Thanks a lot guys for your comments. I’m literally flowing in our love stream.thank for ur comments. I replied for few n I didn’t get time to reply sorry guys but I read comments and I’m very happy. I thought whether I will at least one comment but seeing so many comments I’m happy. I assure u I will not stop until I complete the story. Ur comments really encouraging me. Let it goes.Radhika standing under a tree holding a box in her hand tightly. Waiting for her faltoos. Indhu with some other girls came there searching for radhika.
Indhu:(pointing radhika) r u radhika?
Radhu nodded in yes thinking y everyone is bothering me today.
Indhu : come with us.
Radhu: but y? I’m waiting for ….
Before she complete her sentence indhu indicated others to get her. They bolded her hands and forced her to come. Radhu holding the box in other hand resisted and walked forcibly.
Meanwhile, a black Audi stopped in front of nalanda college. Door opened and a boy stepped. He indicated his driver to go and don’t come in the evening. Driver nodded in a understanding manner and went off. He is so stylish carrying a guitar box on his shoulder. He walked into college and smiled seeing a scooty (radhika scooty) in parking n thinking “u can’t say without me” and walking into college enjoying atmosphere.
A girls gang sitting there stared him and one says “he is so handsome” and other girl” no, he is hot” and other says” can stare me once” which audible to him. He stared and smiled at her. That girl fainted which his blow.
Arjun passing in corridor hears someone saying” u know arjun liked a
Episode starts with arjun turns to see n he sees a girl staring and smiling at him. He got irritated and gave a blank, irritating and angry look at her and let that left. She got disappointed and hitted the ground with her left leg.
Akhil( arjun frd): I don’t know y she is so interested in our arjun. Whole CLG wants her to be there girlfriend. But this girl running after a dumb boy,who never cares her.
Yuvi(boy from group): she is sam right? She is so hot.
Akhil: ya that girl is sam only, daughter of principal of this college.obviously she is so hot ,that’s why everyone want her.
Yuvi: she is so rich right.
Akhil: ya rich but very egoistic bcuz of her mom being principal. Its her CLG
na. So she will do wat she wants.she fought with guys and slapped many. Whatever a girl shouldn’t have these much ego.
Yuvi: someone will come to cut her egoistic wings. We have wait until it
happens.
They both laughs
Sam is sitting on a bench with her group girls with a bit disappointed face teasing all boys n girls passing by. Indhu (frd of sam,who carries every info about arjun to sam) comes running calling sam and stopped infront of her.
Sam: wat happen? Y r u running? Okay talk deep breath and say.
Indhu( breathing heavily): arjunnn… Paused to take deep breath as sam said.
Sam(curiosity): what arjun.?? Stop breathing and tell na..
Indu: u wanna kill me.? Okay wait. I will say. I heard arjun liked a junior girl and didn’t allow his frds to rag her. I seems something is cooking them said indhu adding more masala to that rumor.
Sam(angry): wat? How can he do that? Is she beautiful than me? He didn’t allow his frds to rag her but we r not going to leave her. Go and get her fast.
Radhika talking to herself: god, I know ur there for me. I know u will come as hero to save me. Love u god,love u so much.( god in heaven: ofooo.. Radhu, stop buttering me,u keep scolding when situation goes n buttering when I saves u. Stop it) radhu thinking” who is that hero saved me? I didn’t see his face also.what’s his name.? U idiot radhu, u forgot hero name who helped you, let me find that hero and returns his help for sure… Where is this faltoos..?? Not yet came. I Will kill him for sure today.come fast na. Feeling lonely.
Radhika standing under a tree holding a box in her hand tightly. Waiting for her faltoos. Indhu with some other girls came there searching for radhika.
Indhu:(pointing radhika) r u radhika?
Radhu nodded in yes thinking y everyone is bothering me today.
Indhu : come with us.
Radhu: but y? I’m waiting for ….
Before she complete her sentence indhu indicated others to get her. They bolded her hands and forced her to come. Radhu holding the box in other hand resisted and walked forcibly.
Meanwhile, a black Audi stopped in front of nalanda college. Door opened and a boy stepped. He indicated his driver to go and don’t come in the evening. Driver nodded in a understanding manner and went off. He is so stylish carrying a guitar box on his shoulder. He walked into college and smiled seeing a scooty (radhika scooty) in parking n thinking “u can’t say without me” and walking into college enjoying atmosphere.
A girls gang sitting there stared him and one says “he is so handsome” and other girl” no, he is hot” and other says” can stare me once” which audible to him. He stared and smiled at her. That girl fainted which his blow.
Arjun passing in corridor hears someone saying” u know arjun staring and smiled at some junior girl” other says” may be he loves her”and arjun smiled thinking” small smile these may gossips, oh god”and fellow says ” she is not all beautiful, she is avg,her dress attire and spects,arjun has not taste at all” arjun got a bit anger and tries to remain cool”cool arjun”. He turns and goes near them anRadhika standing under a tree holding a box in her hand tightly. Waiting for her faltoos. Indhu with some other girls came there searching for radhika.
Indhu:(pointing radhika) r u radhika?
Radhu nodded in yes thinking y everyone is bothering me today.
Indhu : come with us.
Radhu: but y? I’m waiting for ….
Before she complete her sentence indhu indicated others to get her. They bolded her hands and forced her to come. Radhu holding the box in other hand resisted and walked forcibly.
Meanwhile, a black Audi stopped in front of nalanda college. Door opened and a boy stepped. He indicated his driver to go and don’t come in the evening. Driver nodded in a understanding manner and went off. He is so stylish carrying a guitar box on his shoulder. He walked into college and smiled seeing a scooty (radhika scooty) in parking n thinking “u can’t say without me” and walking into college enjoying atmosphere.
A girls gang sitting there stared him and one says “he is so handsome” and other girl” no, he is hot” and other says” can stare me once” which audible to him. He stared and smiled at her. That girl fainted which his blow.
Arjun passing in corridor hears someone saying” u know arjun liked a smiled at a junior girl” and a girl replies ” may be loves her”.
Arjun smiled thinking”just one smile, so many gossips, oh god” he smiled reminding radhika innocent stare at ground.
A girl again says” she is so avg, her attire and glasses says that she is not so beautiful at all n arjun has no taste if he loves her”(said sarcastically).
Arjun got angry at her words and thinks “cool arjun, cool” u answer them brilliantly now bcuz it related to love and he goes near them and clamly
says ” love is related to heart n not by eyes. U can’t judge someone with
their attire. By the way,she is really beautiful, try to see things with heart.
u got right?!” Then he went off.
He want into his classroom and sat on table beside akhil and reminding innonce radhika face says ” truly, she is not that bad but really beautiful in that traditional attire. Seems so traditional girl” he smiles and comes to real world.
That it guys, I think r hurt to sam part. Sorry guys, but story should be interesting naa. She is not negative but egoistic character I will reduce tpit completely in cmng episodes.
(Suggest me a good boy name and ur fav actor from any serial)
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it was gud. but the parts r repeating so many times. so plz check it. i like the god’s answer for radz prayers , “stop buttering me” . lol. it was gud. Arjun thinking of radzz. the dialogues were gud. Sam egoistic. why do u want boy’s name.
Yaaa.. Some parts repeating.. I just observed it after they posted it.. I will not let it repeat., sorry
U don’t need to be sorry deepthi. I think they can nw also change. But i don’t know hw. I think u should ask TU. Surprise. Hmmm. I love surprises. What is the box radz is carrying. Waiting for next.
Sorry yaar.. I noticed it after posting.. I won’t let it repeat… Surprise.. Wait for next update
Hey.. Deepthi.. Awesome episode dude.. And a good boy name… Hmmm… You can use the name ”Ritik”.. He is from ‘Naagin’ series which is recently aired on Colors channel…
Nice idea dear.. Surprise..
Really luved it deepthi
Pls continue
And update nxt part asap
Luv u loads
Lots of hugs and kisses fr u
Tq dear..
Wait wait dr so much confusion yaar first check it dr… u came to know what i am trying to say…. i like the stiry yaar.. i want to see beautifull radz
I’m not saying that she not beautiful but seeing beauty from makes things beautiful., there is some problem in posting so ur little confused.. Sorry for that..
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Its ok dr…. no i am just saying about beauty… faltoos means neil or anyone is there plzzz wee hate saral charecter dont make it na
Wow today’s episode was really good….I loved it….and yess u r right about sam….things should change to make story interesting…keep updating….love u…??
One lovee?
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Thanks for ur understanding dear… U keep waiting for my update.. I keep waiting for ur comments dear…
Arnav from iss pyaar ko kya naam doon.
Mohan bhatnagar from na bole tumna kuch kha..
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Rudra from rangrasiya..
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zain from behintaa
if u r need suport character
then Akash from ipkknd
r aman from rr
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guru fm nbtmkk
its superv yaar i think sm error
accured i mean same dialague repeated in 2nd more..
Sam para repeted..
Thank for mak my fv story..
Its seems u watch every serials… He he… Ya dear its small error in posting, I noticed it after posting..
Awesome dr..but see sme texts r repeating again…Sam egoistic nice yaar ..want Neil to bd paired fr Sam…aradhika rockx….
Obviously nesam only.. Equal priority to ardhika and nesam pairs..
Deepthi good episode…. Keep continue….
Tq dear..
It ws nice…..bt te parts r repeting…so I ws a bit confused……wat s te meaning f faltoos???friend??????
U presented sam correctly…..dnt tke me wrong….i like sam….bt I lve rads mch mee tan tat…….
I thought Sam fans may hurt but tq, u like it…
Nice episode deepthi n will be waiting for ur surprise.
Thank u..
Hi deepathi first of all thank u for starting to write an mmz fiction when d forum ws so silent. I am an ardent fan of mmz and I check this site daily. So last week ws a bit dull and u brightened it up for me with ur sweet, cute little story. It’s was refreshing to read. Am happy to c so many new writers. Through ur stories ardhika will b remembered for a long time. Please continue d story. Plz don’t stop in mid way. By d way I can’t imagine anyone paired against Sam and radhika s best friend has to. Neil. But I leave it u. Take care.
Thank you Rg for ur complement..
Awm…plz upd soon.
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Very nice epd dear…….and keep going
nice start☺☺ faltoos s neil rite?? obviously it shd b neil..n pair him wit sam ☺☺ keep goin??
Ur guess is obviously guess.. Hit pair nesam and ardhika only..
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Nice
but update soon
Awesome yaar
it was fun reading it….. update next soon.
hey deepthi dear thanx for updating today dear. I love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much the episode is awesome the college day sam the daughter of the princi its awesome and rads talking to herself buffering another awesome thing and arjun ignoring a girl who stare him its another awesome thing I love the whole epi dear its actually fantastic dear. Waiting fort he next eagerly what u have cook in ur mind Loved it fully dear. Keep smiling
Once a friend always a friend.
Heyyyyy Deepthi dear…outstanding fantaaaaaabulous episode..loved it wholely…
U r writing awesoooooooome..
Keep SMiLiNG AlwaaaayZz sweeeeeeetie..
Love u lOoadZz?
Hiii u rockd yaar…n “Mann”(gurneet chodhary) from geet hui sabse parayi i jst love him??????
awesome