Hey i am lily!so this Is one of the most important epi……………..as this will bring a big change in shraman’s life …………………..i hope you will enjoy the goa trip………………………plz comment guys…………………………………….
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Recap:preekar alliance….shravu gets to know that his marriage is already fixed……………….
Kamini doesn’t want preeti and pushkar to get married…she wanted pushkar to marry tanya…but
Ramnath fixed tanya’s wedding with shravan……………
Shavu’s room
Shravu is looking at sumo’s pic :I don’t know what you feel, but I think I love you………I can’t express it to you…..
Kamini silently listens this….
She thinks about this and makes a plan………….
Kamini:shravan beta
Shravan:ha chachi..
Kamini:actually mai tiwari house jaa rahi thi toh socha tumhare saath chalti hoon………………..
Shravan(hesitant):thik hai!
At tiwari house,,
sumo and shravan looks at each other. sumo smiles and shravu also smiles back…kamini notices this…
she greets everyone…
Kamini:actually, I want a destination wedding…………..
Everyone is tensed after listening to her demand…..
Sumo:no problem!we will manage…………….
Kamini:suman,actually I wanted to tell you..i want to share half of the expense………plz don’t say no…………… its my request…………………….
Everyone nods…………………..
Sumo:where?
Kamini:goa! It’s a nice place….
Sumo:ok, we don’t have time..so I think we should finalise everything…..
Mamaji:ohh,but I can’t take a holiday..
Sumo: don’t worry…I will go there and finalise everything….
Mamaji:beta tum akele nahi jaa sakti ..i will not allow you……………….
Kamini:koi nahi, suman ke saath shravan chala jayega…..vaise bhi shravan toh Mumbai jaane hi vaala hai kal..toh suman bhi chali jayegi…..vaha se dono goa chale jaayenge…..
Sumo(happy):ok aunty..
Shravan (hesitant):thik hai……
Kamini:tum dono ,fikar mat karo …I will arrange everything in goa……vaise bhi both of you are best friends ………………….go and enjoy ………………….
Kamini smirks………………
Sumo is very happy to go with shravan…….
On the other hand,
Shravan is tensed..as voh jitna door jaana chahta hai sumo se, somehow he comes more closer to her…….
Next morning
At tiwari house,
Shravan comes to take sumo with him…
Both gets seated in the car and heads towards the airport……………
Sumo:shravan, I am very excited .actually ,I am going alone for the first time…………………
Shravan smiles at her and then tensedly looks outside the window………………………
Sumo and shravu reach mumbai..
Shravu:sumo,I am going for meeting…till then you can do shopping at mall…
Sumo: don’t worry about me..you should concentrate on your meeting……………………..
Shravu:I will call you around 3..ok?
Sumo:ok……………..
Shravan leaves……….
Sumo roams everywhere and spends time…………..
Sumo:what to do now? shopping at mall ………nooooooo..its so boring………………….sea beach…………….yes ………..
Sumo goes to a beach………..
She enjoys sitting there and spends time…………….
Shravu calls sumo….
Shravu:hello sumo..
Sumo:hii
Shravu:where are you?
Sumo:beach!nearby your office…………
Shravu:ook!i am coming……………
Shravan comes there and looks suman walking near the sea shore………………..
Shravan comes closer to sumo…………and puts hand on sumos shoulder …she turns around……
Due to wind,sumos hair strands come over her face…………………shravan corrects her hair………….both have an eyelock……………………..
Sumo smiles breaking the eyelock………….
Shravu :tum itni der se beach pe walk kar rahi thi………….
Sumo:ya,I enjoyed a lot……….
Shravu:really?
Sumo:ya,but why are you saying so?
Shravu:nahi,mera matlab yeh hai ki tumne yaha kiya kya?, tum toh akeli thi……
Sumo:bahot kuch kiya maine…ice cream khaya,ghuma ,(pointing towards children)inn bachoo ko dekha,aur (she splashes water on his face)paani se khela…
Shravu:sumo!
Both starts playing with water…………………….sumo slips while playing and shravan holds her……..both of them feel awkward and composes themselves…………
Sumo:shravan,I think we should go now………
Shravan:hmmm,we should go now………
They are going to goa by road………….
In cab
Sumo:shravan ,tum itne chup chap kyu baitho ho? I am gretting bored………..
Shravan :do I look like a joker ,who will crack jokes for you……………
Sumo nods…….
Shravu gives her an angry look……………
Sumo:acha ok!don’t talk!
Sumo closes eyes and tries to take a small nap………..
Sumo sleeps holding shravu’s arms and rests her head on his shoulder….shravu realizes this and
Smiles Looking at the innocent face ………..he opens the window to feel the cold breeze and relaxes himself…………
Somewhere in his heart,he is so relaxed and composed because his lady love is with him………………
Shravan also takes a small nap…………..
After sometime,sumo wakes up and feels awkward ..she leaves his arms and composes herself…….
Shravu also wakes up by the sudden loosening of the grip of her hand………….both didn’t speak a word….only silence of awkwardness is speaking between them………………….
Then,they reached to their hotel in goa .its almost late evening now…
Shravan to receptionist:hello, I am shravan malhotra …pls check our booking…..
Receptionist:yes sir , mrs kamini malhotra has booked double room suite ………..
Shravan:no you are mistaken,she must have booked two separate rooms..
Receptionist:no sir,we are sure.she has booked this only…………
Shravan:ok!fine..
Shravu comes to sumo who is in lobby…
Shravu:sumo,voh actually galti se chachi ne double rooms suite book kar diya hai…tumhe isse koi problem toh nhi hai……
Sumo:no problem! Inti kya tension le rahe ho….mai iss situation ka advantage nahi lungi………..
Shravu smiles…………….. they both enter their suite…………………
Shravu:so that is your room…and this is mine……..
Sumo:ok! I am going to sleep as I have to go and finalise everything tomorrow….
Shravan:ya…
They both go to their respective rooms and take rest………………
At 6:00 am
Sumo wakes up …and tries to sleep more but couldn’t sleep..so she takes bath and gets ready.. then she goes to shravu’s room..
Sumo:yeh toh aise so raha jaise kitne din se soya nahi ho……….
Sumo:ummmmmmmmmm.mai kya karu?
Sumo:ise utha deti hoon!
Sumo(starts jerking shravan):shravan uth,dekho subah ho gayi hai….chalo beach pe chalte hai !
Shravan:sumo! Tang mat kar……………………
Sumo:idea !thoda sa gussa karega lekin bahot maza aaega…………..
Sumo takes a glass full of water and spills it over shravan…………..
Shravan (screams):sumo!
Sumo(laughs)…..
Shravan(in anger):yeh koi tareeka hai sote huye aadmi ko uthaane ka!
Sumo:sorry ,but yeh ek tareeka toh hai..see tum uth gaye..
Shravu:sumo!
Sumo:I am sorry ! actually maine yeh kisi pe try nahi kiya that toh socha tum pe try kar deti hoon………….
Shravan: sumo ki bachi ab dekh tu, mai tujhe kaise tang karta hoon…………….
Sumo:acha first go and get ready…………………….
Shravan gets ready ..and both take their breakfast………………….
Sumo:shravan,I am going to book everything for marriage functions ……….
Shravan :ok……………..
In evening…
Sumo returns after finalizing everything…………….
She is in lobby ..a staff member comes ..
Staff:maam aapke saath jo sir the voh beach par the par achanak se gayab ho gaye hai………..maam hume dar hai ki kahi vo (stammers)………..kyunki aaj high tide hai…………..
Sumo without wasting a second ,she runs to the beach ……………..
Sumo(screams):shravan..
She is teary eyed……….she is almost about to cry…………..
Shravan is seeing this… yes its shravu’s prank………….
Sumo is running here and there..in that , her toe starts bleeding after getting hurt due to a broken piece of wine bottle .. shravu sees this and immediately runs to sumo……….
Shravu:sumo……………
Suman turns and finds shravan ….she runs and gives him a tight hug………………….sumo starts crying…………
Shravan:sumo bahot dard ho raha hai………..
Sumo:haanh bahot dard ho raha tha…kaha chale gaye the..
Shravu:itna mere liye care kyu karti ho?…………………….why do you care about me?
Sumo again gives him a tight hug:because I love you………………..
Shravan breaks their hug……….
Shravan(teary eyed):I love you toooooooooooo and kisses her…………………….both have a kiss.
After that,he lifts sumo in arms and takes her to their suite………….
He carefully places her on her bed………..
He takes out first aid box …he cleans her wounds…he applies band aid …..he was doing all this absent mindedly as he was thinking about everything that is happening with him ………from hating sumo to loving sumo ,then knowing about his marriage ,then this goa trip………….he is tensed about all this……..all this while sumo is continuously staring at him………….
Sumo sensed everything…..
Sumo:shravan,come sit here..
Shravan comes and sits beside her……….
Sumo hugs him and say:I know the reason behind your tension………
Shravan was about to say………….
Sumo:ssshhh,let me speak today..i know your marriage is already fixed………………
Shravan is shocked..
Sumo:jab mujhe pata chala tha tab mujhe bura laga tha par pata nahi tha ki kyu bura laga tha …but ab pata chal gaya ki kyu bura laga tha……………I don’t want to come in between you and your father….i think we should separate……I know we both will be heart broken………..but I think somehow this is the best decision for us…………… we can be still friends…..sumo smiles and shakes hand with him…………..
Shravan smiles………….(both are deeply pained to think about their separation)
sumo:shravan chalo early morning hamari flight hai….i think we should sleep now…………………..
both returns back to delhi after this emotional rollercoaster ride kind of journey………….
Precap – shraman romance in wedding…………..
Thanks for reading this………………
And the twist will be coming soon…………………..
So keep on reading …………………….
Plz comment………………
25 Comments
Superduper excited lily! Please next part jaldi jaldi post karna. Very eager to knkw wht happens next. Keep writing. Lots of love,
Thanks yaar…..
So, when are u gonna post the next part??
May be tomorrow…..
So exactly how old are u? According to my guess am sure that i am really younger to you!and where are u from?(answer these only if u dont mind) lots of love sweetheart
Btw lily how old are u? And are u in school or college?Am sure ki u might be older than me.its.just to.know ki how older are u from us and nothing else. Only if u dont mind it.aggain lots of love.
College first year
I hope you guys will like the epi.. I have
Already written the next epi… The next epi will be full of romance and emotional drama….. Plz don’t forget to comment guys……
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Wow amazing lily…!!! I really wish that shraman get back soon…loved it a lot…
🙂
Thanks yaar
Hey lily !!!!! OMG OMG !!!! This ep ,,,OMG ,,this ep was awwwwdorable one … no no iss se b boht better … I m short of words right now … words khatam ho gye hn apki iss ep pr comment k liye … really this ep was fully awwwwesome amazinggggg???? …. it was fabulous … luv it luv it to the core dear ?? ..
Btw post next part very sooooooon
Will be eagerly waiting for the next part???
Stay blessed !!! ???
Thanks fatima
Lily it was awesome love it post soob
Thanx pretty
It was damn amazing.. I love you man.. Post soon
Thanx Nikita.. Love you too
Ohio…
At least…kahi tho inka love confession dekhney ko mil rahi hai..????
I’m really happy with this..????
Thanx sona….
Wow lily amazing…!! N romantic tooo….
Plz post nxt prt soon 🙂 🙂
Thanx marie
it was really.. awesome.. Shravan n suman’s romance.. ??
Thanx sumo
Sorry to be really really late
But the epi was osm??
Thanx