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Episode No: 155
Episode Date: 7th October 2016
Scene 1: Malhotra Industries (Office)
The episode begins with Shravan reaching the Malhotra Industries Office.
Shravan: Thank god that Sumo went by auto if not I would have been late by now.
Shravan reaches Ramnath’s cabin and find him reading some documents. Shravan is about to knock the door, he thinks of something for a while and then he knocks the door.
Ramnath: Shravan? No need to knock the door. You can just come in.
Shravan comes in.
He finds Ramnath doing some work.
Ramnath: And how is your new case going on?
Shravan: Dad, I want to tell you something?
Ramnath: Sure, carry on.
Shravan: Dad, actually the thing is…. the thing is….umm
Ramnath: Just tell Shravan.
Shravan: I have opened a new chamber of my own.
Ramnath is surprised as Shravan tells the truth.
Ramnath: What do you mean?
Shravan comes to Ramnath, and bends down and talks to him,
Shravan: Look Dad, I did what I thought was right.
Ramnath: No no I get it. But is there any problem? All of a sudden?
Shravan holds his dad’s hand.
Shravan: Dad, you are the most important person in my life, and I can’t take any decision without your permission, but this I did for myself and especially you. See you have done a lot for me in my life, now I want to stand on my own , that’s why I opened a new chamber somewhere else.
Ramnath gets surprised.
Ramnath: Shravan, see you still have time. You just comeback to office, and I will assure you won’t face any problem, and how will you manage all these by your own?
Shravan: Dad, dad relax! I am your son. I won’t face any problems. I just want to be like you, the best lawyer, I want to stand on my own and establish myself. I can’t be dependent on you anymore. And even if I really really need help, I will call you. But I just need one more thing from you now?
Ramnath: Now that you have started to take your own decisions, I have nothing else to do here. I am sure you are capable enough to have what you want. But still yes, you can tell me? After all I am your dad.
Shravan: Look Dad, I know you are very disappointed with me right now, but when you will see me standing on my own, then you will be very proud of me and I just need your blessings for this so that I can carry on.
Ramnath smiles and blesses Shravan.
Ramnath: Today you have proved that you have really grown up.
Shravan: Thank you so much for understanding me Dad. That’s why I love you so much and also trust you the most. Now I take your leave.
Shravan leaves.
Ramnath: (in his mind) In this case, Shravan have totally gone on his mom. He is just like her here.
Scene 2: PCT
Here Suman reaches PCT and is scolding all the ladies.
Suman: Just because you all finished this big order without me yesterday, doesn’t mean you all will work slower today. Work faster.
Preeta and the other ladies try to speed up. Suman comes and helps them.
Suman: Nothing can happen about you all, now I have to help you all. Come let me cook the dal and you cut the veggies.
While Suman is cooking, one lady tells Preeta.
Lady: Someone said right, one changes a lot after marriage. Take our Suman madam, as example. Last time if we did a good job next day she used to treat us with pizza, and now forgot about pizza now she treats us taunts instead.
Preeta gestures the lady to keep quiet. Suman listens to that.
Suman: You all do one thing. All of you go to Pizza Hut or Dominos and order whatever you all want, no need to do work, I do everything by myself.
Preeta: Areh Sumo, you got angry for no reason. She was just joking.
Suman: I can say who is joking or not. So better focus on your work, and forget about pizzas and all these stuffs.
Preeta whispers to that lady.
Preeta: You are also too much. You know how Sumo is when she is angry, and now you talk too much see you got scolded from her. Now quickly finish your work, if not Sumo will kill you.
Just then a lady comes, and she is Poorna. And she pats Sumo.
Sumo: What is it?
Sumo looks behind and she gets happy as she sees Poorna.
Sumo: Poorna!
Suman and Poorna hugs each other.
Sumo: Poorna you and here?
Poorna: It have been already a month since I am here, so I decided why not I visit you?
Sumo: You did the right thing.
Poorna: But I am angry with you?
Sumo: Now what did I do?
Poorna: You got married and you didn’t even bother to tell me? And that too with Shravan.
Sumo: Poorna, actually everything happened all of a sudden I didn’t have time to tell anyone.
Poorna: You should have at least told me.
Sumo: Okay sorry Baba, now I have also hold my ear also.
Suman holds her ears.
Poorna: Okay fine, I forgave you.
Suman smiles.
Sumo: By the way, how many months is it?
Poorna: It’s 5th month going on, I tell you this pregnancy is not easy at all. And also a bit nervous, since it’s my first time.
Sumo: Now you have to take care of yourself and your baby. Now you came here for the first time, come let me feed you something.
Poorna: No, it’s okay.
Sumo: You can’t refuse me.
Poorna: Okay fine.
Later while Suman and Poorna are eating,
Poorna: Yaar, your dishes are just amazing.
Sumo: Okay done with praises? Now continue with eating.
Poorna continues.
Poorna: Oh yes I forgot to say that Aaru has recently came back from Dubai.
Suman gets happy.
Sumo: What? Really!!!
Poorna: Yes, she went there for some course for a few months and now coming back for some very important work. She didn’t say much.
Sumo: It have been so many days since I haven’t met Aaru, especially Shravan.
Suman smiles while saying.
Poorna: Yes she was the only close friend of Shravan.
Suman looks on.
Poorna: And you also but, anyways why am I even speaking about all these.
Sumo: No , you are right. I have done wrong with Shravan during school times, after all I was immature that time. If Aaru wasn’t there that time, I wonder what would have happened with Shravan?
I really owe her a lot.
Poorna: Okay, Sumo now I have to go now. Actually I have an appointment today and your PCT was nearby that’s why I came here.
Sumo: Okay, you go now and if you need anything you can call me. I could have dropped you but unfortunately my car broke down in the morning.
Poorna: It’s okay yaar.
Poorna leaves.
Scene 3: Tiwari Residence
It’s night time, and Shravan comes to Tiwari Residence to bring Sumo back home.
Shravan: Now I have to take this Suman with me back home, she is really irritating.
Suman on the other hand is cleaning her room up.
Sumo: I didn’t come here for many days and already this condition of my room.
Suman is coughing due to the dust while dusting the curtains so she covers her mouth with her dupatta the one she is wearing.
Shravan comes to Tiwari Residence.
Mamiji: Areh Sharman beta, you are here to take Suman right?
Shravan nods.
Mamiji: She is upstairs.
Shravan: Nanu?
Mamiji: He is in his room.
Mausiji is reading newspaper and she comes to Mamiji.
Mausiji: Bhabi, see this news, it’s of a girl who recently threatened to commit suicide due to her husband and in-laws taunting. And a very serious case, is filed against the in-laws due to that.
Shravan nods no hearing their conversation and goes upstairs.
Suman continues cleaning her room. She finds a box, and she keeps it on the table and then while keeping she finds a sharp knife. Suman holds and looks at it.
Sumo: (in her mind) Knife? Who kept it here?
Shravan is on his way to Nanu’s room, and he sees Suman holding the knife. Shravan then remembers how Mausiji and Mamiji was talking about a girl attempting suicide due to her husband and he also remembers how Suman said that she is fed up of pretending and their fights. Shravan gets shocked as he assumes that Suman is committing suicide and he shouts.
Shravan: Sumo!!!!!
Suman gets stunned with the shout Shravan takes the knife from her hand and throws it away. And he hugs Suman tightly. Suman gets surprised. Music plays.
Shravan: Have you really gone mad? How can you have just commit suicide like this? Have you not thought about me or Nanu?
Shravan holds Suman tightly after breaking the hug. Suman is surprised.
Shravan: I can’t afford to ….
Shravan realises that he got too emotional and he stays silent. Suman stares at him surprised and later she speaks.
Sumo: Relax! I just found this while cleaning. Who told you that I will suicide?
Shravan gets stunned as he realises he misunderstood the situation and also gets embarrassed.
Sumo: I will never ever do that. I won’t give up life so easily, okay.
Shravan stays silent. Suman finds a photo and she picks it up and smiles as she looks at it.
Suman shows Shravan the pic.
Sumo: Shravan look at this pic.
Shravan looks at the pic and he also smiles.
Sumo: Remember this pic of me, you and Aaru
It is a picture of teenager Suman, teenager Shravan and teenager Aaru.
(Assume Mahima Makwana as teenager Aaru, that girl with Vishal and Palak in one of their selfies)
Shravan: Of course, how can I forget that?
Suman and Shravan smiles looking at each other.
The episode ends.
Precap: Suman and Shravan gets back into the flashback of their teenage moments with Aaru and they smile as they discuss about it. Two new entries are shown. The girl comes wearing sunglasses and Suman smiles looking at her. On the other, Shravan gets into a fight with another lawyer, a guy.(Another new entry). The lawyer says that he is the biggest lawyer of the town and his juniors have no right to disrespect him. Shravan looks at him angrily and fumes.
Well, I am actually amazed with the response I am getting in this fan fiction. Thank you sooooo much, love you all so much for this. And yes, since tomorrow is Saturday, I will update the next episode on Monday, as I already said that this ff will be published every Monday to Friday. So next episode, which is Episode 157, 10th October 2016 will be published on next Monday, 6th March 2017.
But, I need a help. I don’t know which actress should I choose for the grown up Aaru. The reason is because Aaru’s character will have a major role to play in Shraman’s story in my ff, the teenager Aaru will be played by Mahima Makwana, but can someone suggest me an actress for the grown up Aaru, I have two actresses in my mind but I am not sure if they will suit the character, so I need help.
And Aaru’s character will be there for 1-2 weeks episode.
And before I end this, my aim is to bring the EDKV effect via this ff and I will try my best to do so and maintain it, and I am so sorry if you feel my story is dragging. You can inform me if you find my story dragging at any point of time, and I myself am not a big fan of dragging.
And I will upload a promo after every 5-10 episodes in between.
So, I will write a promo along with the Monday’s episode which is the 157th Episode.
28 Comments
Hey fatarajo..
Girl.. You are seriously doing a great job of keeping our edkv alive..
The last part was the best..
Waiting for new entries..
But I will have to wait another two days.. That’s bad!!
Anyway..
Love you loads..
Take care..
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Hey WS thanks for commenting and thank u for encouraging me ? Even I myself personally enjoyed writing the last part the most ? I will most likely post a promo with the episode on Monday ?
I mean tomorrow i will post the promo and episode on Monday
HEY JO IT’S AWESOME !!! Shravan cared about Sumo so much…that’s so sweet. And especially the hug. We didn’t get much romance scenes in EDKv…and I really hope it to get here….!!!
So waiting for monday’s update.
I’ll pm u about my suggestion of the Aaru character.
Hey Diya thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? yeah he feared to lose her again na that’s why ??? and yeah I understand there were so much romance awaiting in EDKV??? and yeah i got ur messages
Will post the promo tomorrow ?
Amazing work. I loved it. ShraMan are so freaakingg adorable. Why dont you try Sapna Pabbi or Srishti Rindani? Cause look, no one from current TV shows cause then I wouldn’t be able to imagine her. So suit whichever yoy like; may the best get it. Mahima was a nice choice. Sry for a short comment, but busy studying. Love you loads
Hey nishita thanks for commenting happy u liked it and well whose sapna? Whose shristi? Sorry I don’t watch much Hindi tv serials these days besides koi Laut Ke Aaya hai and Ghulaam sometimes and yeah I have decided who to choose for aaru’s role , and yeah when i saw vishlak and mahima’s pic together i got this idea and well u commented that’s a lot for me ? And good luck for ur studies
Well they’re web series actors. Im not into many shows now as well, except sony tv shows and koi laut ke aaya hai.. 🙂
Lovely episode. It’s really awesome one. The episode is too good. I got some time to comment….
Waiting for Monday’s episode eagerly….
Loads of love….
Hey Reema thanks for commenting happy u liked the episode ? and i understand will post a promo most likely tomorrow and yeah love u too ???
Hey Jo!!!!! I have got no words to describe the episode. It really doesn’t seems that Edkv has ended!!! U are fulfilling the untold story of ShraMan and its really difficult. But u wrote it so smoothly. Post soon?
Hey beas thanks for commenting and that’s really really sweet of u ??? I don’t know what was the actual entire story and I m sure I m not the only one who wanted to know what was the story, I don’t know but I will try my best to bring back the EDKV magic i can’t do that but I can try na ??? and will post the next epi on Mon but will post a promo tomorrow ?
Wow amazing episode
I like tridha choudary as aru
Wow amazing episode
I like tridha choudary as aru
Waiting for next….
Wow amazing episode
I like tridha choudary as aru
Waiting for next….
what is ur name??
Hey aliya thanks for commenting happy u liked it well u can call me jo ? My name is joyee
And well I have already decided who will play the role of aaru ?
Hiii.. Just finished reading all the episodes you’ve written till now.. I’ve missed your writings and so I’m glad to have you back. Loving the way you are taking the story ahead. Your writing style is amazing, it actually makes me feel like I’m watching the actual episode on tv.. I love you and your work. ❤
You’re an awesome writer. Waiting anxiously for Monday now ?
Much love ?
Hey zainab thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? And well i wil try my best to give EDKV a proper and satisfying ending through my ff and happy u liked it a lot and thanks for encouraging me ??? that really means a lot to me ???
Will post a Promo tomorrow ?
Just marvellous, your post makes my day. Love u sis….????
Hey gargi thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? and aww that’s really sweet love u too ???
Hey jo..see everone is loving it and we all need to love this afterall thus is written by our cute jo….i m mad for this ff now.ur every scene come out to be very good i mean excellent..i love u..my edkv us back no doubt…
Thanku my joooo.my yo yo jo..
Ok the actress needed is negative or positive….bw which ever actress u opt i would like it coz my concentration is o nimik uff our shraman..
Lods of luv..
Hey Pri thanks for commenting Areh bohot taarif Hua mera ??? and thank u so much for loving my ff a lot ???
Well i will say about aaru in three lines positive character. She will bring Shraman closer and no faltu love triangles ??? and yeah concentration of this ff is always on Nimik Urf Shraman ? Love u too ???
It wassssssssssssssssssssssssssss amazinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Waiting for nxt part eagerly
And for Aru…………….Ragini Khanna can be a choice or tina dutta or Radhika madan or Avika Gor
Love you
Take care
Byee?????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Hey ishu thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? And will post the promo tomorrow and next epi on Monday , well I have already decided who will play the role of aaru and clue she is looks a lot like one of the actress u recommended ??? love u too ???
Hey Jo finally I finished reading all episodes.. Ur story is awesome loved every part.. Love u dear..
Hey Alu thanks for commenting happy u liked it ??? love u too ??? and OMG all at one go ???
I am really very sorry for late comment. It’s fabulous!!!????
Hey meher thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? And nah it’s Okay at least u commented ?