Hey guys ,I am lily frm ekdv page…I read almost every ff of ekdv….i personally like every ff…Everyone is so talented.so ,I don’t know my ff will be of that standard……actually I m big fan of this show.that prompted me to write a ff on this show..i don’t know u all will like it or not….but plz share ur views nd ur suggestion …..
So my story begins,
Sumo nd shravu are best frnds ….they eat ,play ,study together…..they are inseprable …..But as sumo was image concious girl .She ignored Shravu infront of her so called friends……This was annoying for Shravu… The rejection shravan faced everytime by sumo just for her impression made him believe that sumo is a selfish girl …she just needs him for small things like homework nd time pass….Shravan left for London as per his parents orders to show everyone his capbilities especially sumo…Sumo who thought shravan as a frnd was shocked listening this news…….Then she realized her mistake……She realized that everything is over now.No more frnship…She took a lesson from life that never ever neglect a person who is so close to her..
Present day ;after 10 years
It is seen a beautiful girl wearing jeans and top is apologizing…oh yes this is our sumo…
sumo :yaar ,I m sorry na…..plz I will pakka come …saying this ,she ends the call………
She rushes to a restraunt…
sumo :now are u happy?
The other person is none other than sumo’s bestie Radhika
R:yaar(smiles)so sweet you are….thoda sa emotional drama kya karti hoon ki tu do min me maan jaati hai…….why are you so sweet?
S:yaar I have lost many people in life.i don’t want to loose anyone now.(becomes sad)
R:aww,meri sweet dost I know tu past ki baat kar rahi hai….mai tere saath kitne saal se hoon!… 13 years se…I have seen the change in you…..you know tu us samay bhi ek achi ladki thi bas thodi immature thi…..but after that incident tu bahot responsible,caring ho gayi hai …..that is the most important thing ….Let bygones be bygones..
khush raho balika bas khush raho…….(laughs)
S: maate hogaya lecture ya aur kuch bacha hai… chalo! apne naye bf se nahi milvaana kya yaa usse bhooka rakhne ka iraada hai ……(smiles)
R; chal chal jaldi break up naa ho jaaye…. yaar abhi tak toh maine facebook ka single status bhi nahi change kiya…..sumo (laughs)
The next scene
Shravan comes inside his home after 10 years .shravan calls maa,papa,chacha,chachi,bhaiya,bhabhi,chote ;lo mai aa gaya…
Everyone is happy to see him..shravu greets eveyone …..
Nirmala:kitna acha lag raha hai tumse milke..(tears roll down her cheeks)
Shravu:maa,don’t cry…be happy ..its party time ….
Vandy:yes shravan,we have organised a big party for you………..i have invited many high society people…..(kamini gets irked)
Shravu:thanks bhabhi…..acha papa nanaji kaise hai?
Ramnath:tiwari ji is all good but he always remembers you whenever I talk to him….shravu smiles
Sharvu :nanaji aur sab log aa rahe hai naa party mein?
Ram:ofcourse.
Shravu:ok everyone,I m going to my room to take some rest….
My take:
Shravu thinks he has moved on and will never want to talk or meet that selfish girl…in order to show sumo his success and how he has changed himself from a looser shravan to a well built up man ,he has to meet sumo for the last time.nd this party is the biggest opportunity ………………and he has no plan for revenge……
Precap-shraman meet for the first time…………they r having a small coffee date……
Thank you guyz for reading this………………………….
Sorry for any errors……………………..
27 Comments
it was amazing lily.. god everybody here is so talented.. d way u portrayed sumo’s growth n change appreciable… I loved it. .. post soon.. ????
Thanks sumo
Wow,I can’t wait fr next part ,plz post it asap
Thanks Sanjyoti….
i it very good.. u shd wrt…. apna talent chupa kr kaise rkh skti ho…. hmare entertainmnt km kyu krti ho 😉
Thanx lovely lady for your sweet
Words……. .. You all are the reason of this
FF… You all write your FFs so beautifully that prompted me to write a FF…… I hope you will like it…….
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Awesome you described Sumo very well better from the serial. Loved it. Keep writing. You are right everybody here are so talented.
Thanx shalini for your encouraging words……….love you
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Welcome Lily.
Hey..lily..I can recognise u..I read ur comments on written updates..that’s happy to listen also started writing..off..
Ur portraying the charctor of sumo was so..nice..
All the best?☺
And keep writing..dear?☺☺?
Thanx sona……… Nd I love your name………
Wow this is so interesting
thanx yaar…………
Hello lily yeah mee too i saw ur cmmnts on many ff’s …….
m soo glad u write it dear this is just amazing!! 🙂 🙂
n u said wi8 evry1 here is a vry good writer include u 🙂
Wish u bst of luck!! 🙂
Post nxt 1 soon
thanx a lot yaar for your words………….
heyyyy lilly it was awsome…,,,,,, u protrayed sumo,s character so well loved it
thanx angel…..you all guys are so sweet…..
It was awwwwesome??
thanx yaar…
Nice start.. Post soon… Kind of different track.. Pls continue.
thanx niki………..
It was nice lily..keep writing…post soon!
🙂
Thanks yaar…..