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EK NAYI SHURUVAATH…..ZINDAGIKA (an ISHQBAAZ fanfiction by phanikiran) #epi 70

Hello my dear lovely readers…….i am back with the next episode….sorry for the little late…..exams time yaar….plz understand…..

Enjoy the read…..this time also I am not giving any explanation about the episode…..bcz from here onwards I want to know ur views nd reviews as the block buster episodes are on the way……

From this episode onwards how Maahi come to know about Kaal’s each nd every move ……how he will confront her….nd slowly how he planned along with Shivaay in knowing the truth from her….…..

So enjoy the read nd give ur view nd review through comments nd support through likes…..

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Episode: 70

After 1 hour her car reached an open place…..she got down from the car….the car’s head lights were on…..she saw a person surrounded by some other men……she sighed Ali as don’t get down…..

She went near the person…..he looked her….

Person: welcome Ms.Kaalagjna…..

Kaal: thanks Mr.Mehta….but you did a mistake by welcoming me……she said…..

Mehta: achha……khaas guest ko welcome kehna mistake kaise hothe hai…..

She smiled….

Kaal: tumhaare jaise logomkeliye mein guest nahi…..beast hu……she said

Mehta: I never scare of a beast…..

Kaal: yeh beast aaj tak tujko daraaya nahi……sirf tumhari haalath ko bigadi…..obhi Oberois ke khilaaf kehneki wajah se……natiza kaise hoti hai tune dekha…..ab ek aur baar wahi galath karneko tayyar huva tum…..iss bar natiza pichelebaar jaise achha nahi hoga…..she said….

*$*(this beast didn’t scared you…just made your position worse…..that is also bcz of your words against Oberois…… again you r doing the same now…..this time the result never be positive…)*$*

Mehta: wt will you do…..will you kill me….if you do it …you will become a criminal……

Kaal: Mr.Mehta…..manjoor hai……Oberois ke khilaf soch aur unko takleef deneki aadath ….yeh donom mein bardaash nahi karoongi…..unkeliye mein criminal banneki ek pal bhi nahi sochoongi……wo account tum se shuruhoga tho unse achhi baath koi aur nahi hoga…

*$*(accepted…..i never like to hear against Oberois……for them to become a criminal I never think a second….if I start that account with you…it’s a better one)*$*

Mehta: oh are u threatening me? Well I am always ready to face it  ….itni khoobsurat ladki se khel hamesha achhi hoga….waise ….hai kaha tumhari khaas dostom….Oberoi Brothers….hemesha tumhaari saath hotha hai….aaj tumko akele kyom bheja…..O Shivaay darr gaya hai kya….ghar mein baita hai kya….

Kaal: Mehta….her voice echoed in the open place……..”jubaan sambhalke baath karenge tho achha hoga….”

Mehta: tum khoobsurath ho aur kharanakbhi ho……..issliye I like you….tumhare jaise ladki ko jeethne mein aur apna bananemein majaa aatha hai…..

Hearing it her fist tightened…..not only her…..Maahi who stood beside the car in disguise also tightened his fist with anger…..

*#* yes …wt you all read is right…..when Maahi noticed the absence of Ali nd Rehman…..he felt “something is going to be happen…..she planned for something to do nd want to hide it from them…..he used his style nd simply he ordered Ali to make the way for him to follow Kaal…..Ali cannt disobey his order as he knew that how Kaal behaves with Maahi….nd moreover how much Maahi loves her nd cares her…so he helped Maahi in reaching the place in disguise as a Security Man”*#*

Kaal: galath soch hemesha jaan letha hai Mehta….yaad rakh…by the way I am ready for the game….get ready for the first move…..all the best ……said she turned to leave….

Mehta: hats off to your courage…..lekin mere ilaake pe itni raath aake obhi akele itni aasaanise kaise jaayegi tu….

Kaal: hhmm…u r right….this place is yours…but… men r mine….she said with a smile which clearly shows her winning smartness…..

He looked at her with a little shock….

Kaal: wt happened….ohho shayad shock lagihogi…..you planned it well from the start but tables ko last minute mein badlke planning karna meri style hai….khud ko smart manna achhi baath hai lekin dusrrom ki baaremein kam sochna achhi baath nahi…. iss bar meeting pe aanse pehle unki muh dekhenge tho tujko patha chalega wo tumhaara aadmi ya kisi aurka…..this is the difference between you nd me Mr.Mehta….anyway my first move was completed……bye for now …hv a gud sleep ……..said she sighed her men nd sat in the car……Ali started the car….after she left from the place her men vehicles also left ……leaving Mehta in the shock…

Leaning on the back she closed her eyes…..but her heart sensing Maahi’s presence…..

Kaal: (in mind) why I am feeling he is around me…..no Kaal…..there is no chance ……you ordered to gave them the juice….if anyone drink it once bcz of its powerful intoxicating feature keeps them in minimum 8 hrs of deep sleep…..so its impossible for him to follow you……but my feeling is so strong why…..he already doubted my behavior…..he is capable of anything to do……I know it……but ….no Kaal….dont think too much of him….its time to think about your further move to stop Mehta…..so its better to stop listening of your heart……saying herself like this….she relaxed  but her heart didn’t …..

But Maahi’s thinking is in another way who sat in the front seat in a disguise of Security Man….

Maahi: (in mind)  Gudiyaa ur plan of action is awesome……….. I love ur kharnak avatar…… I like your balanced nd cool nature Gudiyaa……but this nature of you is very dangerous one…….anyway one thing  is clear to me that is….ab tak jo attacks huva unke peechhe jo hai wo alag hai…..jo aaj akbaar mein news aayatha wo Mehta ki wajah se huvatha…who is that one  want to kill me…..aur yeh Mehta…….how dare he is to talk like that with Gudiyaa….iska natiza tumko dikhanapadega Mehta…….

Car reached Haveli nd she got down nd went inside…..Maahi also got down nd went inside………after changing his dress when he was about to lay down on the bed he heard a glass breaking sound from outside the room….he came out nd observed the surroundings….when he was about to go inside his room he again heard the same sound from Kaal’s room……he didn’t understand wts going on inside……he went near to her room…….

When he want to go inside…..she opened the door nd came out…..seeing it he hid behind the pillar…..she went out ….he followed her nd noticed that her palm was hurted nd its bleeding…..she went to her parents memorial lounge……starring at her parents ….

Kaal: how dare he is to talk like that with ur Gudiyaa…….how dare ……….

Hearing it Maahi was surprised…..he understood that she is talking about Mehta’s words…..

“aap sunni haina wo kya kaha……he wants to make me his…….how dare he is to think of it….”at the same time she suddenly became silent…..her heart nd mind started encounter again….…..

@[ A SMALL NOTE: READERS HERE PLEASE IMAGINE YOURSELF WHEN OUR INNER VERSION STARTS SPEAKING WHICH IS ALWAYS BE A TRUTH….ND WE NEVER ACCEPT IT ……THE SAME THING HERE KAAL ALSO FACING ….SO READ IT LIKE THAT ND FEEL IT…SORRY FOR THE INCONVENIENCE….]@

Heart: “ kyom.. itna gussa kyom nikalrahi ho unpar……tumse aisa koi nahi kaha inse pehle….” questioned….

*(  why r u getting angry …..no one told like this with you before)*

Kaal; shut up….she said…

Heart: r u scared of me……

Kaal: me never…..

Heart: so tell me …..kahatha ya nahi……

Kaal: “Kaha tha”…….” Nahi nahi…..sirf unki acts ki wajah se mein samajgayi”…

*( told me….no no…just after experiencing his acts I understood)*

Heart: “koun hai wo”…….*(whose that)*

Kaal: “MAAHI”…..

Hearing his name from her Maahi was surprised…..not only that he is clearly watching her struggle nd the fight between feelings of her heart nd the mind.……

H:  Maahi aur Mehta doom ek jaise the….*(Maahi nd Mehta ..both are same)*

Kaal: no ….there is a lot of difference between them….wo donom alag hai….

H: kyom alag hai……*(why they are different)*

Kaal: alag hai matlab alag hai……bass *(they are different means different)*

H: alag kyom…..wo donom ek jaise hai ….murd hai….*( why…they both are men)*

Kaal: don’t compare Maahi with that rogue…..she shouted….

H: why……wts the special of Maahi….he is also like others….

Kaal: kehdiyana meine …baar baar kyom aisa poochrahiho…..wo alag hai….meri Maahi alag hai……she stressed it in anger…..*( I already told you….why r u asking the same again nd again…..he is different…..my Maahi is different…that’s all…)*

He was amazed hearing “meri Maahi” from her…….

H: kya kaha ….phirse bol….

Hearing it from inside…..she fell on knees….he clearly saw her tears when they touched the floor……after few seconds controlling herself she lifted her head nd starring at her parents…..

“haa maa…..mein jaanthi hu unki dil mein hai kya……aur mein yebhi jaanthihu wo hai koun……kaise bhoolongi mein…..wo ek Oberoi hai……Oberoi Khandaan ka bada beta hai…..uss Khandaan ka pehla  waris hai aur Pinky Singh Oberoi ka beta hai…how should I forget it….meine Naaniko wada di……mere wajahse unki family mein kisiko koi talkleef naa aayegi….issliye itni saal dur hui…..aaj jis zimmedari meine li usko nibhanekeliye yaha aayithi…..poora honeke baad mein chalejaavoongi….jaaroor yahase chalejaavoongi…..jaavoongi…..”saying she laid on the floor nd slept murmuring it…..

*$*( I know mom…..wt is there in his heart…..i even knew who is he…..how should I forget it …..he is an Oberoi……the eldest son of Oberoi Khandaan…..the first heir of that Khandaan…..the son of Pinky Singh Oberoi……how should I forget it…..i promised  Naani as I never become the reason for her family’s misery…..i stood on it …..now I came here to complete my responsibility that I took from someone……once I complete it I will go from here…..forever)*$*

Maahi was totally  shocked for her words……coming out from the shock….he remembered her words….

“mein Oberoi Khandaan ka bada beta….uss Khandaan ka pehli waris….par kaise….jo maa ne bola wo alag hai…..kaise hosaktha hai ye……wo kyom aise bolrahihai….. Kaal Oberois ke khilaf kabhi nahi sochengi…..iska matlab maa mujhse kuch chupayithi hai kya….. waise mein Oberoi honese kya problem hai…..uparse Pinky ki beta bola…..unki beta hoga tho problem kya tha……aur kyom wo Dadiko wada di….kya hai wo wajah…..she knew about my feelings …..phirbhi….unki baathomka matlab kya hai….”

*( me…..eldest son of Oberoi family…..first heir of the family….how ….how is it possible…..wt mom told is different…..why Kaal saying like that…..it means something is there that hid by mom from me…..bcz Kaal never go against Oberois…..by the way if I am an Oberoi then wts her problem….if I am the son of Pinky so wt…..why she gave promise to Naani…..wts the reason behind it….)*

He stood there in silence for few minutes…when he moved near to her…..

“beta”….hearing the call …he was stopped nd looked back…..he saw Chacha …..

Maahi: Chacha….

Chacha:  tum andar jao beta…..yeh mereliye nayi baath nahi hai…..

He checked the time which showed as early hours of 4 am…..

Maahi: lekin wo yaha….

Chacha: kuch nahi hoga….mein yahi baitoonga……tum jao beta…..if anything happens to you she  scolds me…jao beta….said he went near the lounge nd sitting on the steps he sighed Maahi to go inside…..

Maahi looking at Chacha nd Kaal….he moved from there…..laying on the bed he closed his eyes…..but his mind continuously remembering Kaal’s eyes which were showered tears….nd her words……doesn’t know when he slipped into deep sleep…….

In the morning ……nearly at 9 O’clock…..

Shivika came to Maahi …..Shiv woke him up asking….

“Maahi….Maahi…..utto yaar….Kaal is not in her room….”

Maahi woke up by his call nd with the drowsyness….

“wo lounge meinthi…..” saying he sat on the bed….

Shiv: lounge me……

Maahi: she slept last night there…..he said……in the sane drowsyness

Hearing his reply Annika immediately left to lounge……

Shiv: what…..wt happened to her…

Maahi: don’t know yaar….when I found her there…Chacha also there….so I came inside nd slept yaar….he said hiding the matter……bcz first he want to know the truth …..

Annika reached the lounge nd saw Kaal who slept on the floor….she noticed the clotted blood on her palm…..Chacha also sleeping there leaning on the wall…..

Annika went inside nd came back with first aid box………sitting beside her…she cleaned her palm nd wrapped the bandage…….keeping Kaal’ s head in her lap….caressing her hair…..

Anni: ( in mind) wt happened Kaal……wts the pain that you want to forget nd come here to share…..

The others  came there……seeing AnniKaal…….ShivaAhi understood Annika’s feelings….for Annika’s touch she slowly opened her eyes nd noticing where she was……she slowly got up  nd looked at others…..

“gud morning guys” …..wished them …….

Shiv: wt is this Kaal? He questioned….

Kaal: wht….

Shiv: I am asking about the injury on your hand…..

Kaal: haan ..injury!?…..saying she checked her hand …….seeing the bandage……she remembered the last night incident nd Mehta’s words……controlling her anger…….

“don’t know Shivaay……” saying “maa…breakfast ready karo ..hv to go”…said to Roopa who just came there…..Roopa nodded nd left …

Kaal moved nd went inside….following her

Shiv: Kaal…..still your injury not healed properly….. r u ready to go…..

Kaal turned  nd looked at them…..

Kaal: Shiv…..if any one playing a game they hv a chance to keep it in pause to take rest …..but in the battle field there is no chance….you r in the play ground…..i am in the battle field …..faraq hai Shivaay…..said she left to her room…..

Maahi understood to wt she refered battle field…..Shivaay didn’t understand wt she said…..but they all turned to Maahi….before they speak….

Maahi: don’t look at me …I  cant do anything right now….yesterday I already stopped her…..but at this moment I cant…..he declared …..

After 30 minutes she came down nd completed breakfast along with others…..looking at them…

Kaal: thanks guys for your love nd care……by the way….Shiv nd Annika….will you both drop Sahil nd Chotu in the school….

Shiv: sure….

Kaal: well….uncle , Maa, Chacha……settle all the matters there nd stay here…..i will come later…..okay guys…..will meet again…..come on Rosy…said she moved ….

They all sat in their cars nd they left the Haveli…

Hi….how is it….dont forget to comment….nd give support….wait to know ur views…..will post next soon….until then stay tuned to read nd don’t forget to comment…..bye ….take care……

By the way…..HAPPY SRI RAMA NAVAMI……from my side…..

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