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enemies frm childhood (part-6)

Hi I’m back again with another chapter. Kindly overlook the mistakes and tell me your opinion of the same.
Here’s the link to previous epi:http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=enemies+frm+childhood+part-5
The Sun’s rays found its way through the curtains to find Ritvik lovingly looking at Radhika who was cuddled into a ball on the bed. There was a cute smile on her face. Ritvik kissed her forehead and said: “ O my sleeping beauty wake up………………….”
Radhika: “Bhaiya plzzz……..5 more minutes………after that I’ll wake up…………”
Ritvik: “No 5 minutes……you have been saying this for an hour….now no more…. wake up….”
Radhika : “Humph……….”

Ritvik closed her eyes and led her to the Pooja room. Radhika opened her eyes to see the idol of lord Ganapati.
She folded her hands and prayed to him : “ Ganapati, first of all thank you for making my attempt to make fun of that Arjun a grand success….Please give me more ideas and make them all a success…………………… “
After sending her prayers to God she turned around to see Ritvik looking at her…
Radhika (in mind): “ OMG….did I say that aloud ????????????? “. She smiled unsurely at him and asked: “What happened bhaiya ???? Why do you keep looking at me like that??????????? “
Ritvik (laughing ) : “ My dear princess don’t I even have the right to look at you ??????? “ Saying this he kneeled down before her.
Radhika(in mind) : “ Thank God I didn’t say it out loud…………..” (loudly)” Nothing like that bhaiya” …Saying this she hug him.
Ritvik too hugged her back and whispered in her ears :“ I heard your prayer “………….
Radhika broke the hug and looked at him shocked.
Ritvik : “ Don’t worry…I won’t tell it to anyone.”

Radhika : “ Pinky promise ??????????? “
Ritvik : “ Pinky promise………”
Radhika hugged him and said: “Thankyou bhaiya…..I love you …you are the best bhaiya in the world.“ Saying this she gave him a peck on his cheeks and ran off to freshen up…………………………..
Scene changes :
Rads is seen walking towards the guest room…Soft voices could be heard from the room. It was evident that Nandini was trying to wake Arjun up….She paused for a moment outside the room and then knocked it. Nandini opened the door and asked her to come in.
Radhika: “ Di, didn’t Arjun wake up till now???????? “
Nandini : “No beta….I’ve been trying to wake him up for an hour…but he wouldn’t even stir..”
Radhika ( smiling at her ): “ Don’t worry di, I’ll wake him up…..”
Nandini : “ ok………..” Saying this she left the room.

Radhika looked around the room to find a glass of water kept on the table. She took the glass and poured out its contents on to Arjun’s face.
He woke up with a jerk and shouted: “Rain rain……”
Hearing his shout Radhika broke into fits of laughter. Arjun who came back to his senses ran behind Radhika who on seeing Arjun’s angry face had fled out of the room……………………..
Scene changes:

There are a lot of noises in all the rooms. Apparently everyone is getting ready to go to temple. Finally everyone except Radhika has come down. Anjali’s voice could be heard in the living room.
Anjali : “ Choti, make haste. We have to reach there before temple closes. I don’t understand what is taking her time to come downstairs. “ After a few minutes of wait she told Niel to bring her down. After a few minutes Niel came down tagging Rads along with him……….
Anjali : “ What took you so long and why didn’t you comb your hair ????????? “
Radhika : “ Sorry dadima…..I couldn’t find my hair comb. “
Anjali : “ ok ok…..lets move on .“ Saying this she turned to go but was stopped by Rads call.
Radhika (looking at Arjun): “ Dadima do we need an umbrella ??????? It might rain…….. “
Arjun who stiffened hearing her question glanced angrily at her. But Rads was unaffected by his murderous stare and smirked back at him…..

Arjun : “ I know you don’t have brains. But can’t you stop blurting out stupid questions ???????? “
Radhika retorted back : “ Valsa Williams( she reads the news at 9 in ‘All India Radio’) told in the news that there are chances of rain. “
Anjali who was watching their fight with uneasiness decided to put an end to it and interfered: “Stop fighting. Its late “ and lifted up a protesting Rads into her arms and left the room calling out others to follow the suit.

Precap : not decided.

I’m extremely sorry for the very late update. Actually I thought to update it on Friday .But unfortunately I fell down. Please do tell me your opinion of this update. Is it very boring ????? If so I’ll stop. Please do give me suggestions……………

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