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Episode No: 153
Episode Date: 5th October 2016
Scene 1: Shraman’s Room
The episode begins with Suman getting ready for going to work.
Sumo: Before going to PCT, I have to go to his office and talk to him. I have to know what problem he has with me. I also have problems with him, but I at least don’t behave like this.
Just then Kamini comes into the room and smiles seeing Suman.
Kamini: (in her mind) She loves to take care of this house right? Now she will see what I can do.
Kamini: Suman beta, you are going to PCT so early today?
Sumo: I would have gone later, but I have some important work to do because of that I have to go earlier.
Kamini: Good I found you before you went to PCT. I needed to tell you something.
Sumo: What is it Kamini Aunty?
Kamini: See, I have been taking care of the house. And Shravan is equal to Pushkar and Varun to me. I consider him like my son, so as a mother I decided to tell you this.
Sumo: Just feel free to say.
Kamini: Look Suman beta, you recently got married, and you and Shravan both got married all of a sudden, but I have tried to make sure you both carried out all the rituals, but there is one ritual left.
Sumo: What ritual?
Kamini: There is a ritual that after recently getting married the bride goes to her maternal house and stays there for a night and after that the next day her husband brings her back. So I wanted you to
Sumo: You wanted me to carry out this ritual right? Okay fine, I will go home after PCT today.
Kamini smiles. Suman looks at her watch.
Sumo: Aunty, I am getting late. I will talk to you later, maybe tomorrow after I comeback.
Suman leaves. Kamini smirks.
Scene 2: Office
Suman comes to Malhotra Company to talk with Shravan. Pushkar sees her.
Pushkar: Areh Sumo, you and here?
Sumo: Yes, I came here to speak with Shravan.
Pushkar: Oh, missing him this much?
Sumo: Keep Quiet and tell me where is he?
Pushkar: He must be in his cabin. Let’s go.
Pushkar and Suman finds the cabin empty.
Pushkar: I think Bhaia must have gone out for some work.
Just then a lady comes,
Lady: But sir, Shravan sir didn’t come to office today?
Pushkar and Suman are surprised.
Pushkar: What!
Lady: He was also not here yesterday.
Pushkar: Then where have Bhaia gone? Sumo do you have any idea?
Sumo: If I knew he is not in the office, why would I have come here?
Pushkar: Oh yes, it slipped from my mind. I am also very foolish to ask you. But where have he went?
Pushkar calls some of his client to know if Shravan is with them. Suman gets a bit worried.
Sumo: (in her mind) If Shravan is not in the office, then where must he have gone?
Scene 3: Shravan’s chamber
Shravan reaches his chamber and he looks at the mess.
Shravan: Finally I completed the final procedures and also talked with some of the clients. I have also changed my address. But how will I clean this mess?
Shravan: (in his mind) Yesterday, I have tried to escape from this but now I really have to this. But! I don’t even know how to clean my own room.
Just then a voice says,
Voice: We will help you clean your chamber.
Shravan looks behind and is surprised to find Suman and two of her PCT members standing and smiling.
Shravan: Suman?
Suman: C’mon let’s get to work ladies.
The ladies start the cleaning, and as Suman is also cleaning along with them, Shravan whispers to her.
Shravan : What are you doing here?
Sumo: Don’t think too much. I am helping you because you are my office neighbour.
Shravan fumes.
Shravan: How did you get to know about this chamber?
Suman gets into a flashback,
Suman is worried about Shravan’s whereabouts and she gets a call.
Sumo: Hello Preeta?
Preeta: Sumo you didn’t tell me that Shravan loves you this much.
Sumo: What nonsense are you blabbering? Are you drunk?
Preeta: Shravan loves you so much, that he located his office near PCT only.
Suman gets shocked.
Sumo: What! What are you saying?
Preeta says how she saw and overheard Shravan talking with a guy, and how he brought a place near PCT for his chamber.
Suman gets out of the flashback.
Shravan: Tell me.
Sumo: It’s none of your business that how I came to know about this?
Shravan: Look Sumo.
Sumo: I think I should continue with my cleaning now anyways I also have some work at PCT later on.
Suman leaves and continues cleaning and Shravan fumes even more.
Sumo: Now why are you standing here and doing nothing? You are the owner of this chamber so you should be also doing something.
Shravan also does work by arranging his papers and files on the table and angrily looking at Suman.
Suman and the ladies do the cleaning and just then Suman gets a call from Preeta.
Sumo: Yes Preeta, tell me.
Preeta: Sumo, there is a problem. We got an order.
Sumo: That’s great, how can this be a problem?
Preeta: Sumo, thing is the person wants their order to be done by the evening and also you brought two of the staffs with you. Should I cancel it?
Sumo: No no, don’t. I will be sending these two back.
Suman keeps the phone.
Sumo: Listen both of you, we got an order but it must be accomplished by this evening so you two go back I will come later.
The two ladies is about to leave.
Shravan: Even you can leave, Suman.
Sumo: No, no Pati dev I can’t leave you like this. I need to help you.
Shravan looks at Suman angrily as she calls him Pati dev. The ladies leave now.
Sumo: Shravan, whatever I am doing is as a neighbour, since he can’t do all these by his own and it will be bad if I leave him alone, never mind anyways the work is almost done.
Shravan gets very angry with Suman and pins her to the wall.
Sumo: Shravan?
Shravan: What’s your problem? Why are you behind me?
Sumo: Me behind you? You are behind me. Who told you to buy a chamber near PCT?
Shravan: I had no other option and so what if I brought a chamber near PCT, I at least didn’t buy PCT, be thankful for that.
Sumo: Shravan! What do you exactly want?
Shravan: Leave me alone!
Sumo: Then why did you marry me? And all this drama I am fed up of these drama and pretending to be happy.
Suman becomes emotional, and tears start falling from her eyes. Shravan feels a bit bad.
Suman wipes her tears.
Sumo: Why am I even telling you all these? You don’t understand anyone’s feeling?
Shravan gets back to fuming.
Sumo: Not at least for me? At least understand the feelings of the other family members. What must they be thinking after seeing us fight? I have made many excuses but now this is too much. So please at least co-operate.
Suman folds her hands. And again she separates it.
Sumo: Now after cleaning the shelf, I will leave and then you can do whatever you want to do.
Suman gets back to cleaning and Shravan gets back to work.
Suman is cleaning the shelf and she struggles to clean the top as it’s too high, Shravan sees this. Suman tries again and again. Shravan sees this and he cannot take it anymore and he goes to help Suman.
He lifts Suman up so that she can reach that. Suman gets a bit surprised and Music plays. Suman stares at him.
Sumo: Shravan put me down.
Shravan: Now clean the top.
Sumo: Shravan! I said put me down.
Shrava: Keep quiet and do your work quickly.
Suman diverts her attention towards cleaning and Shravan while lifting her again spots her heart shaped tattoo on her leg looking surprised at it and just then Preeta comes with lunch and sees this .
Preeta: Uhum, uhum.
Shravan and Suman sees this and Shravan gets her down.
Preeta: Here is lunch for both of you and you may both have lunch together.
Preeta leaves.
Shravan: Now if you are done you may leave now.
Sumo: I have good news for you. I am going back home after PCT, for after wedding ritual so tonight you need not be worried about staying with me. Now you can sleep tonight peacefully at least.
Suman leaves from the place. Music plays, and the screen freezes on Shravan’s surprised face.
Precap: Suman drives Daboo and Mausaji to school and temple respectively, on the way her car gets spoiled. Just then Shravan’s car pass by, and they all see it. Daboo and Mausaji requests Suman to speak with Shravan so that they can go by his car. Suman gets thinking and looks on worried.
Okay, I am honestly happy with the response I received in the previous episode. And I hope I don’t disappoint you all and meet up your expectations. And yeah for those who were asking for preekar and Aditya scenes, Preekar scenes will be there in the next episode and Aditya track will be there soon but in a positive note.
And do feel free to express ur opinions. And thank u so much for the support means a lot to me.
20 Comments
Oh thank you so much fatarajo…
For posting it so soon..
You really are amazing..
The episode was as usual bang on..
I really feel like.. I am reading daily updates.. Just a bit shorter though..
Keep writing.. Keep posting..
Love you loads!
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Hey WS thanks for commenting happy u liked it and ya this epi is a bit short today the next few episodes will be longer I promise ? and thanks for encouraging me.
Love u too ???
Ahh..ahh….amazinngg..
ShraMan scene ??
It feels reaall yaar… I loved it.. Thank you for bringing edkv back yaar.. I love you and this was amazinggg…
Nishita
Hey nishita thanks for commenting happy u liked the Shraman scenes ??? well I will try my best to maintain that EDKV feel ? I miss EDKV so badly yaar ??? and love u too ???
U rocked jo!! Kamini chachi..? shraman scene?
And shravan ko bilkul wesahi banaya jesa ki shw me tha.. Pagal?
Overll the epi was superb!!
waiting for the nxt prt eagerly??
Love u??
Hey nazu thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? Hahha lol pagal Shravan ??????? and happy u liked the epi ? the next part i will upload tonight love u too ???
Great EP, really miss edkv, keep it up
Hey gargi thanks for commenting happy u liked it ???, me too miss EDKV a lot ?? and happy to see that u got registered ???
So beautifully written Jo. Loved it !!!
Sorry for not commenting in the previous parts. Post soon dear !
Hey dear thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? And it’s okay I understand at least u commented now? Will post the next part tonight ?
Ohh jo..yaar ur first lines please note wali made me remember ur old ff..and ur habit of writing scene 1 ,2 ohh gotta remember ur ff…now coming towards this epi..it was just mind blowing.i felt like every scene happening before my eyes just like real edkv…u r amazing sis..
Too cool
Loved it to core
Post soon
Hey prettypreeti thanks for commenting haha kya karoon old habits die hard ??? and happy u could imagine it means a lot to me ? And yes will post it soon ?
It was ??????????????????????????????????????????????????
SharMan scene ??????????????????????????????????????????????
Your Talent ?????????????????????????????????????????????????
This FF??????????????????????????????????????????????
LOve youu
Take care
Byee
Areh yaar ishu bohot taarif hogaya ?
Vaise Shukriya ???
hey….
just superb episode. I just love your idea.
its so nice. & episodes were so realistic.
its fantastic & sooo good. keep it up.
& ya really sorry for not commenting on previous epi.
loads of love. byee….
post next epi soon
Hey reema thanks for commenting happy u liked my idea and nah it’s okay at least u commented on my ff now ? Love u too
Yes I already submitted the next episode
Hey jo nice writing yar ….and shraman scenes are so gud …seemed so real …keep it up girl.and post soon luv u?
Hey rt thanks for commenting happy u liked it and next part is already posted ?
At first sorry for late comment.iys just fabulous ?????????
Hey Christie thanks for commenting happy u liked it ?