Hey guys.. Okay, so this is another two-shot based on the recent facts that took place in Ek Duje Ke Vaaste
[Note: ShraMan are friends here, and their marriage proposal is not yet shared.. This is after Shravan saved Suman from Aditya.. And no confession has taken place, yet they know that they love each other]
ps: language, like nick-names different ho sakte hai, as I always had a wish that Shravan called Suman ‘jhalli’
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She sat there.. Crying.. Of course what could she have done.. What Aditya did to her, what Shravan did to him…!
She did not know whether to cry over what took place, or to meet him, and thank him..
Her deep down confused thoughts broke when Mami entered…
Mami- Suman, What you have gone through, I wish that no one has to go through that ever… But now, its very difficult to find a guy for you.. But yet, this guy named Aryan Makhija is ready to marry you..
Suman *What the hell’s wrong with her? Give it a break.. But who cared.. She just wanted to leave all this and move to USA.. The only people who’ve noticed that she’s not even left the room, or has eaten anything, is Daboo and Nanu and she was sure if Preeti was here, then Preeti too.. Of course, other’s never knew that she existed, until or unless they needed her..*
Mami: Suman, where are you lost?
Suman: Mamiji, don’t you think it’s too early?
Mami: Early? My son is there suffering from typhoid alone, and you’re thinking it’s early? Suman, what’s wrong with you? Don’t you care about me or your own brotherr Anuj?
Suman: *family pressure again* I’ll meet him tomorrow.. But Mamiji, with Shravan..
Mami: *hesitantly* Why with Shravan, beta?
Suman: I want to see if this Aryan is happy with my friendship with Shravan.. I’m not gonna leave my best-friend.. I don’t want this guy to turn out like Aditya, who does not accept my friendship with him..
Mami: uhh..umm..okay beta..
Suman *calling Shravan* hey…
Shravan: hey!
Suman: can we meet?
Shravan: right now?
Suman: yes…
Shravan: where?
Suman: I’m coming over…
Shravan: I’ll be waiting..
Suman drives to Malhotra Mansion..
She sees the whole Malhotra family sitting, but Shravan’s not there..
Lalaaji: ayye! Suman puttar.. Tu yaha? Woh bhi iss waqt?
Suman: woh Shravan se milne aayi thi..
Kamini: woh apne kamre mei hai
Suman walks up to the stairs
Ramnath gets upset, while PreeKar smile and hi-fi
Suman enters the room.
Shravan *without looking at the door* aa gayi?
Suman: how do you know it was me?
Shravan: you’re the only one who enters my room without knocking..
Suman smiles faintly…Shravan notices
Shravan: Sumo, have you been crying?
Suman nods in no..
Shravan: Would you now lie to me also?
Suman: Shravann….
Suman starts crying again..
Shravan pats her back, and hugs her.. Ramnath sees this and fumes, and goes away..
Shravan: what’s wrong Sumo?
Suman: Mamiji has got another alliance for me?
Shravan: again? After all this?
Suman: I don’t know.. I don’t have the strength to marry someone after all that happened..
Shravan *holds her shoulder and pulls her of so that she can look at him* hey, you’re SUMO! You’re bold enough to face everything.
Suman: I don’t think now I can..
Shravan: of course you can.. You’ve been through a lot Sumo.. A LOT.. Now it’s your time to stay happy…
Suman: but I don’t think I would be happy with that Aryan..
Shravan: how can you judge him without meeting him? How can you say that he won’t keep you happy?
Suman: because he’s NOT YOU !
*Silence*
Shravan: of course, he’s not me.. And that’s my he would keep you happy Sumo! He will not misunderstand you, by listening to half-said things, nor he would hurt you ever like me!
Suman: but he won’t even understand me, without asking me what’s wrong, like you do!
Shravan: because I’ve known you since childhood.. We share that bond, that we can understand each other without words.. Give him time, you never know if he can !
Suman nods..
Suman: you come tomorrow, and we’ll meet him. I don’t want to repeat what took place before..
Shravan: sure…
-Night-
Suman: you love me… Why can’t you just admit it Shravan?
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Shravan: I love you, but circumstances have made us stand at that point, when it either stands for friendship or nothing.. I can’t love you, and confess you, knowing that you’re gonna marry someone else!
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Suman: if you say just once, I’ll forget the promise I made to your dad, I’ll forget everything, every relations, every promises, and just be yours.. Yours Forever….
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[This was a conversation, that neither of them witnessed.. But it took place, unknowingly, it did.. This might happen a several times here]
-Next Day-
Aryan Makhija and his family comes to visit Tiwari family.. Everyone loves the guy..
Shravan-Suman then talk to Aryan alone.
Shravan: are you fine with my and Suman’s friendship?
Aryan: what is exactly between you two?
Shravan: we were best friends since childhood, but due to matters, we were seperated.. Then I returned and we became friends again..
Aryan: nothing other than that?
Suman *looking at Shravan* no..
Aryan: then its fine..
ShraMan smile and Aryan leaves..
Shravan: I don’t like him..
Suman: why? What’s wrong with him..
Shravan: he’s weird..
Suman: how?
Shravan: he agreed for our friendship..
Suman: so? If he had said no, then too you would have said that you don’t like him…
Shravan: his height is equal with you.. You won’t call him Lambu, like you do to me..
Suman: if he even was lambu, I wouldn’t have called him lambu, like I call you. That’s name reserved for you..
Shravan *smiles* but still..
Suman: but still What, Shravan?
Shravan: his name is weird.. Makhija.. Feels like someone’s sending away a makhi.. Makhi-ja
Suman: seriously Shravan? You would tell me not to marry someone because his name’s weird…?
Shravan: imagine yaar.. Ms. Suman Tiwari into Mrs.Suman Makhija..
Suman: that does not sound so bad
Shravan: c’mon Sumo..
Suman: please don’t say No, until you have a valid reason Shravan…
Shravan nods, and walks away…
Suman: you could not even give a proper reason, Shravan..
She sighs..
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Shravan: like you could’ve given a valid reason, Suman..
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Suman: if you would’ve told me, I would’ve.. Of course there is ton of things that’s good in that guy.. But I can’t marry him, cause he’s not YOU.. And this one bad factor, can never make up to millions of good things about him…
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How was it guys? Next part probably on 16th.. My exams are on, that’s why..
Hope you liked it!
Do give your reviews !
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Hey Nikki…after a long time…huh…!
It was really good…!
Waiting for d next part…
All d nest for ur exams…
Love u sweety..
Take care.
Do well.
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Yess..
Thank you so much for your sweet wishes..
Love you too 🙂
Awesome!! Loved it!!
Please post it soon!
All the best
Love you
Take care!
Thank you so much..
Love you too..:)
Super….
Amazing..
So nice…
No ego..
No self respect…
Only..dosthi wala..shraman…
Loved it..????
Keep it up…
All the best for ur exams
Thank you so much..
Yes no ego, no self-respect..only our shraman..
Thank you!
Love you
Nikku
Aww…this was so cute!
All the best for ur exams dearie…concentrate on ur studies…
FF toh chalta rahega…aur MFK ka kya?(Mujhse Fraandship Karoge)
Anyways, u study well, top ur exams….then we will again chat…ok?
Missing our convo’s BAE…
Love u sweeto?
Awwhh..
Thank you so much..
Thank you..
And that ff will be continued.. I would post a little slow, but it would be continued.. Just 2-3 shots left for that..
Sure, we’ll definitely chat!
Love you!
I miss them too.. But just a month..
Nikita this was so amazing. Loved it. ?
Best of luck for your exams. Take care. ?
Thank you so much Zainab..
Thank you!
Nikki yar this one was awwwwdorable??
Post next part soon ..
Best of luck for ur exams .
Take care ..
Awh.
Thank you so so much!
Thank you!
Love you!
Nikku!!!!! My sweetheart sry for a late comment. I’m extremely sorry!!! Maaf kar de pls
The shot…..y didn’t u write it before???? I would have thrown it on the production’s face. They should really learn something. Uhhhh the way ShraMan has their inner conflict. Sooo realistic! Brilliant! Fantastico-Bravo-Excellento- J’adore ton recit! (I love ur write ups) Sweeto pls pls post soon. Don’t keep me hungry, I need sweet shots as my dessert after dinner!!
Love u alllllllllllllllllooooooooooooootttttttttttttttt
Take care
hours of tight warm huggies
muuuuaaaaahhhhh
byeee
Awwh..
It’s okay di..
Umm I did not get the idea before.. Anyhow, I’m happy with this now..
I hope the production would do something good now..
OHH EEEMM GEEE
Itni saari taarif?
Mei control. Nahi kar paungi.. Thank you so so much…
Love you di! BAE <33
Nikita..
Hi nikita this part is awsm:-*please post the nxt prt asap:-):-)
Hey sumo !
Thank you so much..
I would post soon
Loved it
Thank you so much smile!
Your comment is making you smile..:)
Hey Nik
how r u dear?
Sorry for cmmnting late… But kya kru yr ye mera browser h cmmnt post krne n bahot lazy ho gya h… U know this is the third tym m trying to cmmnt here…
now let see this wat my browser has decided…
it was so amazing…Mind blowing !!!
loved it…
i wish in serial also the track would be like this…
take care…
Love u loads !!!
Ruchi… 🙂
Hey di!
I’m good..
Anyways, ignore your browser…
And it’s fine..
Thank you so much!
Love you loads!
Nikita 🙂