So people if u r reading dis I should inform u dat dis episode has a part 1 n must be beneath dis post plz go n check it out.. It names EK DUJE KE VASTE- NEW BEGGINGS (episode 6 part 1)
Sorry for d inconvenience…
Adi came to pick d girls…
Sumo: amm Shravan nai aaya!?
Adi: vo sumo Shravan arrangements me busy tha.. Tia ar wo …
Sumo: oh!
Dey all reach to Shravan’s house.. Dey all hear a burst … Dey get scared n rush towards the house..
Standing dere was a burnt Shravan who was trying to make cake…
Sumo: ye kya halat bna li h..
Here Shravan was excited dat now sumo will take care of him since he is burnt..
Sumo: bolo!? Microwave ka temp dkha h tmne.. Ar ye .. R u mad Shravan ? Steel k brtan kon dalta h?
Ar kya halat bna di h kitchen ki!
Shravan: ar room ki, ghr ki , society ki , raste ki.. Sbki halat dkh lo pr meri nai…
Sumo: niklo yha se.. Chlo… Ar vidhi ek kaam kr isse ointment lga…
All were shocked after seeing sumo’s concern towards the kitchen n food..
She starts to cook… N Shravan realised that he never saw her dis happy ever!
Shravan’s phone Rings..
Shravan: mom! Mai jal gya mom: kyu kya hua!? Suman aa gai !?
Shravan : wo Maine microwave jala dia .. So she is cooking..
Mom: tune usse aate hi kitchen me ghusa dia… Pagal..
Shravan: mai nai mom WO khud u kno avi WO duniya ki sbse satisfied ldki lg rai h..
Mom: kya tu mujhe uski cooking krte hue ek pic bhej dega .. Mere kitchen me…
Shravan smiles n clicks a pic n sends it to his mom..
Dey all start enjoining…
But wen dey eat d dinner dey were amazed to kno dat sumo cooks so well..
After d party tia gets a call n heads to leave nia n jea also leaves…
Nia: sumo u come wid vidhi , mai bht thk gai hun.. Aj jea k room me hi reh jaungi..
After all of dem left, adi takes vidhi for long drive..
Suman n Shravan were alone..Shravan gets a call n goes to attend it..
He returns n sees sumo was opening d fridge den closing it.. Again openning n closing….
Shravan: amm .. Sumo! (Raising one of his eyebrows)
Sumo: Shravan!!!!!!!!
Look !!
She shows him a bottle… Mujhe bht pyas lgi thi .. To Maine ye pee lia it was a little kdwa but was amaaazzzing..
Shravan: (shocked) wtf!!! Ye to daru h to abhi ne rkhi thi… Shit!!
He rushes to her … ( just imagine how a drunk girl would behave)
Shravan: do minute tujhe akela chora tune nya kaand kr dia…
Sumo: Maine kya kiya!?
Shravan: kuch nai meri maa rehne de…
Sumo: mai tumsee ek baat puchu!?
Shravan: pucho!
Sumo: tm uss tia ke sath kyu rhte ho u really like her?
Shravan: ( smiles) kyu kya prob h usme?
Sumo: I don’t kno .. But I don’t lyk her .. Tm uske sath mt rho. .
Shravan: to kiske sath rhu.. ?
Sumo : mere sath!!!
She moves n trips but he holds her ….they smile at each other…
Sumo gets up n goes towards d balcony..
Sumo : no no no!! Wat r doing sumo..
Shravan: kya hua? Sumo yha se chl …
Sumo: (kiddish) no!
Shravan: acha kya hua ye to bta…
Sumo: mujhe chahye mujhe chahye…
Shravan: kya chahye bta? I ll get u..
Sumo: btaun!?
Shravan: hmn?
Sumo: kiss!?
Shravan: kya!? ?
Sumo: haan, I want a kiss ?
Shravan: haha! Sumo tu pagal ho gai h! ?
Sumo: no! Mai ekdm thk hu?
Shravan: sumo! Mai ye na nai kr skta… ?
Sumo: kyu? ?
Shravan: sumo!
Sumo: tm gay ho!??
Shravan: nai!
Sumo: to!? Mai tmhe nai psnd .. ?
Shravan: tujhse zada to mujhe koi naipsnd??
They look into each other’s eyes…
Sumo lands her head on his chest n closes her eyes.. He also closes his eyes n surrounds her In his arms..
Sumo den comes close to him n dey were about to kiss wen Shravan realises n backs off…
Shravan: sumo tm avi hosh me nai ho isiliye…
Sumo: nai hona mujhe hosh me … Jb hosh me hoti hu to kuch samajh nai aata …
Shravan looks at her..
Sumo : Pr abhi I kno I want a kiss?
Shravan: yha meri izzat daaw pe h ar iski date hi khtm nai ho rai… Saley adi kha h tu..
Sumo sleeps in Shravan’s arm.. He looks at her n kisses on her cheeks..
Just den adi n vidhi arrives he explains dem everything n dey go to girls hostel stealthily..Shravan keeps sumo on her bed n looks at her…
It was morning.. Sumo was up n her head was blasting!! Vidhi comes n gives her lime juice…
Sumo: ye?
Vidhi : hangover! Hangover khte h isse…
Sumo: pagal h kya Maine pee kB? ( n she drinks d water)
Vidhi: tu pagal h sumo .. At least peene se phle check to kr leti kya h… WO to acha hua srf Shravan tha wha…
Sumo: oh! Uske fridge me WO bottle me.. Oh shit.!!
Mujhe to yaad v nai Maine kya kya kha..
She gets nervous..
In d college , Shravan was parking his bike wen someone suddenly comes n takes his keys n hold his hand n drags him… He was surprised but den realises it was sumo..
He smiles remembering all dat happened last nyt..
She takes him to a empty room ..
Sumo: amm WO …
Shravan : kya hua tm mujhe yha kyu kheench k lai..
Sumo: Shravan WO kl… Mujhe kuch yaad nai h..
Shravan: oh thank god tm hosh me ho!!!
Sumo : mtlb!?
Shravan: mtlb mujhe lga meri izzat frse khtre me h??
Sumo : kya?????
Shravan: haan , kl raat tm .. Ooh … Baar baar
Sumo: baar baar kya?
Shravan: kiss
Sumo: kya!!!!!!
Shravan: maang rai thi.. U wanted a kiss..
Sumo: (shocked) mai ?? Sach me??
Shravan: haan , waise kl Jo nai ho paaya hm aaj kr skte h…(n he comes closer to her)
Sumo: ye!!?
Sumo leans over a wall n Shravan comes near her..
Shravan: aj hm hosh me v hai..
Sumo: are nai..
Shravan: are haan…
Sumo hits him playfully n runs from dere smiling..
Leaving Shravan wid a big smile
Precap: emotional part n a twist coming up…
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So how do u like it !? Share ur views.. N yes , coming up part is emotional n I write emotional parts good ( I feel so) please stay with me… N wait m sure u ll lyk it… N tell me don’t u feel curious about suman we kno nothing about her isn’t it?
Lots of love❤
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I loved it sooooooooooo much………… I m waiting for the next… Can u tell me when will u post next epi? Pls specify a date…. Plsssss
I m eagerly waiting…..
Thanks lily for liking it too dis level…m really obliged…love ya…???
N about d date I really dont kno may be on June 23 or 24… I will try to post soon… But thanks for the love…❤?
Ok……I will wait……
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Oh god…..yr jab Maine tumhara comment padha pichle epi mein toh main itna khush hui yeh dekh kar ki u r going to post one more part…..yr even I want to kiss u…( on hands yr….dirty mind??).
But u r amazing ab main kya karun tumne mujhe Kuch kehne layak nhi choda….and u r also my bestie ….love u yr….tu kitni amazing hai….mera toh din ban gya tera ff padh ke….ab main saara din isse yaad kar ke smile hi karti rahungi…… Main kya kahin yr Teri ff ka har ek word amazing hai…tu amazing hai….tera mind amazing hai….tera talent amazing…. U r the best yr….again saying I love u alot…..and ban agar main ek ladka hoti na toh tujhe kab ka propose kar chuki hoti…. But afsos main ladki hun…shit yr itni achi ladki nikal gyi mere haath se?????
Don’t mind yr just kidding….
I think Maine toh paragraph hi likh diya….but abhi toh aur bahut kuch kehna hai…..but kya karun itna likh nhi Sakti na…..keep it up yr…god bless u??
To na itni tareef na kr pta nai agr diabetes ho gya to… So plz …. It itni sweet h na dat today m thanking god ke I kno someone lyk u… I love you yaar… N yes … I also wana kiss u on hands dirty mind… ??????
Oye sumo…aise mat bol….u r my besti my jaan….bhagwan na kare tujhe Kuch aisa vaisa ho….aur meri pyaari wishes se tujhe koi diabetes nhi hogi…..??
Ar kash to ldka hot I … Shitt itna caring ar sweet ldka hath se gya… ??????
hahahahah i love the way sharvan ghr ki room ki etc sb ki halt dekhlo per meri nh
epi was sooooooooooooooooooooooo amazing loved it 🙂
Thanks angel… M glad u read both d parts… Thanksssss… ???
Amazing..!!
Thanks Niki… ❤
so d part 2 also got updated please guys do read the first part of dis episode… I hope u r clear.. if not plz ask me out… !! ✌❤
Superb Sumo…. Egrly waiting for next part…. Lots of luv ?
Thanks for being dere bhoomi … I ll try n update soon… ??
Dii!!!!! It’s just amazing I was laughing while reading it…..mazza aa gya….especially that part jab sumo shravan se kiss mangti hai….haha ???
Yr u r too good di…aapke charan kahan hai….unko sparsh karke shayad hum mein bhi thoda sa talent aa jaaye???
Main toh aapko pranaam karti hun di…
Aisi hi likhte raho….hope aap apni koi book launch karo….amazing…. Love u di…
Tu na bdi dramebaaz h m sure tu acting v bht achi krti hogi…
Ar mere charan yha Ranchi me h… As ja km se km we will meet den…
N thanks m glad ki tujhe itna acha lga… Swthrt h tu… ❤?????
Di mujhe lagta hai ki humari soch Kuch zayada hi milti hai….I mean…. Maine bhi sumo ko beer pila ke talli Karne ke baare mein socha tha…in the coming episodes…. But aapne pehle hi pila di…..but no worries Maine Jo socha tha voh bilkul alag hai…but still I think hamari thinking kafi milti hai….dont u think so???
Haan yaar… But genre different h.. It kamal k funny scenes likhti h.. Tu to born talent h.. Pr fr v agr hmari soch milti h to m glad… Akhir Di kha h tune mujhe… Love you… ❤?????
sumo di itne mast epi k baad nxt epi jldi post krna.plz plz plz……….
it was jst damn good n funny too……. i cnt wait fr d nxt epi…..
Jldi krungi yaar… Thanks for liking it… So sweet.. ?????
No no no diii it was fabulous !! I just completely lost in your ff kya likhti ho app seriously meri nazar Mai toh u r a true writer….! 🙂 🙂 🙂 n I am n everyone are alwysssss wid u….! 🙂 the shraman scenes are awesome poooora ff hi awesome tha part 1 Bhi or 2 Bhi …..!!! 🙂 🙂
Thanks maria… Tm v kuch km nai ho u write really well… Glad u liked… ❤✌?
Hey yr…u also got registered… What’s all this I don’t know yr…can u tell me sumo
Bestie… Wen u get registered to telly updates u can post pics , share thoughts , n even msg privately a rwgisterd member.. its fun ?
Amazing dear!! Love it…..waiting for next epi
Thanks weirdsister .. M glad u liked… ??
such a cute story… bravo sumo. read it 1st tym n luvd it. Gonna read all d other parts as well…
Thanks Mona… M so happy on our comment.. Do tell me how did u liked the other parts… ????
I luvd them. Really. Please write new episodes soon.
Ye..part 2 ..pehli part sent zyada..mazedhaar air unexpected thi..enjoyed☺
Thanks so a.. Love u for dat.. M glad u r liking it.. ?????
hiiii…my talented girls ( sumo, khushi, lovelylady)….sumo yaar tum itna achha kaise soch leti ho?? mujhe bhi kuch tips do…mera bs nhi chlta vrna EDKV serial ki writer mai tumko hi bna du…jb tumare college open ho jayenge…plsss tb likhna mt chhodna…ye story ko continue hi rkhna….iska end mt krna….chahe week me ek baar hi likhna but plssssss upload jrur krna……plssssssss……mai hamesha tumari story ka wait krungi…..
aawww thnxxx anku di… fr your cmmnt…. .. that is fr saying me talented… btw i m not that mch like other wrtrs …. i m stilll learng..
Nai Ankita .. I feel edkv k writers already bht talented h… They have composed d story so well… PR apne asa keh k mera din bna dia .. Thanks Ankita… ?????
sorry guys mai thodi busy thi….isliye khushi or lovelylady aapke FF pr comments nhi kr payi…..mai thode dino ke liye busy hu…kyunki mere exams h…isliye mai free hokr aap sbke FF jrur pdungi….or guysss jb Mai vapis aaungi tb aap mujhe plsss apni apni stories ke link dena….jo jo bhi episodes mai miss krungi….ohk guyssss….love u alll….n take care..
ya di i was eaitng fr your cmmnt on my epis …… bt its okkk … study cms frst…..
bt aftr exams plzzzzzz cmmnt… n read our ffs
Aap focus kro xam PR be refreshments k lye hmare ff pdh Lena… Waise mai apko bta dun.. Ki mera ff ek story dat has to end someday.. Ar I guess its end is near… M blessed to have frnds like u.. But ye story Maine peechle saal hi puri likh li thi… ☺????
mai aap sbhi ki stories ko bahut miss krungi….mere dimaag me to bs yhi chlta rhega ki ” aapki story me kya chal rha hoga…konsa seen hoga…sharman ka kya ho raha hoga??????? 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Hey guys….and the readers of my ff plz go to my post the part 4 of love is blind…. I have asked u all something there plz do go there and reply…it’s really needed…
Sorry for writing this here sumo di…though I know u will not Mind coz u r the bestest di
Of course I won’t mind khushi .. Don’t be so formal… ??
U guys r gems really… Thanks a ton..???????
wooowww sumo di u r frm ranchi……
i m also not mch away….bt not in jharkhnd……..
So u from where????
so amazing episode….sorry for late comment i was busy so but now I’m doing that for both part 1 n 2…..both part were superb fabolus….so much Hindi so had to read line by line n that was great fun….well im ur ff i prefer Hindi most it suit the story most….best part was drunken sumo n kiss hahahaha I’m laughing seeing shraven state…also his jala hua scene superb….waiting for emotional part n twist
Thanks sss… M glad u liked n commented… I guess u r Bengali???
the story is so amazing that anyone will like it n yeah I’m Bengali
Kolkata!? actually my mom’s native place is in Bengal .. so I kno .. actually I understand Bengali.. but not dat good in speaking it .. but its a very sweet language..
well I’m Bengali but not from kolkata….I’m from Bangladesh n yeah its very sweet language like Hindi…beside Bengali i like Hindi bcz of that
Ooohhh.. Its feels so good to have frnds all over the world.. Thanks for being my frnd..?????
@sumo glad to knw that u are also kyy fan
but would u like to read my ff love in paradise if u get time and give suggestions………..
I did that today… Dint u see.. I liked d characters n story.. ???
Loved the scene when Suman was drunken and said that she didn’t like Tia stay away from her and when Shravan says Jo kal nahi ho paya vo aaj kar late Thai vaise bhi hum hosh mein hai. Keep writing I loved it.
Hey! Thanks for loving the dialogues too.. Its really sweet.. Keep reading…???
i cant wait for the next epi. it was fantastic
Thanks deotima.. Glad u liked it…??
hey even i am a bengali
U r also Bengali… Amazing… Ur from where???
Even I am a bengali….
And btw, gr8 epi….
U from where?? N thanks m glad u liked…???
Was born in Kolkata….live in Kanpur, UP.
Superp finally shravan kiss on sumo cheeks awesome keep going very funny ff enjayed lot
Thanks .. D new part is updated. Take a look… ??