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Through dis episode you all definitely will come to know about Kaal’s character nd the bonding between the children…..why Dadi always feels proud for Kaal…..
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Episode: 14
She started slowly opening her heart to them…..
Dadi: (with proud) she is very nice from her childhood….from her childhood she never behaved as a child of 10…eventhough being a child she understood her parents condition nd she became a supporter to them bcz at first my Sister didn’t accept their marriage as Kaal’s father came from a middle class but Raga opposed her mom nd went with him leaving the property nd all things…..but when Kaal was born my Sisters heart slowly started melting nd she regained her relation with her daughters family nd accepted Karan as her son-in-law…….Karan also accepted his saasu maa’s restarting of relation but he denied to become a waris to her property nd said I loved nd married Raga bcz of her loving nd caring nature but not for her property….Kaal attained both the qualities of maturity nd intelligence from her father nd loving nd caring including anger from her mother…..she always behaved with an advanced maturity not only maturity but also she had an unpredictable intelligence….but unfortunately she lost her parents at the age of 10……it’s a horrible time to a child of that age….parents death…grandmother’s depressive mental condition for a child unbearable one but Gudiyaa never give up..for her age its impossible to manage an ill person nd the business…but Kaal proved herself as she is not like the other children..she is completely different from others….my sister always praises Gudiyaa…at first I didn’t trust her but after seeing her mental maturity nd her intelligence I was amazed…days passing ….
After 2 years the major blow happened in her life…..unfrotunately my sister died when Kaal was of 12 years…..once again she proved as she never give up….in such a condition also she managed the situations with maturity…..after my sister’s death I brought her here to stay with us as a guardian of her nd her property …..until she will get the age of 18 she is my responsibility…..
Within two months she understood the family members nd the condition in the house……eventhough she herself a child ..she lookafter Om,Rudra nd Prinku with utmost care just like a mom as both Tej nd Jahnavi became busy in launching their new venture….
Shivaay who fed up with the escaping from responsibilities nature of his dad nd the money minded mom..he almost became alone….at that time she entered ….she became the best friend to him…..she herself in misery…she understood Shivaays condition nd gave her support to him in all aspects…she stood like a supporting pillar to Shivaay…….she helped him in lookafter the OmRu nd Prinku…….he started sharing everything with her ……bcz of this he started supporting Kaal’s every decision both in business nd house…these all children increased their bonding with her day by day….she became Angel Devil of this Mansion with her nature of showring utmost luv nd caring nd d sametime never forgiving when a mistake is happened until their own confession…..….these children became more affectionate towards Gudiyaa….i felt happy seeing their bond but one person didn’t like it…bcz of that person she left us..
Girls: who is that ? why she left?
Dadi became sad hearing their questions…..her eyes filled with tears..
Girls understood her….Soumya came farward nd put her hand on Dadi’s hand nd pressed it gently..
Dadi: (she adjusted herself ) she left this mansion bcz of me….
They all got shocked hearing dis
Dadi: the person was Pinky…..she told in moist tone.
Shivaay got more shock hearing his mom’s name…
Rudy: (slightly shouted) choti maa??? Aap??
B&G: but why???
Dadi: haan …me too bcz I want the happiness nd peace in my family….so I did it at that time….but after that I never forgive myself for my actions….
B&G: par huva kya Dadi..
Dadi: that night when all left to their rooms…after sometime I came back to take some water from kitchen as I felt thirsty….servant forgot to kept water in my room…when I came back….i saw Gudiyaa still sat in the same posture …I went near her and asked..
Flash back starts:
Dadi: Gudiyaa…didn’t complete ur work…she patted on her shoulder…
Kaal came out from her thoughts for Dadi’s act…..she adjusted herself..
Kaal: Haan Naani…just completed…I am going to sleep…waise you didn’t sleep…do u need anything Naani?
Dadi: haan …I felt thirsty so came to drink some water as today servant forgot to keep water in my room…
Kaal: I will bring water for u Naani…plz sit here…
She took the jug from dadi nd moved to kitchen…there she filled the jug with water and when she turned back she was little shocked seeing Pinky there at that time….after few seconds with a smile….
Kaal: aunty …aap…iss waqt….didnt sleep….do you want anything…
Pinky: (with an angry voice) haan…I want..
Kaal: tell me aunty…wt do u want..i will bring it for u…saying this she was about to trun..but was shocked hearing the words which came from Pinky’s mouth like bullets…
Pinky: (with the same angriness) I want my son….
Kaal: aunty..i didn’t understand …
Pinky: (with a sarcastic tone) wah…wt an acting like an innocent…..yeh don’t show ur innocency infront me…just leave my son nd this house right now….
Kaal: with confuse…..Aunty… wt do u want to say…I didn’t get it….
Pinky: you r thinking about your marriage with Shivaay…so that you can stay here permanently..right…but don’t think like that…
Kaal: ( with a pleading tone) Aunty… u hv mistaken me….let me explain…actually ….
She was cut in mid..
Pinky: look…u r thinking that he is the heir of this khandaan and if you marry him you will become the eldest bahu of this khaandaan…but don’t think …..he is my son and he is the waris of this property….i know your intention from the starting…u want this property….bcz of dis u r behaving like dis with Shivaay….
Kaal: ( with little anger) bus aunty…shaayad you forgot ..i remember you …I am not a poor girl…I hv my own property nd business…
Pinky: Phir bhi …seeing this huge property nd my son’s business you r thinking to make it yours…you hv property nd business but you don’t hv Khandaan…
Kaal: (with an anger she shouted) Aunty…
Pinky: ye don’t shout …show ur anger on others ..but not on me…I didn’t say anything wrong …all knew about ur father…a middle-class wala how became a son-in-law to a bada khaandaan….bcz of dis ur grandparents didn’t allowed them…but after ur parents death….ur Naani brought you to her house…now u r trying to become the bahu of dis house…
Kaal: aunty…
Pinky: (with a warning tone): look I don’t want a girl like you to become my daughter-in-law that to eldest daughter –in-law…I don’t allow you to stay here anymore…so its better for you to leave my son nd this house…otherwise you will not be able to imagine wt extent that I will go….understand
Saying this she left from there in anger
Kaalagjna stood like a statue with shock…she knew the mentality of Pinky…..after her entry into the Mansion…when Shivaay started sharing his emotions with her…she observed Pinky….and also understood her….
Meanwhile..Dadi came to kitchen side as kaal didn’t return back…..she heard wt Pinky said to her Gudiyaa nd got shocked for her behavior towards her…without saying a single word she returned to her room….
After few minutes…..Kaal came into senses …..she gathered herself….took the jug..nd reached Dadi’s room
She silently kept the jug near Dadi’s bed nd when she was about to turn she was stopped by Dadi’s call…
Dadi: Gudiyaa ….i think its better to leave this house forever……never come back……
Kaal: (with a shock) Naani…u r also misunderstanding me..
Dadi: Nahi meri Gudiyaa….wtever may be ur intentions but I need happiness nd peace in my family at this age……I don’t want any disturbances in any ones life that too bcz of you …so its better to leave from here…..
Kaal: (with teary eyes) Naani…
Dadi: Gudiyaa ..i mean
She was stopped by Kaal in mid …she was shattered by her words….
Kaal: Naani ..till this day I felt that this is my family too….now u remember me my place…you mentioned it is your family …so I understood that I never be a part of this family… you r right Naani….waise I always want your happiness….bcz of me u feel that the happiness will get spoiled in this family nd their lives will become miserable …then I will leave this house right now…
I never blame u ever…I understood ur condition…so be happy with ur family Naani….do one favour..dont say anything to anybody…..If they knew the reason they can’t bear it….
Saying this she left to her room…closed d doors…..brokeout in pain…after few minutes she recollected herself …took her belongings…left all the things which belongs to that Mansion……reached Dadis room….
Dadi sat in sad as she didn’t like her behavior towards her Gudiyaa but she is helpless…she knew Pinky’s mentality
Kaal reached Dadi….touched her feet…turned back….before leaving she said
Kaal: Naani…now I am leaving…..but any time…in any condition…..if u need my help….one call …just one call …I will be here….dont forget Naani…just one call..
Saying this she moved….she was completely shattered when she heard the last words of Dadi..
Dadi: tomorrow …lawyer will come nd handover your property papers to you…then only I will relieve from your burden..
Hearing this..with a pain in her heart…she left the Mansion forever…
Flash back ends
Hearing the reason from Dadi all got shocked…..their eyes filled with tears
Shivaay got a bid shock after knowing it ….he never expected this type of behavior from his mom….
Om: Dadi really she always amzed us with her matured behavior…being in such a condition how did she manage her pain….now she became more strong than before..
Rudra: But Dadi…after 6 yrs why did she come here?
Dadi: don’t know…..(in mind) she came here bcz of me ….this truth will never come out…
After few minutes they all gathered at pool side after came back from Dadi…..remembering Kaal they all became sad…..
Annika: I know an orphans life how miserable it is….wtihout hving a family leading a life is a curse…..but hving all around phirbhi leading a life as an orphan…I don’t know with wt name will call dat condition……..tears rolled from her eyes….
Gauri: itna kuch hone ke baad bhi …..she is behaving as nothing happened….how is it possible to behave like this?
Soumya: how much effort she did to come out from the situation she faced….
Om: how much struggle she faced to reach to attain dis maturity level…
Rudra: she hide so much pain inside ….but she didn’t say a single word …..moreover she is showering d same love on us..
Shivaay didn’t expressed but his heart is crying…..y mom said like that…… why didn’t she understood me…how she misunderstood me?.y she always try to take away my happiness from me?…
They all looked at Shivaay who stood in silent …..lost in his own thoughts…
Om came near Shivaay nd put his hand on his shoulder…..
Om: Shivaay….i can understand ur feelings….
Shiv: no Om….u cant…..when i asked her…she lied ….. u know …..what she said….behind her disappearance nobody is there….dont think too much….y she lied?….
Rudy: really I am a fool…..bcz of my childishness she left us…..his eye filled with tears…..
Seeing him they all felt sad
Meanwhile Dadi came nd saw her children felt bad
Dadi: if u say it or not….she will definitely leave us one day….bcz of Pinky…..Kaal understood Pinky’s intention nd her mentality very well….she decided to leave this house….but I requested her….she accepted on one condition that is after her 18 th birthday she will leave this house but not us nd should start a life seperateIy…..i accepted her condition…
Om: but y she lied with Shivaay dadi…
Dadi: she never think to fall down the value of mother infront of her children….thats it….puttar don’t ask her about this matter…..if she will get to know that u all knew this may be she will again leave us…so behave as u don’t know anything….promise me…
Heaing this…….especially the words “Kaal will leave them again”…..they all nodded their heads as they never behave as they know it…..
Dadi looked them with satisfaction nd said
Dadi: chalo puttar go and sleep ….its already too late….u hv to wake up early in d morning…..kal pooja hai na …jao jaake sojao………she smiled nd left to sleep..
They all left to sleep.
Hai my dearies……thank u for readindg…….in coming episodes the story will slowly turn to original track which related to Shivaay……thank u …….nd plz comment me…nd openly tell ur views on the episodes…..any doubts plz share ……any other requirements they will also welcome……
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Awesome update di.
Awesome update…Really this pinky aunty is too much n what to say about kaal I couldn’t even imagine how she posses that maturity level.update next soon
Superb
Amazing…
I really hate pinky…….doing too much……and none shd get such a saas….. And I really wanted to do oh my maata of her…….do post soon didi…..now rumya and gaurika is fine but Shivay??? Wanna know about their story..do post soon didi…..
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Loved it…kaal had to go through so much….she is very mature…
I just hate this pinky di…post as soon as possible….hope u remember me…I just registered yesterday..
I hve no word 2 express it dr…. It’s just AWESOME…. luv it…
Amazing episode… And such deep levels of maturity!!! Really intrigued to know how Shivaay will handle himself in front of Kaal after knowing the real reason for her leaving them… The guilt would tear him up really bad…
Extremely eager to read the next episode, Phanikiran…!!! Your FF is truly awesome!!