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AUTHOR’S NOTE
Hello dear readers…..me Phanikiran……firstly thank you very much to all my lovely readers nd supporters in my new journey as a fanfiction writer….for ur support I am very happy …..thank you to each nd every one….
Here I am going to give a description about my present FF …“ EK NAYI SHURUVATH….ZINDAGIKA”….which I am posting…..for the first time I am giving this description for the readers who are feeling about the space of characters in the story…..
I created Kaal’s character after I got inspired from Shivaay’s character…..a girl who hv similar qualities of a guy like Shivaay….wt will happen in her life…..this is the base for the story…..
We all know….Annika entered into Shivaay’s life accidentally…..how much tried to go far from her…..but he didn’t succeeded ….moreover she became his love nd the reason for his living…..
But in my ff…..Kaalagjna ….herself entered in Maahi’s life…a guy having the similar qualities of both Shivaay nd Annika….then wt happened in her life…..why she entered in his life…..why her behavior changed ……how much the guy influenced her…..did she get out of his effect r she fallen for him….wt is the relation between her nd Oberois….why they all respect her…?
This is the base of my story guys…..so plz try to understand my theme….nd give ur support…..thank you all…..with love…
Your PhanikiranJ
Hello everybody…..i back with another episode…..enjoy the episode…..nd stay tuned to read an another blasting episode which is on the way…..so enjoy …..
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Episode: 59
Farm House:
Maahi’s Room:
Himself: why did you challenge me Gudiyaa…..but I am not ready to accept this challenge……patha nahi kyon…..i know how to get the details from u but in this process if my acts hurt u ….no..no…even I cant imagine in the dreams…..but definitely I will try to get the details bcz if I am not wrong may be those details r the reason behind your extreme acts nd your worries about me……deciding himself he looked at the time…..
Where is she? Abhi tak kyo nahi aayi wo? ….saying he called her…..
When he called her ….she is near to FH…..she looked at the display…..seeing Maahi’s name…..she didn’t understand whether to answer it or not……thinking a while…..she answered …..
Maahi: where r u Gudiyaa? …he enquired…..
She clearly noticed a concern towards her…..
Kaal: nearer…..she said
Maahi: its okay…I am waiting for you…..said he disconnected the call before she gave reply to him…..
She looked at the display….
Kaal Herself: Maahi….tumna …..meri dimaag kharab karraha hai…..
She got down from the car after Ali stopped in the portico……she went inside nd looked Maahi who stood in the upstair at the stair case……climbing the steps she looked at the time…..
Kaal: abhi tak soyi nahi…..asked while moving towards her room…..
Maahi: how could I sleep without completing my responsibility…..he said…..
She turned back with surprise….
Kaal: responsibility….wts that…..she questioned….
Maahi: jisne mere bhalayi dekhthi hai unki bhalayi dekhna mere responsibility haina….
She understood wt he is going to tell…..she silently moved from there without giving him reply….for her silence he smiled……
Maahi: gud night tho keh sakthe na…..
Kaal: bina khana khake soye tho wo gud night kaise hosaktha…..she asked going inside the room….
Maahi was surprised hearing her answer……
Kaal: Ranga …..she called….
Ranga came there…..
Kaal: go nd give dinner to your Sir….without having proper food ….taking medicines not a good habit….
Maahi: Ranga ……bring dinner for two…..wt your Maam said its applicable to her also…..shayad bhulgayi still she hv to take medicines for 2 more days..jao …he said…
Ranga left from there…..
Sunni ya nahi….if you join with me it’s a better thing for you warna…..
Kaal: I will come in few minutes ….said she closed the door….
Seeing her hurriness he smiled nd left to his room….
Hearing their convo nd seeing the both…..Ali nd Rosy….Naancy nd Mery …exchanged looks with a smile nd left from there…..
After closing the door….leaning on it…..
Kaal: Maahi…..every time you make me to accept your words…… I didn’t understand why I am accepting it without resisting you….you r trying to enter into my …..she was stopped in mid…..no..no..Kaal…..nothing is there….go nd fresh up….remove all this nonsense from your mind….behave normally…goo..saying herself she left to fresh up …
After few minutes…she completed dinner silently with Maahi without any argument…nd left to her room saying gud night…..he smiled for her behavior…..
After taking the decision of Mission LoveHiKa……they all thought about it as how to start nd when to start..
After two days……Kaal working on her laptop …sitting in her Office Room in the FH….
“good morning”….hearing the wish she looked at the door…seeing AniRiMya…..
Kaal: good morning Angels…wts the matter ….theenom yaha?….she questioned….
Anni: nothing …..just to meet you nd Maahi….thats it…
Somu: by the way where is Maahi bhaiyya….
Kaal looked at her doubtedly….
Kaal: why r u asking me…..
Gauri: wo …..aap subeh se yehithina…issliye….she covered…..
Kaal: oh….may be he is in his room….
Anni: okay…tu kaamkarlo…hum unse milenge….said she sighed RiMya to leave….
Kaal starred at them while leaving….
Herself: inki behavior kuch ajeeb lagrahi hai………but her attention dragged the phone call nd later she became busy in her work…..
When AniRiMya left to meet Maahi…they found him in the kitchen…seeing him….
“good morning”….they wished him….
Seeing the 3….
Maahi: good morning Angels….he wished ….
They exchanged looks…
Maahi: wt happened…..he questioned seeing their expressions…
Somu: nothing Bhaiyya….waise wt r u doing….bhaiyya….
Maahi: trying to prepare a new dish….
Gauri: (looking at Mery who is helping Maahi) ..Mery…you may go nd do another work….we will help bhaiyya…she said….
Annika sighed Mery to leave…..she nodded nd left from there……
She went to Kaal to give her water …
Kaal: Mery… where is Maahi Sir?…
Mery: Sir tho kitchen mein….
Kaal: kitchen mein!!
Mery: theeno Maam bhi wahi pe….
Kaal: ohh …its okay said she became busy in her work…..
Nearly after one hour….she heard a door knock ….she looked at the door nd seeing Prinku….she was surprised….
Kaal: Prinku….come …come….how r you?
Prinku: pehle ..aap bathao…kaise ho aap….
Kaal: I am perfectly fine…..
Prinku: sorry di…I didn’t get time to come nd meet you…..
Kaal: don’t worry….i know you became busy in the new venture…..by the way how is ur new journey…..she enquired….
Prinku: my dream comes true….
Kaal: to make ur dreams true….your brothers will always stay with you….go ahead……
Prinku: Shivaay bhaiyyane kahatha…..sab yehi hai…kaha hai ……
Kaal: shayad wo sab kitchen mein experiments kar raheho….
Prinku: kitchen mein….she asked with scary eyes…..
Kaal: don’t worry….saath mein tumhara bhaibhi hai….so no problem…..
Prinku: chalo Di …..we both join with them…..
Kaal: tu ….jao …I hv a little more work…..completing it I will join….she said….
Prinku nodded nd left…..she starred at her as she knew that she will see Maahi here for the first time…..
Entering into the kitchen Prinku wished them all….they looked at her…..
Maahi: Prinyanka…kaiseho tu……he enquired….
Seeing him she was scared….Annika noticed it……nd she came near her…..
Anni: don’t get afraid…..he is also your brother ….jaise tumari Shivaay bhaiyya….waise Maahi bhaiyya……
Prinku: bhaiyya…..
Shiv: haa Prinku…bhaiyyaa…kaise mein tumhaari bhaihu jaise wo bhi….
Gauri: sirf ek pharak hai Prinku…..Shivaay bhaiyya tho Kanji Aankehwala…lekin Maahi bhaiyya Kaali Aankhewala….
Hearing Kaali Aankhewala…..Maahi lips took a curve with smile nd his face glowed for a while remembering Kaal’s words……
Somu noticed the smile nd the change in his face….
Somu: wt happened bhaiyya…..wy r u smiling….
Maahi: haa…nothing…
Somu: bolona bhaiyaa….kuch tho hai…
Maahi: arrey ..kehdiyana meine kuch nahi…
Somu: kuch tho hai…aapki chehrepe saaf saaf nazar aarahahai….yeh smile haina…..it covers our face whenever we remember a sweet memory…..bolona bahiyya…kya yaad aaya….
Maahi smiled for her explanation….
Maahi: kuch nahi…..Kaal ki baath yaad aayi….
Gauri: Di ki baath ….aisa kya hai….bolo…bolo…
Curiously They all looked at Maahi….
Maahi: aisa badi baath tho hai nahi…
Rudy: bhaiyya…bolona…wo badi ya choti …hum decide karenge……
Maahi: kuch nahi…pheli baar Kaal mujeh milithi…..tab wo mujeh issi naam se bulyithi….Kaali Aankhomwale….he said with a smile….
Anni: o beti ki….kya baath hai…..Gauri jo boli wo sunnthehi tum Kaal ko yaad ki…..
Kaal looked at Maahi who hid behind the pillar…..yes when Somu questioning Maahi at the same time…..Kaal came there completing her work….but hearing their convo….she was stopped nd stood behind the pillar…..
Maahi: I just remembered her words ….thats all….well u all came …..sab milkar lunch karenge…I will come in few minutes….said he left from there to fresh up…..
They all exchanged looks….nd felt the same as Maahi hv feelings on Kaal…..its clear…
Kaal silently return to her office room without their notice…..sitting in the chair…..she closed her eyes…..bar bar unki dimaag Maahi ka baathe yaad karrahihai……
Herself: Maahi…..tum kuch aur din yaha rehna its not a good sign for me……its time to implement my plan to make you enter into OM….i know the situation in which I strucked….to fulfill the responsibility that I had taken….to stand on the promise that I gave Dadi….its important for me to do it….
Deciding it she got relaxed……
Days r passing…
Prinku also enjoying Maahi’s affection towards her….Kaal observing their behavior….one day finally she gets the time to implement her plan of action for which she is waiting….
When Prinku was about to leave after she met Maahi nd Kaal…..she was stopped seeing Ranveer….
Ranv: how r u Prinku…..
Prinku : hhmmm….fine…..how r u….
He noticed the change in her behavior…..
Ranv: still u didn’t trust me…..he questioned….
Prinku: waqt lagegi…..she said…..
Ranv: zindagi bhar intezaar karronga mein…..
Prinku didn’t react but they both heard a voice from their back as….”Priyanka tum andar jao”….they turned nd see the person…
Ranv: Maahi…!!
Maahi: Prinyanka….go inside….i will talk….he said ….
Priyanka looked at Ranv nd left inside…..
Maahi nd Ranveer didn’t know not only Kaal…..ShivOm also hearing their convo…who just came there nd were stopped at the door hearing Maahi’s voice addressing Prinyanka….
Ranv: yaar….tum
Maahi stopped him in mid…..
Maahi: Ranveer….i know u r my friend…..but when matter relates to Prinyanka ….i will take decisions as her brother….
Ranv: Maahi…..didnt you trust me…..
Maahi: trust…..we hv no right to pronounciate this word…it has a vast meaning…..i know Kaal supporting you in your way….but don’t underestimate her…..tum pooch saktheho….when she encouraged me why did you stay silent at that day…..that day I kept silent iska matlab yeh nahi mein tumko support karoonga….
Ranv: Maahi….really I love her…..i know I did a mistake…no no…an offence….but truly I love her….i want her love back in my life…I promise you…nahi….vachan derahahu….i never do anything wrong with her…..i never bring tears in her eyes…..plz…Maahi….try to understand my condition….
Maahi: I trust you…but if you didn’t get Shivaay’s trust…..yaad rakh mein Shivaay ke saath rahoonga….mereliye Shivaay aur unka izzath se jyada kuch aur nahi…..u know that I can do anything for him nd Kaal….u already witnessed it….really you want her love in your life….then stay away from her….otherwise….i will forget that you r my friend…..said he left from there…..
Ranv: Maahi….i am so happy for wt u said…..you r really brother of Shivaay…..u just behaved in the same way as Shivaay behaves….all the best dost….but I trust my love nd also Kaal….she promised me to bring back the happiness in my life….she will do it…..bcz I understood her nature….once she commits she stays on it forever….i will wait for that day….said he left from there….
When he is coming out….ShivOm hid themselves nd later they came inside nd went to Kaal’s room….
But they were stopped at the door…..
Prinku: bhaiyya …..why did you talk harsh with him….she questioned Maahi when he came inside
Kaal: Maahi jo kaha wo sahi hai Prinku…..u know about Ranv…..phirbhi
Prinku: ek aur mouka denemein koi problem nahi haina…..
Maahi: zindagi mouka dethi hai har bar….lekin pyar mein ek aur mouka keliye sochna sahi haikya…..he asked
Prinku: I know wt he did with me…..but at that time I just saw anger in his eyes….but this time I am witnessing love towards me ……..
Kaal: so u r ready to lead a life with him….right….
Prinku became silent….
Kaal: silence is not the answer….
Maahi: Priyanka….if Shivaay didn’t accept it …will u able to accept his decision….
“really she want this relation ….we didn’t hv any objection….” Saying entered Shivaay inside…..
Prinku: bhaiyya….
Om: haa Prinku….wt Shivaay said is right…..
Kaal: r u sure Shivaay…
Shiv: of course….kyom…
Kaal: then get ready to meet his family …….she said with a smile….
Shiv: family!?
Maahi didn’t understand about which family she is talking as he knew about Ranveer’s childhood…
Kaal smiled…..
Kaal: haan….wt you heard is right…. I think may be u knew it…jis aurath unka Maa banke aayithi wo unka Maa nahi…..infact….wo aurath kisikobhi Maa nahi Shivaay…..she said stressing it ..looking at Maahi…..
Maahi was shocked hearing it….he tried to get her words nd the meaning which hid behind it….
Shiv: wt do you mean…..that Kamini….
Kaal: wo Kamini….Mrs.Randhawa thi nahi….aur wo kisikobhi Mrs . nahi thi….
Shiv: tho Ranveer???
Kaal: 2 days later you will come to know about it…..okay …..said she was about to leave but was stopped nd turning to Prinku….
“Prinku…..dont come here to meet me r Maahi here after until we settle this relation….i think you get my words….Shivaay…take her to home …I will meet you later….” Said she left…..
Maahi: Shivaay….take Priyanka to home….i will talk with you later….said he was about to move…..
Shiv: where r u going Maahi? He asked while stopping him….
Maahi: its important to know about wt she said regarding Ranveer….i will call you later …..said he left to follow Kaal…
Prinku: bhaiyya …r u angry on me?,….she asked
Shiv: no Prinku…when I saw Ranv here…..i understood about him…..Kaal accepted him…it means she knew about him very well….issliye she supported his love towards you…..dont worry sabko yeh rista manjoor hoyegi…he said….
Prinku: but Di unse aur Maahi bhaiyyase milneko na kahithina…..
Shiv: wtever she said definitely there is some reason behind it….kuch dinom keliyena …don’t worry….lets go said they left…..
Sorry infact I didn’t want to divide the episode but after completing the typing I noticed its too toooo long…so I divided into two nd posting …..next will follow in few hours
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