I’m a great fan of edkv and I’m writing ff on them.
Same characters
Tiwari house
Sumo is sleeping . mami shouts to get up and get ready for the office. Sumo is still sleeping . again mami shouts and wakes up suddenly. She sees the time and is shock tht she is already late. She gets ready and comes down . mami sys to have breakfast. But she sys tht she is late and hve to reach office at a time. Mami scolds her tht I said to u to come and sleep fast yesterday night but u Wer busy with ua frnds. Now see the outcome . sumo is irked by her taunts. And goes frm ther. She reaches the office . puskar sys thank God aleast today u r in time . but 5 minutes late. Sumo stops him. Pushkar sys thank God bro is not here otherwise . she sys otherwise wat ” aane do usse mai use nahi chodungi. Pushkar sys calm down “itna bhi gussa mat karo vaise aaya bhi nahi aur tum abhi SE shuru ho gayi. Sumo goes frm ther. She meets ramnath . he sys tht my son is coming today .so
: go kal SE kaam shuru kardega aur mai chahtha Hun ki tum uske secretary banjaao.
Sumo: par sir kal SE!!!
R: haan mera beta kaam mai deri nahi kartha isliye.
Sumo : teek hai sir.
Sumo was thinking today he is coming and he will start his work frm tomorrow .kaise ajeeb insaan hai.
She dashes with someone and she falls on his arms.and they both share an eyelock. He is none other than shravan.they r meeting each other after ten years .she doesn’t recognize him starts her dadagiri and asks him who r u ?? And whom u want meet . he tries to go inside but she doesn’t leave him. He pushes her . get inside. She shouts thief thief. Everyone gather ther everyone is surprised seeing him . ramnath sys shravan. Sumo was shocked and sys lambooo shravan.
Precap: pushkar teasing tht she didnt recognize shravan bhaiyya and laughs. Sumo goes to shravan and apologize.
13 Comments
Wow,…its awesome…pls post next part soon..
Lovely nice update next part ASAP can’t wait 🙂
Nice pls update soon the next part
i would like to ask TU team to consider abt this matter.
here many fan fictions r submitted which r very promising and liked by many.but many writers get dissapointed with the fact that they r getting less comments….but there r also many people who only cames here as a silent reader….dont comment,but want to read the story.when any writer being dissapointed stop writing here,it becomes great dissatisfactory.
so u show the views number here,at least the writer won’t be disheartened thinking that their stories r getting less importance.and the silent reader will also be very happy.☺
Me too agrees with u yaar???
thanks☺
yessss ur right i was also thinking abt the same thing
Yes Ireena is correct
nice update
super epi 🙂
Nice. Please continue.
Pls update original story
Nice start