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Recap: suman discloses her parents death to Shravan n Shravan is heartbroken.. He comes to kno dat she never trusted him n leaves..
Part 14
Suman couldn’t collect for how long she sat dere staring at the door endlessly. Her tears soaked. She somewhat knew that wenever he will find her out dis will be his reaction. She knew , how much he cared for her. She knew ,how much he loved her. But she also knew that he had to move on wid his life. Dat day wen she saw him wid tia he was laughing at some joke she was standing at his doorstep and he was busy fixing the fan while tia helped him hold d tool. She knew, if she went upto him his smile would fade away , she knew how much bothered he gets knowing about her agony. N dis was her suffering she won’t let him suffer because of her, she is not dat selfish. N dragging ur beloveds in ur pain how’s it even justified? She wanted to walk upto him, so dat he could hold her ,hug her tight , kiss her , never let her go.. But dat would be selfish, for him to stay happy it was necessary for her to go away. After dat she decided to put all her strength to fulfill her dad’s wish, to rebuilt PCT . she moved to Jaipur n his dad’s best friend Mr. Arun Gupta helped her settle , he treated her like his own daughter n PCT’s orders n works kept her busy. She even never contacted her best friend vidhi. She knew nothing about her.
Suman stood up n walked to her car n went away to her house.
Shravan arrived his hotel room, he was restless he always wanted to live with her ,to spend whole of his life with her but today her presence enraged him.. He wanted to cry his heart out he wanted to hold her tight n lock her in his arms never letting her go, how could she do dis ? Why is she always so stubborn? Why she always needs to deal everything on her own? Why she never realises its okay to share ur pain with ur loved ones? Or else she never loved him. The tie knot was choking him, he was so much in pain, he threw his coat on one side n opened his tie, folded his sleaves .. He lied down on his bed wid his hands on his heads trying to relax n escape dis fuss. Suddenly he felt a smooth hand caressing his hair he opened his eyes to see her, “sumo!” He mouthed, her eyes were still pleading apology but his gaze was fixed at her lips. “God, I can’t stand dis anymore” he thought, he pulled her into his arms pushing her on d bed n him over her ,he looked into her eyes which were thoughtful about wat he is going to do, she tried saying something but he shushed her keeping a finger on her lips , her eyes widened as she understood wat he was trying to do, he cups her face keeping his hand over her face n other on her waist, now dey were face to face lying on the bed, he holds her waist n pulls her closer, she gulps n keeps her had on his chest he could feel her warm breath, on his face. He den keeps his hand on her neck she closes her eyes he lifts her face pulling her more closer.. A frown formed on her face , his heart was beating as he saw the love of his life so close.. He comes closer , closer n closer to kiss her when she dissapears ( bumpheads itna zada imagine mt kro?) he looks here n dere n stands up..
Shravan: god !!!!! Ye ldki mujhe pagal krne he lie GI aai h dunia me,
He hits his head n smiles slightly as he was highly embarrassed..
Shravan: no no no! I hate her .. I won’t forgive her.. Jo usko krna tha , usne kia ab mujhe Jo krna hai mai krunga..
He calls someone
Sumo comes home n goes straight to her room.
Preeta: are , sumo sun..
But sumo doesn’t respond leaving her confused ( preeta lived with sumo) .
Sumo had her journals wid her she was reading out her old entries.. She looks at her photos from college, dat one year in dat college gave her so much,
She looked at the time .. It showed 1 am. She lied down remembering her meeting with Shravan.
How he looked her ..
She knew he still loved her but he dint tried to reach her out dis tym, dis was so unlike him. May be dis tym she made a blunder.
She was crying.. Suddenly doorbell rings., sumo heard it but dint get up, preeta gets up n comes to open it yawning,
Preeta: ji?
D person dint say anything
Preeta: ji kon ho ap?
Still no answer
Sumo comes out ,
Sumo: kon h preeta?,
Preeta: pta nai yaar sumo, tuhi dkh na ..
She comes to the door a lady was standing dere wearing a black ethnic slit dress but she couldn’t see her face since d lights were off.
Sumo: lite to on kr!
Preeta goes.
Sumo: ji ap?
D lady comes forward n slaps sumo. She was stunned , she looked at the lady n she couldn’t believe her eyes..
Sumo: vidhiiiii!!!!!!
She hugs her ( yes d girl was vidhi) but vidhi pushes her, she could see tears in her eyes.
Sumo: vidhi!
Vidhi: shut up, kitni selfish h na tu sumo.. Ase ..
Sumo: haan haan maar Lena taaney, pr phle ek baar hug to kr le..
They hug each other n sumo sees a guy coming wid a baby in his hand . sumo is thrilled.. She goes n hugs him
Sumo: adi.. Ar ye, tmhari ar vidhi ka baby?
Adi nods n smiles
Sumo : omg!! I can’t believe dis.. (She takes the baby in her hand.)she is so cuteeee?
Vidhi: u kno, iska naam kya h?
Sumo looks on,
Vidhi: suman!
Sumo looks at dem emotionally ,
Sumo: tmlogo ne isse mera naam…
Vidhi: hmne nai…. Shravan ne…
Precap: vidhi tells sumo how Shravan spent all his years searching her, sumo goes Mumbai to woo Shravan.
How was it? Plz keep coomenting!
Lots of love❤
39 Comments
Jaan mat nikalo jaldi post karo
yea, sure sure riya..??
Amazing, Amazing
Loved it
Nice entry of Vidhi and Aditya……Sumo finally will woo Shravan..
Pls post the next part asap
ur a new commentor, ? hie, do u like it? my story ?
Amazing, Amazing
Loved it
Nice entry of Vidhi and Aditya……Sumo finally will woo Shravan.
Pls post fast
well thanks,,?
Nice episode..
I really get surprised seeing vidhi with baby and adhi..??
thankyou sona.. ??
Awww this was so cute ?
Post soon please. Dying to read the next episode ?
next n final.. will post soon.. ,?
Now what should I say?
U r just on diff level…nd so is ur writing….
U will seriously kill me wid it….
It was way too amazingggggg….
Luv u lots nd lots nd lots…..!!!???
Endless hugs nd kisses!!??
aww.. thanks niya.. love ya.. ?????
This was something………. Kese explain kron yar i,m not getting words u write like, i get every sence in front of my eyes…..superb…..do post soon….
But how u dng????
m doing well… wbu?
yes will post soon thanks,??
OH EM geE!!
Di..kya likhte ho aap..
The imagination, I started imagining it.. And you broke it.. Anyways, amazing di!
Vidhi’s back !!
Aww, sho sweett
The child’s name is Suman.. Awww
Shravan named her?
That’s hell more sweet…
Awww.. Shravan hotel room me sumo ko bhula kar bhi bhula na paya.. Amazing di!
Precap:
Ab kya kahe.. !! Daamn excited..
Post post post ssoooonnn
Loads of Love,
Nikster
awww… nikster, love ya.. will post soon.. ???
Hey dear !!!! First thanks a tonne for posting soon .. thanks a loot .. nd ep .. ahhhh !!! It was just ,,, just soooooo good .. nd the precap .. kya hua Shravan ko .. suspence .. post soon .. waiting desperately ..
thanks Fatima … love ya..
how r u???
Fine ..
Sumo fi damakedar epi loved it
Precqp interesting
It was a nice epi
Post soon
Loved it
Love u
Take care
Byeee
thanks preets! love ya..???
amazing epi sumo 🙂
thanks Jo,?
Bacche ki jaan lo gi kya…..??!!!! 😀
OMG OMG OMG !!!!!
Wat n ep….!!! Simply amazing……..!!!!
Di I don’t have anything to say so I m giving u a standing ovation !!!
N lots of clapping on this blockbuster ep…..!!!!!!
Fantastic…!!
U r n amazing writer di…!!
I loved d ep as much as I love u……!!
Love u so much se Bhi ziada di…..!!!
Plz plz plz plz plz post ASAP ASAP ASAP ASAP ASAP !!!!!!!! Plzzzzzzzzz
M waiting waiting…..!!!!!
By by
I will post soon super maria,
be rite back
lotsa love..????
Awwwww…….i loved it….@ the imagination moment of shravan i reacted the same way as shravan did ……awwww it was so cute i started blushing at that time but the was lovely
u such a sweetheart.. thanks naina,??
Wow it was mind blowing..
thanks lily..
do ssomething, get registered .. I want to read ur story.. ????
K Time for some deep breaths. Y was that an imagination? Uhh waiting for it to be real, can’t wait though. But I can hold on for a bit more. Nd now things r sorting out so yah!! Soon ShraMan together. Loved the epi. Post next part soon
yes, shraman together.. love ya.. thanks glad, u liked..??
Sumo di, hw r u….
Hehehehhe, Sumo goes to woo Shravu…heroine hero ka kam kar rai he…pr uncommon chiz me maza zyada ata he na…
sry late ho gayi, pr ne me nai cmnt kr ne me actually sare ffs prne the and teacher ko bhi usi tym pe ana tha so got late aur uske bad mera tv dekhne ka kam suru hota he so, sry
bt pre ws a epic one so nice
ab me jati hu, by by love you- Neeti
aww neeti.. just wait , great stuff coming up… ??? thanks for commenting,??
Long sumo di! Pls pls post soon. Can’t wait to read next part??lors of love. Keeps writing dear. Waise what’s ur formal name- I mean it won’t be sumo after all. Keep writing. Excited to see or rather read how sumo woos shravu.
hey nands! let d name be a mystery. waise Shakespeare says, wats in d name?
glad u liked.. ????
wow sumo di! Pls pls post soon. Can’t wait to read next part??lors of love. Keeps writing dear. Waise what’s ur formal name- I mean it won’t be sumo after all. Keep writing. Excited to see or rather read how sumo woos shravu.
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oh god shraman imagine scene was blunder hahaha loved it..well I didn’t go that deep in imagine I am so innocent na that’s why..supar dupar fantastically so so sooooooooooooooooo amazing episodeee.
oh sumo to bhi no 1 stupid he..shravan without sumon ye koi bat he kya ye kabhi ho hi nahhi sakta bekof and shravan soca tha kuch bara karoge isbar par dekho kia ka bo bhi imagine come on get up my lambo boy show us shravan malhotra bhegi billi mat bano sumon ke lip ke shamne..I think I said nonsense to much what can do loved this update so much and ha viddhi missed her even finally came back love their friendship..shadI bhi karli lekin invite nahi kia mujhe..is bar maf kar deti ho shayed honeymoon me busy tha choto sa baby dekkhe samaz geya tha..par mujhe shraman ki shadi ka invitation chaiye..sumo tomhari jimmedari he ye bcz I know no matter what happened in the end shraman are together as I have faith with your ff lo kuch jata bol diya to itnahi pe ruktiho…
sumo sumo tmi kemn aso???
ap hi script wttr bsn jao km se km tb to kuch acha dekhne ko milega… bahut acha likhte ho aap