Completed my 5 epi i does not know it hold interest or not? Pls comment
The episode starts with Shravan comes to house and breaks the things and cries his father comes there and tries to calm him down. But he jerks him. He tells sorry and comes to room.He thinks about his sweet moments with her and smiles.
Suman comes to house and remebers his propose to her and wonders what to tell him?She comes to grandpa and keeps her head on his lap.He asks what happened?She tells nothing. She asks what is love? He laughs and tells love is connection of hearts and they will fight but we can see their true love between them.
Suman comes to her room and thinks about shravan and calls him and tells i don’t like you and disconnects the call.Shravan breaks all the things and cries Hamari aadhuri kahani plays..
Father sees shravan and calls suman and tells her to come. He tells his state is very worst.
Shravan takes wine and drinks it fully. Suman comes there and sees him and gets shocked.She comes there and wine bottle and throws it and tells him to be normal
Suman tells him i can’t marry you becoz i need to pay back my loan then only i can marry you and then i wanted my grandpa with me till he dies.
Shravan tells her i will pay all loan and i will marry you. Suman tells pls pls i will only pay my loan and she makes him sleep on bed. She removes his tie and dress and makes him comfartable.
He sees her once and pulls her closer. Suman lipstick makes an mark on shravan face.
Shravan sees her and sleeps. Suman comes to house and sits on bed and cries. She takes her album and sees shravan pic and hugs it
Precap: Suman gets a call and gets amused. She tells to all workers that we have got big contract it is for 5 lakhs so we should work hard.Shravan thnx his friend for giving contract. Shravan father sees the lpistick mark on his face and gets amused……….
Hope you all enjoyed the epi and keep commenting
Credit to: Narendran
18 Comments
Awesome.. This ff is going good.. Luv it?
Thnx manan love for the comment
Nice so fast everything is coming. U r writing very nice
No fast but I don’t like to dragg like serials I need to be straight forward and make all happy
Oh wow Narendran Bhaia ur ff is too good n Romantic and it’s getting better day by day
Thnx yaar
It’s awesome.
Thnx yaar
It is gr8 !
Nia your comment inspire me a lot
I love it. The fan fiction is so amazing. I am eagerly waiting for the next episode.
Ami thnx yaar
Awesome
Ramya Sri thnx but try to leave big comment
Ff is amazing narendra bro u are the one who comments in skr page right that’s why I read ur ff and this is the first time I am reading a ff it is really good this is a sisters truthful comment
Sanjana it is me I am commenting on syr page thnx for the comment
Superb.
thnx nisha