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Part 8
Shravan really shocked on sumo’s behavior he could not concentrate on his classes … N was thinking wat might have happened?
He texts vidhi n asks her weather she knows something about sumo’s behaviour..? But she replied ” no! I don’t know what’s wrong.. She is not talking much…”
During d lunch Shravan called her but she wasn’t taking his calls … He tried searching her since she wasn’t dere in her girl gang but in vain..
He couldn’t talk to her dat day…
In d evening,
Sumo was sitting in her room silently looking at the ceiling… Wen vidhi came trashing the door..
She just stood near sumo’s bed …
Sumo: wat!?
Vidhi: y r u doing dis!?
Sumo: plz vidhi , stop bugging me … (Stands n goes to the window)
Vidhi: m bugging you? N wat r u doing … Y r u ignoring us? N moreover Shravan!? Achank kya ho gya?
Sumo : will u stop it I don’t want to talk..
Vidhi: really? Sbko hurt krke how r u so happy sumo? He was ur freind ritee? N u won’t even give him a reason for ur behaviour..
Sumo: (closes her eyes) plz vidhi … I kno wat i m doing..
Vidhi: ya, ofcourse.. ( she leaves angrily)
Sumo sits down on her bed n keeps her head resting on d wall n again staring at d ceiling.. She covers herself wid d blanket.. Tears starts to roll down as she goes back in tym (flashback of dis vacation)
Sumo was working with the plants .. Watering dem…
A man: sumorita , sumorita ( just lyk d way shahrukh used to say in DDLJ ie, senorita … But since her name was sumo he used to call him dis way,)
Sumo: pa! Stop calling me dat… (Annoyingly stares at him)
Pa: acha ? But y !? Isn’t it great? U always liked it..
Sumo: but m grown up now…
Pa: itti v bdi nai hui…. Abhi v to chuhiya jaisi choti si h..
Sumo : Pa, chuhiya nai yaar???
Pa laughs n hands her phone to her …
Pa: kisi Shravan ke 17 misscalls h… Kon h ye Shravan? ?
Sumo: pa! Kisi ka phone check krna bad manners h.. ( fake anger…)
Pa: (,lyk a kid) haan to jaan buujh k thodi kia! Wo to Maine dkha k phone bj ra h to, tujhe de dun..
Sumo takes her phone n switches it off…
They both sit down.. Sumo was looking at her plants n remembering Shravan a smile curves on her face den she notices her dad was staring at her..
Sumo: pucho ?
Pa: bta na kon h Shravan?
Sumo: pa! (She shys) friend h .. College me,
Pa: 17 miss calls?
Sumo: pa apko nai lgta ki apko dad ki trh pesh aana chahye , kon se papa apne beti ko ase tng krte h!? Apko to mujhe dantna chahye ki kisi ldke ke 17 miss calls h..
Pa: kvi treat kia h tujhe beti ki trh …? Tu mera beta h.. Ar bete pe trust krte h shak nai.. I kno ki mera beta kvi koi galat kaam kr hi nai skta.. I trust u champ!
Sumo : paaaaa!(hugs him) I missed u so much…
Pa: bs bs dramebaaz .. Ab ye hlwa try kr .. Meri recipie h…
She tastes d hlwa…
Sumo: mmmm… Its mind blowing pa.. Ap na mujhe ye avi sikhaoge.. Ar na wo apki paneer stuff wali recipe .. WO to super hit thi yaar .. Kitna tym lgta h na paa usme but u kno Maine to adhe ghnte me bnai thi Shravan k lye ( she realises wat she said n looks at her dad who was smirking..) Mtlb.. Shravan k ghr pe … SB frnds k lye.. WO mmm.. Party thi na uske ghr .. N u kno usne kya kiya steel ka bowl daal dia microwave me… Mai jb 13 saal ki thi tb se mujhe pta h k steel k brtn nai dalte h microwave me PR WO.. Ek no. Kya duffer h ar mujhe duffer khta h… Huhh ?
Dad: ( in his heart ) itne saalo me phli baar tujhe hmare alawa kisi ar k bare me baat krte dkh ra hun .. Shayd ab Teri lyf me kushi aae… Pr kB tk jaise hi priya ko pta chlega….
Sumo: pa?? Kya soch rae ho?
Dad: kuch nai champ! Teri pdhai kaisi chl rai h?
Sumo gets sad …
Sumo: ye semester utna acha nai hua pa….
Pa: (in his heart ) kaise hoga?? Jb intrst hi nai h law pdhne me…
Sumo: pa!?
Pa: sumo, dkh avi v tym h bol de agr tera man nai lgta law me….
Sumo: pa! Ap jante ho na ma chahti h mai law kru.. To agr maa chahti h to mai krungi…
Her dad realises her sadness n changes d topic..
Pa: haan haan,, college me Shravan Jo h…
Sumo: pa ! Grow up!
Pa: ar grow up hokr kya bnu? Teri ma ki trh khadus?
Sumo: pa!
Pa: ar nai to kya ! ( he mimics her mom)
Raaj ye kro.. Raaj wo kro raaj PCT chor do , raaj papa se kuch seekho.. Papa se seekho !!! Bilkul unhi pr gyi h.. Bossy khadus….
Sumo: pa? Nanu ki beti h unhi pe jaengi na… Jaise mai aappe gai hu…
Someone calls out
” kya ho ra h yha?”
They turn to see sumo’s mom
Pa whisperes to sumo erhh marr gae ?
Raaj: priya, tm aa gai? WO.. Mai tmhare lie zra chai lata hun….
Priya : ruko! Kya keh rae the papa k bare me?
Raaj: ehh,, kuch nai … Mai to suman se keh ra tha sumo tere Nana itne bde lawyer h unki photo lga apne room me ar maala cdha de…
Priya: kyaaaa???
Raaj: agarbtti !! Ehhh mai nashta v laata hu… N leaves
Sumo tries to control her laughter…
Sumo: ahh maa mai v aati hun..
priya: suman sun,,
Sumo: ji!?
Priya: baith, suman tere papa k jokes to thk h, pr I hope no tujhe yaad h ki tujhe kya krna h…
Ye dosti.. Pyaar… Inn SB ke lye puri zindgi pdi h.. Ye career bnane ka wkt h..tujhe hmesha yaad rkhna chahye ki tujhe ek bda lawyer bnna h apne nanu ki trh, ar uske lye tujhe pura focus krna hoga pdhai pe… I hope you understand mai nai chahti kind meri trah tu v apni zindgi suffer krke bitae…
Sumo nods n was very sad…
Priya: I hope ye Shravan Jo v h tu usse durr raegi…
She goes from dere… N tears roll down sumo’s cheeks
She comes out of flashback
She was still weeping ..
Sumo: kaise btaun tujhe vidhi ki mujhe hmesha se pta tha ki ek din asa zarur hoga.. Mujhe pta tha ki mom mujhse yhi khengi mujhe SB pta tha but I couldn’t stop myself from going close to Shravan.. Kaise btaun ki mujhpe kitni bdi responsibility h .. Kaise btaun ki….. M in love wid dat duffer n ye baat mai kisi se nai keh skti usse v nai…
She goes to bed…
Shravan could not sleep dat nyt he was thinking wat went wrong between dem.. He thought of calling her but he knew she won’t pick up..
Days passed n suman n Shravan were not talking to each other… Shravan tried several tyms but sumo wasn’t ready..
Precap: sumo n Shravan’s confrontation n most romantic day out..
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So , how was it? I hope u like it coming episode is d most romantic one.. Plz stay tuned sorry dis epi dint had shraman part but its a story dere will be ups n downs..
Lots of love❤
32 Comments
Nice epi……..
Thanks lily glad u liked it..??
So TU people again did d same .. Dey dint allow my full article… So again I’ll be splitting it into 2 parts plz wait n stay glued … Something nice coming up…??
Awsm dear,plz post next part asap I can’t wait..
thanks sanjyoti glad you liked..?
Sumo..tuney..ye part post karney met kaafi dher kar dhi..hope so..agali part post Kearney.mey itni dher nahi lagavogi..
Pls..yaar..post it..early..ASAP..ASAP..ASAP..??????
i know but it was because of dese TU people dey have a lot of nakhra..?? n yes I’ll try posting soon…??
how did u liked it?? plz tell me. its really important for me to kno…
Nice loved it. Keep writing.
thanks shalini .. glad u liked it..??
i know but it was because of dese TU people dey have a lot of nakhra.. ?? n yes I’ll try posting soon…??
it was very nice yar…. suspnse cleared….post nxt part ASAP
emotional suspense isn’t it?? well thanks glad u liked.. will post soon..
Its mindblowing Sumo Di !! 🙂 i loved it!
U rocked 😀
plzzzzz post nxt 1 soon waithing 4 prt 2 🙂
thanks yaar maria… m glad u liked it…??
wow you back with an awesome update…this part was really like shravan even i got confused with sumo’s behaviour (what not you the one in ff)…really feeling sad sumo more for shravan….he didn’t get to talk to her,see her bechra bit hopefully he will bring sumo close to him with his attraction and love like me i even like his expression…waiting for the part two pf course there confrontation…
thanks sss ur comments r really valuable.. glad u liked it…???
but I dint understood about wat u said after dat u got confused of sumo’s behaviour?? well do read the second part… its dere
superb sumooooo seriously it was emotional but yet very nyc u explained sumo,s emotional well….totally loved it waiting for next part…..
thanks pari.. m glad you liked it..???
Amazing di..!!postsoon..:)
thanks Niki.. glad u liked.. ??
Amazing ep ???
thanks perry??
awesome mind blowing ssuuperb it was too good sumo u r so talented
thanks for speaking up silent reader.. .. m glad wid ur comment…????
thanks pari.. m glad you liked it.. ???
Amazing sweetheart…!! <3
thanks yaar.. ❤
Nycc episode. Lykd it. Bt sumo, try to post next episode soon….
Mona I have posted d next part of dis episode just take a look..?? thanks for liking..