting with a cute chotu sa boy…
Priest-bache ka jana tethi bata e a yajmaan..
Ram- 11 sep and time 7 baje shaam ko…
Priest is seeing in his book after sometime he become shocked..
Priest- jis din aap ka beta hu aa us din barish ho rahe thi..
Ram-ji.. kyu
Priest- are yajmaan ghor sankat hai..
Ram-mere bete ki kundli me koe dosh hai.. kya pandit ji..
Rams wife- hey ram
Ram-kya hu aa sujata
Sujata-aree mae aap ko nahi apne ram ji ko yaad kar rahe thi…
Ram-with skocking expression tumhare ram ji mere alava aur kon hai…
Sujata- her face red y due to bushing or anger.. areee aap ko kuch samaj ata hai ki nahi jab dekho faltu baat karte rehte.. aap ke chakkar me bhul gae me ram ji ko kyu yaad kar rahe hai.. aree yaad aaya… pandit ji aap kya bol rahe .. faltu log bolte rahe ge aal bol e a..
All was seeing them was wat is going on…
Preist-mae tab se bolne ki kossish kar rahu but aap dono bolne do… tab na.. ab chup chap sune a…
Aap a bete ka janam us samay hu aa hai.. jb duneya bhr me ladhai(fight) ho rahethi.. sare grah nakshtra ladha rahe thi.. world war ho raha tha… is wajah se aap ka beta bahut gussa wala ho ga… but accha bhi … gussa ek he vajah se aa a ga jis inssan se voh sab se jada payar kare ga .. agar kisi ne use inssan ko dukh pahucha toh voh inssan gaya…
Ram- toh kya hu aa chale ga .. but payar kis se sb se jada kare ga.. kisi larki se..
Priest- nahi .. aap se…
Ram-aree yeh toh ache baat hai.. aaj kal bache apne baap ko kaha payar karte hai… sb ma ke bhakt hote hai..
Priest- aap abhi nahi samaj ge… payar ghutan ho ja a ga tab samaj a ge…
Like this ritual come to an end…
With passing days sanskar is growing nd his love for his father also we can see in this
Classroom where all student are siting
One boy and say
Boy1- aaj maam nhi aa a ge unka breakup hu aa hai…
Sb bache kush…
Boy1- chalo ek game khelte hai.. sab apne fav superhero ka naam bole ge…
Every1 say 1 by 1..
Boy2- iron man
Boy3- thor
Boy4- ben10
Girl1- spidiii spider man
Sanskar- Ram Maheswari is my superhero he my father..
Everyone claps..
At home
Ram- sujata dava ka box la na..
Sujata- la e … do min.
Ram – jaldi..
Sujata la rahe ..
As she slip and fall down.. everyone run to her sanskar his sister geet(imagine dristi dhami) his father.
Ram- lage toh nahi.. aao chair par batho..
Sujata- nhi bas todhi se.
Sanskar-phir thik hai.. aap ko chot nahi lage…
Sujata – chora tu mujhse itna payar kar ta hai..
Sanskar – aree nhi.. aap chotlagte toh papa tension me aa jate unka bp high ho ja unhe dard ho ta mujeh acha nhi lagta..
Sujata shock sanskar rocked????
Ram priest ki baat sochta hai. Aur bola hai abhi yeh haal hai toh bada ho ga tab kya ho ga…
Sujata- chore mae thari ma hu..
Sanskar- mae janta hu kuch naya batao…
Geet- are meri melo drama queen jane do gadhe ko mae hu na aap ki cute sweet masti jhakas beti aur beta…
Sujata- ha.. tere alava mujh se koe payar nhi karta..
Geet- mante ho na
Sujata – ha
Geet- chalo phur mere ko kl picnic ja na hai.. bye
Sujata- aree matlabi larki…
One day Ram one frnd comes to meet him..
Ram- Anuj yaha kase…
Anuj-tu toh bhul gaya bhai. Mujeh yaad he hai tu… gadha
Ram- nhi bhai.. business aur ghr me pas gaya..
Anuj- chl chod bata sb kase hai.. bhabhi ji bache kase hai…
as he was going to sit he falls down .. he says aree ma
Sanskar was passing frm there he stand there and ask
Uncle jab hum girte hai toh ma ko kyu yaad karte hai.. papa ko kyu nahi…
Every1 has came till now all was seeing him as he was gost ..
No one was having his answer..
Like this days were passing and sanskar was growing…
Lets peep to other side of frame
Till now we have not see our heroine
Here we see a family distributing sweets as they hav been blessed with a girl the most happy person is thier 5 year old son Maan khurana.
Maan-papa see she is my angel
Shivam- ya. Take care of her always ok..
Shivangi-i so happy maam wish is been fullfill now we hav our angel.. maan wat name you hav think of yor sister
After thinking sometime he says sona khurana .. he has one locket he put that in his sister neck other half in his when both are joined it become a face of boy nd girl in centre encraved j and s. s on maans locket. J on sona locket.
As time passes these four was going to party sona was now 2 year. They had an accident all were badly injured.. all were taken to hospital four were under observation .. after some one more case come where accident has happen but it was 2 years only parents were all right… after some time doc. Decleared her dead.. other side shivam shivangi also died due to excessive bleeding maam was not responding to the treatment… only shona was stable but she was unconcious.. after some time she wake up nd strt crying she was not claming then after some the parents were passing from there they heard her crying they went near her nd was shocked to see the girl she was exactly like thier daughter swara but swara was no more .. sumi ran to her take her in her lap strt to mke her clam
After sometime she slept in her lap..
Sumi- shekhar she is justlike our swara.. where are her parents
Nurses come there and see the girl who was shouting was now sleeping peacefully.
Nusrse who was in room say- no one is there . Here parents died in an accident and
Someone and call her she goes
Left sumi and shekhar thinking something deeply…
After some time they decided they will adopt her and make their daughter swara.Swara garodia
As no was there very easily they adopted her and left the city with her.
After 8 months
We can a bed where a boy is laying and man is sitting saying wakeup beta..
When came near we seen it is non other than Maan with many equipments around its is I.C.U maan is in icu since 8 months .
But today there was slightly movement in his hands. Slowly he open his eyes and find one man was seeing him with a smile on his face .. by dress he was looking like a doctor. First name come to his mind was his shona where is his angel.
After g8 difficulty he wake up and ask abut his family and speciallyhis sister. Doc. Was numb wat to he said wait for time then i will tell.
Like this 1 week pass non have said anything to him. He was very restless wat happen to his non have came to see him. That doc. Came and said
Beta i am Anuj singh yor doctor. Listen very clamly ok. 8 months ago yor accident happen in which yor whole family died. And you went to coma..
It was thunder on maan. He was crying thinking everything.
Then doc said i hav kept thier body in morgue u can see them.
Then he go to morgue he see thier body when see his angel body he was felling she is not his angel but face was similar. But there was no locket in her neck .. when ask doc. May it fell on accident spot.
After performing last ritual he went his home with anuj. He was all the thing he told everything abut his family to him . Then anuj ask him can he become his son as he doest hav any child . Maan was as got someone whome he can call his family he said yes.. both were happy. Happy tear were flowing from their eyes.
Then they went to his house there he see a lady sitting and saying no one care for me no one love me.they love only thier work. He smile seeing her antics . Anuj call her Avantika she turns..
She see her husband with a boy around 7 years old she was seeing him as she hav some connection with him. After sometime anuj break the silence and say he is our son.. and telll the story to her. She was having listening his story she hug him.. felling mothetly touch he also cry his heart out.
Then after some time she ask him are u hungry my son
Listening this he was felling so blessed but not happy because his angel is been stnached by god.. so he does not belive in god.
Shaking him avantika brought him on earth he says yes aunty..
Avantika get angry she say dont talk to me.
He ask y
She say u call me aunty call me mom the only i will talk
Saying this she turn to other side..
Maam say Maaaaa in tears and hug her…
Anuj said you both hav forget me so i m also there.
Like this tri hug…
Now ending here their childhood..
How they will meet
Wat sanskar other side
When will maan able to know sona is alive ..
For all these stay tuned to this …
Love u guys..
My fav. Writer are mars, bhanu mitra ,zaimailk, venus, goldie, arayna etc i hav all of yor ff .. in xams time also i read yor ff its like addiction.
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