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Lalalallaaa…
Happy birthday..
Laalalallalaaa…
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Part 13
Ragini looks at Laksh shocked.
San: yes ragini..! I’m saying truth, Laksh has created the video of the fake murder I did.. and he is the reason for the mysterious girl…
Rag: will you stop Sanskar..?
Laksh and Sanskar looks at her amazed.
Rag: I’m not like you, who believe videos and pictures, instead of human beings…!
San: Ragini.. I’m saying truth..
Rag: maybe it’s truth according to you Sanskar..! because, you are good at misunderstanding people right..!!
Sanskar gets hurt with her words.
Rag: once, I have trusted you.. and you broke it..!!
San: now don’t trust this cheat and get fooled Ragini.. he is..!!
Rag: stop it Sanskar..!!
Sanskar looks at her.
Ragini goes and holds Laksh’s hand.
Rag: Laksh is my husband..!!
Sanskar looks shocked and Laksh smiles looking at Ragini.
Rag: I won’t tolerate one word against him..!! because, I trust people. Not the material..!!
She says and takes Laksh with her inside. Laksh turns back and smirks at Sanskar. Sanskar tights his fists.
Ragini and Laksh goes inside. Laksh was looking at Ragini in smile. She looks at him.
Rag: laksh, I trust everyone so easily..!! now, I’m trusting you. You are not cheating me right..!!
Laksh: Ragini, believe me. I have never cheated you. And, I will never cheat you..!! bcz, I love you for true..!!
Ragini just smiles and goes inside.
Laksh in himself, “but, I have cheated sanskar. Only him..!! not at all you Ragini..!!”
Sanskar was walking away in upset.
“Laksh, for now you might have escaped. I will bring you in front of Ragini with proofs. I will show all the false sins you kept on me. You made me bad in front of Shekar uncle. Now see, he has made your marriage. I will make himself break the marriage and he himself will give back Ragini to me..!! it’s my challenge..!!”
Sanskar says out in rage eyes.
Laksh who was sleeping in couch suddenly opens his eyes.
A heavy rain starts outside and it’s thundering. He was sleeping in living room being tired.
“Haaw.. I’m so tired. Hopefully, if someone gets me coffee..” he says in yawn. Then someone is holding a coffee cup beside him. It’s Ragini.
Laksh: Ragini, you coffee..?
Rag: it’s ok Laksh. You r my husband..
Laksh’s eyes shine as she said that. ragini smiles and sits at the window watching the rain.
She remembers the past words by her mom said in phone,
“Ragini, whomever you have loved at first, but.. Laksh is your husband now. this is your life. If you be as a rock now, it’s your life which becomes endless. You can’t be a complete woman until you love your husband. Because, your husband is a nice guy. It’s Laksh who has saved your name while all were doubting you. When yours to be husband has pointed you, it’s Laksh who trusted you, and it’s him who proved your innocence. This is what that shows that he loves you. And, it’s not wrong if you love him Ragini. It’s the time to forget Sanskar and start a new life with Laksh.”
Ragini remembers her mother’s words.
“but mom, is it easy to forget 1st love..?” she thinks…
Just then Laksh shouts in pain. Ragini looks at him. The hot coffee has fell a little over him.
“Laksh..” says Ragini and goes near him.
“oww, it’s boiling..!!” he keeps screaming.
“Laksh, remove your shirt first..!!” she says and holds his shirt.
“No.. no..!!” he keeps saying.
Rag: keep calm..!!
Ragini removes Laksh’s shirt forcely.
The coffee has tripped over his tummy a little. ‘is it boiling here..?’ Ragini asks suddenly and keeps her fingers on his bare tummy.
“Ragini..” he moves back feeling tingling. Ragini then realizes what she has done, “I’m sorry.” She says and then looks at Laksh’s bare top.
She closes her eyes and turns other side feeling embarrassed.
Laksh was busy in covering his top, Ragini realizes something and turns back. Laksh was trying to move away, Ragini soon pulls the shirt.
Then, she shocks to see her name as tattoo mark on his chest.
Ragini gets amazed looking at it.
‘RAGINI’
Is written on his chest.
Laksh looks at Ragini. Ragini glares at him.
Rag: what is this Laksh..? are you mad..??
Lak: ragini, I have said you already..!! yes, I’m mad for you..!!
Rag: I don’t like if anyone suffers for me..!!
Lak: you can see only my suffer..?? don’t you see my love..??
Ragini looks on…
Laksh holds Ragini’s hand and he keeps it on his chest.
Laksh: I love Ragini. I love you so much. You are my life Ragini..!!
Ragini looks at him silently.
Laksh looks at her silently for a while and leaves to his room. Ragini looks at other way.
Then maid comes near Ragini.
“Mam, do you know how coffee fell on sir..?” she asks.
Rag: how..?
Maid explains,
“While Ragini was looking at rain thinking something, Laksh was busy in looking at her. he was admiring her beauty with his eyes. Then, he accidentally tripped coffee on him..”
Ragini smiles unknowingly as she imagined that scene. Laksh just jumped as a little kid when coffee fell on him.
Ragini keeps smiling remembering his cute antiques.
Ragini then goes to her room and happens to pass his room, she opens the door slightly and sees, Laksh was holding her pic in phone and a tear falls on her pic. Ragini sighs looking at it.
“Ragini..” he calls.
Ragini turns at him feeling amazed, ‘did he see me?’
But, Laksh was talking in himself.
‘Ragini, I know Sanskar was your 1st love. But, you are my 1st love Ragini. Why, can’t you forget him..? Ragini, I need you..!!”
Says Laksh to the phone and hugs the pillow.
A tear drops from Ragini’s eye. She closes the door and goes away.
On other hand,
Sanskar reaches India.
There he beats the goons who came to fight with him once. (they are arranged by Laksh)
San: now, tell me..!! who the hell are you..?
He asks holding a rod.
A man: Laksh has sent us.
Sanskar smirks.
“Now, point clear uncle..?” Sanskar asks.
The camera moves and shows Shekar who has looked the scene just now happened in shock..!
*Germany*
Ragini and Laksh were playing chess.
Lak: I will win for sure..!!
Rag: ahan, let’s see..!! check mate..!!
She keeps check mate with her minister.
Lak: you have to look in all directions and think from all the ways Ragini. Don’t just think from one side..
Ragini looks at Laksh.
Laksh moves his camel which is at corner and kills the minister.
Rag: my minister..!!!!
Laksh smirks.
Rag: now see what I will do to your king..!!
Ragini is about to move a soldier. Laksh stops her.
Laksh looks into her eyes,
“Ragini, chess and life are same. Once, you take a step.. you can’t take it back..!”
Ragini looks at Laksh amazed.
Lak: once you lost minister, again you want to lose anything more..???
Ragini confuses. Laksh’s eyes are speaking very intensely.
Lak: think Ragini..!! think before you act..!! was your step right or not..?? is there is any danger ahead..??
** scene shifts to where Sanskar is talking with Shekar showing something.. and Shekar was shocking**
*again screen shifts to Raglak chess game*
Ragini drops her eyes to chess board thinking about Laksh’s words.
She looks at all corners.
Yes..!! He is right. The danger is ahead.
If she moves that soldier, she is going to provide direct access to Laksh’s elephant to keep check mate to his king. Then, King can’t escape as there will be no more way to escape.
Ragini looks at Laksh. Laksh was looking at her, but not at board.
Rag: you are right..!! then what should I do..??
Lak: you can end my game also Ragini..!
Ragini: how..??
Lak: just think…
Ragini looks at the chess board and thinks keenly. She can’t understand what move she has to take. She looks at Laksh in confusion. Laksh lays back in chair relaxed looking in smile at her.
Ragini then again bends her eyes to the board.
She scans all corners.
Yes..!
Her white horse is going to change everything..!!
Laksh becomes tied in her one step now.
Ragini smirks and looks at Laksh. Laksh was still looking at her in smile.
Ragini moves her horse and places it three steps ahead to his king.
“Check mate..!!” Ragini says in smirk.
………………
There Sanskar,
“Game over..!” says and looks at Shekar and Sharmista who are discussing something seriously.
Sanskar smirks.
…………………….
There, Ragini was dancing that she won over Laksh. Laksh was looking at her in same smile. She was happy after many days.
Laksh takes sigh and about to get up,
But.. while dancing, Ragini slips and falls on his lap.
Both shock and look at each other.
Ragini’s heart beats raises. It was 1st time in her life, she is so close with a man.
Laksh slowly moves hairs back from her face… she rubs her cheek gently. Ragini closes her eyes.
“I love you Ragini.” He says again.
She pops open her eyes.
Screen freezes on Laksh’s loving face, Ragini’s shocked face and in middle Sanskar’s smirking face.
Precap: Ragini to accept Laksh..??
Guysssssssssssss…..
How’s the chess scene..? I struggled a lot to write it while thinking..!! I hope, the scene is like in filmy style there..!! is it..?? is it..?
Eehaha..
Astra
Can do anything..!! :-p
42 Comments
Awesome di….chess scene was simply superb…post nxt soon
Awesome dear
M lacking words to praise u sis litterelyy????? u r soo talented yaar???? thnx a lotz for dis storyy??????I love raglak yaar…dere each n every part ws fab. …Laksh litterely loves her soo much…hope she accepts him sooon??? waitng eagerly for nxt part….U nailed it astru??? love u so much? keep rockng n stay blessed??
Hehe yeah!!!it’s our queenz brthday..wohooo!!!!sb naccho Hahahaha??wishing her d most happiest brthday ever????? have u seen dose her brthday party pics…isn’t shez looking damnnn gorgiousss …N temish dance oh gawd??????? tevar-dhanya pic ws too adorable????
Tc sis???
sissy.. is that you..?? omg, i’m seeing you back after many days..!! how are you and where are you..? why didn’t you come to TU all these days.. I have missed you badly..!! I’m glad you are back..
i’m even getting very happy to see your comment after many days.
thanks a lot dear..
yeah.. i saw those pics.. both are dangerously adorable.. my eyes filled with honey..!! wow, we got a superb princess bday to see… how cute she is..!! love her a lot..
love you too a lot dear.. keep smiling….
Awesome
OMG seriously I fallen for your ff. I loved it
OMG seriously I fallen for your ff. I loved it dear. I’m in deep love with laksh. Continue.
thanks a lot dear…